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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya_divakar

this is so beautiful zara... the emotions and pain everything feels so real... and the title is so prefect... and the way you potrayed his pain symbolizing the blood stain on his left side where his heart beats... that particular thought was so beautiful...❤️ such a lovely piece of writing👏❤️

Warms my heart that you think this was this good thank you🤗 Oh yeah that blood stain bit is my favorite too I actually teared up a little imagining Shah enacting it

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