AkshAn SS: Adhoore ( Part - 5, Pg 4) - Page 3

Part - 4

Jindal House

It was Angad & Revati's Haldi ceremony & in the wedding was going to take place. All were busy with preparations. Guddan didn't avoided Akshat fully but didn't talked also if not necessary. He was happy due to this. After Haldi ceremony Guddan was going towards room, she didn't realized her blouse knot was loose. Akshat saw it hurried towards her & back hugged her. Guddan was too shocked to react. Akshat noticed someone was approaching she pulled her towards corner & now they were face to face.

G:Jindal Saab aap..

Akshat shut her mouth with his one hand & holded her waist with another.

AJ(whispering):Ssshh

The person was Durga who was talking on phone regarding wedding preparations. She came & stood just in front of them, as her back was towards them she couldn't see them. Here, Akshat pulled Guddan into a hug. Guddan was shocked & confused of his behavior. She tried to come out of his grip.

G(whispering):Yeh aap

As Akshat started to tie her knot of blouse Guddan realized what had happened & why he was doing this. She stood still so that he continue, as his fingers were touching Guddan's back, she started to breath heavily. Akshat realized his effect on her he smiled & continued his work. By the time he tied the knot Durga also left & they broke the hug & looked at each other.

AJ: Sorry

Akshat ran from their. Guddan was again shocked at his behaviour.

G(in mind):Jindal Saab ne Sorry kyu kahan unhone toh humari madat kiyi ulta hume toh unhe Thank You bolne ka mauka nehi mila

AJ(in mind): Bewaqoof mein Guddan ko bolta hun aur khud aisa harkate karta hun kya sochegi meri baren mein maine aisa kyu kiya bolne se bhi hojata par nehi Akshat Jindal ko kam jo bigarna tha

Evening

All got ready for wedding & the guests started to arrive also. Revati was getting ready & Guddan was helping her.

G: Arey wah Chutki aaj toh keher dharahi hai kisiki nazar na lage.. finally teri shaadi horahi hai

Revati got up from her seat turned towards Guddan.

R: Meri shaadi toh hojayegi Di aapki shaadi ka kya

G:Dekh Chutki

R:Nehi Di manti hu issh parivar se galati huyi hai aur Jiju ne bhi app pr na bharosa karke galti kiyi hai lekin yeh bhi sach woh apse bohat pyar karte hai aur aap bhi unse itna hi pyar karte hai

G: Aisa kuch bhi nehi hai

R: Aisahi hai Di aphi batayi agar aap Jiju aur issh parivar se pyar nehi karti, unke feelings apke liye koi mayne nehi rahte hai toh phir apne buaji ko aur kisi aur ko apne divorce ke baren mein kyu nehi bataya

Guddan became silent, she doesn't know what to say.

R:Janti hun jo hua galat hua lekin galtiyan bhi toh insaan se hi hoti hai na bash ekbar mere khatir ek mauka deke dijiye issh parivar ko Jiju ko apne pyar ko.. mein waada karti hun agar issh bar apke saath agar kuch bhi galat hua toh apko nehi rokungi

Guddan just stared at her, just then Laxmi came to call as it was time for wedding. Guddan took Revati downstairs & Akshat bought Angad downstairs. Angad & Revati took their places & Akshat & Guddan stood beside each other as Buaji was near them. Buaji looked at both the couple & smiled.

Bu:Jindal Bhawan ke bhagya khul gaye Guddan aur Revati jaisi saas akar.

Revati smiled hearing this & Guddan just stepped away a little from Akshat. Akshat noticed this but couldn't say anything.

AJ(in mind):Aaj mujhe kisibhi halat mein Guddan ka vishwas jitna hi padega

Finally the wedding was completed, the couple took everyone's blessing. The guests & Gupta family also left. After some rituals all family members retires for day. As Guddan was going to her room Buaji called her & she went to her room.

G: Ji buaji

Bu:Guddan jab se ayi hun tujhe bohat pareshan dekh rahi hun tere aur lalla ke beech sab thik hai toh?

G: Haan buaji sab thik hai woh shaadi ki tyaari ki wajah se thodi thaki thi bash

Bu:Thik hai mein tere aur lalla ke liye bohat khush hun.. tum dono ek dusre ke liya hi bane ho

Guddan avoided looking at her.

Bu: Chal jaa aram karle

Guddan nodded & left. She was going upstairs & thinking about her & Akshat's relationship.

G(in mind):Kya hum Jindal Saab par phir se bhasoda kar payenga

As she stepped on another stair her foot slipped & was about to fall when Akshat holded her in time. Both looked at each other.

AJ:Main tumhe kabhi girne nehi doonga

Guddan stood up & was about to leave when he holded her hand.

AJ:Mujhe baat karni hai tumse

G:Par hume aapse baat nehi karni

She freed her hand & went towards terrace. Akshat followed her.

AJ: Ruko Guddan

Guddan listened to him & went to terrace. Akshat ran pulled her towards him.

AJ:Baat karni hai tumse Guddan ekbar sunlo

G(angry tears coming out):Kya baat karni hai ki galati hogayi maaf karden yehi na samajte kya hai aap khudko pehle taqleef denge aur phir maafi mange gey aur phir taqleef denge.m yeh silsila kab tak chalega Jindal Saab.. har kisiko aapki galati nazar arahi par humari taqleef humara dard kisiko nazar nehi araha hai

Hearing all this Akshat started crying. He fell on his knees & folded his hands looked towards Guddan.

AJ:Janta hu Guddan bohat dard diya hai tumhe.. tumhe jo saaza deni hai mujhe do mujhe manzoor hai par pls mujhe divorce maat do.. mujhe chod key maat jao.. mein apni adhi zindagi ek jhoote rishtey ke liye gawai hai.. har roz Antara ke liya mara tha agar tum chod ke chali jaogi jee nehi payunga Guddan maar jayunga.. maar jayunga

And Akshat started crying vigorously. Guddan was also crying & just stared at him.

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Part - 5

Jindal House

2 Months Later

Guddan is staying at Jindal House. She had decided to give the family chance. All were happy. No one gave a chance to complain. She was ideal bahu & Saas. The three daughter-in-law's accepted her whole heartedly. As for Akshat he was happy but also sad. With other family members she was very free but around him she was not that free. She stayed only at the condition that she cannot accept him as his husband until & unless she can forgive him fully. As for Guddan she forgave all including Akshat but something was stopping her to accept him.

Guddan was folding clothes when Laxmi came in her room.

L:Arey Sasuma dijiye mein madat kardeti hun

G:Arey hogaya bas.. aap batayi kuch kam tha kya

L:Nehi koi kam nehi tha toh socha apse gappe marne aati hun

G:Haan toh bathiye..

Both sat & started talking. All of a sudden Laxmi asked.

L:Sasuma aapne sachi mein hume maaf kardiya na?

G:Haan laxmi bahu humne sabko maaf kardiya

L:Aur AJ ko?

G:Haan maaf toh kardiya magar..

L:Magar aitbaar nehi horaha hai, hai na?

G:Sahi kahan apne

L:Mein janti hun sasuma jo hua uske baat aitbaar karna bohat muskil hai magar ekbar AJ ki taraf haat bara kar dekhiye issh bar AJ kisibhi tarha apka haat nehi chodenge

G:Janti hu laxmi bahu ki Jindal Saab hume nehi chodenge par humara yeh jo dil hai na bohat darta tutne se phir se tut gaya toh hum sambhal nehi payenge khudko

Unknown to them Akshat was standing near the door & was hearing them. He was sad that how much he broke his Guddan.

G:Apko pata hai Laxmi bahu inn do mahino mein humne apne aap ko bohat samjhane ki koshis ki hey aur age barne ki koshis kiyi hai magar magar yeh humse ho hi nehi paraha hai.. sayad isliye ki hum Jindal Saab se bohat pyar karte hai.. jis waqt se unhone humari angoothi Antara ki pehnayi thi tab se ek alag hi taqleef hoti thi hume.. sayad woh taqleef na ho isilye.. sayad isliye hum Jindal Saab ki taraf apne kadam nehi barha parahe hai

Tears were streaming down from Akshat's face.

AJ(in mind):Nehi Guddan tumhe aur mein taqleef nehi doonga.. aaj sare galatiyon ka paschayatap karunga

And Ahshat left from there.

L:Thik hai sasuma aap ko jaisa thik lage aap kariye par AJ aur apne aap ko aur taqleef maat dijiye

Saying this Laxmi left from there.

G:Sahi kahan Laxmi bahu.. Jindal Saab aur humne bohat kuch saha hai.. aur unko dur karke apne aap ko aur unko aur taqleef nehi denge.. hum aaj hi Jindal Saab ko apne dil ki baat batadenge.. batadenge ki abb yeh doori humse bardast nehi hoti..

Night

Guddan was waiting for Akshat but he didn't came. He called & messaged him but there was no sign of him.

G(in mind):Kahan hai Jindal Saab abhi tak aye kyun nehi

Someone from behind blindfolded her with a cloth.

G:Yeh kaun

AJ:Mein hun Guddan ghabrao maat

G:Yeh aap kya

AJ:Ek min chup karo sab pata chalega thodi der mein

Akshat tied the cloth on her eyes & carried her in his arms.

G: Arey kya kar rahe aap aur utariye hume

AJ:Do min shant ho jao sab pata chal jayega

Akshat carried her & took her to terrace. He made her stand near the pool & opened the blindfold. Guddan opened her eyes saw the surroundings. The terrace was beautifully decorated with flowers & balloons.

G:Jindal Saab yeh sab

Guddan turned around & was shocked. Akshat was standing on his one knee & was holding a ring in his hand. He was wearing the pink shirt which he wore during their reception.

AJ:Guddan maine jo kiya tumhare saath woh galati nehi gunah tha aur uske liye tum jo bhi saaza do woh kam hai.. lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki main tumse bohat pyar karta hun aur usse bhi kahi zyada bharosa karta hun jo sayad maine nehi kiya tha pehle.. main apni baki zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahta hun, tumse ladna chahta hun jhagadna na chahta hun par tumhare bina rehna nehi chahta hun.. I love you Guddan.. Mujhse phirse shaadi karogi? Issh bar kisibhi haal mai mein tumhara haat nehi chodunga chahe uske liye bhagwan se kyu na ladna pade.. Pls Guddan ekbar sirf ekbar bhasoda karke dekho..

Guddan was in tears hearing all this. She went down to Akshat's position & hugged him tightly. He also returned back the hug.

G:Hum bhi apse bohat pyar karte hai Jindal Saab.. Humne aapko kab kai maaf kardiya tha par himat nehi juta parehi thi lekin ab aur nehi.. Hum bhi apke saath apni poori zindagi bitana chahte hai.. Karenge hum apse shaadi.. I love you Jindal Saab

Both broke the hug & Akshat made Guddan wear the ring.

AJ:Issh angoothi jagah tumhare haath mein hai aur tumhari jagah mere dil mein..

Guddan smiled at this. Akshat holded Guddan's face & brought his face near her. Guddan closed her eyes in acceptance. Both shared a passionate kiss. After few minutes they broke the kiss & again hugged each other.

G:Waise yeh decorations thoda filmy nehi hai

AJ:Kyun tumhe filmy cheeze pasand nehi hai kya

Both broke the hug & looked at each other.

G:Nehi matlab woh baat nehi hai..

AJ:Toh phir

G:Aap toh khadus hai na toh khadus log ko thodi aise filmy cheeze pasand hai..

Akshat made a amused face. Guddan looking at his face started laughing & Akshat also joined her.

AJ:Tumhara kuch nehi hosakta hai.. humlog kal hi shaadi karenge

G:Aur apni zindagi ki nayi suruyat karengen

Next Day

Temple

All the family members gathered at temple for Guddan & Akshat's remarriage. All were happy for them & their remarriage. Guddan & Akshat took their seat & ceremony started. Guddan & Akshat holded hands during pheras. Akshat tied the mangalsutra around her neck & put vermillion in her mang.

Pandit: Vivah samparn hua

The couple took the blessings of elders.

K:Happy 1st Anniversary

Guddan & Akshat were shocked hearing this & both looked at each other.

G&A:Aaj Anniversary hai?

Da:Haan.. mujhe laga tum dono ko pata hai isilye aaj ke aaj hi shaadi karna chahte the

AJ:Apki bahu ke chakar kuch yaad rahe tab na Anniversary yaad rahegi

G:Matlab aap humari wajah se Anniversary bhule hai? Wah ulta chor kotwal ko daate

AJ:Aur nehi toh tumhari wajah se pata nehi aur kya kya bhoola hun.. aur tumto aisa dikharahi ho tumhe bada yaad tha

G:Humpe ilzam lagana band kijiye aur Anniversary chodiye aaj ki tarik hi humko nehi pata

All were amused to see their cute fight.

AJ:Ab bahane maat do

G:Bahane hum derehe ya aap

AJ:Dekho Guddan

Da:Bash aur jhagra kiya toh mein Guddan ko mayke bhej dungi

Both become silent at Dadi's warning but were glaring at each other.

Da:Aise kon ladta hai shaadi hoteyi hi khair chalo ghar Guddan ka grahepravesh bhi karna hai..

All went home. Whole way Akshat was holding Guddan's hand as if he was scared to leave her. They reached home.

Da: Duga bahu.. Revati jaldi jao aur Grahepravesh ki samagri layo apni bahu ka swagat karna hai

They bought all the things & Dadi did Guddan & Akshat's arati. Saraswati kept the rice pot & alta thal infront of Guddan. Guddan pushed the rice pot & stepped on alta thal & entered the house.

Night

Guddan was waiting for Akshat in their room. She was very nervous as it was first night after their proper marriage. Akshat entered the room & locked the door & sat beside her. He removed the veil of Guddan & faced her. Guddan couldn't looked at him due to shyness. Akshat holds her hand.

AJ:Thank you Guddan.. mujhe phir ek mauka dene ke liye. I love you Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal

Guddan smiled at him.

G: Sach toh yeh hai ki hum aapke bina Adhoore hai.. I love you too Jindal Saab

Both hugged each other. Akshat moved his face closer to Guddan, Guddan closed her eyes thus giving him permission. Akshat captured her lips & both shared a passionate kiss. After few moments they broke their kiss due to lack of oxygen. Akshat laid her down on bed & caressed her face. He holds Guddan's fingers & two become one that night.

The End

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