ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 24

I will be here by this Sunday pakka !

#Chapter15

Don't mind me I just got overtly excited, take your time 😂

Originally posted by: akrocks77

I will be here by this Sunday pakka !

#Chapter15

Take your time, no problem... :)

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Don't mind me I just got overtly excited, take your time 😂

Haha, okay... I will try to update soon... :)

Hello!

That's a beautiful chapter! Though it's heartbreaking to see them like this... but you have a beautiful connect with both of them... one can feel their pain and insecurities.

First things first! That nightmare!😭 It was so descriptive... I could feel panicked myself... I was literally like please just let this be a dream. 😆

Ramnath forcing and begging Shravan to marry Sumo. Ohh! The irony! What's the point in crying over the spilled milk.. now Ramu Ji😛🤔

They are really looking for grooms for her.. what's wrong with these Tiwaris.🤔 Just let the girl be for once... itna kuch ho gaya inn logon ko chain nahi hai.

That Him trying to decipher who she truly is. It is just so sad. He thinks may he doesn't really know her. That chasing a mirage part.🥺

Also That paragraph just before their conversation when she is coming towards him... that vicious cycle thing.💔

That whole conversation. Ahh! They are just so broken!

I won't say much about it... I am more confused and infuriated than Shraman presently after that conversation. 😋 I think they have found most complicated and insane (atleast in my opinion) reasons to get married. 😆

Hope they find their peace! I really liked it!

Do continue soon!

Apoorva

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hello!

That's a beautiful chapter! Though it's heartbreaking to see them like this... but you have a beautiful connect with both of them... one can feel their pain and insecurities.

Apoorva, your comment was just what I needed to Continue writing the chapter...Thank you... 🤗

First things first! That nightmare!😭 It was so descriptive... I could feel panicked myself... I was literally like please just let this be a dream. 😆

You were glad, weren't you? 😃

Ramnath forcing and begging Shravan to marry Sumo. Ohh! The irony! What's the point in crying over the spilled milk.. now Ramu Ji😛🤔

I know right... He broke something in Shravan, and nothing he does now would be believed... The person he trusted with all of him betrayed him... 💔

They are really looking for grooms for her.. what's wrong with these Tiwaris.🤔 Just let the girl be for once... itna kuch ho gaya inn logon ko chain nahi hai.

But Mami Ji wants to go see America and her elder son... And Nanu is playing is masterstroke...

That Him trying to decipher who she truly is. It is just so sad. He thinks may he doesn't really know her. That chasing a mirage part.🥺

Also That paragraph just before their conversation when she is coming towards him... that vicious cycle thing.💔

That whole conversation. Ahh! They are just so broken!

They are, they really are... 🥺

I won't say much about it... I am more confused and infuriated than Shraman presently after that conversation. 😋 I think they have found most complicated and insane (atleast in my opinion) reasons to get married. 😆

Haha, that is so ShraMan to make things more complicated and irrational...

Hope they find their peace! I really liked it!

Do continue soon!

Apoorva

Thank you, Apoorva... I am so glad to hear that you liked the chapter... 🤗

I read all your chapters in a go last week(couldn't stop myself from reading the next one)& realised I am yet to comment😃 so sorry for being late😭

Coming to the story I loved❤️ the way you have portrayed Shravan's as well as Suman's feeling, their broken hearts, Shravan's fear of bonding with someone, Ramnath realizing his mistake👍🏼

Wish CVs would have showed something like this

Anyway, keep writing & take your own time😳

Loads of love,

Lavanya!

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Thank you, Apoorva... I am so glad to hear that you liked the chapter... 🤗

That's absolutely my pleasure! I am glad I could help 🤗

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

I read all your chapters in a go last week(couldn't stop myself from reading the next one)& realised I am yet to comment😃 so sorry for being late😭

Coming to the story I loved❤️ the way you have portrayed Shravan's as well as Suman's feeling, their broken hearts, Shravan's fear of bonding with someone, Ramnath realizing his mistake👍🏼

Wish CVs would have showed something like this

Anyway, keep writing & take your own time😳

Loads of love,

Lavanya!

Lavanya, thank you for reading and for this comment, glad to hear that you liked it this much... 🤗

And yes, we are stuck in EDKV's universe and we keep thinking and wanting, craving it... I wish we could have had something better than we got, we all, and especially ShraMan deserved better... 🥺

But I am glad and grateful that our fandom has great writers, each one coming with a new take and new perspective... Thank you for reading mine... 🤗

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Lavanya, thank you for reading and for this comment, glad to hear that you liked it this much... 🤗

And yes, we are stuck in EDKV's universe and we keep thinking and wanting, craving it... I wish we could have had something better than we got, we all, and especially ShraMan deserved better... 🥺

But I am glad and grateful that our fandom has great writers, each one coming with a new take and new perspective... Thank you for reading mine... 🤗

I should be the one thanking you for this awesome story😳

True, Shraman deserved better😭

Our forum is a treasure ❤️