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Amy142

@Amy142

Voyager

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Good to see people having ideas for storyline. A fanfiction doesn't seem like a distant reality now.

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Indira

@Indira1211

Sparkler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shruzzy
I liked your version just a little bit changes lets just dont say she pretends to be in love but she creates situations between PK and kabir that kabir will agree to marry her at condition that he will join army after marriage and then he comes home after 1-2 years he sees janhvi doing everything for everyone at utmost care but at same time he doubts how can someone be so perfect...... he cares for her at the same time doubts her and once he comes to know the truth he will secretly help her by sending PK and his men to jail and that will make janhvi realise that she did wrong and would have a love story than.....

yes they could have done so much to make it interesting... there was no need for vyoms and kavyas story because that story has gone nowhere...I don’t know how it affects the main plot which is jaanvis revenge..ok..they had to get Kabir married so he doesn’t marry jaanvis sister..but then he could have married a single girl he fell in love with,.someone who worked in the army with him..and she could have been a smart woman who would have her own detective skills...and she could have unmasked jaanvi using her smart cop skills...there’s so much interesting plots these writers can cook up..but no they would rather just copy someone Else’s work.. This reminds of the Bollywood movies that often copy Hollywood movies right to the very last scene...And these tv shows sometimes are over ambitious..they want to have many storylines and side characters going at the same time,..but then realize they don’t have time and then discard the stories of the side characters right in the middle and focus on the leads and their story..and then the side characters become show pieces..e.g. I don’t think Zain has enough of a story going for him and he’s supposed to be the male lead....but if he had been cast opposite Jaanvi..their stories would have been interlinked and entwined...and both the male and female lead would have had equal screenspace as well. but sadly it was not meant to be..

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Tanu221

@Tanu221

Explorer

Posted: 5 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Amy142
How come no one's interested in penning ways that janhvi uses to murder the creeps?

hey i have recently written a ss plese review that

its called. jabir os ; make the move

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Tanu221

@Tanu221

Explorer

Posted: 5 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shruzzy
I liked your version just a little bit changes lets just dont say she pretends to be in love but she creates situations between PK and kabir that kabir will agree to marry her at condition that he will join army after marriage and then he comes home after 1-2 years he sees janhvi doing everything for everyone at utmost care but at same time he doubts how can someone be so perfect...... he cares for her at the same time doubts her and once he comes to know the truth he will secretly help her by sending PK and his men to jail and that will make janhvi realise that she did wrong and would have a love story than.....

i have tried a little ss on current track if you can review than it be awaesome thank you

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Tanu221

@Tanu221

Explorer

Posted: 5 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys
I'm actually carving to write os on jhanvi and dhruv but I don't have time

hey read mine ........ a small take on current story ..... is jabir story ...MAKING THE MOVE

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Tanu221

@Tanu221

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Posted: 5 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Ah! Talk about hitting the raw nerve😆 I have followed the show since the starting but have not replied anywhere yet cos I am at this point as confused as the writers as to whose story it actually is. Lets see if a one shot comes out of this confusion as like every one who has commented before me time is a concern

same feelings . i had so much expectations but they ....... any ways. could you review my ss on current track .........jabir ss : making the move