MG : RANDOM SHOT ( of hearts and relationships) PAGE 1&2 June 4th

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PROLOGUE

Daddy why Sam doesn't love me, I am not her son, today she said that Dhruv is a mistake daddy. Why she doesn't love me like Aunt Mia love Lyra and Alex. Big Fat tears rolled down the innocent face and he looked at his father in a small expectation that he will answer him. Daddy I want mummy too. Maan engulfed his little son his protective embrace. This was all because of her, he hate her but he couldn't say that loud in front of his only son.

Baby I love you, your aunt Mia loves you, dadi loves my Dhruv baby, and dada loves him, so what if Sam doesn't love you.

Dhruv looked at his father with the same eyes that they shared. Maan was thankful that his son didn't have any features of my mother. Dhruv khurana was an exact copy of his father Maan but that didn't mean he didn't miss having a mother.

Daddy you didn't say Lyra, she loves me too and grand-mere, grand-pere, uncle dake.. And Al.. They love Dhruv baby too..

Yes, Lyra loves you too darling.. Maan smiled he was always amazed seeing his son all lost in front of the little Lyra , the daughter of his friend of years and she was the little love interest of his son Dhruv.

Darling what did Sam said? Maan asked wanted to confirm, it was a matter of days that he and Dhruv will be free of that vile creature Sameera Khanna and he will be free of that mistake of his that made him skeptical about having any relationships now.

She was with her boyfriend daddy and she said that Dhruv was a mistake daddy. Dhruv said as Maan carried him to kitchen, that Bitch made his son unwanted, Maan growled and fed his son. He was a single parent to his son as Sameera's presence was negligent in their life and now even Dhruv knew that he didn't have a real mother that was the reason he calls Sameera as Sam.

Baby what were you doing in her room, you never go there. Maan asked as he fed him the food and Dhruv gulped and answered.

I wanted to return her lipstick daddy, Dhruv took it and played with it but she yelled on me on touching her things.

Dhruv it's bad to touch others things, Maan said in a slight stern tone and never touch anything that doesn't belong to you. Is that clear son.

Dhruv nodded and apologized

Sorry daddy, I will tell sorry to Sam but daddy toffee was looking nice with red lips. Dhruv said innocently making Maan's eyes pop, his son used Sameera's cosmetics on his little puppy and then returned it to Sameera to use.

Maan wanted to laugh, if Sameera knew that his son had used her imported cosmetics on his toffee then she will pitch a fit and Maan couldn't wait to see her face but right now he didn't wanted any more problems than he was having right now. He needed to settle the divorce and kick that annoying woman out of their lives as soon as possible so that he and Dhruv can return to India.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I was reading something on my blog and found this..

Maan and Dhruv baby..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Looks Interesting, Suhana...

Maan and Dhruv...

Maan is always cute with kids...

but I am kinda confused here...Is Maan married to Sam now?? but Dhruv is his kid with the other lady? I am guessing that would be Geet? But is it that Maan hates her? and Sam too?

Intriguing plot...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice shot.maan and dhruv bonding superb smeera is to heartless.dhruv use sam lipstick on puppy and gave back to her maan want to see sam face after knowing that.hope u countinue.if bohot soona 2 lagta hai sabi writer gayab hote jaa rahe hain.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Looks Interesting, Suhana...

Maan and Dhruv...

Maan is always cute with kids...

but I am kinda confused here...Is Maan married to Sam now?? but Dhruv is his kid with the other lady? I am guessing that would be Geet? But is it that Maan hates her? and Sam too?

Intriguing plot...

U want a part 1 too ????

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: momi_angel

Nice shot.maan and dhruv bonding superb smeera is to heartless.dhruv use sam lipstick on puppy and gave back to her maan want to see sam face after knowing that.hope u countinue.if bohot soona 2 lagta hai sabi writer gayab hote jaa rahe hain.

Dear I am having problem with my hands nowadays I don't know about other writers

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

U want a part 1 too ????

Is that even a question, Dear...would love to read it...😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Remember reading this story and cursing Sam 😆😆😆

Good to see a part of it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Is that even a question, Dear...would love to read it...😃

It's an old story

I had only written this and part 1 only

Let me post for you 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Remember reading this story and cursing Sam 😆😆😆

Good to see a part of it

And you say you have a bad memory

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