A Powerful Hold - A DrikShit Ficlet [Part 2 Pg 3 ] - Page 5

Originally posted by: shonagudia

such a beautiful piece .. All the emotions are so aptly penned down..

Thank you, Shona. I am glad you had a nice read. ❤️

Originally posted by: Silver_dew11

It's wonderful I wonder how come I didn't read it until now.. it's amazing beautiful!

I have written quite some stuff in a very short time so I am not surprised if you missed on some. 😆 Catch up with your convenience. Thanks a ton.

Cheers

Brilliant piece of work! 👏 Loved every bit of it! ❤️ Simple words that evoke deep emotions. This shot had a poignant beauty about it. I love how you play with the words. Tight hugs to you for being awesome! 🤗

In the episode too I didn't like how he talked to her. That was so rude and insulting. But it was good to see his worry for her here. At least he was guilty for hurting her & did realize the gravity of his words. Good going Mr. Shergill. 👍🏼

Mr. Caring Shergill is back seeing Ms. Sood in pain. How gently he tended to her wound.. But Drishti didn't forget to give it back to him for his harsh words. She again stumped him with her blunt questions. 😆 I love how she doesn't sugarcoat or mince her words when it comes to him. She is straightforward & frank except for the times he questions her about her motive.

The last bit was beyond beautiful. Him offering her to lend his ears for her emotional outburst.. Him promising to be her silent support... That was just so sweet. 😳 Emotional support is the best thing you can give someone.

Thank you so much for this treat. 🤗

Loads of love,

Ashi.

P.S.: How did you manage to change the font?

I'm busy catching up with all the stories. Will reply for the rest soon. I can't wait to read more. But for now I'm off to bed. Good night!

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Brilliant piece of work! 👏 Loved every bit of it! ❤️ Simple words that evoke deep emotions. This shot had a poignant beauty about it. I love how you play with the words. Tight hugs to you for being awesome! 🤗

In the episode too I didn't like how he talked to her. That was so rude and insulting. But it was good to see his worry for her here. At least he was guilty for hurting her & did realize the gravity of his words. Good going Mr. Shergill. 👍🏼

Mr. Caring Shergill is back seeing Ms. Sood in pain. How gently he tended to her wound.. But Drishti didn't forget to give it back to him for his harsh words. She again stumped him with her blunt questions. 😆 I love how she doesn't sugarcoat or mince her words when it comes to him. She is straightforward & frank except for the times he questions her about her motive.

The last bit was beyond beautiful. Him offering her to lend his ears for her emotional outburst.. Him promising to be her silent support... That was just so sweet. 😳 Emotional support is the best thing you can give someone.

Thank you so much for this treat. 🤗

Loads of love,

Ashi.

P.S.: How did you manage to change the font?

Hey Ashi! Thanks a zillion for making my morning with this beautiful comment. This was my very first try on these two. The back story behind this tale is, when I was watching the swimming pool scene, I really, really wanted Rakshit to witness the emotional breakdown while remembering her parents but since it didn't happen in the show, I penned it down for it was bugging me for so long.

Isn't it beautiful that just a scratch on her and he would panic as if an earthquake?

I am glad you enjoyed reading the last bit. Thank you for reading and making me smile with such sweet words.

PS: This was before they shifted to new IF.

Cheers

-Harshada

Originally posted by: Ashi3

I'm busy catching up with all the stories. Will reply for the rest soon. I can't wait to read more. But for now I'm off to bed. Good night!

Read if and when time permits, according to your convenience. Thank you. Stay as amazing as you are.

Cheers

Read both the parts together. I liked them.

Originally posted by: MudrasV

Read both the parts together. I liked them.

I am glad you did. 🤗