O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Guddan bhi naa 😆but acha kiya khudh se lift nahi le 🤣🤣 AJ bhi bada akad dekha rahe the😂😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

God...this was awesome..loved it..❤️

Guddan k saamne aj ko bhi jhukna pda🤣

Plz do cont soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

Part 10

As Akshat stop the car guddan asked what happened why you stop the car suddenly is there any problem, akshat looks towards her and said nothing I have some work here will u plz wait for 5 mins I will be back soon

Guddan- yeh sure plz

And then he went inside a building guddan notice that it was some housing agents office she thinks why he went there, after sometimes when ge comes back he didn't found her in the car

Akshat- ab yeh kaha chali gayi, she was about to call her name when he saw her playing with some kids on the footpath,

Akshat- Dr. Gupta looks like you want to spend your night here only

Guddan- oh you comes sorry I didn't notice, acha baccho ab hum chalte hai bye

Akshat- sorry 5 min bol k maine tumhare 30 min waste kr diye

Guddan- it's ok, vase ap housing agents ke office mai kya kr rahe the, mera matlab... He cuts her in middle

Akshat- koi housing agent ke office Mai kya kya hai Dr.Guddan

Guddan- Ni batana hai toh it's ok taney marne ki zaroorat Ni hai

Akshat- main Taney mar Raha hoon

Guddan- see you yourself admitted that

Akshat in mind sahi kehte hai log ladkiyon se jeetna hum Mardi ke bass ki baat nahi hai

Akshat- Apne liye rent or ghar dhood Raha hoon

Guddan- Kyun hostel se Nikal diya kya, let me guess Apne zaroor kuch prank Kiya hoga koi ulta sidha aur phir hostel walo he apko...

Akshat- haa haa very funny

Guddan- no it's not I'm serious

Akshat- tumhari problem kya hai mujhse kabhi ache baat ki r Sakti na yeh bhi nai ki banded me lift di hai toh uske tarif Mai kuch kahe Lekin bhi ma'am ko ye save kaha ata hai

Guddan- age se right

Akshat- kya

Guddan- arey age se right lijiye

Akshat- ji jesa ap kahe ma'am

Guddan chuckle's at his statement and her phone rings

Guddan- mummy ka call hai, hello Haan mummy

Kaushlya- beta kaha hai tu kitna time lagega

Guddan- bus mummy 15 min aur

Kaushlya- acha thik hai maine yeah batane ke liye phone Kiya tha ki hum Sab tere papa ke Friend k yaha ja rage hai party Mai tu bhi chalegi kya

Guddan- Ni mummy bhaut thak gaye hai hum aaj ap log chale Jayden

Kaushlya- thik hai acha tere pass chabhi hai na ghar ki ya main Meenu ke yaha de jaon

Guddan- Ni mummy humare pass hai chabhi ap log aram se Jayen aur mummy pls Jane se phele humre liye ek cup coffee Bana dijiyega plz

Kaushalya- thik hai

Guddan- thank you mummy love u mummy muhaaa

Kaushlaya- his bus itnq pyaar dikhne ki zaroorat mi hai Baran coffee jayada meethi ho jayegi, an rakhti hoon bye

After 15 min they reach to Green Valley society

Guddan- bus ap yahi entrance or hi Hume drop it dijiye hum chale jayenge

Akshat- kyu ghar ki bulaogi

Guddan- Look Dr. Akshat agar aapko ghar ana hai toh din mai aaiyega aram se apni bulaungi Abhi hi. Kyuki bhi 7 baje Mai shirt 45 min baki hai aur agar ap late Ho Gaye toh jo hostel se apko agle hafte Nikal rage hai vo aj hi Nikal denge

Akshat- ok fine bye

Guddan- bye, arey ek min apka appren toh lete jaiye

Akshat- arey ni isse fihal tum hi Rakhi pata no kitne germs honge na isme

Guddan- how mean

Akshat- what fihal rakhne ke liye bol Raha hoon kal ache dho kr wapad or Dena

Guddan- toh yahi baat ap sidhe tarike se bhi bol sakte the na

Akshat- this is called " Tit for tat" Abhi kuch min phele koi mujhe dodge sidhe time Bata Sakta that ki Mai late Ho Raha hoon hai na

Guddan make faces and after saying good bye she went from there, Akshat wait there till she enters into her society

Guddan reach home after changing to her night dress she sip the coffee and went to take her dinner and finally retired herself to the bed but was lost in her own thought about today

End of Part

Pls ignore typos and grammatical mistakes

So finally done with this part now what do I think what guddan thinking about??

Socho socho jab tak ke liye hum chale Good night and sweet dreams 😴

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Posted: 6 years ago
#85

Waah dono taashan mein 😆🤣

Arre itna wait maat karwayo yaar please😭update soon pleaseeeeee😒

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Posted: 6 years ago
#86

Amazing.dono takkar ke hai

Plz dont make us wait for so long

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Sorry sab Ko wait krwane ke liye. I'll try my best

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Posted: 6 years ago
#88

Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#89

Awesome..update..loved akshan ka tashan❤️

Cont soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 11

Guddan tries hard but every time when she closed her eyes the only thought comes in her mind is of him

Guddan (in mind)- aahhh bus kro Guddan tum kuch jayada hi soch rahi ho haan mana ki unhone tumhari help ki pr iska matlab yeh ni hai ki tum kuch bhi sochti raho, aur vasebhi Dr. Akshat toh bus tumhari help kr rahe the tumhari jagah koi aur hota toh sayad vo uski bhi ese hi madaad krte

Guddan’s inner thought- kya sach mai humari jagah koi aur hota toh vo uski bhi madaad ese hi krte. Guddan so jao kal subh college bhi jana hai

Next Day,

Guddan was still thinking about the previous day but her trance was broken by his voice, it’s Akshat who was standing there

Guddan- what yeh subh subh humara rashta rokene ka Matlab

Akshat- oh plz Dr. Gupta don’t give so much importance to yourself , don’t you think you forget something

Guddan- oh really then tell me what was it, ap hi bata dijiye na ki hum kya bhool rahe hai

Akshat- mera appren, tumhe mujhe mera appren vapas krna hai remember

Guddan- haan toh yaad…yaad hai hume

Akshat- acha toh dijye

Guddan- hmm yeh lijiye apka appren

Akshat- agar thanks fill kr rahi ho toh coffee ki treat de sakti ho I don’t mind

Guddan- ok done(with a smile)

Angad- toh phir ek cup aur add kr lena main bhi chalunga… akshat gives him a dead look

Angad- main aa sakta hoon na

Guddan- ji zaroor it’s my pleasure

Poonam- main toh vase bhi ek pre k phir offer hoon, ab jaha guji waha…

Guddan- uski panda (angad, poonam and guddan was laughing but Akshat was cursing the two)

Akshat (murmuringto himself)- haan haan chalo sab chalo, kal hi date pr hoke aya hai ye ni kibhai ko bhi chance de, ni inhe th kabab mai haadi bane ka shok hai acha khasa plan bana tha aur first time first time vo maan bhi gayi thi pr..

Guddan- pr…pr kya Dr. Akshat apne kuch kaha

Akshat- ni kuch bhi toh ni main toh bus kah raha tha ki chalo class ka time ho gaya hai late ho jayenge n toh

Guddan- ji chaliye,toh after college main gate pe milte hai bye

All of them goes to there respective class and according to there plan they meet at the main gate of college

Angad- chalen phir

Guddan- haan pr kaha chalna hai phele yeh toh bata dijiye

Angad- kaha chalna hai matlab treat tumhari toh jagah bhi tum hi decide kro hum toh bs coffee se Matlab hai

Poona- hotel noor chalet hai vaha ki coffee best hai, ya phir selfie point ke pass wale restaurant mai

Angad- ni yaar vo dono hi door ho jayenge

Guddan-ok ab bs bhi kr panda plz, jiske liye yeh treat hai usse bhi toh bolne do na,Dr. Akshat

Akshat (in mind)- chalo kaam se kaam tna toh yaad hai ki yeh treat muere liye hai varnamujhe toh yeh

Guddan- kyahuwa kya soch rahe hai boliye bhi

Akshat- maine toh shirf treat mangi thi jagah aur time tumhe decide krna tha mujhe ni

Guddan- ok fine phir ek kaam krte hai People’s Mall chalet hai yaha se pass bhi hai aur vaha ki coffee bhi achi hai

Akshat- thik hai chalo sab meri car se hi chalet hai

Guddan- ap aur Dr. Angad car se aa jayen hum aur poonam humari scooter se aa jayenge

Akshat- arey daro mat main bahut hi safe drive krta hoon tumne toh dekhi bhi hai meri

Guddan- ji bilkul ap bhaut ache driver hai but humare pass humari scooter hai jo hume chalani bhi ati hai bhaut ache toh thank you

Akshat- ok asyour wish

At people’small cafeteria they places the order of there choice

Angad- hmm mana padega Dr. Guddan ko yaha ki coffee sach main bhaut achi hai vase hum sab ki coffee toh le ayi lekin vo aur unki coffee kaha rahe gayi yeh dono

Poonam- dono ni Teeno kahiye

Angad- teeno kese Dr. Poonam yaar medical student kitna bhi badnam mat kro itni counting to hati hai hume bhi ki guddan aur uski ek coffee toh do hi huwe na teen kese hogaye

Poonam- ji apk iDr. Guddan aur uski ek coffee toh do hi huwe pr uske saath kuch aur bhi hai joteen honge

Angad- aur vo kya

Poonam- abhi pata chal jayega ane dijiye usse, lo aagayi

Guddan- sorry thoda late ho gayi

Poonam was smiling at her habit where the duo were shocked

Poonam- kya huwa shock laga yeh dekh kr pr kya kren yeh madam esi hi hai ese ulte sidhe kaam krna hi isse acha lagta hai

Guddan- agar ap logo ko chahiye toh hum aur icecream order kr dete hai pr plz humari wali dekhna bhi mat

Poonam- guji yeh kya do ice cream tumhara dimag toh thik hai na yeh ek kha kr hi tum bimarpadne wali ho aur yaha do do le ayi

Guddan- plz abtum bhi mummy ki tarah suru mat ho jao, aur apko ese chaukne ki zroorat ni hai

Poonam- ji bilkul kyuki khane pine ke mamle main a in madam ka upar ka screw thoda dhilahai

Angad- phir toh akshat aur guddan ko same pinch

Poonam kya Matlab hai apka

Angad- kyu ki iss mamle mai yeh akeli ni hai yeh janab bhi same to same hai, coffee ke icecream inhe bhi bahut achi lagti hai aur phir agle din inki coffee aur ice cream ek saath nikalti hai jab sara din cheekte rhate hai janab

Guddan- kya sach Dr. Akshat ap bhi toh phele bolna chahiye tha na

Akshat- haa baat toh sirf coffee kit hi toh isiliye

Guddan- koi ni ape k kaam kijiye humare wale mai se lelijiye base bhi hume dole k raye hai

Akshat- are you sure, ni matlab abhi toh poonam ne kaha ki tum kisi se share ni krti phir

Guddan- vo unse jo shirf humari ice cream prn azar lage huwe hote hai pr ap aur hum toh same tosame hai na

Angad- yeh bilkul sai kaha tum dono sach main same to same ho chahe baat studies ki ho yakaam ki ab toh tum dono ki coffee ki adat bhi mil gayi

Poonam- ab bs tum dono ki kundali bhi mil jaye

Guddan and akshat cough at her words

Poonam- sorryvo galti se, chalo chalo jaldi khatam krom bhai guddan lath o rahe hai hum haina and she tries o find some place to hide herself as she know guddan’s two monster eyes where ready to eat her so she silently sips her coffee and wait for others

End of Part


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