Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 15

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Posted: 5 years ago

Super update baby . daija thanked adi for his help then they discussed about that matter . other side aseem and his wife tried to bring back their son from police station but no use . piya baby was missing her uuu , she was gloomy but her mood was set when she watched maan through video , she tried to talk to him in her own language 😍 geet too talk to him and told him they are missing him . piya baby was very hapy when she saw maan ....yes he came back .

eagerly waiting for next part .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update. Maaan is back. Hopw all problems solv soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow loved the update Rahul inside the jail and his family trying in full edge to bring him out of bars... finally adi's idea worked out and maan was visible to his little piya.. maan started understanding geet now days unknown to geet she is raising her hopes in this relationship their conversation was so cute.. maan is back wow waiting to read more ❤️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Fantastic chapter n thank god piyu is save n geet came on right time n save her n daija slap Rahul n aseem insult n push daija n adi came with police n police arrested Rahul n adi make strong case so Rahul won't be able come out on bail n adi gave idea of video calling to maan n geet did video calling n piya is happy to see maan n update nxt soon n pls pm me too

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks to Adi Rahul will be away from Geet until Maan arrives.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Such a sweet beautiful update sweetie. I feel so so sad when I see Piyu baby like that...But thank god the video call with Maan really made her happy & smile:):):) She is so so so adorable sweetie...The way she kiss Maan on the laptop, her cute antics when the video call goes off:):):) And how she dozed off to sleep when she saw her parents in front of her eyes. She is such an angel...A blessing. Maan understands Geet...so much so that he understands the voice of her heart...Her unsaid words and feelings...Yipppppeeeeeeee:):):) Maan is back:):):) And how cutie sweetie Piyu baby know? She can feel & sense her Papa's presence the moment he enters their house. So so adorable and the bond they share is divine.

Ohhhhhhh...pls don't let that pervert out of jail. Let them thrash him into a pulp for all that he did...And that Aseeem & wife...I hope Maan & Adi got enough evidence of their activities so that they can also be thrown into the jail for good.

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 35



MAAN was back in KM,for their loved ones. Geet and Maan both pace their steps to reach other. She wanna hug him but their hesitation stops her as he show no intrest in their relation. Piya was the only one who was free to show their emotions and get love from both. Seeing her father back she get desperate,throwing her arms to go to him. Maan too quickly grab his daughter and shower kisses on her. Piya too kiss him back and wrapped his neck with her tiny arms. She was happy. Maan tickled on her stomach and she laugh loudly.



"my naughty baby. Again called fever." both were so much in each other that forgot about their surroundings. Geet felt left out but she was happy for her baby and don't wanna snatch their moment so thought to move away.



This was her decision not Piya's wish and she forgot they were bound to her wishes only. Piya sensed and alerts quickly. She raised her head and stop her. "mum mumm" Piya called her. She stretched her arm and curled and open her fingers again and again. Don't want her to go away from them.



Maan went near her. "Geet where are you going?" Maan asked. Piya leaned on her mother and kissed her,made her mother smile. Geet too kissed her back.



"My baby happy? Papa is back." Geet asked in a sweet voice and Piya gave ear to ear smile. Then she done something which made Maan's eyes widened. Piya repeated her action of that day but this time she demands from Geet and Geet without any hesitation kiss on his cheek. Piya imitates and clapped as well. She was happy as her mother not denied her demand.



"what? Why are you staring like this? I am not like you jo apne baby ki itni si wish b puri na karu? Usne us dinn apse kaha apne nahi mani uski baat. Pata hai mera baby kitna upset ho gaya tha." Geet saw his shocked eyes and explain. Then she glance at Piya. "See how happy she is. Piyu mumma ne apki baat maan li." Piya's antics were enough to tell how much happy she was. She raised her arms and Geet took her from Maan. "ab chaliye fresh ho jaiye." she command him and he followed her without fussing.



Daija saw him and felt happy. She welcome back her son. Aseem and Sakshi though not seems very happy but they want their share so its very necessary that Maan returned. So they are hoping only for their interest.



"Good you come back. I want to talk with you." Aseem demands. Maan stare him but not replied. He descended down and stood opposite to him. "i hope you are not tired."



"Not now Mr. Aseem. Right now I only wanna spend time with my family." Maan embrace Daija and held Geet's wrist firmly. "only with my family. You can wait. After lunch,may be." Maan shot a glare and move,holding his posessions. Aseem left behind.



Maan was in washroom and she was busy in unpacking. "kitna messy hai. Bilkul Dad jaisa. All men are same hai na Piyu?" she is babling and Piya repond,showing her milky white teeth.



While setting his wardrobe,his air ticket falls on floor. Geet picked up. "ye b abhi tak sambhal k rakhi hai." she was about to threw it when her eyes got something. Her face expression changed quickly.



Maan come out the same time. "what happened Geet? Why are you shouting?" he asked,unknown to the fact what she had in her hands.



Geet swirled. "Maan your ticket." she don't said any thing but her eyes questioning so many questions.



Maan glance and his brows knotted. He snatched the ticket and dump in bin. "Maan aap to Paris gaye the na,firr...." Geet couraged and asked her query.



Maan shot a glare to her as well. "its none of your business." he turned angry and went out. After so many days she saw his anger and for her. The moment Tia told about her innosence,Maan never glared her or show any kind of hatered but today,though its for a few seconds but he was furious on her.



Without telling any one Maan left KM. Daija saw him leaving and came to Geet. She asked. "Geet is every thing okay? I saw Maan leaving KM in rage." Geet told her what exactly happened there. Her forehead squezzed too. "Geet you don't take stress and it's not your fault. Don't worry when he come back i will ask him what's going on." Daija herself got tensed after hearing Geet but she don't showed it to her. She stayed calm in front of her so she could composed her.



Maan came back in evening and Aseem approched him again. This time he get ready to talk. "boliye what you want?" he asked. Daija and Geet to came there.



"let's talk simple. I want my share of property and KM." he put his demand before him.



Geet and Daija enraged with his blunt demand but Maan was very calm and composed. "fine diya. Give me some time to arrange money. Parso apko apka hissa mill jayega. I also don't wanna share same roof with you all. So better we finished this chapter." Maan agree his all terms and conditions which annoyed Both the women.



"Maan what are you doing?" Daija opposed.



"Daija trust me its for the betterment of all of us." he said and left.



Where one side his loved one's were in doubt, Aseem and his wife got a reason to celebrate on the other hands.



"i just can't believe wo itni easaily maan jaeyga. I am so glad Aseem." Sakshi was on the cloud nine after the decision taken by Maan.



"Aarti tum bada dhamka rahi thi. Ab kya hua. Seee your coward son. How easily he got ready to leave his house. Sach kahu to main b darr gaya tha ki pata nahi Maan b kahi bhaisahab jaisa hua to but no. He is a bloody coward." Aseem taunt to Daija as she threaten him on the name of Maan.



"Aseem..." She roared. Her fists clenched hard and same was of Geet. Both turned furious. "Don't you dare call my Maan a coward. Tume wo bheek de raha hai to usme kush raho samjhe tum." Aarti don't bear a single word against Maan and snapped.



"oh really? Whatever. Just because of you mom threw me out of this mansion but now its my turn. I will throw you all out and then only my wounded heart get solace." Aseem challenged.



"itna khush mat hoiye Mr. Aseem Khurana. Who know what will be hidden in your future. Kabhi kabhi nivala muh tak aa kar b naseeb nahi hota." Geet broke her silence and challenged him back. "Chaliye Daija. They are not worth it." Geet left with her.


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I am not feeling well. So don't expect any pm from me. Waise bhi mujhe reply jo aata hai wo few readers se hi aata hai jo mere regular reader hai or day one se mujhe follow kar rahe hai. Baki ya to silent hai ya one liners or one words readers hai so I don't care they replied or not.

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Edited by Gurti_Maaneet - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Awsm 😍

Their family moment ❤

What is maan hiding

Aseem and his wife is very happy that he agreed to their terms

Excited to know wt he is planning

Just love this story 😍❤

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amezing update but maan kaha gaya hoga aur maan kya karega aseem k sath .? very interesting story.waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey take care yours health and get well soon.

Nice update.lovely family moment.maan hiding something when geet ask from him about ticket he get angry.he ready to gave aseem his shares.let see what maan planed.

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