MG- Chori-chori..Chupke-chupke.. P3,4,epi1/p3,6,9) Epi2/p11 July26 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

78

Views

5.2k

Users

18

Likes

130

Frequent Posters

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: fariya20

Awesome story

Both aware about each other chori chori niharna

But couldn't voice out

He finally stops her

Waiting for next

Thank you ☺

Next coming up☺

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Aww Maan so smart

Caught her red handed ... he knew it

Awesome

He didn't knew it before.. ☺

Thank you ☺

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 3


Fabulous Part


Geet now is aware of Maan's presence and this fact makes him happy

but when she pick up his handkerchief caressing and bringing it to her face

Maan was drawn towards her

but I'm glad that finally he stopped her from running away


will be waiting to see now what will happen

Thank you ☺

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: babelicious

Hi, could you please update the story with the school reunion and Maan breaking Geet’s heart? I have swept through every page in this forum but damn I haven’t been able to find it 😒 pls consider that

Hi dear.. Sorry for late reply.

And again sorry cause it will take time for me to update that one... ☺

But I will update it for sure and will let you know☺

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Last part


She was shocked to see him standing in front of her. She stood there..not knowing what to do! He started taking steps towards her. She wanted to move from there but something was there in his eyes which didnt let her!

Suddenly she got extremely nervous..seeing him so close to her. She quickly turned around to leave..but next her breath caught in her throat..feeling his touch on her wrist!

Her breathing become fast with this new feel. He was also affected as much as her.. His heart was beating so fast that he was sure..that she could hear it too.

She started to Wringle as she was afraid of someone seeing them like that! And he left her hand immediately thinking that she didnt liked it. He didnt wanted to leave any wrong impression on her.

As soon as he left her wrist.. She started moving inside. "geet.." she stoped in her track hearing her name from his mouth for the first time! And she loved it! Her name sounds more beautiful in his voice.

She waited for him to say something. While he was feeling so nervous.. "wo..hmm..kal sham..park me..aaogi..??..4 baje??" he asked hesitatingly.

She was surprised hearing that..she turned to look at him questioningly... It increased his nervousness more.. "tum chaho toh..apni friend ko bhi sath le aana..!"...he added quickly. "please..!"..he pleaded.

She bite her lips in nervousness & confusion...should she say yes OR no?? While he waited for her answer..inwardly praying to hear a yes!

There were still standing there. She was busy thinking what to do..and he was waiting for her answer.. When someone called her from behind.

"gudiya..dii"...it was her 5years old little brother..who came looking for her. She quickly went to him..before he could reach near them.. not wanting him to see maan there..otherwise it would have created a big trouble for them.

Maan smile hearing the cute name "gudiya dii".

"kya hua aayu?"..she asked approaching her brother. "aap kahan the..?? I was waiting for u.." he pouted cutely. Aayu didnt noticed maan who was still standing near the gate.

Geets thoughts went to maan and she trund to look at him..when aayu tugged her hand.. "dii...chalo na jaldi.." "han..chal"..she moved with aayu holding her hand..to go inside.

Maan wanted to stop her..but what he was supposed to do?? He was feeling disappointed.

When they reached at the entrance of the main hall..aayu ran inside before her. she stopped still unsure that if she should agree..? & turned around...only to see him still standing there..waiting for her answer.

He got some hope.. His eyes were pleading her to say Yes! She bite her lips to hide her smile..seeing his cute pleading face.. And she nodded her head..for a YES! That she will come to meet him!

She chuckled seeing him smiling so brightly...jumping in joy hearing his desired answer. He ran a nervous hand through his hair..embarrassed..seeing her laughing at his reaction!

He waved his hand at her..mouthing a bye n see u! She too waved back at him. Both kept looking at eachother...lost in these new feelings & emotions.

They were forced to look away..when aayu called her again. Giving a last look at him she went inside. After few seconds he too left towards his home.. Both were excited to meet eachother again & were waiting egerly for the next day.

That was just the beginning of their LOVE STORY...

~Chori-Chori.. Chupke-Chupke~

THE END..!!!

Edited by Shonameet - 6 years ago
momi_angel thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Nice part.geet scared when maan caught her hand.maan want to meet geet and she feel narvous he said her to take her friend with her.geet bro came and take her with him.maan wait for her ans.

Keepdreaming thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Eid ka din... Will comment later

suhaaana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 6 years ago
#38

It's such a beautiful part

Milne aayegi na wo waise..

This deserves a tiny epilogue..

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: momi_angel

Nice part.geet scared when maan caught her hand.maan want to meet geet and she feel narvous he said her to take her friend with her.geet bro came and take her with him.maan wait for her ans.

Thank you☺

And she agreed to meet him😉☺

Shonameet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Eid ka din... Will comment later

Eid mubarak ☺

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme · 4 years ago

Hi Maaneetians, As I am again loosing myself in the land of Maaneet, I bring to you this new FF to take you all in new world of Maaneet as I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 8 years ago

Concept This story is based on two sisters Geet Palak, both love each other so much... Can do anything for each other happiness...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 4 years ago

When Two Hearts Are Meant To Be Together... No Matter How Long It Takes... No Matter How Far They Go... No Matter How Tough It Seems... Love...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 9 years ago

Kya aapko ehsaas hai Baat ab yeh hi khaas hai Aapka dil hamare paas hai Hamara dil aapke paas hai Aapka dil hamare paas hai Hamara dil aapke...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".