This story is not related to the serial story line..but characters name are same….
Some changes:
· Guddan is not gupta’s daughter
· She is not bubbly as in serial..
· Revti is angad’s wife
· No durga nad saru in my story
· Laxmi is aj’s sister
All are standing quietly…groom is sitting on Mandap…bride was sitting near him in veil all his family members and workers are surrounded by men with guns..
Man: pandit jaldi jaldi mantra bol….
Aj(groom): ye aap log thk nahi kar rhe hai hai….aap ese meri jabrdasti shhadi nahi krwa sakte…mai sirf aur srif apni biwi Antra se pyar krta hu…ye jo apki bhen hai wo kabhi khus nahi rh pyegi mere sath..
Adhiraj: use tera pyar chahiye bhi nahi….bs iski shhadi hojye is ghar me…aur mne phle pyar se samjhaya tha naa..tune nahi suna …ab jesa mujhe thk lag rha hai me kr rha hu..
And they start all rituals and pandit ji announce them as bride and groom..
Adhiraj: musibat tali mere sir se…ab mai ye desh chhod ke aram se ja sakta hu…ab tujhe ise apne sath rakhna hai to rakh nahi to khi bhi rakh ..
And with that he left their house with his men..
Aj throws his gathbandhan and held that girl with her elbow and going to throw her out of his house that suddenly her veil removed…
And all saw a girl of 22 yrs weeping bitterly with tape on her mouth…
He stopped in his track and his mother came forward and remove her tape…she was so terrified that she instantly hugged her…and get unconscious in her arms..
All were confused….
After sometime:
Doctor: Mr. jindal…inki condition bht khrab hai..inhe kyi dino se thk se khane ko bhi nahi mila hai..aur mentally stressed hai ye….isliye baar baar inka nervous breakdown ho rha hai…esa hi chalta rha to inko hospital mai admit karna pdegaa..
Aj doesn’t know what to do….
But Angad came forward..
Ang: ye thik kese ho pyengii…
Doc: aapko inka bht dhyan rkhna hoga ..time se khana aur medicines sath hi ek healthy environment bhi dena hoga…
And with that doctor take his leave…
All are confused that what they should do with her…
Rev: bahiya…mai dhyan rakhungi unka…kch nahi to insaniyat ke khatir hi..
Ang: haa bhaii…hum rakhenge unka dhyan..apko tension lene ki jaroorat nahi hai…
Aj: koii bhi rakhe uska dhyan mujhe koii farak nahi padta..bas wo mere samne nahi ani chahiye..uske treatment mai jitna paise lage ,jis doctor ko bulana pde sab kro ..isse jyada mai kch nahi kar sakta uskeliye..
Everyone noded their head..
Dadi was sitting near her head as she gain consciousness..
Dadi: beta…beta tu thik hai naa..
She was confused by her surroundings and then she recalls everything..
Her eyes filled with tears…
Dadi: ro mat beta ..phle ye bta tu thk to hai na..aur tera naam..
Girl: hum….hum..GUDDAN hai…..
Dadi: tere bhai ne jo…
Gudd: wo bhai nahi hai hmare…..
Dadi was shocked…: bhai nahi hai..fr..fir kon hai..
Gudd: unhone humara kidnap kiya tha 15 din phle Mumbai se…
Dadi: lekin ye sab..
Gudd: hume nahi pta ye sab kya hai…
At that time angad entered in the room ..
Ang : dekhiye aap..
Guddan hugged dadi and closed her eyes…
Gudd: dekhiye aap dur hatiye humse..dur jaiye…aap boliye inhe ye dur rhe..
Dadi : wo kch nahi krega beta wo to tere liye dva lekar ayahai..
Gudd: jaiye dur…and she gets panic attack….
Angad and dadi called everyone..and revti called doctor..
Aj entered room and saw her…she was shivering and sweating…
He slowly reached for her and held her from her shoulders…she looked into his eyes and slowly she clam down…and get unconsciousagain…
Doctor came and checked her…
Doc: inhe bhut hi mentally harassed kiya gya hai..aur shayd wo karne wale sab log male the..isliye ye male presence se ese behave karti hai..
Lax: lekin AJ se to isne kch nahi kha..balki bilkul shant hogyi..
Doc: ye to wahi jane…agar wo inki presence mai calm rehti hai to mai yhi suggest krunga ki ye apni wife ke sath hi rhe…
Aj: mai uske sath nahi rhunga..doctor ..apko jo karna hai aap wo kariye bs koii aur rasta dekhiye aur ise jaldi se jaldi thk kar dijiye..takimai isse apna picha chhuda saku..
Doctor looked at AJ and asked him to accompany him to the gate..
Doc: Aj mai janta hu apki shhadi kese hui hai…lekin usne bhi khusi se shhadi nahi ki hai..uske sath pta nahi kya kya hua hoga..mai to apseyhi request krunga ki apko uski help karni chahiye…
And he take his leave..
As he turned around he saw his mother standing there..
Dadi: tujhe ye sab to nahi sikhaya tha mne…wo wha is halatmai hai…aur tu jo uski madad kar sakta hai..use apne paiso ke bhrose chhod rha hai..mai janti hu lalla ki jo hua wo sahi nahi hai lekin..galti us masoom ki bhi nahi hai…
Aj: to kya kru mai…mai nahi rh sakta uske sath…wo meri kuch nahi hai maa…kch bhi nahi…
Dadi: tu mane ya na mane..patni hai wo teri…aur jbtk wo sahi nahi ho jati tu apni zimmedari puri tarha se nibhayegaa…
Aj: maa…mai esa kch bhi nahi krunga…
Dadi: thik hai…fr tu mujhe bhi khi chhod aa kyuki mai nahi dekh sakti ye sab..ek bejaan si ladki hmare ghar me padi hai..aur hum kch nahikr rhe hai…yaad rakh lalla hr kaam paise se nahi ho sakta..
Aj: aap bht ziddi hai maa…mai kosis krunga uski madad karne ki…lekin jb wo thk hogi tb aap koii aur faltu ki zid nahi krengii..
Dadi: nahi karungi lalla…bs abhi tu uske sath rh …use thk kr…
Aj (sighed) : thik hai maa…
And he left for his room…
Dadi: hey! Kanaha…teri ye leela samajh nahi pa rhi hu mai…tune hi in dono ko joda hai…kya sach mai ye hi hai mere lalla ki sathi….agr yhi hai to abs b sambhal lena tu..
She looked at akshat who was climbing stairs towards his room where his unwanted wife is lying..
So, this is it for the first part….
Next part will be updated next week on your response towards this concept..
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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