O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 7

Same day at midnight guddan’s phone rings

Guddan- hey lord krishana yen adhi raat ko kaun call raha hai,panda is waqt ab isse kaun si afat agayi jo humari need kharab krne ko tayarhai. she took her phone and went to her rooms balcony

Guddan- hello kya hai panda yen itni adhi raat ko kyun phoe kiyahai sab thik toh hai na aur dekh agar tune mujhe CCE mai help mangne ke liyephone kiya hai toh maine bata do ki maine already tujhe mail kr diya hi ja krdekh lo…

Poonam- arey bus bhi kro rajdhani express mujhe toh bolne do

Guddan- hmm bolo bhai tum bhi bol lo (insleepy tone)

Poonam- maine toh bus yen bolne ke liye phone kiya tha ki kal shubh7 baje ready rahna main tujhe lene aa jaungi

Guddan- hain… kal kya hai??

Poonam- sari duniya ki khabar hai na tujhe pr jise apna best friendbolti hai uski bilkul bhi parwah ni (with fake cry)

Guddan- arey haan yaad aya kal toh Rahul bhaiya ki sagai hai na humkese bhul sakte hai

Poonam- sukriya kam se kam yaad toh aya

Guddan- haan haan thik hai ab bhool gaye the toh kya huwa yaad bhitoh aa gaya na aur haan tumhe bolne ki zaroorat ni hai hum sab time pr aajayenge because

Poonam- yeh duniya ghumna bhul sakti hai par hamri guji mata kabhilate ni ho sakti

Guudan- bus bus bhaut ho gaya ab jao ja kr tum bhi thoda aram kr lowarna shubh apne hi bhai ki sagai mai bhoot dhikhogi

Poonam- haa ja rhai hai,

Guddan- arey baap re

Poonam- kya huwa??

Guddan- hum toh bhul hi gaye kal Dr. Meeta ko CCE bhi toh submitkrni hai

Poonam- guji tu uski tesion na le kal Dr. Saxena chutti pr hai aural unke ke continously 4 lectures honethe jo ab ni honge Matlab unke bina toh class ni lagai na aur unka lecture johai vo Dr. Khan lene jisme vo vahi previous topics hi discuss krnege

Guddan- matlab hum aram se bhaiya ki enganment enjoy kr sakte haiphir lunch time se phele cllg aa jayenge rgt

Poonam- ji

Guddan- chal abhi hume nab haut needh aa rhi hai hum bhaut thakgaye hai shub milte hai. Good ngt

Poonam- good ngt

Next day at college campus

Guddan- panda jaldi chal late hog aye hume lunch se phele puchnatha aur hum lunch time mai puch rahe hai

Poonam- haan toh kya huwa vase bhi Dr. Meeta ki class lunch ki baad lagti hai

Guddan- ek min rook itni bhi jaldi nahi hai ki tum marathon suru krdo

Poonam- acha abhi hume jaldi chale ka bol rhai thi aur ab khud hidhere chalne ko bol rhai ho

Guddan- haan toh ya Karen tumhare photos aur selfie lene ke chakarmai itne late hog aye ki change krne ka bhi ime ni mila yeh ese sari mai hicllg ana pada

Poonam- chill yar guji aur vase humek laute thodi hai jo cllg mai sareephen ke aye hai humri professors bhi toh saree mai hi ati hai to usme problemkya hai

Guddan-haan sahi kaha pr professors na simple saree mai ati hai yehmodern saree mai aur yun tayar hoke ni aj dekho ab kese sb hume ghur rahe hai jaise koi alien dekh liya ho,

Guddan was blabbering and walks to the corridor adjusting her self in the saree and suddenly she stumbles and closes her eyes in fear but before she hit the floor Akshat holds her on time as he was passing from that same corridor. Both shares an eyelock without realizing the surrounding.

End of Part


Edited by Swati_20 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Loo khtm kardiya AkshAn par😆😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

woww read all chal in a fro asowme please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Superb update

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

This is not fair..why cliffhanger.😭..aur vi bi tb jb akshan scene tha...but it was an awesome uodate..loved it...plz cont soon with akshan romance cont..😃plz❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 8

Guddan was blabbering and walks to the corridor adjustin her selfin the saree( imagine her in pink saree that she was wearing in our show duringchhaki task given to durga and saru along with bua ji) and suddenly shestumbles and closes her eyes in fear but before she hit the floor Akshat holdsher on time as he was passing from that same corridor. Both share an eyelockwithout realizing the surrounding. There trance were broken b poonam’s voice.

Poonam- mujhe bol rahi thi aur khud toofan se baaten krti chal rahihai, vo acha huwa Dr. Akshat ne sambhal liya

Guddan- thanks to him

Akshat- vase itni jaldi kaha jane ki hai

Poonam- ni Dr. Akshat vo hum canteen ja rahe the

Akshat- canteen jane ke liye koi itna tayar ho kea ta hai phelibaar dekha hai.

Poonam- vo actuallly aj mere bhaiya ki engagement thi aur hum donodirect vahi se aa rahe hai vo Dr. Meeta ko CCE submit krni hi tho jaldi jaldimai tym ni mila. While talking they reach to the canteen area

Guddan- apki enquiry ho gayi ho toh kya hum ja sakte hai Dr. Akshat

Akshat- haan toh maine kb roka hai pr phele itni beautiful ladieski ek photo leni toh banti hai and he takes poonam pics fist she happily posesefor it but guddan was totally annoyed as already whole cllg where staring atthem because of there custome and now Dr. Akshat’s talk make her more embarrassso she deny for any picture,But Akshat was akshat he took her pics seceretlyand shows her.

Guddan get mad and try to snatches his phone from his hand but heis 6’3 inch man, he straighten his hand in upwards direction now it was impossiblefor her to reach his hands so she stands on her toes to reach him but it alsofailed and in all this she loses her balance and fall on his chest to preventher from falling he gives her support by holding her and his hand touches herbare back, this was the first time akshat seeing her frm so close and he wascompletely lost in her eyes and both share an eye lock again this time theirtrance is broken by Poonam who was taking their pics like this abd said socute…

Akshat- hmm sorry vo…

Guddan- I’m sorry too

Angad- hello ab tum dono yahan yun khade khade sorry sorry hi krterahoge ya canteen ke andar chalne ka bhi irada hai bhai main toh jar aha hoonmujhe bhaut bhook lagi hai

Poonam- haan bhook toh mujhe bhi lagi hai bhaut joro ki

And they went inside the canteen and take their seats, guddan askpoonam to pass her the appren, as she is wearing deep back blouse

Poonam- haan ek min, she checks her bag and get tense

Guddan- poonam kya kr rahi hai appren nikalne mai itna tym lagtahai kya

Poonam (In very low tone) – appren hoga toh dungi na

Guddan- kya badbada rhi hai aur vo sab chod hume humara appren dojaldi dekho sb kese ghur rahe hai hume bilkul b acha ni lag raha hai

Poonam- vo main… main vo

Guddan- kya yen bakri ki tarah main main laga rakha hai… ek min tumhumara appren layi ho na

Poonam just nodded her head in negative

Poonam- sorry vo main jaldi jaldi main tumhara appren lana bholgayi sayad vahi hall mai table pr h rah gaya hoga

Guddan- ab hum kya krenge tum appren lana kese bhol sakti ho poonam

Akshat who was silently listening the talks of the duo and finisedhis lunch

Angad- humara toh ho gaya chale akshat

Akshat- han chalo mera bhi ho gaya

Angad- ok bye ladies hum chalte hai humari class ka time ho rahahai and both went from there

Guddan is now looking here and there and pray to lord Krishna toplz help her she was not allowed in Dr. Meta’s class if she dosen’t wear herappren just then she see akshat was standing there with his appre

Akshat- what ese kya dekh rahi ho le lo tumhe iski jayada zaroothai

Guddan- hain…

Akshat- mera kahne ka matlab hai tumne hi kaha na ki tumhe Dr.Meeta ko CCE dena hai aur Dr. Meeta bina appren ke apne class mai kisi ko bhiallow ni krti so take it

Guddan- pr hum yen kese le sakte hai apki bhi toh class hogi na tohphir hum kese

Akshat- haan class toh hai pr mujhe iski zaroorat ni hai mai managekr lunga

Guddan-thank you

Akshat- thanks appren vapas krte waqt bolna

Poonam- thank you Dr. Akshat apne mujhe aj marne se bacha liya

And with thisal of them went to their respective class

End of Part

lo ji update kr diya plz jhoote chapal mat marna and sorry for all the typos and grammatical mistake

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Updated plz check

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Originally posted by: Akshananju

Loo khtm kardiya AkshAn par😆😆

Next part mai apki wish puri krne ki khosis ki h plz check the update

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Originally posted by: Ajgud

woww read all chal in a fro asowme please continue soon

Thanx glad to know u like it

Plz check next part is updated

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Updated plz check

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