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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Damn. She escaped from her first night with her love/husband, to gate crash her ex husband's plans for the night, creating a scene in the reception, saying a lie that she is Mrs. Bajaj😆. Poor receptionist, she is so confused🤣. I can't stop laughing. Does Prerna knows what she wants. Why she is doing this.

She thinks about him rather than Anurag when she is in her room. She dreams about him. He is affecting her so much. Looking at it in both the men hands, she lost it. She used the sleeping meds on Anurag😆.

She is affected by his presence everywhere, but can she blame him for that. Atleast he doesn't talk to her, infact he ignores her. Then what is her problem with him. She needs to retrospect her behavior not. High time.

Damn the offer and the kiss☺️. Let's see where this leads them now.

Nice update. Waiting for the next one.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: najma123

I absolutely loved your update.

Glad to know you liked it😃

I am so irritated with what little I watch in the show, your update was crazy. I think this is the redemption I am looking for, for Prerna. But what I figure is, a lot of your portions are dreams or imaginations right. 😆 I had to read it twice.

But it's crazy. That she's fantasising about Bajaj when she's married to Anurag. I love that, idk why. I think I have always loved my OTP having an EMA.

😆i just wanted prerna to pursue bajaj regardless of his shady background and leave anurag no matter how good he is.

Also, even the last one is a dream? She's already asleep I guess.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#53
That was one hell of nice update. Loved it
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Posted: 5 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update.👏

Prerna was fantasising Mr Bajaj on her wedding night😆

Koshish toh anurag ko yaad karne ki thi but wo #feels nhi aai😆

So she was jealous on seeing Bajaj with a random girl & ignoring her😆

Jealous to see a pretty girl having his attention that she believes she never got🤔

She pulled up a stunt on Anurag & came to Mr Bajaj, What is happening to Prerna🤪

Suraj hua maddham~

Pre ka dil jalne lga

Aasma ye hai~

😆

Loved Rishbh's dialogues😆

Haha ..thanks!

The kiss at the end was it real or imagination

Waiting for next

Thanks for editing the chapter

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Posted: 5 years ago
#55

Okay, no pressures, but BUT BUT UPDATE SOON PLIS OMG!!

First of all, thanks to aryapdane for recommending this. I WOULD'VE MISSED THIS GEM FOREVER OTHERWISE😭 I literally LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

Your Prerna is A BLAST! THE BEST PRERNA I'VE READ. SHE'S SO SO MUCH FUN OMG🤣smiley37smiley37 You could probably write chapters and chapters of her thoughts and I'd never get bored! She's sassy and funny and ridiculous and fiesty and dangerous omg what was that milk thingsmiley37smiley37 PLEASE PLEASE I NEED MORE OF HER!

I absolutely love the whole premises. YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD! The way you write, the subtle sarcasm and black humor woven in, the setting, the descriptions, the way you reveal character thoughts omg! Like I can read monologues for pages and not get bored with your writing style and that's saying something cos monologues are really hard to do. Prerna's descent into madness, her comparing RB with AB, her increasing frenzy, obsession, need for RB IS SO SO WELL DONE! I LOVE YOUR PRERNA SO MUCH OMG.

Also your RB? DAMN I'M A FAN. He's bad, he's classy, and while we might have had less of him compared to Prerna, the chemistry in that one tiny scene WAS OFF THE CHARTS OMG! CRACKLING. I wish we'd had more buildup before that kiss at the end of chapter 2, but I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE WITH THESE TWO. The whole forbidden angle, the love that's definitely roaring on both sides, the banter and the humor. OMG I NEED MORE PLEASE.😭😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Holy moly, is Mrs Prerna Basu cheating on her soulmate with Mr Rishabh Bajaj?!?!?

Not now.....i guess!

I love this 😂❤️

Glad to know that😃

So she's here on her honeymoon, back in Switzerland (why Anurag, why?)

I'll definitely make onu answer you!

She sees him with another woman, playing in snow (?!?!?!😂 Mr Bajaj ko Kya ho gaya?) and aag lag gayi Prerna ke dil mein! God! Hahaha she was so bothered.

Jo kabhi aapka tha jab kisi aur ke paas ho toh aag yoh lagti hi hai🤪

And of course she had to confront him, barging into their honeymoon suite, by lying big time and finding another woman on his bed in red, hot lingerie.😂 Rishi, you are such a heartbreaker 😂💔

Why should pre have all the fun?😆

Aaaannnddd wait a second! Was she trying to feel aroused for her and Anurag's wedding night by imagining Rishabh Bajaj??????😂😂😂😂😂😂 Dang.

Heyy! It did its job well!🥱

She runs to find Rishabh once she realizes that he's also planning to use chocolate flavored condoms😂 and alarms go off in her head ⚠️ and I'm like, "Darling, you don't wanna have fun, don't. But let Rishabh Bajaj do what he wants!"😂

True! Such a party pooper!😆

But she can't have that happening, not on her watch, not in her ex-honeymoon suite, not with her ex-husband!😂

So she kisses him? Was it a real kiss? Or was it an imagination? Can you please update right now so that we can know what happens 😭 this was so good!!

Thank you for the kind review sanu...i'll be updating by sunday for sure and hopefully you'll have your answers😃

ETA: so she mixed some sleeping pill powder in Anurag's milk so he sleeps and she can run off to Mr Bajaj! But one second, when did Mr Bajaj give her that powder in a ring? Sometime in the past? Ooohhh I bet he never thought she'll use it on Anurag on their awaited suhaagraat 😂

Just so you know...bajaj tedhi kheer hai aur ab toh prerna bhi bajaj venom se infected hai😎

Love,

-Sanu

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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: vena.cava.

RES

BECAUSE WOWOWOWOWOW

😆thanks!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: lovefk

oh man she put her husband to sleep and went to make out with her ex husband who had a woman already in bed! WHAT A FRIKKING UPDATE! When and how did Prerna become this brazen.

She didnt make out wid him as of now🥱aage ka toh wo hi jaane!😆

I have to say though I got a bit confused reading the past, maybe you could italicise it next time onwards.

BUT LIKE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNN! WE'RE ALL SURVIVING ON THE CRUMBS YOU WRITERS ARE GIVING US!

I'll be updating by sunday...so stay tuned😃

Ps: I also absolutely frikking loved him brushing her off ! and you write reallllyyyyyyyy welllllll!!!!!

Serial main toh rishabh hey hey hey hey hey~~ gaa hi raha hai😆..yahan par i'll try to salvage his dark personality😃

And thanks for the compliment!😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: mitras

That was one hell of nice update. Loved it

Glad to know ya liked it!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: MR21

Damn. She escaped from her first night with her love/husband, to gate crash her ex husband's plans for the night, creating a scene in the reception, saying a lie that she is Mrs. Bajaj😆. Poor receptionist, she is so confused🤣. I can't stop laughing. Does Prerna knows what she wants. Why she is doing this.

I....i guess pre will be getting to that point soon of the whats and how's of things she is doing🤣

She thinks about him rather than Anurag when she is in her room. She dreams about him. He is affecting her so much. Looking at it in both the men hands, she lost it. She used the sleeping meds on Anurag😆.

Jo mera hai wo mera hai~ prerna be like that

She is affected by his presence everywhere, but can she blame him for that. Atleast he doesn't talk to her, infact he ignores her. Then what is her problem with him. She needs to retrospect her behavior not. High time.

Aage dekho...this is serious deception all over the place😉

Damn the offer and the kiss☺️. Let's see where this leads them now.

Nice update. Waiting for the next one.

Thanks. Will be updating by sunday😃

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