MARCH13-Brothers are assigned duties,

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Part1

Ram, Bharat, Laxman, Satrughna, along with their wives go to the Shiva temple to do Puja. Once they reach there, ram wins over the organizer man and woman by calling them chachaji and chachiji.

Chachi: ram, you came here dear, we could have gone to the palace to see you and your wife

Ram: sons always come to their parents

The man and woman are elated with joy. Ram and Sita then offer them pranam by touching their feet. Bharat, Laxman and Satrughna along with their wives follow.

After that ram and Sita offers puja to the Shiva ling, and the other brothers watch it.

Then the woman calls hEr sons and arrange for some food for the guests. All four brothers and their wives sit, eat . when asked Ram and satrughna says the food is good, tasty and is full of the love and care of the people who r like their parents.

Manthara tries to convince Kaikeyi-all these are part fo evil plans of crude Ram. Kaikeyi gets Angry and scolds her. Still Manthara continues. In a fit of Rage Kaikeyi leaves the place.

Nighttime

Sumantra has brought the crown to Dasarath but Dasarath refuses. They set out in disguise to ehar what the Prajas are discussing. The prajas are discussing, as usual how good is Ram. How he is truthful, honest, just caring. Its high time king Dasarath imparts some royal duties to king but who will say?

Dasarath and sumantra listen and leave silently as they came.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part2

Sita is standing by the window. Her sisters come there.

Sita: my sisters are you happy here?

Sis: yes we are

Sita: then we should share our happiness with our parents

Urmilla: how come?

Sita: by writing a letter to them, they must be so worried , we must tell them how happy we are.

Mandavi takes a writing cloth and a writer and ink bottle.

Sita: first of all we four should salute them

Urmilla: we should write how are our mothers taking care of us. We have two mothers in MIThila and three mothers here

Mandavi: the subjects all love the prince

Sita: Shrutakirti won't you say something?

Shru: yes, our husbands love us very much.

M & U start laughing, sita slowly says Mandavi and she stops. Sita takes some black ink and puta dot on Shrutakirti ( kali dag-nazar na lage)

Now Ram is standing by window side. Sita comes.

Ram: you haven't slept?

Sita: you do not sleep as long as the praajas donot sleep. I do not sleep as long as you don't

Ram: am I doing anything wrong to the subjects?

Sita: how can you do wrong my Lord? You r justice, care and truth embodied

Ram: am I doing any injustice to you?

Sita looks back shocked

Ram: then why did you need to write a letter to mithila my dear?

Sita: hmm (laughingly) surely one of your secret agents told you? You yourself assembled this secret service section didn't you? You call them GUPTA MITRA.

Ram: site, seems you have assembled a bunch of gupta mitras of your own.

Sita blushes

Edited by its me tan - 17 years ago
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part2-coninued ........

Morning-Mealtime

Dasarath, his wives and his sons are having midday meal. The daughters are standing by.

Dasarath: Kaushlaya, our four sons have grown up. They are now eligible too. They can drive away enemies and keep Ayodhya safe. Ram really takes care of everything

Kaikeyi: so maharaj, are you planning to make ram King?

Kaushlaya and Sumitra and elated, Manthara sees doom.

Kaikeyi: that's the best thing possible.

Bharat: yes, Ram bhaiyya is full of care, justice and love, he will be the best.

Ram is pleased but surprised and shocked too. Sita is pleased.

Ram: no, I donot want to be king, I want to live under the guidance of father.

Dasarath: but you will not refuse to take some responsibilities?

I have decided Bharat will take care of the treasury, Laxman and Satrughna will look after the protection of the state, And Ram-the eldest will look after the subjects and the city as whole.

Everyone is pleased, manthara is sore.

Night again

Dasarath is taking rest and a servant is massaging his legs. Ram silently enters and takes his place.

Dasarath: you really serve me well**, just like ram. You r not feeling tired are you?

Sevak: no maharaj

D: where would ram be now, surely he has fallen asleep.

Ram: how can a king sleep when his subjects are wake, and how can a son sleep when his father is awake?

Dasarath happily gets up and sys ram should go to his room now. He is married now, his wife will be waiting.

Ram says he is worried and wants to discus. Why does Dasarath want to retire?

Dasarath: man must retire sometime before he is made to retire by nature's law, by death.

Ram: but so much to do, so muchresponsibilities.

Dasarath: it's like life. A tree gives flowers and fruits but when the fruits are picked and leaves and flowers fall off in winter, the tree is not shaken. It gets new leaves. It's the law of nature.

Ram is crying. They hug.

Edited by its me tan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!! fabulous & lively update TAN !! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks di, hope it matches upto yours fab updates 😳
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very nice update tan!!! 👏 👏 👏

I liked the last scene between ram and dashrath very much!
And any scene b/w ram n sita is always good! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just hoping to see some more scens between lax and urmi and otehrs too\post vanavas, it will be all ram and sita and ram and sita only na
so wanted to catch up others too

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