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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hey guys here I am with the teaser of Part 2 of my FF..

I am thankful to each and everyone for liking and appreciating  my story...

Happy reading..

Teaser Part 2 :


Hearing Malhar shouting on Aparna everyone from the Deshmukh family gathered near the LOC.


They got the fact that Aparna has done something wrong that is why Malhar is angry on her and ousting her from his house. Everyone was curious that what has happened.


After Malhar is done with Aparna aao saheb asked him the reason of his anger. 


He told her about what Aparna has done to Moksh and blamed Kalyani.


Anupriya was a mute spectator of all these happenings. Her eyes were searching Kalyani.


Aao saheb has seen her and asked Malhar.


AS - Malhar, Kalyani kahaan hai?


Malhar’s eyes dropped and he was looking down because he has no answer for that question.


———————-—Thank you—————————


P.S - Thank you all for your patience..

N sorry to all for posting late due to some life ke lafde.. ( normally everyone has something or the other 😂)

Keep showering your love guys..🤗

I love you all ❤️

Update will be there soon.

awesome teaser di ....... 😍😍

Jldi update krna di .....jldi means bhut jldi 😁😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: rammehra103

awesome teaser di ....... 😍😍

Jldi update krna di .....jldi means bhut jldi 😁😁

Thank you dear.😁😊

Yup update will be there soon.

I have a test 😅🤓 so gonna study (😒😭😭😭) n after that I will definitely update. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Awesome teaser di

Waiting for the update 

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#54

Eagerly waiting for the update 

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#55

Wow Di awesome teaser

Can't wait for the update jaldi update Karo nah

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Wow darshi... Awesome teaser... Jaldi update karna pls... 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

aapne hume appu ka teaser diya🤣

koyi nahi i will wait

aur yeh AS asking him abt kallu, uski patni hai inhe kya

waise toh pyaar bhi nahi karthi

waiting....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Hello everyone. I am back with part 2 of my FF on our beloved KalMa.

So before you all guys read..

Please Note: 

Please do not compare it with any part or track of the series as it has nothing to do with it. 

All the characters only have their character traits same as series.

It is a total fiction work. (of my brain 😂.)

Here in my story Aao Saheb (AS) is completely sane , good and positive (she has not lost her brains like she has in the series 😡)

Please ignore if there are any typos or grammatical errors..

So here you go guys..

Happy reading..😊


Part 2 -


Hearing Malhar shouting on Aparna everyone from the Deshmukh family gathered near the LOC.


They got the fact that Aparna has done something wrong that is why Malhar is angry on her and ousting her from his house. Everyone was curious that what has happened.


After Malhar is done with Aparna aao saheb asked him the reason of his anger. 


He told her about what Aparna has done to Moksh and blamed Kalyani.


Anupriya was a mute spectator of all these happenings. Her eyes were searching Kalyani.


Aao saheb has seen her and asked Malhar.


AS - Malhar, Kalyani kahaan hai?


Malhar’s eyes dropped and he was looking down because he has no answer for that question.


Anupriya asked him again.


Anupriya - Malhar, Kalyani aaj college bhi nahi aayi aur phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi. Tumne bhi mujhe call kiya tha uske baare mein puchhne ke liye. Kalyani kahan hai, Malhar?


Hearing this pain has filled in Malhar’s eyes.


Malhar - Kalyani, mujhe aur Moksh ko chhodkar kahin chali gayi hai maai..


Hearing this every one get shocked. Anupriya couldn’t believe her ears even Aao saheb couldn’t believe what she has heard.


Anupriya (shockingly) - Kya? Kaise? Kab? Kahaan gayi meri bacchi Malhar?


AS (worriedly) - Parmeshwara..Malhar yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Kalyani ghar chhod ke chali gayi?? Kya matlab hai iss baat ka??  Malhar tum saaf saaf kaho kya hua ki Kalyani iss tarah kisi ko bina bataaye chali gai??


Malhar has explained everything which happened earlier in the day.


Anupriya - Yeh tumne acchha nahi kiya Malhar. Woh tumhari kahi har baat maanti (obey) rahi. Tumhari kadvahat (bitterness) aur tumhare gusse ko bardaasht (tolerate) karti rahi.

She continues 

Anupriya - Kyunki woh tumhari bahot izzat (respect) karti hai. Woh jaanti hai ki tum dil se ek acchhe insaan ho. Phir bhi tum use samajh kyun nahi paaye Malhar ? Yeh kyun nahi samajh paaye ki woh Pillu ke saath aisa kuch kabhi nahi kar sakti.


AS (with tears in her eyes)- Anupriya tum sambhalo apne aap ko.


Anupriya - Kaise sambhalu main apne aapko Aao saheb? Meri bacchi ghar chhod ke chali gai.. Kalyaniiiii.....


She fell on her knees and started sobbing, covering her mouth with her saree pallu.


Hearing his maai Malhar breaks down, for the first time in his life he breaks down in front of everyone in the family.


Malhar - Kya karu main maai? Uss waqt main apni meeting aur Moksh ki salaamati (well-being) ko lekar itna tension mein tha ki mujhe gussa aa gaya tha Kalyani par aur mujhe khud kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main kya bol raha tha. Par Kalyani toh jaanti hai aur samajhti hai na maai mere gusse ko.. Mere mann mein aisa kuch nahi tha. Phir kyun?


Woh Moksh se itna pyaar karti hai, woh use aur mujhe aise chhodkar kaise jaa sakti hai?


He composed himself. Wiped his face.


Malhar - Nahi, nahi woh aise nahi jaa sakti hum dono ko chhodkar. Aap chinta mat kijiye maai, main vaada(promise) karta hoon aapse main Kalyani ko dhundh ke rahunga aur use ghar vaapas laa kar rahunga. Chaahe kuch bhi ho.


Aparna was going to the Deshmukh side of the house when aao saheb stopped her.


AS- Ab yahaan kya lene aayi ho?


Aparna - Aao saheb main yahaan nahi to kahaan jaaungi?


AS - Humein kya pata kahaan jaaogi...?? Kalyani ke baare mein kabhi socha ki wo kahan jaayegi agar Malhar ne usko ghar se nikal diya toh?

With moist in her eyes she continues:

AS -  Uss bacchi ke jeevan (life) mein aur hai hi kaun hum sab ke alawa? Humne use kabhi apna nahi maana tha par itni nafrat (hate) aur pareshaaniya (troubles) uthane ke bawajood (despite) usne hum sabko apna parivaar (family) maana. Galti kya thi uss bacchi ki? Jo aaj tumhari wajah se ghar chhod ke chali gayi.


Aparna - Aau saheb mujhe nahi pata tha ki Kalyani iss tarah ghar chhod ke chali jaayegi.


Aao Saheb gave reply to Aparna in stern and angry voice.


AS - Aparna vaivaahik jeevan (married life) itna aasaan (easy) nahi hota ke bas ek ghar se niklo aur dusre ghar mein jaake aaraam farmaao (enjoy resting)...

AS (continues) - Aaj ki tareekh (date) mein bhi aisi ladkiyaan hoti hain jinko maayke (parent’s home) mein rehne ko nahi milta, kyunki unke liye apne pati ka ghar hi sab kuch hota hai. 

AS (with moist eyes) - Humne Kalyani ki parvarish (bringing up) toh nahi ki lekin woh hoo-ba-hoo (same to same) waisi ladki hai jaisi main chaahti thi ki humare ghar ki beti ho, jo tum aur Sampada kabhi nahi ban paaye. 

Ghin (scorn/dispite) aa rahi hai humko tumhari harkaton (deeds) par.


Aparna falls on AS's feet and pleaded.

Aparna - Mujhe maaf kar deejiye Aau Saaheb, mujhse bohot badi bhool ho gayi. Maine socha hi nahi ke Kalyani kahaan jaayegi... Aau saheb main aapse binti (request) karti hoon ke aap bhi mujhe ghar se mat nikaliye... Aap mujhe jo saza dengi, woh mujhe Manzoor (accept) hogi. Bas mujhe yahaan se mat nikaliye.


AS -  Poornaviraam. Tum iss ghar mein rahogi lekin humari kuch shartein (terms and conditions) hai.. Ghar ka saara kaam tumhe karna padega safai, khana pakana, kapde dhona saara kaam. Aur Tumhe yahaan aangan/baramde (verandah/porch) mein sona padega.. Aur tumhe khana bhi bina ghee aur tel (oil) ke milega.. Agar yeh sab manzoor hai tabhi tum iss ghar mein reh sakti ho..


Aparna had no choice but to accept all terms and conditions made by Aao saheb. She nodded her head and agreed to them.


Aparna - Ji Aao saheb, jaisa aap kahe.


AS - Aur suno apna samaan (baggage) uthao aur kaarkhane mein jaa ke rakh do.. Ab se tum kaarkhane(workshop) mein bhi kaam karogi aur uski saari safaai ka zimma tumhara hai.  Yaad rahe agar koi bhi chuk (mistake) hui toh iss ghar ke darwaze tumhare liye humesha ke liye bandh ho jaayenge..

Aparna - Ji, Aao saheb.


AS - Abhi apna saaman uthao aur kaarkhane (workshop) mein rakh do. aur aaj baahar hi rehna out-house mein.Iss waqt hum tumhari shakal (face) dekhna nahi chaahte.


Aparna took her belongings and moved towards outhouse.


Malhar was determined to find his Kalyani. He went back to his room to check on Moksh.

Anupriya was inconsolable so Aao saheb has taken her from there inside their room.


AS - Shaant ho jaao Anupriya. Aur himmat rakho, Kalyani mil jaayegi aur Malhar use wapas le kar bhi aayega.


Anupriya - Kaise shaant ho jaaun main Aao saheb? Maa hoon main uski aur Bacchi hai woh meri. Kahaan hogi, kis haal main hogi?? Mujhe uski bahut chinta ho rahi hai.. 


Hey Ganpati bappa, meri bacchi ki raksha (protection) karna.


AS - Chinta mat karo Anupriya. Hum abhi aur kya kar sakte hai prarthana (prayer) ke siva. Hum sab bappa se prarthana karenge ki Kalyani jald hi mil jaaye. Aise rone se to woh nahi mil jaayegi na. Isiliye shaant ho jaao aur sambhalo apne aap ko. Bappa humari Kalyani ko jald se jald ghar wapas bhejenge.


With tears in her eyes Aao saheb prayed for Kalyani‘s well being.

AS - Hey bappa humari Kalyani ki raksha karna.


AS - Anupriya abhi shaant ho jao aur jab tak Kalyani wapas nahi aa jati tab tak Moksh ka khayaal (take care) rakhna humari zimmedari (responsibility) hai. Arey iss ghar ka baccha hai woh. Malhar akela use kaise sambhal paayega?


Anupriya - Haan Aao saheb aap thik keh rahi hai. Moksh ko sambhalna akele Malhar ke bas ka nahi hai.. Pata nahi Pillu Kalyani ke bina kaise rahega..


AS - Tum chinta mat karo Anupriya hum sab hai naah.. Sab milke usko sambhalenge Malhar ki madad (help) bhi ho jaayegi. Aur woh bina Moksh ki chinta kiye Kalyani ko dhundh (search) paayega..


Anupriya - Sahi kaha aapne Aao saheb. Is waqt Malhar aur Moksh dono ko humari zaroorat (need) hai. Bas mujhe Kalyani ki chinta ho rahi hai.Aise koi bina bataaye ghar chhod ke jaata hai kya bhala? Hey Ganpati bappa meri bacchi jald se jald mil jaaye..


In Malhar’s bedroom. Malhar was pacing around n keeping himself calm.


Malhar - Aise kaise maine bina kuch soche samjhe kalyani ko itna kuch keh diya ki woh ghar chhod ke chali gayi.. Mujhe apne gusse par kaabu (control) rakhna chaahiye tha.

Par ab kya karu.? Kaise dhundhunga (find) main use? Aur Kahaan dhundhu use? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.


He thought in his mind

Malhar - Uske doston se baat karke dekhta hoon shaayad kisi ko pata ho ki woh kahaan hai ya shaayad apni kisi dost ke saath ho iss waqt.


Malhar took Kalyani’s phone and started calling her friends to ask her whereabouts.

He called all her friends but no one knew about where she was.


Malhar’s heart sank again. He got worried and bad thoughts started crossing in his mind.

Malhar - Kalyani ke saath kuch bura toh nahi hua? Kahin woh kisi musibat (trouble/problem) mein to nahi? Kahin uska accident, kidnap ya kuch aur?? Nahi nahi aisa kuch main hone nahi dunga. Mujhe kisi bhi haal mein use aaj ke aaj dhundna hoga.


Malhar calls his PS and asks his team to search for Kalyani.


Malhar - Hello Pawar, bus stand , taxi stand , hospitals, mandir har jagah dhundho Kalyani ka kahin se to pata chalega. Uski photo bhej raha hoon sab jagah puchh-taachh (inquiry) karo.


Pawar- Sir, humne har jagah apni team bhej di hai sir woh inquiry kar rahe hai.


Malhar - Mujhe har jagah ki CCTV footage bhejo. Aur iss area ke jitne bhi history sheeters hai ya mujrim (criminals) hai un sab ko lock up mein daalo aur puchhtachh karo. Aur apne informers ko bhi kaam pe laga do. Kisi bhi haal mein aaj Kalyani ka pata lagana padega.


Pawar- Ji sir.


Malhar cuts the call and started worrying again. Moksh has woken up now. And started crying. Malhar took him out of the crib and try to pacify him.


Malhar - Moksh, mera baccha, kya hua?? Bhukh lagi hai?? Dekh beta shaant ho jaa aaj teri aai mera matlab hai Kalyani ghar par nahi hai beta shaant ho ja. 


While pacifying Moksh tears started rolling down from Malhar’s eyes too. 

Malhar - Moksh tere baba hai na yahaan pe shaant ho ja beta. Abhi tumhare liye dudh (milk) leke aate hai. Shaant ho ja beta.


Malhar went out of the room and asked Anupriya to take care of Moksh and he went to warm his milk in the kitchen.

Malhar - Kahaan hai patila (vessel) ?? Kahaan rakha hoga Kalyani ne?? 

He shouted- Kalyani, patila kahaan hai??and struck with the reality that she was not around.


He found the vassel and warm the milk for Moksh doing so he burnt his finger. He got lost in the thoughts of Kalyani that how she was able to manage all.?


House hold chores as well taking care of Moksh and her college studies. And he doubted on her ability.


Thinking that he over heated the milk and milk spilled all over the kitchen platform, and while stopping it Malhar dropped the vassel on the floor spilling rest of the milk.


Hearing noise in the kitchen Aao Saheb entered the kitchen with Anupriya to see what happened.


AS - Yeh kya ho raha hai Malhar?? Pura rasoighar (kitchen) tumne sar pe utha rakha hai.. Sara dudh tumne gira diya aur pura rasoi ghar ganda (messy) kar diya..Ab Moksh ko dudh kaise pilaoge?


Malhar - Galti se ho gaya Aao Saheb mera dhyaan (attention) hi nahi raha.


AS - Moksh kabse ro raha hai Malhar use bhukh lagi hai.


Malhar - Main abhi sab saaf kar deta hoon Aao Saheb. Aur Moksh ke liye dusra dudh garam kar deta hoon.


Anupriya - Rehne dijiye na Aao saheb, Malhar main sab kar dungi, tum Moksh ko kuch der sambhalo.


Anu started heating milk then filled Moksh’s feeder and gave it to Malhar to feed Moksh. She cleaned the kitchen and Cooked food for everyone.


Malhar started feeding Moksh but he was not drinking milk properly as he wants to have feed from his lovely aai Kalyani’s hands. He drank a little milk and again started crying.. Every one was worried for Moksh that how he will stay without Kalyani until she was found.


Malhar - Moksh beta pi le thoda sa dudh to pi le.. Aaj teri aai nahi hai to baba ke haath se pi le.. while saying this tears started rolling from his eyes.


Malhar - Tu hi bata Moksh kahaan dhundhu main Kalyani ko? Kahaan gayi hogi woh? 


Anupriya - Malhar sambhalo apne aap ko aur tum Pillu ko mujhe de do aur kuch kha lo.


Moksh was still little cranky but he likes to stay with his loving nani, Kalyani’s aai Anupriya so he stopped crying.


Malhar - Mujhe bhukh nahi hai maai, aur maai Kalyani ne khana khaya hoga ki nahi.? Mujhe Kalyani ki fikar (worry) khaye jaa rahi hai..


Anupriya - Fikar karne se ya bhukha rahene se Kalyani mil to nahi jaayegi na Malhar. Isi liye keh rahi hoon kuch kha lo.

Aisa kehte hai ki bhukhe pet toh bhajan bhi nahi hota, toh phir Kalyani ko dhudhne ka kaam kaise hoga?

Aur tumhe pata hai naah ki Kalyani ko bhukh bardasht (tolerate) nahi hoti to shaayad usne kuch na kuch intezaam (manage) kar liya hoga.

Khana kha lo aur shaant mann se socho ke woh kahaan ja sakti hai.


Malhar - Shaayad aap thik keh rahi hai maai.


Malhar had food and Anupriya was trying to make Moksh sleep. But he was not sleeping, as he desperately needs his aai Kalyani with him.


Malhar - Maai, mujhe Moksh ki bhi bahut chinta ho rahi hai ki woh agar zyada roya (cries) toh use saans lene mein taklif (breathing problem) hogi aur agar Kalyani jaldi nahi mili toh kya hoga?


Anupriya consoles Malhar 


Anupriya - Chinta mat karo Malhar Kalyani jaldi mil jaayegi.


While they were talking. Malhar's uncle Saarthak has arrived to AN.


Saarthak - Malhar kahaan ho tum?


Malhar - Kaka aap yahaan?


AS - Acchha kiya Saarthak ki tum aaye.


Saarthak - Ji, Namaste aao saheb. Malhar, woh aaj Kalyani college nahi aayi thi,uski tabiyat toh thik hai naah? Anupriya ji se bhi puchh nahi paaya.  Toh socha tum se aur Kalyani se mil leta hoon.


Malhar - Ji ,kaka Kalyani ki tabiyat thik hai.


Saarthak - Aur yeh kya Malhar kabse main tumhe call karne ki koshish kar raha tha tumhara call busy aa raha tha.Na Kalyani apna phone utha rahi hai. Anupriya ji ko bhi maine call try kiya woh bhi nahi utha rahi thi.. Sab thik hai na? Malhar, Kalyani kahaan hai? 


Malhar - Woh kaka,woh..Kalyani woh..


Saarthak - Woh woh kya Malhar saaf saaf kaho.


Malhar explained everything to Sarthak kaka what happened that day and Kalyani left the house without telling anyone.


Saarthak - Kya? Yeh tumne kya kar diya Malhar? Malhar maine tumhe pehle bhi samjhaya tha ki Kalyani ek bahut hi pyaari aur samajhdar ladki hai tum uske saath thodi narmi se pesh (behave softly) aao. 


Malhar - Kya karu main kaka, uss waqt meri samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha tha aur yeh sab ho gaya. Aur dekhiye na kaka itni si baat ke liye koi ghar chhod ke chala jata hai kya?


And while saying so tears started rolling from his eyes again.


Malhar - Yeh sab sirf meri wajah se hua hai,kaka. Kalyani meri wajah se ghar chhod ke gayi hai.


Malhar started banging his fist in the wall when Sarthak kaka stops him and consoles him.


Saarthak - Shaant ho jao Malhar. Sambhalo apne aap ko aur iss waqt tumhe josh se nahi hosh se kaam lena hoga. Apne mann (mind) ko shaant karo aur shanti se socho ki Kalyani jaa kahaan sakti hai. Kisi dost ke ghar , Kisi rishtedaar  (relative) ke ghar..?


Malhar - Maine sab jagah call kiya kaka woh kahin nahi hai. Apni puri search team laga di hai maine use dhundhane ke liye.


Saarthak - Thik hai Malhar unhe apna kaam karne do.


Malhar - Kaka jab tak Kalyani ka pata nahi chal jata aap mere yahaan ruk jaaiye..


Saarthak - Par Malhar..


Malhar - Par Var kuch nahi Kaka. Main kuch nahi sun na chahta kaka , iss waqt mujhe aap sabke support ki zarurat hai.


Saarthak - Thik hai Malhar jaisa tum chaho. Bas apna dimaag shaant rakho Kalyani mil jaayegi aur hum sab use ghar waapas le aayenge.


Malhar was constantly in contact with his search team.


Malhar - Kya update hai Pawar? Kalyani ke bare mein koi khabar mili.?


Pawar- Informers kaam pe laga diye hai, sir. Jaise hi kuch pata chalta hai main turant (immediately) aapko jaankari (Information) deta hoon.


Malhar - Thik hai Pawar. Par jo karna hai jaldi karo zyada waqt nahi hai humare paas.


Pawar- Ji,sir. Jitna ho sake utna jaldi hum koshish kar rahe hai. Jai Hind sir.


Malhar - Jai Hind.


Malhar cuts the call. And again started worrying about Kalyani.


Moksh was getting cranky without his beloved aai Kalyani so everyone was trying their best to keep him calm and engaged in play.

Moksh was agitated and not sleeping so Malhar tried to pacify him but he was not sleeping..


Malhar - Moksh mera baccha so jaa thodi der, dekh tu soyega nahi toh baba Kalyani ko kaise dhundne jaayenge?


His phone rings so Saarthak kaka asked Malhar to give Moksh to him.


Saarthak - Lao Malhar Moksh ko mujhe do. Main sambhalta hoon kuch der Moksh ko.


Malhar - Kaka aap??


Saarthak - Haan kyun nahi?? Jab tum chhote the toh main hi to le kar ghumta tha tumhe har pal.


Saarthak took Moksh and started playing with him. After some time he started crying again.  Hearing him crying Anupriya intervened .


Anupriya - Arey Saarthak ji, laaiye mujhe dijiye. Shaayad use bhukh lagi hai aur neend bhi aa rahi hai. Main use sula deti hoon.


Saarthak - Ji ,Anupriya ji. 


Anupriya took Moksh in her arms and rocked him. He stopped crying. 


Malhar - Maai, aap Moksh ko apne kamre (room) mein sula dijiyega. Mujhe shaayad bahar jana pade Kalyani ki kuch khabar mile toh.


Anupriya - Tum chinta mat karo Malhar. Pillu hum sab ki zimmedari hai. Main use apne saath le jati hoon..


Anupriya took Moksh to her room feed him and make him sleep.

Anupriya was about to go out of her room to get Moksh’s blanket her phone vibrates.

Anupriya receives the call.

In the silence of her room she heard voice from the other end -

“Aai”


————————Thank You—————————

Thank you all of you for liking my story..😁😊

Hope you all will like this part too.

Do shower your love by lots of likes and comments..😍

I again thank each and everyone of you for keep on motivating me to continue.

Will post teaser of next part soon. 

Still I have to write so be patient with me guys (suffering from loss of creativity n writer’s block so having a brain freeze 🥶🤪😂😁)

(Kallu ke dimaag ki tarah mera bhi satak gaya hai..😂🤣)

Thank you all..

Love you all..🥰❤️😍

Darshi..😊

Edited by dusk2dawn - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

It was so beautiful.
This chapter has a perfect blend of emotions.
Malhar's repentance for what he did to Kalyani.
Moksha's longing for his mother.
I loved Aau Saheb here. 
The way she punished Aparna for her mistake instead of being her mother is admirable.
I wish that CVs showed her like this instead of making her villain of the series.
Ahilya Deshmukh is a powerful character and I admired her role during Atharva's return. 
Nowadays, she is just like those nagging aunties. I am not finding any difference in her and Pallavi.

Anyways, the story is progressing fantastically.

Please update the next part soon. Waiting, Waiting and Waiting

And please PM me when you update next

 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Amazing update darshi... Loved it....