Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks🤗

Will update soon😛

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Part-8

It was evening and guddu was sleeping due to the effect of medicine akshat was doing his work on his laptop aftersometime he finished his work and sat beside her he was smiling by touching his cheeks he was remembering the morning incidence

Flashback

After guddan kissed him she was really embarassed as well as scared

Guddan -are baapre ye hamne qa krdiya ab jindal sahab qa sochenge hamare baare mein hey lord krishna aj hame jindal sahab ke gusse se bacha lena ab to movie ki plan v cancel ho gyi smjho guddan tujhse kuch na ho payega and she ran away from there

Aj-guddan ruko kha jaa rhi ho aise mat dauro u r injured bt guddu already left before listening his words ye guddan v naa guddan hi hai kuch nhi ho skta iska.

Whole day guddan was hiding from him in the afternoon she enters in the room and sees room is empty she sighed in relief

Guddan- chalo aacha hua jindal sahab nhi hai room mein she then heard the sound and when she turns she was scared Aj was locking the door.

Guddan in mind-ye jindal sahab room q lock kr rhe hai khi subah ki baat se to gussa nhi hai are baapre baccha lena lord krishna hame she was moving backwords till she hit her back on walls and she was caged between her jindal sahab's strong arm seeing no other option for running away . She start saying in one flow jindal sahab dekhiye hame maaf kr dijiye ham bahut jyada excited ho gye the aur excitmemt ke maare apko hug kr diya aur kiss v krdiya sorry sorry ab plz hampe gussa mat krna hame pata hai hamara movie ka plan v cancel ho gya.

Aj-guddan meri baat to suno

Guddan-ab kehne sunne ko reh qa gya hai hamse galti ho gyi hame maaf krdijiye aap bolenge to ham sorry bolkr wall pr stick kr dete hai (in my story buaji has not arrived yet and so the mistake wall is still there).

Aj- pull her closer and sushed her-chup ekdum chup ye tum qa hamesha diwal pr apni galtiya chipkati rhti ho main subah se tumse baat krne ki koshis kr rha hu bt u r running away from me guddan dekho ham dost hai and us se v badhkr ham husband and wife hai and this is common between husband wife no need to be sorry

Guddan-iska matlab aap hamse gussa nhi hai

Aj-nhi

Guddan,-iska matlb hamara movie

Aj-cancel nhi hua hai maine already ticket book krwa diya hai

Guddan -sacchi

Aj- muchi

Guddan-okk tb ham av ready ho jate hai as she was about to leave akshat holds her wrist stopping her

Guddan- ab kya kiya hamne jane do hame hame bahuo ki madad krni hai aur fir ready v to hona hai

Aj- mrs jindal aap aaj kuch bhi nhi krngi bs aaram krengi aur movie raat ko dekhne jaana hai av usme bahut time hai main tumhe jaga dunga amd no more arguments. Guddan lay herself on bed and slept.

Flashback ends

It was 8 pm so Akshat wake guddu up and they have light dinner as there is still sometime for movie guddan wears a crop top and jeans which was making her more cute. She applied some makeup and now its 9pm

Aj was waiting for her in the car -ye guddan ab tak ayi q nhi

Guddan comes and sit beside him and she didnt wore the sit belt akshat looked at her he was mesmerized by her she was looking too cute like a kitten bt compose himself he noticed that guddan was not wearing the sit belt he come closer to her and tied the sit belt in the process his hand was touching her bare belly and his lips was her forhead thus giving her goosebumps and the feelings which she herself is unaware Akshat noticed that how his touch is effecting her and just smiled.

They reach in the hall Akshat bought popcorn for them and they sit in the hall movie started guddan was glued in the movie and she had no clue that akshat is continuously staring her caressing her cheeks she was so hooked in the movie she was crying and happy during the repectative scenes her mouth was wide open during the action scene and when the movie ends with hero win she literally stands on her seat and along with other she started shouting and whistling Akshat was shocked by her behaviour bt she was too happy to listen him and he saved her in nick of time from falling as she was jumping too leaving him no other option Akshat picked her in his arm and leave from the room no one noticed them as they all were bzy in celebrating and clapping for the movie

Guddan-chodiye hame q lekr aye hame bahar kitna maza aaa rha tha

Aj- movie khatam ho chooki hai mrs jindal aur kya main ye jaan skta hun ki ye aap qa kr rhi thi

Guddan now realised what was she doing in her excitment-sorry jindal sahab ham bahut jyada excited ho gye the hame aapko sharminda nhi krna chahiye tha sorry.

Aj- guddan tumhare khush hone se koi problem nhi hai bt kam se kam is baat ka dhyaan rakhi kab qa aur kha ho aur qa kr rhi ho tum fir se khud ko chot pahucha leti agar main tumhe nhi bachata av subah hi sidiyo se giri ho chot av tk nhi bhara aur av tum ..

Guddan-sorry bol rhe hai na aap sach mein khadoos ho Aj glares at her guddan okk aap khadoos nhi ho ab to aap mjhe neeche utar do

Aj does the same and as they were walking to their car its started raining Aj quickly hide himself under a roof bt saw that guddan is dancing in rain like a kid he shouts guddan idhar aa jao bheeng jaogi

Guddan-nhi jindal sahab bahut maja aa rha hai aap bhi aa jao

Aj - guddan av andar aa jao bimar par jaogi

Guddan -nhi bilkul nhi

Aj-was admiring her ,her laughter was music to his ears he goes to her she was totally drenched her clothes was sticking in her body her lips was shivering he cips her face and says guddan he slowly touched her bare belly and put his hand on her waist he slamed his lips on her and started kissing her deeply her hand was roaming throughout her body they parted for oxygen she was tasted like strawberry he bite her earlobs and caressing her bare waist making her moan then suddenly

Jindal sahab jindal sahab he came out from his imagination damn him he was imagining all this

Aj- was still surprised and was stammering gu duddan tum

Guddan-ham nhi to aur kon barish khatam ho gyi hai chaliye ghar chalte hai bahut raat ho gyi tb se yhi bol rhe the pr pta nhi aap kiske khayalon mein khoye hue the

Aj- tumhare

Guddan-qa

Aj bit his tongue and twisted his word mra matlb hai main tumhara hi wait kr rha tha

Guddan -okk

Aj - control Aj control agar guddan ko pta v chal jata ki main av qa soch rha tha to pta nhi uska qa reaction hota av tk na maine apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya hai na use apne pyaar ka ehsaa with this they drove to jindal bhawan.

Ps- i hope u liked it ignore the mistakes and plz do share ur views😊

.part-9 pg-14

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Kajal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Updated ab aap v update krdo😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

Nice one, i love guddan k guddanpana👏

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Updated ab aap v update krdo😛

Jarur...mai bi aaj thodi der mei kr deti hu update👍🏼

aj se to control hi nhi ho rha...control aj control..otherwise app to sapne mei hi SR mna loge☺️...awesome update..loved it..cont soon❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Awosome

Guddu ka bachpana

Aj ko bhot mahenat karni padegi guddu ko relised karvane k liye

Dream seqvence is ❤️❤️

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti24

Nice one, i love guddan k guddanpana👏

Update soon

Thanks for liking it🤗

Will update soon😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Viditian1

aj se to control hi nhi ho rha...control aj control..otherwise app to sapne mei hi SR mna loge☺️...awesome update..loved it..cont soon❤️

Glad u liked it🤗

Nhi nhi vo sapne ko reality mein jald hi bana denge 😉

Will continue soon😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Glad u liked it🤗

Nhi nhi vo sapne ko reality mein jald hi bana denge 😉

Will continue soon😛

hme intezaar rhega😳..cont asap😃

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