Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 19

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Awesome update..loved it..guddu aur aj kaha jaa rhw h...plz uodate soon😃❤️

Thanks for liking it will continue soon🤗

Ab aap v apna ss jaldi continue kro plz😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thanks for liking it will continue soon🤗

Ab aap v apna ss jaldi continue kro plz😛

updated plz check..❤️😳and plz share ur views❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update👍🏼

No guesses asp bhi CVs ki traha jhatka doge

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Awesome update

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Superb update👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part-19

Akshan settle themselves in the flight it guddan's first time in flight she was too excited bt as soon as it takes off guddu got scared Akshat hold her hand she calms down aftersometime guddu falls asleep on Aj's shoulder he smiles a bit he too slept.

After some hour flight landed on the airport and it has been past 10 min everyone had left the place except Akshan guess why because guddan was still sleeping and akshat was trying to wake her up airhostess already gave then the instruction to leave the flight akshat asked 5 min time so they left now akshan was alone Aj carsses her cheek then capture her leap guddu woke up Aj immediately stands up guddu touched her lip as she felt something weird bt couldnt figure it out what was it.

Guddan- jindal sahab hamare lips pr av av kuch ajeeb laga jaise khi aapne.

Akshat looked anywhere bt not at her- qa maine ye tum qa bol rhi ho ab khule ankho se sapne dekhna chodo aur chalo flight land hue bahut der ho chuki hai .

Guddan- ham pahuch gye aapne jagaya q nhi aur baki sb kha hai.

Aj- baki sb chale gye aur main kb se tumhe jagane ki koshish kr rha hu lekin aap to kumbhkaran ko competion dene mein bzy thi

Guddan glares at him- qa kha apne aap hame kumbhkaran se compare kr rhe hai she said it while putting her hand upon her waist akshat understood she is in the mood of having quarel with her and its worthless to say anything to her.

Aj-accha baba maaf krdo mjhe galti ho gyi mjhse ab chale bahar.

Guddan- okk hamne kab mana kiya aap hi to tbse der kr rhe hai

Aj shakes his head and they leave from there the driver was already standing there to pick them up Akshan handed the lugagae to them .

As they were about to sit in the cab guddan notices the airport's name she frightens and take her step back she couldnt say anything except- pu...pune and she faints Aj holds her in his arm and took her to the car .

Aftersometime guddan opens her eyes she found herself in a comfy bed of 5star luxerious hotel and Aj was sitting beside her . Ha..ham kha hai?

Aj- hosh aa gya tumhe ham pune mein hai mjhe yha pr kuch kaam hai waise tum behosh kaise ho gyi aur shakal dekhkr to aisa lag rha tha jaise tumne koi bhoot dekhliya ho kuch problem hai qa agar hai to plz batao mjhe. Guddan doesnt say anything Aj understood that she is not in the state of saying something. So he diverted the topic.

Aj- chalo ye sb choro jakar apna huliya sudharo i mean fresh ho jaon bahut travel kiya hai uske baad ham lunch krne bahar chalte hai.

Guddan wents to freshen up. Aj then remembers somthing.

Flashback

After bhushan and revti lefts he Called someone aftersometime a girl enters.

Akshat- come have a sit and plz make urself comfortable.

G- its ok par apne hame q bulaya koi kaam tha qa.

Akshat- miss aliya aap guddan ki bahut acchi dost hai shayad aap uske bare mein bahut kuch janti hongi isliye maine apko bulaya. Yes the girl was Aliya

Aliya- ji haa aap puchiye qa puchna hai main aur guddu bachpan ke dost hai.

Aj- qa guddan bachpan se hi actress ban na chahti thi. Aur papa nr bataya tha ki vo kuch saal apne parhai ke liye bahar gyi thi kha gyi thi aur qa kr rhi thi is baare mein unhe bhi nhi pata.

Aliya- jiju main apko jiju bula skti hu na if u dont mind

Aj: sure

Al- actually guddu ko acting pasand jaroor tha pr uska passion enjeeniring tha vo bachpan se hi atrangi chizo ko banati rhti thi bt uske gharwale specially uski mom uske parhai ke khilaf thi and shayaf uske dreams ko kv support nhi krte vo mjhse har baat share krti thi jo ki vo apne gharwalon se nhi kr pati thi isliye vo 12th pass krke pune chali gyi thi enjeeniering krne ke liye as she was recommended their and she was getting scholarship usne apne papa ko.sirf itna bataya ki vo graduation krne jaa rhi hai uske papa ne age kuch nhi pucha q ki vo jante the kaushalaya aunt koi na to koi hungama krengi so she went ther vo pehle har din mjhe call krti thi she was too happy ther bt after somemonths she stoped sharing her daily routine with me she was not tht happy that she was before dekhte dekhte 2 and half years guzar gye ek din uska call aya vo bahut ro.rhi thi she was broken and mjhe bt itna bataya ki use yha pr ana hi nhi chahiye tha us se bahut bari galti ho gyi fir 2 mahine baad vo indore wapis aa gyi maine us se kuch nhi pucha as vo kv batana hi nhi chahti thi fir main apne further studies ke liye bahar chali gyi. Bt main itna sure hu ki uske sath kuch bahut hi bura hua tha jiju isliye mai us se jb mili thi kal tb v maine kuch nhi pucha as i dont want to spoil her mood.

Aj- thanks a lot aliya ab baki ki story main khud guddan se janna chahta hu vo khud mjhe batayegi.

Aliya- r u sure as she never discussed abt this .

Aj- pr is baar use batana parega and vo khud apni marzi se batayegi mjhe ye sachai .

Aliya - ok jiju ab main chalti hu bye take care and bst of luck bhagwan kre ki jo aap chahte hai vo apko jarur mile . Bye

Aj-bye. After aliya left the place. Aj gets into thinking he then decide to make her celebrate her bday first then he will make her confess about it so he booked two flight tickets to pune he didnt told anything about it orelse she wouldnt had agreed to come here and he have said everything about it to everyone and they helped him

Flashback ends

Akshat trance broken when guddan snaped at him

Guddan- jindal sahab kha kho jate hai aap hamesha

Aj-khi nhi tum aa gyi accha chalo lunch krne bahar chalte hai

On the way while Aj is thinking about his next move

Guddan in mind - puri duniya mein yhi jagah mili thi ateet ka ghav av tk bhara nhi hai bas ab kuch gadbad na ho ham jindal sahab se kuch chipana nhi chahte lekin hane dar hai khi sacchai janne ke baad vo hamse door na chale jaye hamse nafrat na krne lage . Hame unse door rhna na ho payega hey lord krishna plz sb thik krna ham jindal sahab ko khona nhi chahte.

Ps - ignore the mistakes and do share ur views .

PART-20 PG28

Edited by Kammy02 - 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

updated plz check..❤️😳and plz share ur views❤️

Have checked its awsome..

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Have checked its awsome..

Plz continue soon

thanks..will cont soon😳
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Posted: 5 years ago

Oho!!jindal saabs control slipped off☺️ek aur suspense..but i was amazing chapter. As usual⭐️.do continhe soon😃

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