Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing update👏👏

Antara's friend ?

Thanks sonal🤗

Dekhte hai kon hai vo dono😛

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Bahut acha tha...totally loved it...best tha ki akshn saath h.....muje lgta h ki either polomi..or bua ji and fufaji..(just a guess)...jldi jldi btao kon h vo??😃w8 krni mushkil h😒

Thanks for liking it🤗

Well kon hai vo dono vo next update mein pta chal jayega

Will update tommorrow😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thanks for liking it🤗

Well kon hai vo dono vo next update mein pta chal jayega

Will update tommorrow😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Kl viva dene ke baad pakka update krdungi

Aap v uodate kro na plz

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-4

As everyone look at the persons everyone was surprised except Akshan and sons

Rahul and saru bahu antra exclaimed in astonishment yes the persons was rahul and saraswati(mihirka and anjali u were partially right)

Rahul-ha mri bhootni maa mai aur ham donon apko apki shi jagah vejne wale hai am i right aaraswati.

Saraswati gulps her saliva while looking at antra's angry face she indeed became a sandwhich bt no other option was left for her she have to support Akshan.

Dadi- are beta ye qa hamara sath degi ye to khud is antra ke sath mili hui hai hamare khilaf

Akshat-vo pehle ki baat thi maa ab ye hame dhoka dene ke baare mein nhi sochegi infact she has played a vital role in collecting the proof against antra. He goes to maa and says u always wanted to know na that antra was my first love then why i chose to trust over her as i already got to know her real face even before she arrived jindal bhawan.

Dadi- ye tu qa keh rha hai lalla tu pehle se hi iski sachai janta tha ?kaise?

Akshat- rahul ke badaulat maa ab bhi bahut kuch hai iske baare mein jo aap sb anjaan hai antra sirf ham sb ki nhi balki humanity ki v dushman hai. She is a smuggler maa many illicit business she have across many countries it includes smuggling of drugs, human traffacking and so on she doesnt she is a kalank in the name of women and rahul was the one who informed me about her deeds.

Flashback

Akshat- ye tum qa keh rhe ho rahaul meri antra jinda hai aur vo ye sb nhi nhi it cant be possible ahe cant be my antra how can she do this and why disnt ahe returned to me when she was alive for so many years

Rahul- she was deceiving u papa and she has also cheated her husband and even killed him.

Akshat - what? She married to someone else what r u saying ?u lost ur mind she is ur mother afterall how can u say this.?

Rahul-i know papa what r u feeling now it is difficult to believe me but i have all the proofs that her husband gave me actually her husband was my business partner he always use to say me that her wife can kill him someday that time i didnt knew that antra is his wife and u know what that she was faking her death and trapped risabh malhotra and got married to her morever she was also having affair to a underworld don she is his partner in illegal activities . Antra was using risabh's money for exapnding her business and made him bankrupt one fine day he show me her photo but i thought that she might be a doppelganger of antra bt when risabh told me about their meeting i got suspicious actually i havent told u papa that i have also opened an event management company at mumbai with rishabh he used to manage that companyni often visited there and this is how we became partners amd friends.

Akshat- agar main tumhari baat man v lu bt how u got to know about her involvment in illegal business?

Rahul- papa this is a purely coincidence i m living mexico for 2 years for managing our company one day while going to office i saw her with a men they were hiding their faces bt i managed to see their face i was shocked when i saw them that men was a criminal indian police is finding him and i saw his photo in mumbai police station one of my frnd is a ips officer i clicked their photo and sent him and within some moment he sent me all their biodata this is how i got to know about her papa and papa i have an shocking video recorder too.

He plays the video clip where antra is hugging the men and saying

Antra- jann u know that idiot rishabh started doubting on me dont worry i will explain him orelse he will loose his life.

Person-but darling how we will get money u know we need money for fullfilling our aim of becoming an international mafia.

Antra- he is useless now he became bankrupt bt we will get money from a more rich person she shows the photo

Akshat was shocked it was his photo

Person- are ye to

Antra -yes he is one of the rich person in asia and my ex husband we can use his money then we will sent him and her beloved wife guddan akshat jindal to heaven afterall i m her first love this much he cam do for me.

Both antra and that person laughs evily

Akshat is shattered he break down rahul consols him kishore and vardhan also come there akshat was so shattered that he didnt notice them he was crying vigorously 3 sons hugged him

Akshat stopped crying

Akshat- vardhan kishore tum dono yha

Kishore- haa papa aap se pehle rahul ne hame sab kuch bta diya tha aur hame pta chala hai ki antra jindal bhawan ane wali hai apke aur guddan maa ke sagai mein.

Vardhan- aur vo poori planning ke sath ane wali hai hame gharwalon ko sacchai bta deni chahiye

Akshat- nhi vardhan aur kishore kisi ko kuch nhi pta chalna chahiye hame normal act krna hoga antra sirf mri hi nhi balki bahut logo ki gunehgar hai hame use aur uske sathi ko range hatho pakarna hoga wada kro mjhse ki ye baat ham 4 ke beech hi rhegi ye baat kisi ko v pta nhi chalni chahiye yha tk guddan ko v nhi main nhi chahta ki koi v musibat me par jaye.

Vardhan,kishore and rahul altogehter promised him for not saying anything

Fb ends

This is how i got to know her reality here we r playing along with her and 3 sons were collecting the proofs aginst antra and her partner i had no intention to involve guddan in our plan bt this wife of mine is a detective she started spying on me aur ye apne guddanpane mein jasoosi krte wakt kisi musibat mein na fas jaye batana para ise mjhe now i got it she went with rahul since morning he goes to guddu and ask where u was why u both took so much time and u didnt informed me of rawat being alive.

Guddan -vo jindal sahab main ghar hi aa rhi thi raaste mein dekha ki ye aunty river mein kud gyi sucide krne ke liye vo to accha hua rahul ji aur saru bahu v wahi se guzar rhe the unki madad se ham inhe baccha paye aur idhar laye. Aur rawatji ke baare mein hamne isliye nhi bataya q ki unke jaan ko khtra ho skta tha isliye hamne apse chupaya hame maaf krdijiye plz and she makes a cute face.

Akshat smiles -tumse naraz v ho skta hu qa main chalo maaf kiya tum safe ho yhi kafi hai pr ayinda mjhse kuch mat chupana

Guddan-okk

Laxmi-haye haye sasuma lekin ye saru ka hirday parivartan kaise ho gya.

Rahul-vo main batata hu bhabhi guddan maa ne mjhe sb bta diya tha aur main saraswati se mila

Flashback

Saru- rahul tum yha itne salon baad? Main bahut khush hu

Rahul-ye sb choro aur ye bataon qa tum antra maa ke sath ho agar ho to meri baat dhyan se suno unka vishwas jeet kr unke khilaf baki saboot collect kro aur guddan ma ka sath do warna tumhe paise shayad mil jayenge bt apne pati aur parivar ko kho dogi

Saru- nhi rahul tum jaisa bologe main waisa hi krungi.

Fb ends

Aj- and with the help of saru bahu we nabbed her partner and police arrested him now its her turn. He getures the police to arrest her

Saru bahu secretely used to record all her crimes and passed it to guddan and sons

A lady constable make her wear the cuff antra was angry she shouts

Antra-nhi nhi ye nhi ho skta mra plan fail nhi ho skta she became historical 3 more constable tcontrols her and slapped her

Constables drags her from there before leaving

Antra threatens them-ye tum logon ne thik nhi kiya mre varso ke tapasya ko barbad kr diya main wapis aungi aur tum sb ko tmhare kiye ki saza dungi tm sb ki khusiyon ko cheen lungi ye wada hai mra this is when akshat slapped her and ask the police to take her with them saru handed a pendrive which contains all her crimes till now police assures them that she wont be able to do anything as she is hardcore criminal she will be given 3rd degree torture.

Everyone is relieved


so here was part 3 antra is taken to jail abhi ke liye bhootni aunty se chutkara mila😀did u enjoyed her being slapped from everyone.. from the next part there will be akshan scenes😊😊..

Ps-plz ignore the typos and grammatical mistakes 😬😬

do share ur views😊


Part-5 pg-8

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Waiting for the AkshAn love 😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Amazing update👍🏼

Sab saath mein

Waiting for Akshan moments

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Amazing...totally loved...waiting for the romance...cont soooon😃❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: PrincessPooh

Waiting for the AkshAn love 😍

Will uodate soon

Bt ab aap v update kro apna ff😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing update👍🏼

Sab saath mein

Waiting for Akshan moments

Thanks sonal🤗

Will update tommorrow😊

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