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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

I really like you're ff

Amazing story and well written

Waiting for the next part

Hope you will update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: bb14

I really like you're ff

Amazing story and well written

Waiting for the next part

Hope you will update soon

Thank u so much yaara🤗

Am so happy u liked it ❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

apu ka poora shareer venom se bar gaya hai

only one she fears is mallu think

yep cut it mera ashirwad tere saath hai🤣

jo agya good girl 🤣

I wish ur ff atleast will show appu her place by Mallu

waise next ud kab aaygea

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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

next ud kab milega

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Posted: 6 years ago
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patha nahi

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i mean know wat am gonna write but i get this zone tho type kar pawoon

but it will be soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

patha nahi

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i mean know wat am gonna write but i get this zone tho type kar pawoon

but it will be soon

tere kya hoga

Mallu ka tashan de KBM epi ka n khud ko jaga n likh le 🤣 nehi toh watch rain n Coffin epi

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Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

tere kya hoga

Mallu ka tashan de KBM epi ka n khud ko jaga n likh le 🤣 nehi toh watch rain n Coffin epi

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome work nishu

Update soon

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Awesome work nishu

Update soon

Thank u simmi🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part- 4



life had given many moments that kalyani would never forget in her life.



the stunned faces of the family was definitely one of them as she stood with sindhoor in her maang and holy thread around her neck and most importantly malharji's hand in hers in front of them.


she was too stunned to even form coherent thoughts but even with tears streaming , in the back of her head she knew the look on their faces would have made her laugh in satisfaction if the circumstances were different.


but it was not.. and she didn't know how to deal with it.


the carefree , fun loving girl was trying to hold on to something but her mind refused to work.


anupriya pushed away aao saheb's hand as she rushed to kalyani, trying to pull her away from malhar who just tighetened his grip.


"tumne yeh kya kar diya hai malhar...woh bas ek bacchi hai..." she cried trying again to free her daughter's hand.


"aacha? bacchi hai..? jab uske charitra par ithne sawwal utaye gaye tab bacchi nahi thi kya yeh? jab usse atharv ke saath shaadi karne ke liye majboor kar rahe teh toh bacchi nahi thi kya yeh? jab sampada ki kidnapping ka sach chupane ka nirnay liya aur usse akele dhoondne beja tab bacchi nahi thi kya yeh...jab atharv iske saath ithna bura barthaaw kar raha tha tab bacchi nahi thi kya yeh aap logo le liye.....ab jab mere saaath kadi hai tab hi yeh aap ko bacchi lag rahi hai."


" malhar..." aao saheb started.


"bas!" he said cutting her off and pulled kalyani along with him as he walked to his room.


he closed the door with a bang almost scaring everyone around.


anupriya fell on bappa's feet not knowing what else to do.


kalyani was stunned once again as she stood near the bed watching as malhar slid along the closed door and sat on the floor with a thud,his arms going around himself as if trying to shield himself from everything around him.


he was finding it hard to breath with darkness threatening to consume him. the events of past couple of days finally catching up to him.


just a week before he was in seventh heaven expecting the arrival of his baby with love of his life or whom he thought was and now he was sitting here lost with an innocent girl who was forced to carry the burden of his choices.


"malharji....aap theek tho hai na.." kalyani asked in concern as she saw him taking laud gasps.


malhar laughed aloud almost scaring an already worried kalyani.


"teek? tum pooch rahi ho mein theek hoon..meine kuch hi der pehle tumare saath phere leke tumhari khushiyan...sapne aur zindagi barbad ki hai ....aur tum pooch rahi ho mein theek hoon?"


kalyani stood stunned as tears streamed from malhar's eyes.


"mein ek bathar insaan hoon..isliye hi shayad sab mujhe chodu ke chale jaathe hai..pehle baba ..phir ayi...ab sampada.....arey jo apne gusse mein kisi ki zindagi ujaad saktha hai woh kisi ke layak kaise ho saktha hai...."


"malharji..."


"tumhe maloom hai kalyani...mein bikul akela mehsoos kar tha jab sampada meri zindagi mein aayi aur uske saath mujhe ek naya parivar bhi mil gaya tha. mein ithna kush tha ki finally...finally mere paas bhi ek parivar hai jo mujhse pyaar kartha hai....lekin mein hoon hi aisa ki khushiyan mujhe dek ke baag jaathi hai. khud ki kya kisi aur ki khusiyaan bhi baag jaathi hai...mein uthna bura hoon."


kalyani stood shocked hearing his words.


malhar was always a larger than life person for her. the one she respected most. the way he behaved with his wife and family was something she had always watched with wonder and to see that headstrong man breaking down like this was too hard for her to see.


he was the one who supported her always. he gave her a place in his home when her own family disowned her. he made her realize everything happening around her when she herself was lost in darkness. he had even performed pooja on madhuri's terhwi ignoring protests from his family.


he always treated her with respect when every one around her considered her naajayaz.


it was another thing that she was slightly scared ....well very scared of him and couldn't even utter a coherent sentence around him with nervousness but she couldn't deny that he was a good man.


and that man..that good man did not deserve this.


"malharji...aap kya kah rahe hai..aap bure kaise ho sakthe hai...."


"sach hi toh hai..warna sab mujhe chodke kyun jathe hai...bolo kalyani..bolo."


and at that very moment she saw malhar as a reflection of her aayi who had spent eighteen years perhaps blaming herself for atul's betrayal.


she sat down with an audible thud realizing that this was just history repeating itself and the only difference being that malhar had her, unintentionally or not but he had her by his side when anupriya had none.


she realized that she was witnessing the pain and sufferings of her own aayi through malhar.


she had seen how anupriya was lost in darkness for such a long time feeling utterly helpless. how could she let that happen to another good soul.


"aap bure nahi hai malharji...aap bure nahi hai! bure toh woh log hai jinhone aapko iss mukaam par laya ki aap khud ko blame kar rahe hai. aaap jaanthe hai na mere papa aur madhuri ne bhi aayi ke saath yehi kiya tha. toh aap kehna chahthe hai ki uske liye aayi zimmedar hai?"


"kalyani..."malhar looked into her tear filled eyes.


"malharji galth sampada aur atharv hai...jinhone aap ko iss tarah dhoka diya...galth aao saheb hai jinhone aapko yeh kadam utane pe mazboor kiya....galat toh woh sab hai jo dekthe rahe jab hum sabke saath ithna bura ho raha tha...."


"kalyani.... meine tumari zindagi tabah kar di...tumhe uff tak bolne ka mauka nahi diya....woh rasme ..phere....yeh sab kisi ki zindagi banane ke liye hote hai na....unnn rasmo ka kya matlab jo tumhe zindagi bar dukh dhe ...mein tumhe mere saath iss narak mein kaise baandh liya.....kalyani"


kalyani had enough. she knew that circumstances were never in her favor. but she just couldn't let malhar fall into the same darkness that her ayi once fell into.


nothing was going the way she had planned but that doesn't mean that she was going to give up.


malharji needed her and so did his son, it was as simple as that and the fact that her aayi had gone through same experience because of her was making her more determined in her decision to not give up.


she was going to fight...against the darkness..against her own people who betrayed her..who destroyed malhar, destroyed ayi she was going to..fight for herself , for her aayi and for malharji.


it was going to be a tough journey but kalyani was not a quitter and neither would she let malhar ji give up so easily.


"bas kijiye malhar ji bas...aap bhale hi aaise soch rahe hai..par mein ek aisi aurat ki baiti hoon jo inn rasmon ko ithna maanthi hai ki jisne atarah saal se apni zindagi ko kora kagaz rahne diya inke katir. unhone akele apni shaadi shuda zindagi bitayi jab unka pati kahin aur khush rah rahatha. mere papa bale hi inn rasmo ki kadar nahi karthe ho par mein aayi ki baiti hoon...mein innko maanthi hoon...na chahe ya chahe hum ek bandan mein band chuke hai aur usse aise tukra kar mein unki ninda nahi karoongi...."


"kalyani.."


"aap aise give up nahi kar sakthe malhar ji....aur yeh kya aap zindi ujaadne ki baath kar rahe hai...aap kya socthe hai aao saheb meri zindagi saawaregi after all this...arey woh toh ujaadke hi dum legi..aur aap acp malhar rane hai....aap auragbad ke singham hai....apse bhi accha pati kisi ko kahan se mil saktha hai...bale hi humari situation normal nahi par mein jaanthi hoon ki aapse zyada mujhe safe aur koyi nahi rakh saktha..aap ko meri fikar hai toh ..apko aise lost nahi rahna hai..... inn logo ke karan. aapka toh khoon khawlna chahiye inke liye...sampada atharv ko jeethne math dijiye malharji..... aur yeh aao saheb jo apne matlab, apne samman ke liye har kisi ke zindagi se kilwad kar rahi hai unhe jeetne math dijiye.....apne liye na sahi apne bete ke liye kijiye...aayi ke liye kijiye....aapko meri kadar hai toh mere liye kijiye...."


"kalyani..."


"aap haar nahi maanege...aap jiyenge...woh sab karenge jo aap karna chahthe hai...meri aayi ki zindagi tabah kar dhi thi inn logo ne...aaapka tabah hone nahi doongi mein...chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye...mein bas isme aap ka saath maang rahi hoon malharji...khud ko hara kar mujhe math harayiye malharji.....please pillu ke liye please...aap chahthe hai na ki meri zindagi na ujade aapke karan..toh saath dijiye mera...unn sab se ladne ki jo aapke, mere, pillu aur aayi ke zindagi ke saath iss tarah kilwaad kar rahe hai...."


malhar suddenly stood up and walked to the courtyard. he walked to the bucket of water kept there and poured the entire content on himself . he then turned to see the whole family looking at him with wide eyes.


they were too astonished to utter a word.


he walked back in the same wet state surprising every one further.


kalyani stood wide eyed as he walked into the room all wet , water dripping everywhere.


"kalyani....change kar lo...tumhare pillu ko lana hai..."



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Edited by lavender_mist - 5 years ago

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