JO DIL MAI HAI (SS) part 6(last part) updated 6 june 2019 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Waaah waah ...💖💖

1. The way she told maa everything was just so

2. Akshat hear the convo🤪

3. Akshat too loves her..🥳

N last but not the latest... Yeh Akshat ki pariksha hai ki wo use bharosa dilaye....taki wo use Apne Dil ki baat bataye....☺️

It's too romantic ...Avni ...pls update sooooooooooon...

I have updated it index on page 6 of os contents list...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Waaah waah ...💖💖

1. The way she told maa everything was just so

2. Akshat hear the convo🤪

3. Akshat too loves her..🥳

N last but not the latest... Yeh Akshat ki pariksha hai ki wo use bharosa dilaye....taki wo use Apne Dil ki baat bataye....☺️

It's too romantic ...Avni ...pls update sooooooooooon...

I have updated it index on page 6 of os contents list...

Thank you for updating my index

and i will try to to update soon..

Edited by 123g - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Part 2

At night:

Guddan entered her room and saw Akshat..he was shirtless and standing in front of her cupboard...guddan saw him and turned her face...

Gudd: kya kr rhe hai aap...ese kyu khde hai..hum b rhte hai iss room mai...

Aj: Ab mne kya kiya..bs kch dhund rha tha...mil nhi rha..aur wese b ye mera kamra..tum meri biwi.. m kese b rhu...

Gudd(shocked): haa to phle to kbi aap ese..accha ab hatiye hume change krna hai ..hume kapde lene hai..

He give her side and she hurriedly trying to take her clothes...aj came and stand behind her..her Heart beat was running ..she fumbled with her clothes..Aj bent down and huskily speaks in her ear...

Aj: guddan....wo mere kapde hai...

She lost her senses due to his closeness...and closes her eyes..

Gudd: hmm..

Aj: kapde....wo mere hai...tumhare right side pr hai..

Guddan came to her senses and take her clothes and run towards bathroom..

Aj: guddan..esa nahi hai jo abhi tak nhi hua wo age bhi na ho...

Without turning she run inside and closed the door..

Here Aj was smiling..because of her reactions due to his proximity..

Guddan sit there by the door and closed eyes...

Gudd: ye kya hua abhi...aur jindal sahab...agr ese hmare kareeb ate rhe to hum khud ko kese sambhalenge...inhe bhi pta nhi konsa bhoot sabar ho gya hai...shirtless hokr ghum rhe hai room mai...accha hai humne thk se nhi dekha..nhi to hum to behos hi ho jate..ab thodi der yhi rhte tbtk ye sojyenge...

After sometime she peeps in slowly ..and saw him sleeping on his side,but in vest..she sighed and move towards her side to sleep…she looked for pillows to make pillow wall..but there was none in the room..she tried to getup and check but Aj put his hand around her waist …her eyes are wide open on seeing this..she doesn’t know what to do….so she slowly lie down there and close her eyes..after some time she drift into peaceful sleep..Aj open his eyes and check on her..as she was sleeping …he come on his one arm and look at her face…so naive..so beautiful and childlike….and he don’t know when he slept…

@Morning

Guddan open her eyes…and feels someone hot breath on her neck….she turn to look…and Akshat was sleeping so close to her..his one hand is around her waist and other was below her head…she slept on his hand..but how?...she lost in his face…and suddenly akshat stir and open his eyes…he realize their position..but he only put his hand around her…and then…

He thought he was dreaming about hugging her …but noo..he actually do this…omg! Now what she will think about him…

Guddan came to her senses and try to getup but..

Gudd: aahhhh….

Her hairs are stuck in his chain….and she again lie down in the same position…then slowly akshat came over her…and helped her to release her hairs…both were looking in each other eyes…and lost in one another….unknowingly Akshat start caressing her cheek…and her hand reached to his face …and then..

Laxmi called for her from downstairs….they both come to their senses and she pushed him other side and run to bathroom…Aj was blushing on his thoughts and ruffle his hairs of backhead…

After getting ready they both came down stairs for breakfast…Guddan was avoiding him and he was in full mood to tease her…he sits for breakfast and asked her to sit by his side…she sit silently on her chair and start talking to others to avoid him…he again and again tries to talk to her but she was not giving any attention..so he caught her hand under table…she chocked on her food..and slowly gulping it..she looked at him with narrow eyes and he was munching like nothing is going on…she tries to get out from his grip but he was not letting her to take her hand back…

Gudd(slow voice): hath chhodiye na hmara..

Aj: aur avoid kro mujhe….

Gudd: ab nahi krenge..please hath chhod dijiye..koii dekhlega to kya sochega….

Laxmi and vardan was watching them closely…and when they bent their heads to slow talk ….both make some noises as clearing their throat…

Aj reluctantly left her hand and they both composed themselves…

Aj: vardan, kishore aaj restaurant nahi jana..kitna time lete ho tum log..and he stand up and called Angad to join him and left for work…

All three were looking at him …first of all he was late..and then blame them for the same and then told them to come with him and left alone..

First they saw AJ after his departure all turn their gaze towards Guddan who was staring at Aj retreating figure with open mouth in shock and confusion…she looked at them and..

Gudd: hume nahi pta inhe kya hua hai….hume apne kamre mai kch kaam hai..hum ate hai abhi ..and run towards her room without turning back..

Dadi and Laxmi start laughing and then men left for restaurant…

Gudd(POV): Jindal sahab ki tbiyat khrab ho gyi hai….ya …ye..ye jindal sahab hai hi nahi….haaaa….ye koii aur hai….lekin…ehsaas to unhi ka hota hai…

Kya ho rha hai ye…..kal hi…kal hi humne decide kiya tha ki hum phle jese ho jyenge aur …yha jindal sahab hi badal gye…

Here dadi was thanking god for giving his son some mind……

So I will try to update next part soon…


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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Wow avni it was too cute

Loved it

Continue the nxt part asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Awww

Naughty Aj

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Hayee Jindal Sahab toh bohot shararti h☺️☺️

Aur guddu bechari masoom si thehri🤣🤣

Buddha iss baar paka fayda utha rha he gudiya ka😎

Avni beautiful update ❤️

Please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Ohho Jindal Sahab toh mauke pe chauke maarte hi Jaa rahe hai

Bechari Guddan toh confused hogayi😆

Fabulous update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Jindaal saab in full form 😆😆😆

Waiting for next part 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Amazing update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

PART 3

After five days:

Gudd: ye jindal shab ne to hume pagal hi kar diya hai…hume to kch samajh hi nahi a rha hai …kya hua hai inhe ..ekdum se ese kese badal gye..kisse baat kare..kis se puche ye sab…..Maa se….nahi nahi..aur kya bolenge unhe ..ki apke lalla hmare sath…ewww…nahi…unhe kese bta sakte hai….laxmi bahu..wo help kr sakti hai..haa…

Guddan went to Laxmi..

Gudd: laxmi bahu hume aapse kch kaam tha …

Lax: ha ha boliye na sasu maa…

Gudd: wo hume…wo hume…(kese puche)…….

Lax: koii baat hai sasu ma…boliye naa..

Gudd: she takes deep breath and…wo jo jindal sahab hai..wo jindal sahab nahi hai…matlab hai to jindal sahab lekin fir bhi nahi hai…

Lax: kyaaa… kya bol rhi hai aap ..mujhe to kch samajh nahi aya…

Gudd: whi to hume bhi kch samajh hi nahi a rha…phle to hume bas daant lgate rehte the..fir dheere dheere hmare dost bne..fir hmari bht fikr karne lge..hmara khyal rakhne lge..aur ab..

Lax: ab…

Gudd: ab badal gye….jbse hum hospital se wapas aye hai..tbse hume hilne bhi nahi dete the kamre se..humesa hmara dhyan rakhna…hmare sath rehna..ye sab to thk tha…lekin..fr…wo …wesa krne lge..

Lax(confused):..wesa…kesa…

Gudd: matlb….bht free ho gye hai humse….hmare pass..mtlb..aap samajhiye na laxmi bahu….

Lax: acchhaaaa… haa to isme kya hua sasu maa..wo apke pati hai to esa krenge hi naa…

Gudd: haa pr phle to nahi…aur ab kya badal gya hai..

Lax: areee apko to khush hona chahiye…aap Aj se pyar krtihai aur wo bhi puri kosis kr rhe hai..

Gud: haa… ek min…ek min..aapko kese pta ki hum inse pyar krte hai..humne to kisi se bhi nahi kaha bas maa se…maa ne btaya apko..

Lax(laughed): ye lijiye..yha sbko pta hai ki aap AJ se pyarkarti hai..koii ese hi kisi k liye apni jaan nahi de deta..

Gudd: aree baap re! sabko pta chal gya..jindal sahab ko bhi..

Lax: haa..unhe bhi pta hai….

Gudd : fr unhone humse kch kha kyu nahi…aur ye sab kyu kr rhe hai..

Lax: jha tak mera experience hai …AJ chate hai ki aap khud unse ye baat bole..

Gudd: hum kyu bolenge…hum kch nahi bolenge …

Lax: ye bhi AJ jante hai..aur wo pura try kar rhe ki aap bole…

Gudd: to ye sab humse confess karwane ke liye ho rha hai….

Lax: ab aap jaldi se bol dijiye na unhe …kitna wait krayengi..

Gudd: nahi…ese kese…apko pta hai pichle kch dino se kitna pareshan krke rakha hai hume…ab jb guddan ke sath khel hi rhe hai to fr…game bhi brabari ka hona chahiye…laxmi bahu..apko pkka lagta hai ki apke AJ humse pyar karte hai..

Lax: apke liye unhone jo kch bhi kiya uske baad koii pagal hi….(guddan glared at her) hmara matlb hai wo bhut pyar karte hai aapse…bs yhi chate hai ki phle aap khe unse …

Gudd: aap ye baat kisi se nahi bolengi…jo hmare beech hui….ab to aap dekhti jayiye..kese AJ khud sabke samne hume btayenge ki wo humse pyar karte hai…

Both hugged each other…

Guddan was on cloud nine..her Jindal sahab loves her….

@At night:

Both were sleeping on their sides..

Gudd: Jindal sahab…

Aj: hmm..

Gudd: hamari taraf dekhiye….hume kch btana hai aapko..

Aj: excitedly turns towards her…haa bolo kya btana hai..

Gudd: wo hume na….wo hume…

Aj: tumhe kya guddan bolo…

Gudd: hume ..papa ke ghar jana hai..

Aj reluctantly sit straight on his bed..

Aj: kyaaaa….kyu…….kisi ne kch kha kya ..kch hua hai aaj..bolo….

Guddan also sit and hold his hand..

Gudd: nahi kch nahi hua hai…wo revti ki shhadi hai naa to wo wha akeli hai ..aur papa bhi..to humne socha ki hum wha chle jye fir 5 din mai shhadi hai..uske baad hum aur revti dono ek sath hi a jyenge yha..

Aj: areee to revti….mera matlb hai sabko yhi bula lete hai naa..shhadi ki tayyariya yhi se ho jyengii..wese bhi sare function to yhi hone hai..

Gudd: aap papa ko jante hai na..aur fir hum bhi nahi chate esa kch..hum jana chate hai..hum jaye please….

Aj was in delimma….he can’t live without her,but at the same time she has her responsibilities for her family…

Aj: thk hai chali jyo…but apna dhyan rakhna ..abhi bhi weakness hai tumhe..

Gudd: haa bilkul..

Aj turn around and sleep….but sleep is far away from his eyes…she is going tomorrow …for five days…five long days…he knows that he will meet her see her daily but …

And guddan…she was smriking..

Gudd: aur kheliye hmare sath….jab thoda dur rhenge to jaldi confess krenge…

And pretending to be in sleep …she put her hand around him..he turns and looked at her…he slowly caress her face and kissed her forehead lightly…and slowly put her head on his hand and hugged her to him and sleep..

Gudd: to hum subha isliye ese uthte hai….aur humse bolte hai ki hum neend mai inhe hug kar lete hai….she smiles at his antiques and sleep peacefully in his arms..

@morning;

Guddan packed her luggage..and bring it to the hall…

She takes blessing from dadi and take her leave after breakfast..

As she is coming out of the house…Aj’s car came and stopped just infront of her..

Gudd: aap to resturent gye the naa…

Aj: haa mne socha ki tumhe drop kardu..ab betho jaldi…

After sitting in car she saw his face…he was sad…he didn’t talk to her at bf and left early for his work…

Gudd: hmare jane se aap baccho ki tarha kyu behave kar rhe hai…kch dino ki hi to bat hai…

Aj: mne kch kha tumse…tum kch din rho ya jyada din..tumhara ghar hai…mai kyu kch kahunga..

He don’t even look at her…

She smiles at his temper…

Gudd: agar aap bol dete ki aap nahi chate ki hum jaye to hum nahi jate…

He stopped the car at once..

Aj: agar mai bolta ruk jyo to tum ruk jati..

Gudd: haa…aur kya…lekin aapko to koii problem hi nahi hai naa…accha hai..papa bhi khus ho jyenge…aur chaliye ab..gadi kyu rok di..

Aj cursed himself for not trying….and defeated he drop her at her house..

While going out of the car..she turned towards him..who was looking straight…..she opens the door put her luggage out and again come inside and kissed him on his cheek and run towards the house…

Aj eyes widened and he turns towards her and put his hand on his cheek…and while going inside she winks at him..

Aj : she will really give me heart attack one day…he smiles and drive away….


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