KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Shona1991

So both the hero save there heroine....

Kalma moment was so beautifully written....

Atharv is cartoon....

And AnuSar are love...love sarthak's care and concern for Anu....plz don't make any loose her eyes....

Don't want to see AnuSar more hurt...

Let them unite with lots of love....

You write so beautiful....continue soon dear....

Yes di atharv is cartoon.. Kalma moments already have their own charm .

Di anusar have to suffer a little so that they can know what they deserve so wait and watch, how story unfolds in future.

Thanks, keep reading.

Love you. 😃

Originally posted by: kusharberry

beautiful update dear

loved it

so both heroes rescued their heroines

please do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear

Thanks di. Keep reading.

Love you aai 😉

Apka romance kaisa chal raha hai baba ke saath. 🤣( sorry)

Originally posted by: rammehra103

First dodo 🤣

Mere bete me update kr hi Diya aakhir 😆

Amazing story ....ur writing skills amazed me so much ...👏

Perfectly written ....kalma scene .... 🥳

Loved how kalyani and malhar felt that they are perfect soul mate

Please anusar ko kuch mat hone Dena

Update soon Mera beta 😆

Are dodo ji

I am not your beta ji. I am your chota ya bada behen ji.

Thanks for appreciation Di.

Di anusar will suffer a little so that they can know what they deserve so wait and watch how will story unfolds. 😉

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Loved it dear!

Malhar Ji saved Kalyani

Kalyani is so caring ❤️

Sarthak Kaka also saved his Anupriya ji

thanks for writing

please keep writing 👍🏼

Ji Dadi ( I don't know what aao sahib have relation with tilli).

Thank you for reading and loving it.

Love you

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Are dodo ji

I am not your beta ji. I am your chota ya bada behen ji.

Thanks for appreciation Di.

Di anusar will suffer a little so that they can know what they deserve so wait and watch how will story unfolds. 😉

Will wait for ur story but jldi ...vrna Mai main forum me bhoot ban ke bhut bhatak rhi hu😎😈😈

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

Finally malharji came hayee

Stupid athu got wat he deserved

Am so happy they r finally together.

Awesome neera🤗

Thanks baba. You and aai made for each other so how can I dare to apart you both. 😉......

Keep reading and loving it.

Love you.

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Wow yr awesome yrr loved it kalma was best as always please update soon!

Jyada wait mat karvana di please😢😢😢

Thanks saakshi.

Di will update teaser in one or two days. And part 4 by next week..

Keep reading and loving it.

Love you.

Originally posted by: Dk26

Awesome update neera

Loved it ❤️❤️

Update next part soon

I'm waiting for your next update

OK di will update soon. Plz wait a few days more di.

Keep reading and loving it

Love you.

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thanks di. Keep reading.

Love you aai 😉

Apka romance kaisa chal raha hai baba ke saath. 🤣( sorry)

sab theek chaal rahi hai

Teaser for chapter 4

That night was most distressed for a hurted soul. A hurted life is crying for another injured life. His heart screaming every second for relief of the that injured soul. He wants to scream so that whole world get silent as compared to him .

He was hearing a lot of indistinguishable sounds from his heart, from his soul and from his mind.

Though he knows that she was out of danger, but still she was sleeping like a lifeless body without any cheer.

Once She was a girl which he loves.