Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update👍🏼

So Guddan is going back to her sasural😎

Next time a long update😈

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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Nice update..

but really wished Guddan should have troubled him a lil more before going back..

cant wait for the next one.. continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you very much

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: srain10

Awesome update👍🏼

Thank you

So Guddan is going back to her sasural😎

Yes she is and the drama begins

Next time a long update😈

😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

Nice update..

Thank you!

but really wished Guddan should have troubled him a lil more before going back..

But the trouble starts now for Jindal-sahab!

cant wait for the next one.. continue asap

I will!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Hey Guys, I'm back with Part - 8! Let's get reading, shall we?

The Jindal family had left saying that Akshat will come back to pick Guddan up. Guddan was packing her bags. She thought about her life. She's been heard that once a girl is married, her own house would just be for namesake. Her entire life after her marriage is spent on her husband's house. But what about her? She has been going back and fro for a long time. It almost feels like she doesn't even have a place to stay. Can her life get any better? Her thoughts were interrupted by Revti.

R: Di.....

Guddan looked at her.

G: Haan chutki, kya baat hein?

R: Di, Are you really happy with this marriage?

G: Chutki, kya bol rahein ho? Ofcourse I'm-------

R: Nahi Di.... Aap jhoot nahi bol sakte.... Everytime you always think about others.... others happiness... never thinking about yourself. Is this too like that? Because if it is, then I don't want to marry. I have acted selfish many times. But not anymore..... I won't allow you to go through any pain. If you want me to break this relation,then just say it Di... I'll gladly do it for you....! You don't have to sacrifice anymore!

Guddan looked at her amazed.Then she smiled. Her Chutki was growing too, like Angad-ji...

G: Chutki......

Guddan made her sit and sat down in front of her.

G: Just tell me something....

Revti nodded.

G: Kya tum Angad-ji se pyaar karthe ho?

R: (Shaking her head) Di.... Meri baat.....

G: Haan ya naa?

R: Haan!

G: Phir tum yeh shaadi karoogi.... Chutki, I didn't sacrifice to get you married. Its my duty as a sister to see you get married and be happy. My case is different. Whatever happened was not your mistake or anyone else's. It was just a huge misunderstanding. And you both love each other. You are bound to be together. Even if I were to be against it, it would happen because, these relations are not made by us but God Himself! The world is the stage, Our life is the story, God is the Director and we are all actors!

R: (laughs) Ab yeh kisne kaha?

G: Pata nahi.... lekin kisi bada insaan ne kahan hein... kahi par tho suna tha....

R: koi film ka dialogue toh nahi?

G: Pata nahi!

Guddan and Revti laughed and Revti helped her pack. All of this was seen by their Papa and Mummy. They prayed that both their daughters would get a happy life.

In the evening, Akshat came to the Gupta house to pick up Guddan. Bhushan requested Akshat to take care of her. Akshat agreed and promised that he will and will rectify his mistake. After that they both left to Jindal Bhavan.

The ride to their house was silent. Guddan was sitting beside him but she was not even looking at him, lest talk to him. Akshat so badly wanted her to talk, anything, she can scold, yell,anything but cannot handle this silence.

A: W-woh.....

Guddan ignored him and kept looking at the window.

A: Guddan, How was your day?

Guddan looked at him in disbelief. So much happened and he was asking this question.

A: P-pata hein, lekin kuch toh baat karo na mujhse.......? Yeh, khaamoshi, acha nahi lagta tum pe.....

G: Jab baat karne ki koshish ki toh kisi ne bhi nahi suna.... Ab Khaamoshi hi acha hein!

Akshat realised she was still very angry and in no mood to talk to him. He understood her pain now. This was what she felt when he didn't listen to her.

A: I'm sorry, Guddan!

G: Kis baat pe? Mein ne bataya tha na, ki aap sab kuch bhool jayiye.... Hum sirf ab chutki aur Angad-ji ki shaadi ki baat hi karege...

Akshat didn't know what to say after that. They reached Jindal- Bhavan and everyone welcomed her. Guddan smiled and looked around. All the bad memories came rushing past her. She doesn't know how long she will be able to hold all her pain in?

And that's all for Part - 8! Sorry if its short, but I'm a bit busy these days. I hope you guys enjoyed it because from next part onwards the drama will officially kickstart! Akshat is in trouble!

Be sure to like and comment! Stay tuned for more updates

Let me know in the comments on what do you think Guddan should do when the family members ask her to shift in Akshat's bedroom? Should she refuse or accept?

Till then, this is Pooh, signing off~ Toodles!🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Refuse it

He should have tough time to get her back

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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Awesome update Love it Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#99

Fir se short😕

Av av to parhna start kiya tha itni jaldi khatam v ho gya

Next part ka wait nhi ho rha continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Refuse it

He should have tough time to get her back

Thank you for your opinion!

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