ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
This is my one of my all time favorite parallel:

Episode 51:
Shravan comes to meet Sumo, last time before going to London and then goes towards the car *title song plays, my heart is breaking in the background* and turns to look at her one last time.
Episode 88:
Shravan does everthing to cure Sumo and he succeeds and like he promised, he goes away, again he walks away and turns to look at her one last time.
*Title song in the background*
Both the times, before leaving he gave her something, to hold on the first time his friendship, his love (she discovers the letter) and the second time, he gave her back her independence.
Seriously, They are Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ❤️

Wow, I had not...Never had thought of these episodes like this...But that's so true...And both the times, he did turn back, he always does when it comes to her.

He can never force himself to not turn back and look at her, give comes something to hold on...That ma...

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Saras100

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Posted: 6 years ago

#212

SHRAVAN IS A STRONG MINDED PERSON & NOBODY CAN MAKE HIM DO IF HE DOESN'T LIKE ANYTHING.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
And the best of all:

He waits at the front door, knowing that no matter how much he tries, he will never be a part of the picture perfect family. He stays a stranger. So, he satisfies himself by gazing at them from afar.

Little does he know, that amidst the misfit life he is leading, he has been someone's center of the universe.

Yaar, really, the first one is what I had been thinking of when I was writing the chapter when he tells his parents that he has no family. And 'word', I agree, I think the same, oh God, that scene made me cry so much for him. It's heartbreaking, I don't think anyone around him realized how deeply affected he had been by his parents' broken marriage and how lonely he had been all his life...

And second, he never knew because she never told him, never made him feel that way, never made him realize, never confessed, never admitted, never showed it by her action...NEVER!

One and maybe the only thing he actually wanted from her was that, she just had to let him know...You know, no matter how women-hater he pretended to be, he was all talks, and that too, only if the things were going wrong between them ...The second things were good between them, he would forget he ever hated women-kind and would be busy in smiling down at her, adore her and be proud of her... So he never really had an issue with her independence or freedom, he just needed to know that he was important to her...Just that...

Do you think I am being unfair to Suman? Ah, but really, her character has disappointed me so much, there was so much potential, but was wested, the whole purpose of her character changed midway and she became just another miswritten and misunderstood female character... She could have been a good perfectly modern, new age female lead, as she was meant to be since the start, if writers and Cvs wouldn't have risked her, and lost her for the sake of some drama and unneeded tracks...

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Saras100

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Posted: 6 years ago

#214

SHRAVAN HAS A FAMILY WITH FATHER AND MOTHER. THE STORY WAS CHANGED ACCORDING TO FEMALE LEAD NIKITA DUTTA WHO ACTED IN THE SHOW, HER CRANKINESS AND WEIRD BEHAVIOR. SHRAVAN WAS ALWAYS GOOD WITH GOOD PEOPLE/WELL BEHAVED WOMEN. SHRAVAN ALWAYS DISLIKED/HATED GIRLS/WOMEN WHO ARE MEAN/CUNNING/OBSESSED. SO, THIS IS REALITY AND WRITER HAS DONE A FANTASTIC JOB IN THE SHOW BY CHANGING THE STORY.

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#215

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Posted: 6 years ago

#216

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 6 years ago

#217

Oh my God. I don't even know what to say, I'll organize my thought properly and come back to this but just so you know, you have hit out of the park as usual! ❤️

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Apoorva Kushwah

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Posted: 6 years ago

#218

Hey!

That's an amazing update!

Loved reading it!

I have read so many confrontations and proposals between the two of them.

But this feels so different and unique 😳

This couldn't have come out better... I can literally feel Shravan's pain💔

Sumo and her reckless behaviour damaged their relationship too much!

He has lost faith in them now.

This is really heart breaking

I am really looking forward to next one.

I am excited to see Sumo make him believe in them... restore his faith in their relationship.

Eagerly waiting for it!

Do continue soon

Apoorva

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Oh my God. I don't even know what to say, I'll organize my thought properly and come back to this but just so you know, you have hit out of the park as usual! ❤️

Haha... Glad to hear that... 😳

I look forward to your reaction on this chapter. While writing that part I kept thinking how you wanted a confession scene and how I was writing it in a way that was totally different, opposite of what you must had in mind .. 😆

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Hey!

That's an amazing update!
Loved reading it!

I have read so many confrontations and proposals between the two of them.
But this feels so different and unique 😳

This couldn't have come out better... I can literally feel Shravan's pain💔

Sumo and her reckless behaviour damaged their relationship too much!
He has lost faith in them now.

This is really heart breaking

I am really looking forward to next one.
I am excited to see Sumo make him believe in them... restore his faith in their relationship.

Eagerly waiting for it!
Do continue soon

Apoorva

Hey Apoorva... Glad to hear that you like it so much... Thank you... 😳

Yes, he has lost his faith, even more so when he got to know that she knew what he felt about her all along and she felt the same but still didn't do anything to stop what was going on... It's too much to take in...

I want know about that too. Until now she hasn't actually done anything to restore his faith other than letting him know about all the secrets she and his parents had been hiding from him. But again, that too means something doesn't it? Let's see what she will do... 😳

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