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Oh my god...dear Haseena di..🤗🙏🙏

This chapter moved me so badly..there is something divine and magical in it. I don't have words to explain that emotion that commemorated in me while reading this chapter.Trust me..I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading. And it took some time for my mind to comeback to reality..and hence my fb is delayed though I read it yesterday.

I was at loss of words..so I just kept my phone aside and stepped into deep thoughts after reading. There were lots of cute and intense mehrya moments..but what took my heart away was Shaurya's concern. Oh god..I can't even explain how easily his feelings and inner turmoil pulled off the strings of my heart. Oh my goodness..this man his passion and love, it is so divine and powerful. How his concern turned out to be ours too. Undoubtedly Mehrya's had cast their magic spell on us, and we can easily visualize them even in our dreams. But something divine like this can come through only from the brilliant vision and execution of a writer. And you are excelling in this field like a pro. As I close my eyes for a moment, tears spills from the same as I could see her lying on his chest and the cumulus of emotions he is masking, to relish that beautiful smile on her face.

Ok...am diverting my attention. Else this would turn out to be a long essay. It resembled a thriller too. Guess it is going to be the same in the next few chapters. I know it won't be easy for him to bring the culprit to the limelight. But he is our badass Shaurya khanna, the passionate lover and such a great husband. He will win for sure.

You know how impatient Iam. Still l would be waiting patiently as your updates are worth waiting. Thanks a ton for this brilliant update..*one of my favorites*..🤗. Lots of love to you di..🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️

Stay blessed and have fun at the wedding..😊🤗

Shinu thank you so much for the longggg feedback. I feel amazing to read this. yeah I am proud with my fictional character.. he is husband goal 🤪.I am so touched that you were able to connect with the characters through my writing. Actually I want to make it kind of upset moments in between them and Shaurya's anger heighten up with mehak's churlishness but decided to drop that idea as it will be another long chapter. Lets see how the truth unfolds slowly in the upcoming chapters and see how the Badass Khanna gonna teach that masked man a lesson in his way. thank you and stay blessed always

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry for late Haseena

You really amazing me with your writing skills hatts off to you dear

Now who is this man yaar I think shourya just pretend to go out so he caught him red handed hope he will succeed in his plan

Thanks for the long update dear

Have a blessed day ahead

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Part 50 10/09/2019

Mehak's POV

I woke up late than my usual time. The usual warmth I always feel on my bed is gone. I cringe when I sensed the absence of the warmth which I always crave for. Slowly getting up rubbing my eyes off, adjusting the strap of my nightie, I pull myself out of the duvet as I put my feet down I saw a note on the bedside table, groggily yawning I took that note out and read them.

Good morning my love, you were sleeping soundly so I didn’t wake you up. I have left to airport early morning and once landed will call you. Till then be a good wife, fresh up and eat breakfast and enjoy your day at home. Lots of love, only yours, Khadoos Kumar.

Grinning like a teenager got her love letter, I kiss on the note and put them away heading to the bathroom to freshen up. I wore a simple saree and looked at my phone. The screensaver is our picture taken at Amsterdam during on one of our outing. How he embraced me from behind as he said something dirty in my ears which made me blush in red. I tried run away from him but he kept me in him letting out a boisterous laughter. His laughter unknowingly made me to let out laughter and someone who happens to be there took our picture and show us. We immediately fell in love with his shot and he forwarded this to us. I press a kiss on Shaurya's image and quickly went downstairs. Awara already set the table and I went to get maa and maasi to dining area for our breakfast.

Maa: Mehak beta, what time Shaurya left? Did he called?

Mehak: He went quite early maa, he haven’t call yet. He told me he will call and asked me not to call. That's why I haven’t call him yet.

Maasi: Bahu, he said like that and you didn’t bother to call him.

Vicky: Maasi, bhaiya even told me thesame thing. He said he is meeting with a huge prospect and he has been waiting for this meeting for sometimes. So let’s hope that his meeting went well. He will call us later once he settle down. Anyway is just two days, there are days bhaiya was away for months, and we didn’t bothered him why now, chill and relax.

Maa: Dolly don’t worry too much,Shaurya will call. By the way you said you want to go to temple at Noida right,shall we go today? Mehak, do you want to come along with us? We will go right after lunch. I have a friend there, we can meet catch up with her. The next morning we can go to the temple for the morning pooja and return.

Before I open my mouth to reply, Iheard Sonal's voice who came in greeting all of us.

Sonal: Namaste aunty and maasi, howare you all?

Maa: Namaste beta, come join us forbreakfast, Awara please bring plate.

Sonal settle down next to Mehak.

Maa: So beta Mehak you haven’t told me, do you want to follow us?

Sonal: Follow where aunty?

Maa: Dolly and me planning to go to Noida to visit the temple, at this time there will be special pooja, therefore I asked Mehak to follow us.

Mehak: Maa I want to go too, but Shaurya told me not to leave the house and I want to go to my house also he didn’t allow, he asked me wait till he comes back so he will follow us. That’s why Sonal is here to accompany me. Maybe this time you and maasi go first, the next time I will follow you.

Maa: Okay beta, you rest first at home, Dolly and me will go first. Sonal beta take care of Mehak we will be back soon.

After lunch maa and maasi left. Vicky left to work too. Sonal was busy attending to some calls from restaurant. She decided to work from home as I am alone at home. I was in kitchen cooking something when my mobile starts to ring. I quickly went to pick it up with a wide smile as it’s from Shaurya.

Shaurya: Hello my love, do you miss me?

Mehak: Mr Husband, I am not talking to you, you called me so late. Also you asked me not to call you as you will be busy. You know I miss you so much but yet you do like this to me.

Shaurya: I miss you too my love, I was quite busy earlier once reached here and didn’t get time to call you. So now I am free and immediately call you.

Mehak: Achaaa, to call your only wife you don’t have time, then let it be. I also don’t have time to talk you.

Shaurya: Mehak I don’t mean in that way, when I reached here, I quickly headed to the meeting and it took a while for our discussion. Now don’t get upset with me and give me your usual smile.Your smile have the dose of drug for me to stay awake and smile all day long.

Mehak: Okay (smiling as she blush heavily) I love you, come back fast and hug me tightly.

Shaurya: Relax baby, I just went today morning and you are saying all these, let me finish all my work and come back and I will not let you sleep. (In husky tone)

Mehak: Shaurya, you are becoming naughty these days, now quickly go attend your meeting, besharam kahinka.

Shaurya: Okay I got to go baby. You take care and I miss you sweetheart.

Mehak: Hmm, Shaurya......is there anyone around you?

Shaurya: No one baby why?

I looked right and left at the kitchen to make sure no one is there.

Mehak: Put the phone near your cheek.

Shaurya: It is near my cheek Mehak. What is it now?

I inhales a deep breath and looks around and planted a loud kiss on the phone letting out a chortle.

Shaurya: Wow babe you became naughty,that was a hot kiss indeed.

I didn’t realize when Sonal came to kitchen.

Sonal: Hello, Mehak meri jaan, what a kiss, so loud till the guard at the gate also heard them it seems.

I am flustered at my own action and Ican hear Shaurya's laughter through the phone. Sonal grab the phone from me andstarted to run from me. I screamed at Sonal to give back the phone. But pleasfell into deaf ears. I just yelled Shaurya to hang up the call and we will talklater heard his laughter as he said loudly, okay baby talk to you later. I startedto run behind Sonal as she continue to tease me.

Shaurya'sPOV

I have reached my destination and getsinto the car and on my way. I closed my eyes to relax a bit as I didn’t sleepat all last night. My mind was taken aback to when I received the call from MrShukla that his team has caught the hoodie guy. It seems they found that guyroaming around my house watching from outside. I asked him to bring him hereand I want to see him myself. I want to know who this guy, who made mesleepless is. I reached my office and as usual I rushed to attend my morningmeeting via teleconference. Once meeting over, I sent my people away from theroom and called Mehak. She must be waiting for my call now. I quickly calledher to check on her. She give me a loud kiss which made my heart flutter inhappiness. When Sonal started to tease her I can feel how she would have turnedred and giggle out.

Now my mind drifted to the hoodie guy,I quickly get up from my seat and followed my bodyguards checking the venue andhow it is as my staffs greets me. We walked pass the kitchen and reached thestore area. One of my man open the door and we walked down the secret stairswhich leads to a dungeon. There is no much lights there except for some dimlights there,our footsteps echo down the dim lighted pathway. After walking forsometimes, my men let me walked inside and the others waited outside. I walkedin and saw a man was tied up on the wall, as his face was covered with a blackcloth. I signed them to remove the hand tie and bring him to the chair in frontof me as I took place in the opposite chair. They did as I said. They removedthe cloth from the face and I was shocked. Shock is an understatement. I waspuzzled, bizarre and lost for word to see the hoodie guy.

Shaurya: How long he has beenunconscious? When he will be up?

Man 1: He should be up by now sir, wejab him with the tranquilizer as he keep screaming and trying to escape.

I looked at my watch. It’s been almost15minutes and there is no sign of him getting up but my anger is ticking up.

Shaurya: Throw water on him and wakehim up now. I can’t wait any longer.

They get two buckets of water andthrow on him as the guy shivered as he reluctantly opens his eyes as he inhalesdeep breath. His cheek turned blue black probably my men have done that deed tohim. I waited until he is fully upto see me. The moment his eyes fixed againstme, he gasped, it was soft but it was audible to me. He was surprised andequally shocked to see me.

Shaurya: Well you are finally awake?How did my men take care of you here? Did you enjoyed their hospitality?

Hoodie man is none other than Kunal.The same guy Mehak met at Manali.

Kunal: Mr Khanna, why did you bring mehere, you must be mistaken me for someone. (Stuttering)

Shaurya: Oh really, then care toexplain why were you outside my home watching my home past two days?

Kunal: I came to Delhi for some workand....... (Not able to complete his sentence)

Shaurya: Then follow my wife wherevershe goes and watch her from outside? Is that why you were here? (In mockingtone)

Putting some files and pictures infront of him as I looked deep into him, for his reaction.

Shaurya: Looking into all these photosand all these reports my men gathered, it seems you were not going to office ontime, submitting assignments etc. Your last assignment was Jaipur andRajasthan. You first went to Rajasthan on 12th June that was after you metMehak at Delhi than you came to Jaipur on 20th June. You informed to yoursuperior that you were sick so left Rajasthan earlier than your schedule. Youwere at Jaipur on 20th June evening had dinner at the same restaurant near theGhat whereby I was with Mehak and after that you followed us upto our hotel.From there every day you were literally behind us. Every place we went you usethat chance to take pictures for your assignments as the dates in thephotograph match with the dates I was there. Now dont tell me it wascoincidence as I dont think this is it. Care to explain?

Kunal looked at me first in confusion,later his expression changed as he furrowed his eyebrows at me. His eyes speaksa different language now. He let out a cunning laughter as he looked at me.This time my eyebrows furrowed at his action.

Kunal: Well Mr Khanna you have doneall the ground work, so yeah you are correct, so what you want now? Yes I wentto visit Rajasthan and started my work. I was fully focused on my work. Butduring one the trip I had high fever and I wrap up my work there and return toJaipur. What surprised me was that in one the sweet shop I saw Mehak there, Iwalked towards her but when I saw you there, I stopped and only watched how shefeed sweet to you and the smile which I never seen before on her face. She wasglowing in that. From there every day wherever you guys going I was there,secretly taking picture of her and doing my job too. It was easy for me as Iwas doing my job in between. Even I get caught I have a good excuse that I washere for my work. But you two didn’t notice me at all. She always has a sparkin her eyes and you were with her like a shadow protecting her, and you didn’tlet her away from your sight. Even the moment she went to the boutique themoment how she cling to your arm, from there I always asked myself what I don’thave that she saw in you. She deserves to be with me. If you don’t come toManali I would have convinced her to marry me and start up a happy life. I amorphan but I see my hope and dream to have family with Mehak. The moment Ifound from Anu that you took her by drugging her it shows that she was notcoming on her own willing so you used your trick here. Mr Khanna Mehak doesn’tdeserves a person likes you who abandoned her on the wedding aisle on herwedding day. You can’t give the love she deserves, only I can give everythingand anything she wants. I didn’t like the smile she had when she is around withyou, that's why I want to teach her a lesson.

The moment he said he wants to teachher a lesson, Shaurya's blood rushed to his brain hearing his word, he grittedhis teeth but remain seated as he let Kunal to talk. He fisted his knuckles ashe looked at him as his eyebrows furrowed.

Kunal: I wonder when she will be aloneto talk to her, but never once she was alone. Even in your hotel opening youwere with her all the time, but just then I got a chance. She was coming alonefor the party at your partner's event. My breath stop the way she came in thatsaree. That’s the time she awaken the beast in me. After seeing her like that Idecided today I want to make her mine so I followed her till the lift and shedidn’t notice me. The spark I saw in her eyes was very obvious. The way how youtwo danced it really made me mad. I realized the one things I didn’t have thatyou have is the wealth, fame and good looks that’s why Mehak didn’t accept me.It just made my anger heighten up to a different level. I saw she wants to talkto you but you were too busy so I took the chance to send a note and initialthat with your name. The moment she saw the note, again she was all lit up,without thinking twice she left the party room came to the penthouse. Earlier Ichecked with the bartender, usually no one use the pent floor unless specialbooking so I thought of implementing my plan there. I want to teach her thelesson that you won’t accept her and she herself won’t accept her after that.In that dark penthouse I want to play with her first but she tried to run awayfrom me, even when I came near her, she keep screaming and putting up a fightwith me. I didn’t like it. I became uncontrollable when she started to screamcalling your name Shaurya, Shaurya Shaurya. I didn’t like it, that's when Istart hurting her. I want her to call my name but no she kept calling for you.I didn’t like that. She became unconscious after struggling too long, unfortunatelythe guard came in between or else, (as he rubs his hand down on his face with adisgusting look) I would have tasted her and she will only smell of me on herfor the rest of her life (letting out a beasty laughter)

I slowly get up from there as I approachedhim, he looked at me before he could think of anything I started to throwpunches on his face, I don’t know how many punches I have given him but my menkept pulling me away. I only stopped when my own knuckles started to achebadly.

Man 1: Sir please stay calm down.Anything let us to handle. Please sit down.

I sat back on my seat as I watchedthat useless bxstxxrd drenched in blood. I am not sorry for his condition buthow dare he misbehaved with my Mehak and he got the guts to tell me the reasonand how he attacked her. Every day and night during that moment, how Mehak notherself, how much she cried every single minute, whenever seeing her conditionlike that my heart bleed, I wonder did I made a mistake by bringing her backfrom Manali? Her sleepless nights due to nightmares and how I sit with her atthat time to calm her. How dare he even thought to touch my Mehak? He thoughtafter doing all these I will hate Mehak or spare him to roam around freely. He doesn’tknow who is the real Shaurya Khanna is. I instructed my men to throw wateragain on him and awake him. He stir up as he looked at me dizzily. I straightenup myself as I looked at him.

Shaurya: You filthy animal, I thoughtyou were harmless but I did miscalculate studying you. Since my Mehak isinnocent anyone who talks nicely she thinks they are nice. If she know you area filthy dog who wears the sheep mask she herself will give you two tight slapsand walk away from you. If my Mehak decided to leave me and wants to start up anew life with you, I would have let her go on my will as I will blame myselffor the fail of this relationship and she deserves only the best in her life.But you know what she has accepted the whole me as her life partner. I did goodequally behaved bad but her heart only accepted me as her husband as her lover,as her soul mate and no one else. Nor she will accept you neither she will moveon easily as our love is stronger than you thought. Not even God can stop us tobe together. There was another two filthy animals tried to harm my Mehak, nowboth are serving jail. I used my power so they won’t get bail easily. My peoplein the jail knows how to handle these two. You didn’t know I am the moststubborn and mental one in here. Whatever I want in my life, I will definitelyafter them and will not rest till I get them. One more thing my Mehak didn’t chose me because I am the most eligiblebachelor of Delhi, or my wealth or my fame. For her all these doesn’t matter .What’smatters most to her is that my unconditional love.

Kunal: (wiping his lips blood with histhumb) so what you plan to do with me? Are you going to kill me or put me intojail?

Shaurya: Naa... nope I am not planningto kill you even thought that was my initial plan and putting you into jail wasnever been in my agenda but I will decide how to punish you. Anyway I shouldthank you for your help.

Kunal looked at me in confusion.

Shaurya: (Smirked evilly) Because ofyou, both of us went for our late honeymoon trip. She accepted me as herhusband and we started our life and our life has been colorful since then. Ihave completely removed all traces of the miserable night from her and now everyday and night is just us, hope you understand what I am trying to say. Guys give him food and drinks today. He willknow his punishment tomorrow. Let him enjoy this night.

I left from there after instructing mymen, killing him means he suffer for short while only. If I put him into jailwhatever happens to Mehak will come into media and the family will know aboutit. So I will decide now what to do with this filthy animal. Definitely I amnot going to spare him. He will definitely going to suffer for the rest of hislife for his sin, for hurting and causing grievance to her. Every drops oftears she shed will be repay with interest. I went back to my office room as Iwatched the CCTV in the dungeon. How he is sitting arrogantly after committingsuch a huge crime? My first slammed on the wooden table in anger, just then Mehakcalled me. I took a deep breath as I answered the call. Just what I needed tocalm down my mood now, her sweet caring voice with the usual chirpiness soothesmy inner turmoil. After talking to her I hang up and headed to my meeting.

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Congratulations for completing the 50th chapter.👏👏👍👍.

Unres..thank you so much for the update

So Kunal is the culprit ...such a psycho.😡... loved the way Shaurya punched him.. 👊👊

Curious to know what is in the fate of kunal.. will Shaurya disclose the news to mehek about kunal...🤔

Loved mehrya's phone conversation.

Well written chapter 👌..enjoyed reading it..

Please continue soon

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Aaha finally culprit is kunal I gussed it he only behind all this n he accepted his crime but no remorse idiot 😠

Now I want to know how shourya gives him his punishment

Our laddoo is too naughty these days 😁

Nice update Haseena 🤗

N congrats for 50th update 🥳

Keep writing

Thank you dear for taking time for us 😘😘

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Unres😊

Thanks for the update Haseena.... And sorry for giving late fb.... Actually i was so preoccupied with work n all.

But the update is superb and so beautifully written ....and finally whole truth is out.... Real culprit is also caught....kunal deserve every bit of punishment for his sin. Mehek was so nice to him... And what he did... Was so insane.... Really want to know... How shaurya will punish in his own style.... Will Mehek will come to know about kunal... So many suspence still left... Eagerly want to read further ....do continue soon.... Take care😘

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Res

Congratulations for completing the 50th chapter.👏👏👍👍.

Unres..thank you so much for the update

So Kunal is the culprit ...such a psycho.😡... loved the way Shaurya punched him.. 👊👊

Curious to know what is in the fate of kunal.. will Shaurya disclose the news to mehek about kunal...🤔

Loved mehrya's phone conversation.

Well written chapter 👌..enjoyed reading it..

Please continue soon

Hi Lima thank you for your wishes dear, I am humbled to have a awesome reader like you.

Will continue soon have a blessed day ahead.

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Originally posted by: Anuteja10

Aaha finally culprit is kunal I gussed it he only behind all this n he accepted his crime but no remorse idiot 😠

Now I want to know how shourya gives him his punishment

Our laddoo is too naughty these days 😁

Nice update Haseena 🤗

N congrats for 50th update 🥳

Keep writing

Thank you dear for taking time for us 😘😘

Thank you Anu for your wishes, its all because of you guys being my awesome readers I could write upto 50 chapters. will continue soon have a blessed day ahead.

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What was that??? Kunal!!!!!!!!!!!!! Of all the people............the culprit. 😵🤢 N here I thought that he was happy for his Pikachoo. But he turned out to be a psycho fool 😡. This was really a shocker Hassena. I had thought that it would turn out to be one of Shaurya's business associates 😕.

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What was that??? Kunal!!!!!!!!!!!!! Of all the people............the culprit. 😵🤢 N here I thought that he was happy for his Pikachoo. But he turned out to be a psycho fool 😡. This was really a shocker Hassena. I had thought that it would turn out to be one of Shaurya's business associates 😕.

Hey JB thank you for the feedback. Hahaha glad you like the surprise. Time to character assassination so I cant think of anything better than slashing Kunal off now..The psycho has some issues as he was an orphan and he wants Mehak as he sees the love that he is been longing for thus he attacked her. will continue soon have a blessed day ahead

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