KalMa FF - ‘ Zindagi,Ab Tum Hi Ho ‘ Part 5A page 36 (5/26) - Page 14

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Omg finally u updated! 

Mallu ki aakal tikane aahi gai ki use kallu ki adat ho hi gai😉😄😄

Ab dikhte hai mallu kallu ko kaise manata hai?? 

Waiting for ur update please update soon!!!! Isbaar jyada wait mat karvana di please😢😢😢

Hi Sakshi.

Thank you so much for patiently waiting for the update. 😊

I thoroughly apologize for the delay.🙏😬

Mallu ki akal sirf 2 hi log thikane la sakte hai       1) kaka and 2) kallu.😂🤣

I am working on this manaofy part of mallu as I have written and deleted so much as nothing was satisfactory. I will finish it and post is asap.

Thank you and sorry again that I kept you waiting.🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rammehra103

Firstly...I miss u so much di ...please don't leave forum ....u ,Lina,Sri di are my first freinds here...so please don't leave it 😭

Thank u for update.....your made my whole day 🥳

Di ,I also lose interest in show ..pehle Jo ek icha thi show dekhni ..vo khi Mar SI gyi hai ..baaki kalma scenes ke liye insta to hai hi

Now ........coming back to update

Again di u made me cry hard 😭

Sarthak Kaka aur malhar ji ki conversation .....amazing di ...this part is superb👏

Loved how anupriya pacifies malhar..and gives him hints to search kalyani

Kalyani and malhar are missing each other ..so badly ...now they are understanding each other value ....how they lived in each other heart 😃

All the best for your exam di ...  But update ke liye hm naare lgate rhenge ......chahe kitna late ho ke popat ho hmara 🤣

Again ...I am missing you so much di 

By ur sweet sis 😆... Jyoti

Hey Jyoti. I am not leaving the forum. I was just away from it for few days.

Thank you for loving it 🥰

I lost interest in the show as it was making me lose interest in writing my FF. Thats why I get late because if you are unhappy and stressed from within then you lose your creativity.. Thats the only reason.

Again thank you for appreciating it. Your comment made my day too and inspired me to write again.

Mallu needs to get his brain back that can only done by Saarthak kaka. Only kaka is the one who can pour some sense in mallu’s brain..😂😊

Anu is a person who always wants everyone happy and helps everyone who is in need. So yeh toh banta tha..😊

KalMa has to miss each other because you only know the person’s worth when you don’t have them around you.😊😁

Dono ke dil mein kuch ho raha hai but unko abhi pata nahi chal raha hai..😂🤣

I am trying hard to write and finish the update. Thoda late ho toh mujhe bhi maaf kar dena please..🙏

Thank you for your patience and sorry for keep you waiting.🙏😬😊

Love ❤️ 

Darshi.😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

its beautiful update

though kalma separated now here in ur story but maybe this is needed for malhar to break his stance n understand the imp of kalyani ..

m glad he is repenting n understanding what is there

Loved how sartak put sense on malhar n how anu helped indirectly kalma sply malhar yet keeping her promise to kalyani ..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

It was so damn beautifully written...

Love kalyani's emotional be tAlk with anu...

Sarthak scolding and making malhar realize his mistake was also good part...

Anupriya is smart she indirectly help malhar and malhar  also got to know kallu ka pata...

Love to kallu ka inner turmoil....

Plz do update soon.wana see how mallu manaofy kallu....

Thank you so much for loving and appreciating my work.😊🤗

Saarthak’s Scolding was needed to put some sense in Angry bird ACP. That he is ACP at his PS not at home.😂🤣

Anupriya is always smart she got a way and used her wit to hint malhar even though she was bound by the vow.😊

Kallu also knows that she is indeed missing him.😊

Update will be there soon I am working on the manaofy part.😊

Thank you for your patience.😊🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Aww! beautiful update 

Kalyani-Anupriya conversation ❤️

Kalyani imagining Malhar ❤️

she is hurt, but still cares for him

she wants to make tea for him❤️

Malhar ko uski galti finally samajh gayi

his imagination ❤️

his smile ❤️

his thoughts about her❤️

Sarthak Kaka👍🏼

Anupriya ❤️ cannot see anyone in pain

liked how she gave hints in the form of koi aisi jagah , sach mein she is so good!

ACP sahab ke dimag ne socha aur unhe finally clue mil gaya ki unki patni Pune mein hai!

Aur cctv mein bhi pata chala

ab Malhar ji Pune ke ore prasthan karenge 

ye accha hua

ab dono jee bhar ke ek dusre se baatein kar sakte hai once he will reach there

Thanks for writing 

please keep writing 

Hi bhagu.

Thank you so much for loving and appreciating it.🥰

It makes me happy when people appreciate and inspire me to write more. 🥰

I will keep on writing and update it soon. 😊

Thank you for your patience and bearing with me and sorry for keeping you waiting.🤗🙏

Edited by dusk2dawn - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: InkAndFable

It was written so perfectly.

Thank God...!!! Kalyani safe hai...

Malhar is finally realizing Kalyani's worth.

I loved Kalyani here- She is missing Malhar and she is angry at the same time...

Finally, Malhar ko pata chal gaya Kalyani kaha hai..

Thanks to Anupriya

Update soon

and Thank you so much for PM...

And PM me about next update also.

Thank you so much Sanya for loving and appreciating my work.😊

These Inspiring and appreciating words from your side keeps me motivated this I am able to write this.😊🤗

I love your stories and that too inspired me a lot to start writing this one.😊

Update will be there soon. I am working on it. I won’t post until I  , myself is not satisfied what I have written. 😊

 I will PM whenever I will update.😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: asmitasb

Ohh so much wait n here we get such a long n amazing update.

Just loved this part. Malhar's realization, his pain, guilt everything reached directly. Such a fantastic storyline and clean writing.

Now super eagerly waiting for next part and fabulous kalma reunion 

Hi Asmita.

Sorry for keeping you waiting and thank you so much for loving and appreciating it.😊🤗

Appreciation keeps on motivating me to write more n more.. 😊

Thank you for your patience and I promise I won’t test it for more time will update soon.😊🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

its beautiful update

though kalma separated now here in ur story but maybe this is needed for malhar to break his stance n understand the imp of kalyani ..

m glad he is repenting n understanding what is there

Loved how sartak put sense on malhar n how anu helped indirectly kalma sply malhar yet keeping her promise to kalyani ..

Thank you so much Rakhi.😊

It’s true that We get to know the person’s worth when he/ she  is not around or with us. So KalMa ke saath yeh toh hona hi tha.😊

Only one person can put sense in Malhar’s mind that is Saarthak kaka.

When I started to write this story Saarthak’s character was not there. But then I felt that his character needed to keep malhar grounded and put sense in his brain and make him understand value of Kalyani in his life.😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hello guys I am back with the little tiny mini teaser of Part 4 of my FF.


I know I am again late in posting my update but what to do I am still working on the ending of this part. So as soon as I will finish up writing it will be posted.


I thank you all from the bottom of my heart for all of your patience.


So here you go guys..Happy reading..😊


Teaser Part 4:


Malhar woke up early in the morning and got ready.


Finally he found Kalyani’s whereabouts and is going to get his wife back in his life again .


Malhar in his mind :


Malhar - Main jaa kar bolunga kya Kalyani se?

Aur kya woh meri baat maan jaayegi?


Malhar rings the doorbell of Kalyani ‘s apartment in Pune.


Kalyani opened the door.


Kalyani - Malharji aap?


Malhar - Kalyani.. Sorry.


Kalyani - Aap yahaan se chale jaaiye mujhe aap ki koi baat nahi sun ni hai. Pehle gussa karte hai aur phir sorry kehte hai.

Aisa jaise kisi ka murder kar do aur baad mein use sorry keh do ki bhai galti se tumhara murder ho gaya I am sorry.


Malhar - Kalyani suno toh.. main keh..meri ba..


Kalyani - Maine kaha naah aapse mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai. Aap please chale jaaiye yahaan se.Bye.


And she slammed the door on his face.


———————— Thank You ————————-


All of your appreciation made my day and it is motivating me to write even more better.


Thank you so much all for your patience and I thoroughly apologize to keep you guys waiting.. 😊🙏


Again thank you all so much for liking n loving my story.😊


And thank you so much for your likes and comments as your words motivate me to write better and brings out a better creative person out of me..


Do shower your love again and again and keeps on motivating me with lots of likes and share your views in comments.😊


Love you all 😍❤️ 

Darshi.

Edited by dusk2dawn - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Hehehe...

Very very difficult for malharbhau to manaofy kalyani...

Continue soon...

M now egar to read last chapter....