Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Itba chota

But it was spectacularly Awesome....loved ittttttt....cont soon❤️

Glad u liked it🤗

Kal thoda bada update de dungi😛

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Part-7

At morning guddu was the first one to wake up it was the first time she woke up from her sleep before her jindal sahab as she was hungry and hadnt eaten anything

Guddan - are wah guddan aaj to tu jindal sahab se pehle uth gyi are baapre bhukh ke maare neend v nhi lag rhi aur chaakar v aa rhe hai guddan tujhse aur bhook bardast krna na ho payega bilkul nhi ham kuch v nhi khayenge jindal sahab ne hame ice cream nhi khane diya tha na guddan tujhse ho payega pr kaise? She was feeling weak bt compose herself and went to washroom

Akshat too open his eyes and saw the bed empty he was shocked

Aj- guddan bed pr nhi hai aaj to chamatkar hi ho gya guddan itne jaldi uth gyi aaj suraj ulti disha se nikla hai qa guddan came out Aj looks at her she was looking pale so he asked her Guddan itni bujhi bujhi si q lag rhi ho tabiyat to thik hai na tum aaj itni.jaldi uth gyi

Guddan -haan hame qa hona hai ham to ekdum mast hai aur hamari neend khul gyi to ham uth gye

Aj shrugged it of and went to freshen up after sometime Aj sits for the break fast guddan was coming downstair she was feeling giddy and she falls down

Laxmi shouts -sasu ma

Aj runs towards her and picks her in hia arm instructs the family to call docter

Guddan got a little injury in her head she was bleeding and still uncounsious lying on the bed akshat was restless panic look like he was feeling pain .

Docter arrives and checks guddu

Akshat-docter qa hua hai guddan ko is she fine qa use hispital le jana parega vo thik to ho jayegi aap kuch bol q nhi rhi kaisi hai vo?

Docter- relax mr. Jindal chinta krne ki koi baat nhi hai av lekin inki BP bahut low hai iske wajah se inko chakkar aa gya and vo sidhio se gir gyi inko chot v ayi hai so maine inko pain killers aur kuch dawiya de de rhi hu accha inhone kb se khana nhi khaya tha inka khane ka khayal rakhiye nhi to low BP ke wajah se brain ko shock lag skta hai and she can slip into coma take care of her

Akshat ask vardhan to drop the docter till the door and also bring the medicines prescribed and he sits beside guddan. He also asked kishore to look after the restro as he is not going there .

Laxmi then remembers something and say are kal sasuma ne nashta nhi kiya tha kuch pucha to unhone kha ki unhe bhook nhi hai

Durga-unhone kal lunch v nhi kiya tha mjhe laga ki unhone breakfast heavy kiya hoga to isliye...

Saru -aur vo kl dinner se pehle hi sone chali gyi so maine disturb nhi kiya

Aj-iska matlb isne kl se kuch v nhi khaya pr q thik hai durga bahu aap guddan ke liye uska favorite khana order krke bhejwa dijiye main yha pr baithta hu

All nods and leaves from the room akshat is still sitting beside and waiting for her to gain consious after sometime she open her eyes til then duga had sent guddan's fav dishes in the room.

Guddan-are baapre kha hai hum sir bahut dukh rha hai chakkar v aa rha hai are ham to kamre mein hi hai .

Aj helps her and says av tk aap room mein hi hai pehle ye bataon kl se kuch nhi khaya na tumne

Guddan- tries to say something

Aj- ekdum chup kuch juth bolne ki jaroorat nhi hai ab ye v bataon kuch khaya q nhi tumne.

Guddan - q ki aapko pasand nhi hai na ki ham kuch bhi khaye

Aj-ye qa paglon jaisi baate kr rhi ho bhala tmhare khane se mjhe problem q hogi infact mjhe tumhare na khane se problem hai.

Guddan-jhuth mat boliye aap hi the na jisne mre hathi se ice cream china tha

Aj now realised why she didnt eaten anything as he remembers her last ni8 vows of not eating anything he thought she was joking bt she took it too seriously damn she .

Aj- tumhara dimag kharab hai itni choti si baat ke liye tumne khana chor diya maine isliye kha tha bcoz u already ate enough ice-cream it could effect ur health now keep ur anger aside and look i ordered ur fav dishes have it.

Guddan-ham kuch nhi khayenge aap hame laalach nhi dila skte though guddan was saying she will not ear bt she only knows how she was controlling herself as she was hungry and her fav dishes was before her

Aj- dekho guddan jid mat kro kha lo waise v tumse bhooke rhna na ho payega.

Guddan- qa qa bola ap e hamse na ho payega apne to bola tha ap aisa kv nhi bolenge ab to hum apko proof kr ke dikhayenge

Aj in mind ye maine qa bold dala i forgot it will fuel her anger more instead of calming her.

Aj- sorry ainda nhi bolunga plz kha lo ab dekho agar tum ye kha logi na to tum jo bologi main krunga pakka i promise

Guddan- teen baate aap dhyan rakhiye pehli baat mjhe aap pr vishwas nhi aur dusri baat aap kuch v kr le ham nhi khane wale

Aj- well he knew she is not going to tell 3rd one as always bt then also he asked teesri baat?

Guddan- aur teesri baat batane ki jaroorat nhi hai mjhe bs ham nhi khane wale. She was feeling giddy she holds her head

Aj was worried he then got an idea and she had left no option he have to do this he went to cupboard and take out something guddu tries to see it Aj comes to her and show something guddu is scared as it was an injection

Guddan-ji..jindal sahab ye aap q laye

Aj- dekho guddan ab tumhare pass do he option hai ya to khana kha lo ya fir is injection ke liye ready ho jaon

Guddan,-nhi han kha lenge as she tried to hold the plate she was feeling giddy and pain in her hand .

Aj makes her eat by his own hand made her drink water give her the medicine and was about to go bt guddan stopped him

Guddan- jindal sahab ek baat puche aap gussa to nhin krenge na

Aj -he smiles and says kaho

Guddan- aapne kha tha ki ham kha lenge to jo ham bolenge aap vo krenge ye offer ab bhi hai?

Aj chuckles at her innocent question- haa bolo qa chahiye tumhe

Guddan- bahut din ho gye movie dekhe hue aj raat ko ham movie dekhne jaye

Aj- u mean ni8 show

Guddan- nodes her head

Aj- seriously guddan raat ko and upar se tumhari tabiyat bhi thik nhi hai

Guddan- are ham apko jane ke liye thodi bol rhe hai bs permission de dijiye na ham movie dekhenge to hamari tabiyat blkul thik ho jayegi

Aj- no bilkul nhi

Guddan cutely says please

Aj- okk lekin tum akele nhi jaogi mere sath jaogi taiyar rehna main ticket book kr lunga

Guddan- aap v chalenege mre sath sach

Aj-much

Guddan was so excited and hugs him and kissed him on his cheecks as she realised what she did right now she bit her tongue she tought what will jindal sahab think about her while her jindal sahab was touching his cheeks to feel her lips and was smiling...

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Part-8 pg-12


Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Thank u🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwsomeeeee part❤️...loved it..cont soon😃...w8 krna mushkil h

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Awwwwwwwwwwwwsomeeeee part❤️...loved it..cont soon😃...w8 krna mushkil h

Thanks for liking it shaina🤗

Will update soon😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thanks for liking it shaina🤗

Will update soon😊

will be waitingggjldi uodate krna plzzz😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

will be waitingggjldi uodate krna plzzz😃

Will update tommorow😛

Aap v apna ss jaldi update ke dena😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Will update tommorow😛

Aap v apna ss jaldi update ke dena😃

hnji zarur

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