Arhi SS: WITHERED!! Thread#5 (Chap 12) pg 91/ NTL pg 1 - Page 52

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Posted: 6 years ago

Yet another superb chapter from you, N

What a dilemma the young Khushi is undergoing. She loved Akash and wanted to have a life with him. Carry the legacy of Kapoor and Associates that was established by Manohar and Shashi. Here she was ready to wait for Akash, had he even given an inkling about his feelings for her and there was Akash, all ready to throw away the happiness that his life had offered hiding behind the mask of selflessness.

Did he feel guilty that he was getting the chance at happiness that his mother never had? Did he feel guilty that his father would lose the only chance at reconciling with his favourite son Arnav if he, Akash married Khushi?

No one knows what went into that poor soul’s mind when he stood by the sidelines allowing the love of his life to be taken out of reach.

What made Akash open up now that Khushi was beyond his reach? Did he finally break seeing the outward façade of Happily married life that Khushi had potrayed?

At a time when Khushi would have gladly waited eons for Akash, she got only a silent treatment and now that she is married to Akash’s brother, Akash decides to give a hint that he had some feelings for Khushi

So Payal and Aman. Aman seems to love Payal but she on the other hand doesn’t seem to be serious about Aman. Is she treating this only as a fling? Is this her way of revolting against her strict parents? Payal wants to keep herself in good books of Arnav. Khushi has realized about Payal. Will she tell Arnav? Would he believe what Khushi says? Arnav probably may tell Khushi that she is reading too much into PaMan friendship.

From what I understand about PaMan convo, Arnav is safe from Shyam but maybe Khushi is not. Are Viraj and Shyam likely to cause some harm to Khushi as she is still working for Manohar? Will she become a collateral in their fight with Manohar? Only time will tell.

How is Manohar able to sleep peacefully? He knows he has betrayed his friend Shashi by making Khushi marry Arnav though Shashi preferred Akash. Shashi knew Arnav as a womanizer. Though he himself wanted to get Khushi married to Akash, he decided to get her marry Arnav for his own selfish reasons. Afterall Manohar is also a flawed man. He saw this as his only chance to repair his relationship with Arnav and jumped up at the chance. The ace up his sleeve is that Arnav has agreed to do anything in return for Manohar. Let us see how does Manohar use up this opportunity.

Vidur seems to have fallen in love with Anjali. He may find his grandmother on his side but will his parents agree to give ViJali a chance knowing that she is handicapped? Waiting to see how the love blossoms between Vijali.

Loved the way in which Arnav decided to protect Khushi from bitter words of Priya. For him Payal’s parents and brother are the enemies. Khushi is mentored by Manohar and loved by akash. Payal hates Khushi and is sure to snub her at dinner. How will Priya react to Arhi presence at dinner, remains to be seen.

Edited by KRISGEET - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

P 🤗

What do you mean, 'pls count me in'

You ARE already there, and you dont have an option. ☺️

Thanks a ton dear. Thanks for having me on board your stories.

Aap Jahaan, Hum Wahan.. Hamesha

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Posted: 6 years ago

Taken

*Edited*


Phew! This was an emotionally high wala update! Okay, so both daddies wanted Akash and Khushi to unite! Circumstances or rather Arnav made it otherwise. However, how did Arnav manage to convince Daddy dearest is still a bit confusing for me! Or rather why? Daddy assumed it would bring Arnav and him closer but, I'm sure there is more that what meets to the eye!

Poor Khushi, she still hasn't gotten over Akash. I know it's hard, but, I thought over time it would have been easier. One meet and a few accusations plus an invite everything down the drain.


Payal on the other hand is vera level (at a different level) Aman really loves her? I find that untrue. Payal though turns out the "I don't care", not yet love mood now.


One point to be noted is Aman let it slip while he wasr conversing with Payal. I hope the sister dearest catches on to it and acts on it soon!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Thanks a ton dear. Thanks for having me on board your stories.

Aap Jahaan, Hum Wahan.. Hamesha

Reminds me of the song..

Tu jahaan jahaan chalega

Mera saaya, saath höga

😲😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Updated my comment, N


Idk why, but I cant get myself to sympathise with Manohar. He is a good man, but he has hurt a lot of people for his happiness.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

Oh N ...

So even Shashi was against Arnav ? 😡 Was he so blind that he didnt see a young boy yearning for love and facing abandonment?

I cant even imagine what Arnav must have gone through when Manohar describes him as a cynical man, with depressing qualities.

Your vivid description of Khushi's emotions, made me feel sympathetic for her and for her unrequited love.

Arnav is already being protective of Khushi and turning into ASR. 😛 Wonder what will happen in Kapoor Mansion next

EC

Thank you for the early comment. This was way too early for your standard.

Shashi was a father before being a mentor to Akash. Its obvious he related more to Akash, than Arnav.

Which father would choose an addict and vain pot, over a righteous man??

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

Updated my comment, N


Idk why, but I cant get myself to sympathise with Manohar. He is a good man, but he has hurt a lot of people for his happiness.

You dont have to like Manohar. I like to play with your minds and prefer for you all to form your own opinion.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh I thought I would not be able to read on the blog but when I saw in wordpress I got to read it. Anyways thanks for the wonderful update. Oh my goodness aman is very much serious about payal and don't want her to be a passing fling but payal is not serious. But I am confused why aman was worried for khushi's happiness and safety. I liked khushi's thoughts in today's update, she was rightly questioning about Akash's feelings for her and then reminding herself about her married status. She started to think on terms that why Akash was spineless at the time of her marriage and then she took little detour on Akash's words that may be he was talking in terms of her carrier only. She is still little but confused. If aman knows shayam too much then why he didn't warned arnav. Is he not arnav's true freind.Although payal is spoilt brat but she is angle in terms of her feelings for arnav. You shared very important fact of why manohar supported arnav for marrying khushi because he wanted to take remote chance to reconcile with arnav and make him responsible and dutiful person for the sake of eternal peace of his deceased love aarti. That's why he is the best advocate in town because for getting this goal he not only sacrificed Akash's budding love for khushi but his deceased friend's wish and feelings about arnav. Now the question is how much manohar knew about Akash's interest in khushi. Continue soon. I would like to read about your psychological story next.

Posted: 6 years ago

Another stellar chapter. Read and posted a brief comment on Blog. Will be back with detailed comment later.

Cheers....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Beautifully written.

So far Aman looks the most complicated character to me. I do not understand his stand. If he is Arnav's friend, why is he not behaving like one. Could have stopped Arnav, put some sense in him and pull him out of the deal with Shyam!!

and now he is worried about Khushi!! WHY!!

The more I read, I understand Khushi better. Suddenly along with Arnav I feel like Khushi has also been ditched off her happiness.

The part where Arnav yearns for affection and love from Khushi makes me sad. He must have suffered a lot.

Waiting to read about the family drama over dinner.

I can sympathize with Manohar but cannot bring myself to like him. Played and destroyed with too many lives. But then one says, "Love is blind"

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