MishBir OS : Marital Life (Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali : Pg 12) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanku all silent readers

I am sorry I didn't updated next part today

I will definitely update till Wednesday as little busy with guest in my house

Sorry again

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was really cute. Definitely seems like something that can happen post MishBir marriage.

Abir understands her so well that her gestures convey the message to him. That response to his 'I love you' was such an adorable moment.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vssdp

MY DEAR HUSBAND

“Abir kaha ho tum , main wait kar rahi hu , ab tak ghar nahi aaye” , I asked my husband who was still at ngo , its 11 pm and I am getting worried now .

“Sorry”, caressed a voice in my ears, and a current ran down my spine as always . God this man, after 2 years of marriage , he has still the same effect on me . Oh and now he’s wrapping his hands around my waist and his lips which are caressing my neck , god his lips create magic on my skin , I always lose my mind when he do that and he knows this and always use this for his advantage.

“Mishti”

And now I smiled, my name always sounds like a divine melody from his mouth.

He turned me around and as always I lowered my head , closed my eyes , as I still feel shy to look in his intense full eyes filled with love and desire for me.

“Mishti , apni aankhen kholo ” , his hands that were caressing my waist before some time , now are, holding my chin and forcing me to look up .

I took a deep breath inhaling his scent, his body , so close to me is creating havoc inside me , oh here comes the butterflies .

He removed my glasses and his lips slowly, gently touched my eyes , one by one , and of course now my heartbeat with my breathing rate increased too . This man knows very well how to make me crave for him . He’s so cruel yet I can’t get enough of him.

I opened my eyes to find him looking at me with same desire and love , it just increase day by day , how can he love me so much , I smiled shyly looking at his face which is glowing with passion and naughtiness.

Oh wait , the naughtiness , he again made me forget that I was supposed to be angry on him . Not so fast mister , this time not so fast , I decided and again tried to be stern in front of him

“Kaha the tum , kitni baar kaha hai ki late mat hua karo ,mujhe jaldi bhej dete ho , aur khud hamesha late , is hafte mein teesri baar hua hai ye”

Oh and again he made that innocent face , and of course he won this time too , I can’t get angry on him now , as I said he’s really cruel, huh.

“Mishti , event aa raha hai na to bas chief guests ko confirmation call kar raha tha , sorry”

And he hold his ears as a gesture of sorry , and I smiled ,how long can I hold it after all , he’s making cute baby face and I can’t resist kissing him . I pecked on his lips and he pulled me for a passionate one.

Oh he always do that, not that I am complaining, as I said I can’t get enough of him and it includes his kisses too. His lips on mine feels like I am in some other world, where only desire exist. Desire to be near each other, so close that no one can come in between. I can feel his craving for me, his desperation to be with me, near me always, but love didn’t fade away. Whenever he makes love to me , I can always feel his love , he worships my body, that’s why I never got scared from his desire and passion because all was filled with his love , love for ME. Oh I love this man, love him to the core.

We separated breathing heavily, my eyes are closed but I can feel his eyes on me, his breath on my face. I hugged him feeling shy again , he also wrapped his arms around me , engulfing me in his comfortable and love filled embrace. I can feel his smiling lips on my hairs as he kissed me there.

“I love you , meri dil ki chorni ”

Yes, now he always calls me his dil ki chorni , angry chorni was like sweet endearment in our friendship phase , but when we confessed each other he started calling me his dil ki chorni and no wonder my heart always fluttered hearing this and a smile automatically appears on my face.

I kissed his chest where his heart beats for me , he got my answer and tighten his arms pulling me more closer to him.

Yes I am still shy to say I love you to him , don’t know why but he always understand. After all he’s my Abir. My dear husband Mr . Ajeeb Rajvansh and I am his dil ki chorni . Always and forever.

END

I don’t know why I wrote this , if it is good or not

Just a random thought

If you guys want me to continue then do tell

I can write series of this with different situation of their marital life

Actually I am not sure that I can update my SS this weekend so small token for mishbir lovers

Hope you all enjoyed

Hey Vaish, I'm so sorry I missed this out! Anyway this was so cute! It waa as if I am reading Mishti's diary from the future. Since you have written the narrative in first person, it makes me feel as if Mish is expressing her feelings to someone in a diary. It's beautiful! Would love to read more! :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very beautiful vaishu... Gosh, there are so many brilliant writers in this forum... I am one of the silent reader... But this beautiful OS written by each of the writers are just so wonderful...and take us to our Mishbir wonderland... Just loved it...pls continue... 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShenzK

This was really cute. Definitely seems like something that can happen post MishBir marriage.

Abir understands her so well that her gestures convey the message to him. That response to his 'I love you' was such an adorable moment.

Thanku so much dear 🤗

Mishbir are so adorable that their every action we find adorable 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Hey Vaish, I'm so sorry I missed this out! Anyway this was so cute! It waa as if I am reading Mishti's diary from the future. Since you have written the narrative in first person, it makes me feel as if Mish is expressing her feelings to someone in a diary. It's beautiful! Would love to read more! :)

No need to be sorry dear 😆

Thanku so much 🤗

Actually your idea is really nice, I can write this series as mishti's diary 🤔

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhika.gunti

Very beautiful vaishu... Gosh, there are so many brilliant writers in this forum... I am one of the silent reader... But this beautiful OS written by each of the writers are just so wonderful...and take us to our Mishbir wonderland... Just loved it...pls continue... 👍🏼

I am really glad you commented dear

Thanku so much 🤗

I will surely continue

Glad you enjoyed

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vssdp

No need to be sorry dear 😆

Thanku so much 🤗

Actually your idea is really nice, I can write this series as mishti's diary 🤔

Yeah Mishti's diary is a good idea! Most of the times we read Abir's perspective only or both Mishbir. However, keeping this one solely to Mish willbe interesting!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Vaishu🤗🤗

Take a Bow dear.. How very well written👏....I am a sucker for MishBir passion..n you have a beautiful story🤗... Pls continue😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please update this story. It’s awesome!! Looking forward to the next part :)

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