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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

Thanks Ganga for this 🙈🙈🙈

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omgggg u made my day sumi dear 😍😍😍😍😍 you raised the temperature..

I am absolutely speechless

Too hot sexy romantic sizzling update 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🔥🔥🔥🔥uffffffff I'm already sweating. Blissful moments😍😍😍😍😍dressing table scene and Raghav describing Chakor's beauty chakor shy 😍 naughty rowdy n sexy birdie boldness ufff ohhh godddddd🙈🙈🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Thanks for sizzling hot update 🤗🤗😘😘 Ur fantastic writer 👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏..keep writing dear 🤗🤗🤗 we want more 🔥🔥🔥 updates 😋😋😋😜🙈

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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Kavi.Gollapudi

Oh my ghosh!!!!

I can't just get enough of it...

A big big thanks sumi Dii😘😘😘

Hayeee...mesmerizing no no mind-blowing,

No no actually no words 2 say...even the best word will b small 2 describe this fabulous,fantastic hot hot update 🤪🙈🙈🙈🙈

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I'm dead sumi di 😘🙈...keep writing more n more tantanaatannnn updates heheheh 😂😂😂😂

Once again thank so much 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so much Kavi...

Feeling overwhelmed 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

A dynamite update sumi dear🔥🔥🔥❤❤❤❤ superrrrrrr

....Hats off to you for coming up with such unique ideas...... this entire bar journey is just fantafab👏👏👏👏

The prologue to this part was also superb..... the pre party titbit, the party, the AIR non stop, the kitchen tactics all were 🥰🥰🥰

And what can I say about the stirrer and his whiskey!!!! One after the other dhamaka....from the black grapes to the tequila to the lager beer to the wild berry cocktail to the champagne filled tall flute glasses to the inverted margherita wine glasses with the honey dipped blue berries🙈🙈🙈, the gin and red wine glasses🔥🔥🔥 THE GLENFIDDICH is 🔥🔥🥰🥰🙈🙈

The Greek God is indeed smart... delayed the kids 😜😜 the Roman sculptures need to have their second round too na🙈

Yesssss all is fair in love and war and we want this love to linger.... so pleaseeeee KEEP WRITING!

Yayay 💃💃💃💃 i got that word from my bossy

Thanks so much nikki for the lovely words and the precise

😜😜😜Greek God 🙈🙈 ensures he makes the most when opportunity strikes 😉 second round 🙈🙈

Unique 🙏🤗🤗🤗 Thanks all your encouragement

Loads of love

Writtng well you know me way too better than me myself

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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

Thanks Smita so so much

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Part 5:

Wowww, no words Sumi, it was an extremely 🔥🔥 update, indeed breathtaking. It was very hectic day for me but reading this update now I feel so refreshing. Really your story removes my fatigue. You raised the temperature high, the weather has become so fervid.

Poor Raghav, his longing for just a kiss, but again failed to get his desired one 😞😞. It seems everyone was against him, especially his little rival....😜😜😁😁 But never be worried as we know patience is bitter but it's outcome is sweet😍😍. Raghav is not the exception.

I can understand his bothering to go to such cocktail party, he feels awkward as he is so simple & rustic, always like to live a simple & low profile lifestyle.

Their dressing up scene was so blissful, Chakor's shyness, Raghav's naughtiness was so delightful 😍😍. The kitchen scene, cooking khichdi & it's great to read the reason behind Raghav's learning to cook. He is such a nice husband & a wonderful father & you made him so demandable too. And their private cocktail party was totally smoking hot 🔥 🔥🔥🔥🙈🙈 I loved & enjoyed each & every bit of it right from the mirror scene to the last part of their sublime in each other, though feeling shy & blushing🙈🙈 during reading. And the question of Raghav whether he is the right person for her & loved her reply👌👌. Indeed both are so adorable & made for each other. And this time God have blessed them, so mausi & the foursome leave them alone to make the night so memorable😝😝. Let them sublime with each other & I'm going to be submerge to their blissful dreams😍😍.

Sumi you gave us so many hot & bold Ragkor scenes but you have the proficiency to make all the scenes different from the previous. Your excellent writing skills have diversified it 👏👏. Over all a fantastic & great story whose starting was quite disturbing but the end is joyful & pleasurable as always👏👏.

Ops , again a long feedback, but now you know me na, when I don't have any word, yet I write a long one. But I couldn't control to write. Thank you for giving us the solace🙏🙏.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Benevolence – Big Heart – a mini bonus

(a mini bonus- why….. I did not realize but a little tweetheart told me Di you always end your stories with Ragkor blissfullness,completing with happy family moments but why not this time… Well I did message her saying, I waited but fell asleep, as they had their own minds, but hmm a happy family together yes I too love them so thought to pen a little one. I was overwhelmed when she said Di with happy family we also happily relish and wait till you write next. Well about writing next I don’t know but thought a mini one)

Here we go

Daaba ka Jilebi with Hawt milk 😉 (a mini tantantaan)

After the loooong love making of sipping and enjoying the whiskey the stirrer and the whiskey ooppppsssss RagKor slept in each others embrace…. It was a long night with lust taking over and making over their longingness….

She got up to wash herself when she looked around but could not find her robe, she smiled thinking of the blissful night and remembered she was in the lehenga which was strewn somewhere in the corner of the room. She was lazy to take the robe from the cupboard that she wore his sheer shirt which was thrown on the side table. She loves his shirt and wearing it after he wearing was making her blush as his fragrance was there. She looked at him,eyes closed legs straight turned to her side.. He looked so contended as it was a blissful night well night into the wee hours of the day!!! She carelessy buttoned the sheer shirt and washed herself and came back to get into the quilt as his hands were searching for her with his eyes closed. She smiled.

Just the shirt and she went into him under the quilt, he hugged her close saying I Love You my Queen, don’t leave me and go with his eyes closed in to her ears and slept.

It was around the dawn that he got up and not to disturb her went to refresh, searched for his shirt but could not find it, just wrapped his towel refreshed and came into the quilt to continue his sleep.

He lifted the quilt to go in only to get mezmerised at the painting there on the bed with her hair splayed across her face, lips swollen terribly but parted with his sheer shirt just with one button up, only up to her thighs, her right leg was straight while her left was bent…her right hand above her head, her assets were revealing under the sheer with partly opened. He had seen her plain but seeing her in the sheer which was covered but still not was just igniting his natural instinct…. She was breathing beautifully…. He was lost in that painting beside which was just bare below his shirt….

He did not want to trouble as he had indeed turned her according to his wants through the night…… he just lost himself in the beauty which was extremely seductive… just drinking her beauty his naughty had his own mind and was throbbing, his towel slid down and he very slowly went in beside her, slowly laid beside her and was just looking at her, slowly kissed her lips not to disturb as he felt he would hurt her….

A very soft butterfly kiss but his breath on her made her wake up with a smile to see the handsome face just a mm away from her….his eyes was just loving her, just admiring her. He just said I love you…. She smiled and bringing her right hand around his neck, said whaatttt??? He said you look too sexy baby in my sheer shirt…blushing, she said I love your shirt… a light peck on his lips.

He just cupped her face and placed soft kisses just saying non stop I love you dear, I just love you, love you… continuously… kissed her all over her face just softly saying I love you. She was surprised and at the same time he was beside her but she felt he had aroused and hardened and grown fully which was throbbing side of her thighs. He was very carefully kissing her rose bud….. was scared to even turn and hug her tight as felt he would hurt her.

She held his head… Raaghav I love you… why are you holding yourself…. He said sorry I just cannot hurt….. when she just went over him kissing him hard on his lips….. I am yours anytime and you are not hurting me she said. She just caressed his length and pushed herself beautifully on him, her wetness and moist made him slid through throbbing her walls and he moaned terribly which she was proud of … it was pure bliss and pleasure… Chaakooorrr, you must be tired he said but was going into the pleasure she brought about….She was slowly going on him with the rhythm which was making him go eclectic and she was too going into bliss into the unknown world of pleasure… he held her waist and slowly got up thus adjusting and making her sit on him hugging her and kissing her lips….. She kissed him while her hair was fully playing the seductive vibes on him. He did not touch any of her but was just kissing her lips and her neck as he saw his love bites on her assets and did not want to do more…..

She realized, felt proud of her man who was fully aroused,lusting but still was going soft on her, she asked him cupping his face, without slowing or breaking the rhythm… how do I look holding his head… he said, sexxxyy, seductive….too hawt anddddd and whattt …. Too horny baby in the sheer shirt…. Smiling at her… I love you he said… she said no you are not,he shrunk his brows you are not loving me as you always do she said… he smiled… sexxxyyyyy birdie…. He just unbuttoned her and took the toned assets fully into his mouth and caressed and kissed softly.. and very softly held the other… she moaned….. hmmmmm yessss now you do she moaned.. he brought her down preciously, not breaking the rhythm and reached for his packet as he knew he was way too powerful and did not want to risk nor make her go through more pain.

He throbbed with force, rammed into her with slow pace and very smoothingly as she was way too wet and moist…. She was going into reviere…. They both sublimed in the bliss made love in the most beautiful way and entered into the peak of pleasure calling each others name… that was bliss….

He came down on her side, turned and just cuddled her with him still within her.. I love you, both voiced together… sweetheart, sexybirdie thank you he said… she chupped him in her way…. He smiled softly sucking her…

Garlanding him she went near his ears and asked Rustic Rowdy what’s this….. He said wee hours daaba ka jilebi with hawt milk, kissing her lips and thank you cupping her face with so much adoration and love. Ohhh nice name my hawt Rustic Rowdy aahaaan my Sexy birdie… She just went into him while he calmed himself hugging her. They were in each other’s arms, sleep taking over…….

It does not require always an elaborate foreplay to infuse in each other as all it need is love pure love for they did not have s** but they made love in the most passionate way.… his love is unadulterated and her love for him is just un-explainable… she vowed within her heart not to deny herself to him any time.

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It was bright…. Crushing her eyes she woke looking up to the last night bar tender turned into a steward holding fresh juice and toast in a tray..smiling.. good afternoon wifey. Whaaaat ???? afternoon? The kids?, quickly covering herself….. have they come? Did they come here while I was sleeping… holding tight the quilt as she was cursing herself to sleep like a log that too with the sheer shirt??? God!!!

Why didn’t you wake me? Did the kids have anything…. Started off the Air…. Arey arey, you never stop till I ….he chupped her in his style…. Hmmmbuddaawhatareyoudoing. She pushed him uhhhh gasping… Raaghav,,,

Arey calm down… the kids will come only post noon after finishing their lunch. And mausi will come by evening.

She held her head, thank god, but how? Kaaka said he will bring them in the early morning…. He smiled winking…. Rowdy so you planned it…. Not realizing coming off the quilt and hitting him with the pillow. Pulling her close…pushing her strands…well I need my shirt now can you please…. or should I remove...Realizing her state she said…..pushing him… budda I will kill you if you come near me, covered herself with the quilt and ran to the wash…. Hey hey SB have your bfast. Smiling…. He received a message from Kaaka…. Please come to the Lodge with bitiya, kids are here he said.

Lodge?? Hmm ok… maybe Kaaka took them to the Lodge in the morning to his suite as it is very well refurbished and at its best with the open terrace view to the whole city being on the top most floor.

Chakooor,,,,, haaan coming….. Kaaka asked us to come to the Lodge. Kids are there… come… can’t wait to see them he said. Lodge???? ok

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Benevolance – Big Heart…

The Lodge, the abode of him when he missed and wanted his moments or when he had those drinks very rarely just to be with her memories…..But now the top floor has been very very modernized with private lift and open terrace view seeing the plantation along with the rows of the yellow bougainvillea.

Kaaka stayed in the plantation but goes to the Lodge during the weekends or sometimes with the kids after going around the city.

RagKor went to the top floor, daddyyyyyyy mummmaaaa ran the kids to the Lion…and eagle… hugging them my cubs, my princesses…. Muaaahhhhh they laughed giggling…getting on to his shoulders while the cubs were hugging him. They closed his eyes suddenly with a cloth…..dadddyyyyy…. Surprise they said… arey what….. both the cubs held his hands while Chakor was holding the roses….looking at her... Mumma shhhhh both cuties placing their tiny fingers on their lips, with eyes wide open… surprise…. Hehe he he

Where are you taking me he asked. Daddy wait…. They took him to the terrace….opened his eyes… tat ta taaaiiiin. Dadddyyyyyyy Surpriseeeee……

His eyes grew wide open in surprise….. tears rolling down incessantly…..he just fell on his knees hugging the cubs. The roses ran as the bros called them and hugged their Lion together all with their hands joined together. Chakor was in awe stood away allowing them to bind in their emotions.

Thank you…. Thank you kissing them he said…. He heard clapssss, turned back to see Girija Mausi, Raamu kaaka, Shyaam there behind along with Mohit and Renu with their princess.

The terrace was beautifully decorated with lights and colourful ribbons with a big board saying

To the most benovelant and Big Hearted daddy, Happy Fathers’s Day. We Love you Daddy, You are our Hero and you are the Best….

A caricature of Raaghav being kissed by the cubs and roses beautifully drawn in a Canvass….by Aayansh...

There was cake in the table in centre of the terrace… kaaka smiled he was proud of the boys…

It was the Fathers’ Day and the kids wanted to celebrate it and throw a surprise party to Raaghav but in private as he always preferred it simple and with his family…Kaaka planned with Arjun for the same.

It took sometime for the emotions to settle. Kissing them, I love you…thank you… but..

Arjun just hugged him and crushed his daddy… Raaghav was about to say… when Arjun said

Daddy please don’t say you have not done anything…. You have done everything, given your life for us, lived through all our troubles when we were young, never ever raised your voice, never failed to encourage us and thank you for always speaking about mumma’s life which made us understand how to live the life, Chakor teared, holding his hands… he smiled... his eyes spoke……nodding sideways which said I did not do anything …..

Daddy we love you loads for always supporting us and protecting us and still allowing us to fly high…

The roses could not understand much but both looked at their bros and came to him kissed him and said daddy we Lub you…. He cried and smiled,,,, awwwhh how much you love me he asked. Both broadened their shoulders,widening their tiny hands soooooooo much…. Awwwhh he just hugged them…I Love you too my princesses my lifeline…thank you for coming into my life he said. They took him along with Chakor and made him cut the cake…they fed him and he fed them... Mausi….you too?? Haan beta…. kids wanted me to come here so I told you that I will come in the evening. Ohhh RagKor was surprised. All planned hmmm. He sought blessings from Kaaka and Mausi… He wished Shyaam saying happy fathers day to you kaaka for being the guardian angel for me… They shared a warm hug… Jug Jugjio beta Kaaka blessed him.

Mohit and Renu walked in and wished him Bhaai, you set an example how a father, a husband should be and I am not sure if I could be like you but sure will try to be atleast half of you. He hugged Raaghav….

AA said uncle you can be a good father but not like our daddy as he is the BEST Daddy in the world.

It was a surprise but emotional moment… Raaghav went to Chakor… while the kids ran inside to watch their favourite cartoon show was up leaving the couple in the terrace.

Happy Father’s day Raaghav…. She cupped his cheeks… Indeed you are the best father one can have… Though you are my husband still you turned yourself and stepped into the shoes of a father and sometimes as a mother too to treat me like a kid during my rants, never failed to lift me when I was down, never failed to be behind me always to rest my head.. Chakooor he said…. You tooo don’t make me humble…. Noo Raaghav… You are indeed the Best she said… YOU did not preach how to love and respect the fairer one but but you practiced it... Kissing him on his cheeks… I Love you… She just went into him, and he very placidly hugged her, kissing her forehead looking at the Bougainville trees which were blooming in the spring. Love you too, thank you for coming into my life and thank you for making my life more meaningful with the roses… Chakor the cubs are my life, roses are my lifeline but you are my everything, my strength, My Queen.... thank you bajrangbali, Jai Raamji he thanked his gods within his hearts..... Both went into reverie closing their eyes…

Daddyyyyy, mummyyyyyy shouted the foursome…. Lunccchhhhhhh….Both smiled went inside and all had the lunch together…

The happy Rover drove back with happy smiles and laughter to the Rishab Mansion.

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Just saws the pics of Fathers day on insta thought to twine in the same for a happy family moments…..

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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56

Thanks maha

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My Sumi dear Such a blissful magical writting dear,what a amazing happy family moment of raghav and Chakor with thier Child So Cute when they kissed their raghav dady in happy fathers day 😍😍😍 when raghav kissed Chakor lips awwww🙈🙈🙈this hugs moment 😍 love you Sb 😍🙈its really Very hottt fiery moment Sumi dear you killing it dear you as always nailed it l loved it loved it dear 👏👏👏👍👍👍😘😘😘❤❤❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nothing like an unexpected bonus from you sumi dear💃💃💃💃

Lovely, fantafab entwining of Father's Day with the story.......

The second round was as sweet and as🔥🔥🔥🔥 as the first one🙈🙈🙈

And the father's day surprise was a total emotional dhamaka......loveddddddddd it...... was so very overwhelming ❤❤❤❤ God bless your ficfam.... may we keep getting such fab stories at regular intervals😜😜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words. Awwwh all shy shy of round two. Me too 🙈🙈🙈😍

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An unexpected bonus from u 😘😘😘 Second round was 🔥🙈🔥 as first round I am feeling shy shy 🙈🙈🙈 Loved RagKor blissful moments That moments was fire 🔥🔥🔥 and second part of family part was too emotional loved the way kids gave a lovely surprise Raghav on father,s day

An unexpected sweet surprise from u Keep writing & gave us such sweet & lovely surprises with ur fantab writing 😘😘


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Nothing like an unexpected bonus from you sumi dear💃💃💃💃

Lovely, fantafab entwining of Father's Day with the story.......

The second round was as sweet and as🔥🔥🔥🔥 as the first one🙈🙈🙈

And the father's day surprise was a total emotional dhamaka......loveddddddddd it...... was so very overwhelming ❤❤❤❤ God bless your ficfam.... may we keep getting such fab stories at regular intervals😜😜

Thanks so much Nikki 🤗🤗

Yes father's day, well the Eagle is always appreciated while the ladder remains silent and the insta posts triggered me. 😊

Round Two 🙈🙈🙈🙈 ☺️ Hehe she too can't get enuf i guess of the Greek Geek😜 well aag 🔥🔥🔥 Dono me barabar. 😜😜

Yeees need all you wishes for my ficfam. 😘

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for the bonus Sumi, it's lovely ❤️️

Raghav got his Father's Day gift in the morning 😉🙈

The kids surprise was very sweet, loved the idea of the painting. The roses are very cute, joining their brothers without understanding everything they say.

Edited by nemo316 - 6 years ago

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