Let Me - DriKshit TS [Part 2 Pg 9] - Page 8

Jungle mei Mangal ya Dangal

But Dri would end up in hospital

Wonder what happened

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

Pg 4 part 1

Van cuddling up to Ra like he was a teddy bear - Solid gold 🤣

What are you gajini - Another good one 👍

You’re strength is in the dialogues particularly the ones with the witty retorts going back and forth.

I believe there is scope for growth there to make it better , stronger. A little more and the dialogues would crackle.

Another thing i liked the way you described the leads state of mind the scene makes it easier to imagine the scene.

Hahahhahaha jungle sequences are the best! Hopefully both are safe!

Originally posted by: Daydreamer123

Cliffhanger☹

Yoga karti hu mai. Aap bhi kiya kijiye. Ye sirf acchi body banane se kuch nahi hota.😆

Jealous Rakshit🤣

Anyways, awesome update.👏

Waiting for next part. Update soon.

You seem to have liked that yoga bit.😆

Thank you.

Originally posted by: KhayalonKiMalik

Hahahhahaha jungle sequences are the best! Hopefully both are safe!

True that. No matter how cliche they get, we always enjoy them when it is on our favorite pair.😆

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Jungle mei Mangal ya Dangal

But Dri would end up in hospital

Wonder what happened

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

No mangal. Only dangal. 😆

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Pg 4 part 1

Van cuddling up to Ra like he was a teddy bear - Solid gold 🤣

What are you gajini - Another good one 👍

You’re strength is in the dialogues particularly the ones with the witty retorts going back and forth.

I believe there is scope for growth there to make it better , stronger. A little more and the dialogues would crackle.

Another thing i liked the way you described the leads state of mind the scene makes it easier to imagine the scene.

Thank you.

@Bold - That's unusual for I think I can't write humor and wit.

Indeed. There is a lot of scope for improvement. I am far from perfection. Not even an average writer for that matter.

I am glad. ❤️

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Jungle mai mangal... Ha ha ha

Its kinda romantic and thriller types... Please eager to know what happens

Do they get kidnapped or do they escape???

No mangal. Only dangal. 😆

@bold - Make a guess. If you guess it right, I will make the update soon. 😆

Originally posted by: Zola029

Amazing update !

Even in a situationlike this , Rakshit can't forget about Drishti with Shikhar . So jealous 😆

Now i wonder which option that is !

Eager to read next update :)

@bold - 😆 The thought, that his Mrs. Shergill is more comfortable around his brother than him is too unsettling to let go, isn't it?😆

Thank you. ❤️

Originally posted by: Mayashika

That was a lovely update, Ada. Well, jealousy doesn't need a 'right' time to visit. 😆

You left it at a cliffhanger, I am eagerly waiting for the next!

Take care,

Love, Shreya ❤️

@Bold - 😆

Thank you, Shreya. 🤗