Ts- give me another chance- ft Kishore Jindal part-3b updated on page5 - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part -3b(last part)

Kishoreji..... Kishoreji......Shouted a very angry Durga....

Hearing her voice everyone come out in Hall... everyone has expected this type of reactions from Durga so all were prepared for it.... seeing Kishore in front of him...Durga rushed to him and grab his collar....

Durga:- aapki himmat kaise Hui Kishoreji mere hote he dusri shadi Karne ki?? Aur kisse puch k aapne shadi Kari hai?? Mujhme Kya kami reh gayi?? Aap mere sath Aisa kaise Kar sakte hai?? Aap mujhse Mera haq...Mera naam....yeh Ghar nahi chin sakte....aapk is gunah k liye to me aapko aur aap Sab ko caurt me leke jaugi Mr. Akshat Jindal....

Kishore:- bus Durga bAhot bol liya tumne aur bAhot sun liya mene...ab vaishnavi he Meri biwi gai tumhari Meri life koi jagah nHi hai so without creating a scane you just get lost from here...yeh Jindal bhavan me ab tumhare liye koi jagah nahi hai samji miss Durga Sharma....

Hearing this Durga turn red due to anger she was about to slap Kishore but someone caught her hand in midair.....it was vaishnavi...

Vaishnavi:- don't you dare miss Durga sharma...mere pati par galtise b hath uthane ki galti mat karna varna vaishnavi Kishore jindalse bura koi nahi hoga samjhi aap....

Saying she jerked off her hand... seeing vaishnavi Durga started badmouthing about her....

Durga:- accha to wo tum ho jisne mere pati se shadi ki hai....aur mere pati ki dusri aurat bana pasand Kiya hai...but madem agar aapko pata na ho to Bata du k Paheli patni hote hue b pati agar dusri shadi kare to use najayaz kaha jata he aur dusri biwi ko dusri aurat.....dusri aurat samjhti ho na tum??

Before she could say anything further there was a tight slap on her cheek...it was Dadi who slapped her....

Dadi:- bas kar Durga bas kar...aur kitna giregi tu??aaj Jo Teri yeh halat he na uski tu khud jimmedar hai...Teri barbadi ja Karan tu khud hai....samjhi...tune khudne apne hare bhare sansar me aag lagai hai....tu apne swarth aur ahankarne itni andhi ho gayi k tune apne hathose apne sansar me aag lagadi....tujhe is gharme kitne chav se byah Kar laye the par tune Kya Kiya??tujh par mene aankh band Kar k bharosa Kiya par tune Kya kiya jara yaad Kar to tujhe khud he sharmindgi mehsus hogi....ja nikal ja yahase isse pahele k me kuch aur Kar bethu...

Durga:- nahi main kahi nhi Jane wali yeh Mera Ghar hai aur yeh mere pati he...agar aap mese kisine b mere sath jor jabarjasti ki to me police ko bulaungi...aap Sab k khilaf complain karungi....

Aj:- aur kAhengi Kya aap police ko miss Durga Sharma??

Guddan:- aap police me jaiye ya badise badi adalat me durgaji aapko sabhi jagahse ek he Salah milegi k Mr. Aur Mrs Kishore Jindal legally married couple hai....

Durga:- legally husband aur wife hone k liye Mera aur Kishore ka talak hona jaruri hai...aur me to talk denese rahi...ab to me aap Sab k khilaf police complain Kar k he rahungi...

Lakshmi:- Durga di ..kabhi kabhi jyada samjdar hona b bewkoofi ki nishani hoti hai...aap mujhe humesha Desi...Hindi medium Aisa kehte ho na?? Par aap to angrezi me padhe like ho na?? Wo Kya kehte hai English medium...fir aap se itni badi chuk kaise ho gayi??

Saru:- wo kya hai na Lakshmi bhabhi Paisa k samne Sab kuch dhundhala pad jata he yeh mujhse behtar Kon samajh sakta hai?? Aur ab wahi haal Durga di ka hua hai....

Kishore:- aise Kya dekh rahi ho Durga abhi b kuch samjhme nahi Aya?? Ek min ruko Sab samjh jaogi...

Saying this Kishore called someone....yes he was Rocky!!!!

Rocky:-surprice surprise D....

Durga:- Rocky tu yaha?? Accha hua as Gaya dekh na yeh log Saab Kya Kar rahe he??

Rocky:- chill D...when Rocky is here no fear....you jijs q Meri D ke sath Aisa Kar rahe ho?? Himmat kaise Hui tum Saab ki???

Saying this he started laughing.... seeing him like this Durga become confuse....

Rocky:- D abhi b nahi samjhi tum?? It's called KARMA....jaisa karogi waisa paogi...you spoil my life for ur gain I spoil ur for my gain...tit for tat....revange complete....abhi b samjh nahi Aya Meri pyari behna??wo Jo Goa me tumne property Papers samjh k sign kiye the na wo darasal divorce papers they Jo mene aj k kehne par tumse sign karvaye the...tum apne paiso k moh mi itni andhi ho gayi k Bina padhe he papers sign Kar liye... hahahaha...bad luck D... any ways me to yaha tumhe bye kehne Aya tha..me aur mom we are shifting to Dubai forever...so don't come to us ..good bye everyone...and god bless you D....

Saying this Rocky went away leaving shocked Durga...she was so shocked still she spoke...

Durga:- aap Sab ne mere sath dhokha Kiya hai...me fraud ka case dalungi aap Saab k khilaf aur mujhe in dono ki shadi see aitraz hai yeh me court me keh dungi...

Aj:- aap Aisa kuch nahi kr sakti ms. Durga q k aap ne khud NOC sign ki hai k you don't have any objection on Kishore and vaishnavi's marriage...since now you are legally divorce from him due to fast track court case...

Guddan:- aur rahi baat fraud ki to wo to aap kijiyega b mat q k Sab se badi fraud to aap he...wow abhi see nahi pehlese...

Saying this guddan narreted everyone how Durga help her to elope from wedding...how she offer money to back out from marriage...after marriage her all kand including papaki beizzat...her mom's chit wall ka yaad karvana... and everything which she has done with angad and made him do all the things which she wanted to do.... everyone was shocked with such a big Revalation.... guddan also told everyone about Durga been aware about Rocky's misdeeds which he was doing with Lakshmi..hereing this Lakshmi came forward and slapped Durga hard...

Lakshmi:- aap to aurat kehlane k b latak nahi ho..me roti rHi bilakhti rahi..baar baar aapse kaha par aapne ansuna Kar Diya...chiii ek aurat ho k aurt ka dard nhi saying sakte aap??mujhe to ghin aA rahi he k mene tumhe itne salo Tak durgadi jeh k bulaya....

Saying this Lakshmi come to vardan and he just hugged her...here Aj told saru to pack all Durga shrma's stuff.after sometime saru come with durga's luggage and throw it out of the house and dragg her near door...

That's when Durga started her emotional drama rejecting all the accusations...Durga request them but to no avail she grabbed guddan And keep knife At her neck to stabb her....that's when police arraived and shoot at durga's hand dropping pistols down....

Aj:- police ko kisne bulaya tha guddan??

Guddan:- Sab humari taraf Kya dekh rahe he...humne kuch nhi Kiya..sacchi mummy kasam...

Vardan:- police ko mene phn Kiya tha papa mujhe kaga jarurat pad sakti hai so I called them ..

Seeing everyone' s attention diverted Durga started running but Aj stopped her and handed her to police to arrange her stay at jail..,

Before police could take her away she shoots at guddan...and guddan become unconscious... everyone rushes to guddan and call the Dr..at the same time Aj just drag the Durga out of the house....soon after the arrival of dr....dr. chk guddan and inform everyone that goli chu k nikal gayi he mamuli chot hai dressing se thik ho jayegi saying he does her dressing and give her pain killar ka injection...after sometime guddan come to hosh and Aj just hugged her tight not leaving her....

Here Now Durga is staying in mental assylum... taking electric shock...after her bejjati and dher sari insult she started behaving weird..soon after realizing she loss everything... money...gold... Property and pati...she started crying vigorously...and then she fainted....after waking up she became poori pagal... seeing her in this condition Aj addmited her in hospital...Durga is now on same bad taking electric shock which she one's ordered to give it Aj....

After 1months

Aj and guddan are now more then just friend....they are both karib and lage he but kehnese darte he....kishore and vaishnavi with baby pari are happy...Lakshmi bAhu is 2months pregnant...saru shifted to USA to be with Rahul....and now Dadi Is egarly waiting for lalla ka chotu lalla...


The End


PS:- finally done with last Part..hope you all will love it...mujhse jitni ho saki utni mene mehnT ki... Durga ki beizzati Karne ki...Baki asp Sab b Kar sakte ho uski bezzati through comments...

so guys do like it and comment it.... positive ya negative kuch b hoga to chalega but plz share ur views with me regarding my story.....

Thank you so much everyone its my 2nd Ts completed...will soon update my SS. Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal

Ps:- plz ignore typing errors...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Nice one

Waiting for your SS Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Superb update👏

Loved this TS. Do write more.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Awesome update

Love the ending

Do write more stories

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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Amazing update

I want to see similar scene in our show, 😈after reading your update my heart got sukoon. 😊

Beautiful story and great ending😊

Keep up the great work😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Kya BAAT hai....💗💗 Khush Kar Diya...dayan deserve it.......bahut shauk tha na shock Dene Ka....ab Zindagi Bhar khare Rahna bijli k jhatke ...upar wale Ka bualawa aane tak.....


I request one pls....ki wo ss k alawa ek or ts ho jaaye on friends with benefits..😉

Ye mere ko bahut achcha lagaaa💖

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Aj mre dil ko kitna sukoon mila hai mai bta nhi skti itni khusi exam khatam hone pr v nhi hoti

Sb fans ki murad puri krdi apne show me nhi story ke jariye hi shi

Loved it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Aapne hum sab ke mann ki iccha poori kardi.

Thanks a lot

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Awesomeeee

Loved the bashing durga got

Ending 👏👏

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Nice ending

Liked the story a lot😊

Durga got what she deserved!

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