Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

599

Views

51.2k

Users

55

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kirtikaa

Nice update dear finally maan is back to his loved ones.. the cute family moment was just perfect the way geet agreed to piya's demand awwww in love with her poor boy was shocked to hell..hope and wish their moments continue like this...❤️❤️ Now about the air tickets where did go that to leaving piya in fever I m sure he is upto something against azeem family...now let this stupid Azeem family is rejoicing on maan's decision I m curious to know what is cooking in maan's mind excited to read further😘😘


P.S Do take care of ur health dear take enough rest ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks for your lovely wishes dear 🙂

Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: hahajaja

First of all, get well soon dear.

Geet kisses Maan but he was shocked. Loved the family union. I think Maan has gone somewhere to get a permanent solution for Aseem and family. He has planned something for them. Waiting for it.

Thanks for your lovely wishes dear 😊

Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Richa... thanks for updating despite being unwell!

get well soon!!

take care of yourself!

your health comes first

Thanks sweety for wishes😊

390540 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

34

Nice update

Daija’s timely alert gave adi enough chance to deal with that idiot rahul n he is behind the bars

Guards is great idea to keep piya n geet safe again awesome job adi

Loved the video calls of baby, mom n dad

Geet was able to share something hopefully maan too give a chance to her let’s hope for the best

390540 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Hope u feel better dear

Lovely update but what is maan trying to hide

Why he easily agreed to these guys demand n why he got so much angry when geet found ticket


Paris nahi to kahan gaya tha n why lie?

Alamelu thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Wow what was in that ticket that make maan angry on geet what did she do? So glad piya held geet back from leaving the room and aww geet kissing maan cheeks

Why is maan giving everything to Aseem must be something happening

ns.1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Hi! Richa please take care of your health because health comes first and you are still updating for your regular readers that is more than enough for us and I thank you for that. Even if you don't send pms it hardly matters, we will follow the thread. You please look after yourself and get well soon. Coming back to the update. It was a great one. Maan is back and piyu baby is the most excited and so is her mummm. Loved their moments together and geet kissing boldly on maan's cheeks without any fear of is reaction. I love her attitude. Maan is surely up to something and is planning something against his so called uncle because he didn't go to Paris and very calmly agreed to aseems demands. That's not normal for sure. Because he definitely knows about rahul attacking his baby and he will not leave them so easily. Geet is absolutely right that they shouldn't be so happy because they never know what the future holds for them. Eagerly waiting to see what has maan planned for his uncle and his family and how will geet and maan's married life progress. Thanks once again for posting it.

Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

Hi! Richa please take care of your health because health comes first and you are still updating for your regular readers that is more than enough for us and I thank you for that. Even if you don't send pms it hardly matters, we will follow the thread. You please look after yourself and get well soon. Coming back to the update. It was a great one. Maan is back and piyu baby is the most excited and so is her mummm. Loved their moments together and geet kissing boldly on maan's cheeks without any fear of is reaction. I love her attitude. Maan is surely up to something and is planning something against his so called uncle because he didn't go to Paris and very calmly agreed to aseems demands. That's not normal for sure. Because he definitely knows about rahul attacking his baby and he will not leave them so easily. Geet is absolutely right that they shouldn't be so happy because they never know what the future holds for them. Eagerly waiting to see what has maan planned for his uncle and his family and how will geet and maan's married life progress. Thanks once again for posting it.

Thanks sweety for your lovely wishes 😘

Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 36



SURELY they were upset with his decision. But Daija didn't raised her voice against Maan as he was wise enough. Geet entered in the room and placed Piya on the bed. Maan was there still she cover her bounderies before leaving. Geet come back with her feeding bottle and found her playing with Maan. She went near to him and asked for Piya but in signals.



"You are upset with my decision. Right?"he asked directly in a flat voice.



She tried to take away her daughter but Maan didn't give in. Finally she broke her silence before him. "I have full faith on you. If you decide something then i am with you in your every decision. It's you who didn't trust me." her emotion reflect in her confession. Her trust and love for him but the same time his distrust caused pain in her heart as well. He can sense it.



"You are angry because I scold you that time?" He was glancing at the vast sky and asked without facing her.



"I am no one to get angry with you. Apne wo haq kabhi diya hi nahi. But yes i feel hurt when you show distrust towards me." her eyes filled with water layer.



Maan swirled to face her. He wiped off her tears and Piya imitate her father's action. Her cute antics and Maan's little gesture towards her,took away all her pain and sorrows. She forgot every thing and took Piya in her arms. Geet moved towards bed and made her laid in lap so she can feed her with her favourite bottle. Geet hold her bottle and Piya enjoying her milk. Maan locked the door first then moved and sat near both. "Geet you wanna know,where I was? If i am not in Paris then where i was from past few days? Then listen i was in...." He got ready to tell her about the name of place he visit actually but Geet placed her palm and shut his mouth.



"No need of any explainantion. Agar apko theek lagta to aap bata dete. Maan I don't want to force you for any thing. I will wait till you gain full trust on me." Geet understood that he don't reciprocate her love but he don't even trust her definitely hurting but the same time she don't want to force him for any thing.



Both glanced in each other eyes for a few seconds and Maan confessed. "I have full faith on you. I never doubt you for any thing. Geet tume pata hona chahiye ye business ye paise bahut chhota hai meri Piya k samne. Jab main ise leke tum pe pura trust karta hu to or koi cheez mayne nahi rakhti. I have full faith on you like I have on Daija and Adi. The way you handle her, I never interfere and never do in future too because I know whatever you do or decide for her is only for her well being. Ek achhi maa apne bachhe k liye sab karti hai. Zarurat apdne pe samjhati hai danti hai par sabse zada pyar karti hai and trust me i will never question you for this. Now about my tour and ticket. Yes you are right. Main Paris nahi gaya tha." Maan take a pause.



"I am sorry for scolding you. But you asked suddenly and same time Sakshi khurana was standing outside our room." He revealed.



"what? She was spying on us?" Geet was in shock.



"Yess. I saw how her eyes turned. Her curiousity to know where i was, clearly reflecting in her eyes. That time sach main bata nahi sakta tha or jhooth bhi bolta to use shak ho jata. I want to mislead her by our conflict. That's why I scolded you. I am sorry Geet but I have no intentions of hurting you by any mean. If i lied on that time you asked more questions from me. That's why I scold you and end the conversation there only." Maan explain the reason of his rude behaviour.



Geet placed her hand on his. Maan raised his eyes and met with hers. "I am sorry Maan. Ek baar firr maine apko samjhne me galti ki." she apolozised.



"No Geet you don't have any fault. I know I was rude but that time mujhe jo theek laga maine woi kiya." Maan have no complaints nor she had. Both were calm and composed so was Piya.



Amazingly she was connected to her parents so deeply. When they were content she felt content and if they were hurt she automatically turn disturbed. She was staring both while enjoying her milk.



"I think she had done." Maan points.



Geet leaned over her and kissed on her head. "dudu pam. Mumma lele isko. Its empty." Geet asked and she quickly leave her bottle. Piya hold her finger firmly and patted her other hand on Maan's thigh. It was a signal. Maan gave his hand to her and she held his finger as well. She was happy and smiling while playing with her parents.



"give her to me. I will take her to balcony till she burp." Maan took her from Geet's lap and walked towards balcony. He stroked her back to help her in digest what she intake or else in no time she puke out whole milk.



"liya?" Geet asked worriedly. A mother's worry.



"Not yet." Maan told her and both walked from one corner to another till she gave a burp sound.



When she done Geet raised her another query. "Maan if you don't mind I have one suggestion." she hesitated a bit while offering. "I know parso hume apke un logo ko 40% k brabar cash dena hai. It's a big amout Maan. And I know itna hard cash ek sath nikalna possible nahi hai. I have some cash in bank and some jewellery which we can use. Because i don't want you to sell any of Khurana property." Geet offers.



"Don't even think about that." Maan said strongly.



"why? Kya main is ghar ka hissa nahi hu?" Geet raised query.



"ho Geet.



"then why you don't want to take my help? Apko lagta hai meri help lene se apki respect kam ho jayegi?"



"no never. But main already Mr. Handa se help le chuka hu." he revealed and stunned her. "ha maine baat ki unse or unhone market me apne sources se baat ki or maine apne. We already arranged the money. So you don't need to touch your personal money."



"aap sach bol rahe ho? Apne Dad se help li?" Geet still not able to believe.



"Ha kyu nahi le sakta? Wo b to apne hai. Or bure waqt me apne hi kaam aate hai. Am i right?"



Maan himself even don't aware how much happiness he gave to her in one day. First he apologised and share his feelings towards her. The respect he had for her and now he consider her parents as his own was cherry on the top. Geet was on cloud nine. She grinned wide. Though she looked fool to him but she doesn't care. What her heart was feeling in this moment was more important.



"Geet daant ander karo you look fool." Maan teased her. He wants her to feel comfortable after such a bad day. "now come daija wait kar rahi hongi. Hum b dinner kar lete hai." Maan hold her hand and both walked out....

NeenaDd thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Awsm update

They r adorbs

He cleared everything...she is very happy and grinning like a fool...

His tease😍

Loved it...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

2 years ago

BROKEN HEARTS 2 Updated P 40 on Pg 85 / 13-7-2025

INTRODUCTION NEW SS FOR MY READERS. FIRST SEASON WAS ORIGINALLY WRITTEN ON MY PAGE. BUT THIS ONE I STARTS HERE. LET'S SEE HOW MUCH YOU...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: mayyo

3 years ago

Wired Hearts (8) Updated Ch:61, Pg:37 |August 9th

INDEX 1. The Blanket Of Time 2. Family 3. R R 4. Mending Bonds 5. A New Beginning 6. Anticipation 7. Maasi. Twice Over 8. Life Is A Cycle 9. A...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

5 months ago

Battered Hearts|| Chapt 3 page 3 Updated 08/03 Battered Hearts|| Chapt 3 page 3 Updated 08/03

Prologue Skin marked with bruises. Raspy breaths. She waited silently in the dark. Waited for the first deep breath and the light snore to come....

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

One Shot - Beneath the Broken Sky [When Souls Collide] One Shot - Beneath the Broken Sky [When Souls Collide]

I was rewatching old epis here and there of GHSP and this title suggestion - 'Beneath the Broken Sky' came from @nushhkiee for another SS I was...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".