'Moments' A Mishbir OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Onyourface

It was lovely Zara....🤗

Looks like everyone is excited and expecting a lot from this sequence...

Let's see 👍🏼

Hey Uru thanks yaar❤️

Yeah so many scenarios my brain is cooking up lol. I really hope the actual thing ends up better than our expectations.

Originally posted by: preeti200

Just beautiful Zara!! Loved it!!

🤗 Thank you so much. Not as beautiful as our Mishbir haaye these cuties are adorable and you are adorable too for taking out time to comment.

Originally posted by: radhika.gunti

Beautiful zara... Loved it... Even me likes shaheer in emotional scenes... He just nails it like a pierce in our heart...loved your writing...👍🏼

Thanks Radhika. I love how you comment in almost all my posts it really means a lot🤗Shaheer is amazing in emotional scenes I can't wait.

Originally posted by: JALK2000

Beautifully written

Thank you so much🤗

Originally posted by: poojdc87

Such a beautiful story! Thank you for putting it into words!

Mishbir are beautiful they make me write like this lol but thank you🤗

Originally posted by: vssdp

Beautiful Zara

OMG you literally made me feel every moment of this os

You have such a beautiful collection of words 😆🤗

Loved it totally

Omg Vaisau means a lot yaar. I am eagerly waiting for you to update your fanfic. It's so good 👍🏼 and thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: fangirl1012

Omg Vaisau means a lot yaar. I am eagerly waiting for you to update your fanfic. It's so good 👍🏼 and thank you 🤗

You deserve it yaar, you're awesome 🤗

I had thought to update it today, but ganpati bappa ke welcome ki tayyari chal rahi hai ghar pe, so will update Next Week pakka 👍👍👍

That was really lovely

Really loved the way you expressed the emotions Abir was feeling

Cannot wait to see how it will be acted out

Hopefully this track will allow for some interesting revelations

Thanks for this

Keep on writing 😊

this is so beautiful zara... the emotions and pain everything feels so real... and the title is so prefect... and the way you potrayed his pain symbolizing the blood stain on his left side where his heart beats... that particular thought was so beautiful...❤️ such a lovely piece of writing👏❤️

Originally posted by: coolove

That was really lovely

Really loved the way you expressed the emotions Abir was feeling

Cannot wait to see how it will be acted out

Hopefully this track will allow for some interesting revelations

Thanks for this

Keep on writing 😊

Thanks🤗

I really hope we get the due focus on Mishbir in this track. Yeah even I want that atleast the truth of M3 should come out.