KalMa FF - ‘ Zindagi,Ab Tum Hi Ho ‘ Part 5A page 36 (5/26) - Page 7

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Awesome awesome awesome awesome 🥳

Your updates is full of emotions

Update soon di

Wow such a long and full of emotions update. You expressed everybody's situation so well

Poor kalyani always suffers for mistakes she haven't done. Malhar now understand how rude he was with her.

As they say, you realize ones value when they leave you.

Awesome update di

Loved it

I like AS here

Hope mallu find kallu and also realize his feelings for her

Continue soon

Waiting

Amazing :)

Loved it

Update sooner :P

Originally posted by: InkAndFable

It was so beautiful.
This chapter has a perfect blend of emotions.
Malhar's repentance for what he did to Kalyani.
Moksha's longing for his mother.
I loved Aau Saheb here.
The way she punished Aparna for her mistake instead of being her mother is admirable.
I wish that CVs showed her like this instead of making her villain of the series.
Ahilya Deshmukh is a powerful character and I admired her role during Atharva's return.
Nowadays, she is just like those nagging aunties. I am not finding any difference in her and Pallavi.

Anyways, the story is progressing fantastically.

Please update the next part soon. Waiting, Waiting and Waiting

And please PM me when you update next

Thank you so much for loving it.😊

Yes Malhar need the repentance for his mistakes but we haven’t seen much of it in the series.

N it is true that Moksh is more attached to Kalyani than Malhar.

AS is a strong character. I totally agree with your points here she is authoritative but still loves justice for all. The way she has supported her DIL Anupriya so with Aparna too she has to be like that. But CVs had made her character like typical negative saas of ITV + 90s bollywood.. They should have developed it properly as there is a lot of scope in her character. I myself hate negativity so kept her positive in my story which she turned for very short time in the series when SamThu returned.

Thank you so much for appreciating and motivating me to keep going and writing more n I hope I won’t disappoint any of you.🤗

Will update the next part soon. N will PM for sure. Sorry to all I forgot to PM this time.

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: Puruuu

Amazing :)

Loved it

Update sooner :P

Thank you so much dear for loving it 🥰

Yes update will be there soon. Working on it. 😊

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Amazing update darshi... Loved it....

Thank you so much Sri for loving it..😁😊

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Wow Di awesome update

Loved it

Wah AS BHI Achi hai yaham

So malhar Ka team abhi tak dhoobd Nahi pata kallu ko

Kallu called her Aai I hope she doesn't get into any trouble

Please do continue soon

Hi Lina..

Thank you so much for loving it.

Yup AS acchhi hai yahaan par total positive n pyaari dadi not like serial ki aghori amma or naagin types..😂

@ bold for that you have to wait until the next part..all the story will be unfolded soon.😁

Update will be there soon I am working on it.😊😁

Originally posted by: rammehra103

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Awesome awesome awesome awesome 🥳

Your updates is full of emotions

Update soon di

Thank you so much dear for loving and appreciating it.😊🥰

I love to portray real emotions that connects well and I am inspired by all the other writers here on the forum.😊

Update will be there soon I’m working on it..😊

Originally posted by: asmitasb

Wow such a long and full of emotions update. You expressed everybody's situation so well

Poor kalyani always suffers for mistakes she haven't done. Malhar now understand how rude he was with her.

As they say, you realize ones value when they leave you.

Hi Asmita.

Thank you so much dear for appreciating.😊

I second you on the situation and equation of Malhar and Kalyani.

And indeed it is the bitter truth that you realize the value or worth of the thing or a person when you lose it.

Thank you again for liking it.😊