Arhi SS: WITHERED!! Thread#2- New Thread Link pg 1 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Aishu136

Unresed on Page No. 1, Ms.EC🙂

Getting there and thank you Ms. Aish😛

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

You called me a rose

This is wrt Khushi's perspective. She is the rose and the one to call her that is Arnav.

Protecting me with your thorns

Khushi is mistaken about Arnav and grossly so. She will know this when Arnav ceases to protect her.

But I knew I was the thorn

She says in the update that she is the one who can't love him back.

You withered.

Arnav might walk away from her.

And I still prick

She will be left heartbroken and vulnerable.

N, if this update was not layered, I dont know what is. By far, this has been one of your best penned updates since the time I have started reading your stories and fallen in love with them.

Why? Because you will show us one side of the mirror and leave the rest for us to judge. So while we would be seeing things from one protagonists POV, the other one would pass away as innocent.

I mean, ArHi have divergent notions about each other. Khushi wants separation and Arnav wants to hold onto her. Is it possible that the circumstances will force Arnav to walk away while Khushi would anticipate his return, or a reunion with him?

I smell a operation though. Sadly, what is love without pain. And like you said, Payal can be a deterrent, I feel Aman will be one too.

Coming to Aman, boy, he is a creep. I felt nauseous while reading about Arnav's past and Khushi is well, just his new wife.

As for Manohar, I am withholding my views for the same.

And, I still love Arnav with all my heart

Wow EC!!

The way you connected your thoughts with the quote - Brilliant👏

Awesome analysis and love to continue further -



Khushi is living under an assumption and what ever she sees will be as per the assumption!!

"You can wake up a person who is sleeping but could never wake up a person who is pretending to be asleep"

Khushi pretending to be asleep (keeping her thoughts and views to herself) will costs her and what is that - we have to wait and watch!!

I understand Khushi being timid in her initial stage of her marriage, but why is she still being the same way? Is it just lack of faith in her marriage?? That she is so sure that there is no future to them - Is it just Arnav's past or something else?

As for now, Khushi is hiding her feelings from Arnav is totally unfair and she should for once stop assuming things or going by other's views and confront Arnav may be start by asking him why he fell for her..

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

You called me a rose

This is wrt Khushi's perspective. She is the rose and the one to call her that is Arnav.

Protecting me with your thorns

Khushi is mistaken about Arnav and grossly so. She will know this when Arnav ceases to protect her.

But I knew I was the thorn

She says in the update that she is the one who can't love him back.

You withered.

Arnav might walk away from her.

And I still prick

She will be left heartbroken and vulnerable.

N, if this update was not layered, I dont know what is. By far, this has been one of your best penned updates since the time I have started reading your stories and fallen in love with them.

Why? Because you will show us one side of the mirror and leave the rest for us to judge. So while we would be seeing things from one protagonists POV, the other one would pass away as innocent.

I mean, ArHi have divergent notions about each other. Khushi wants separation and Arnav wants to hold onto her. Is it possible that the circumstances will force Arnav to walk away while Khushi would anticipate his return, or a reunion with him?

I smell a operation though. Sadly, what is love without pain. And like you said, Payal can be a deterrent, I feel Aman will be one too.

Coming to Aman, boy, he is a creep. I felt nauseous while reading about Arnav's past and Khushi is well, just his new wife.

As for Manohar, I am withholding my views for the same.

And, I still love Arnav with all my heart

EC,

Inspired by you, If I may add my views too -

You called me a rose

Khushi saying she might appear rose to him (Arnav's care and love)

Protecting me with your thorns

Arnav protecting Khushi (I feel she is yet to know) she is just thinking about his unadulterated care and love towards her which of course she couldn't doubt at the same time accept that it's even possible that too from him

But I knew I was the thorn

Khushi acknowledging that despite bringing Arnav's past to all her doubts but deep inside she knew it is her, who is giving her part to the relationship!! It is her who is the thorn to the rose which doesn't appear but pricks when you touches it - she thinks Arnav seeing her only as Rose but failing to look at thorn that she is!!

You withered.

Soon very soon when Arnav realises about her and her being the thorn and not as Rose thought by him - their relationship will break apart and Arnav will feel betrayed and rightly so!!

And I still prick

And Khushi will be left alone - for being the thorn herself!!

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

You called me a rose

This is wrt Khushi's perspective. She is the rose and the one to call her that is Arnav.

Protecting me with your thorns

Khushi is mistaken about Arnav and grossly so. She will know this when Arnav ceases to protect her.

But I knew I was the thorn

She says in the update that she is the one who can't love him back.

You withered.

Arnav might walk away from her.

And I still prick

She will be left heartbroken and vulnerable.

N, if this update was not layered, I dont know what is. By far, this has been one of your best penned updates since the time I have started reading your stories and fallen in love with them.

Why? Because you will show us one side of the mirror and leave the rest for us to judge. So while we would be seeing things from one protagonists POV, the other one would pass away as innocent.

I mean, ArHi have divergent notions about each other. Khushi wants separation and Arnav wants to hold onto her. Is it possible that the circumstances will force Arnav to walk away while Khushi would anticipate his return, or a reunion with him?

I smell a operation though. Sadly, what is love without pain. And like you said, Payal can be a deterrent, I feel Aman will be one too.

Coming to Aman, boy, he is a creep. I felt nauseous while reading about Arnav's past and Khushi is well, just his new wife.

As for Manohar, I am withholding my views for the same.

And, I still love Arnav with all my heart

EC,

Inspired by you, If I may add my views too -

You called me a rose

Khushi saying she might appear rose to him (Arnav's care and love)

Protecting me with your thorns

Arnav protecting Khushi (I feel she is yet to know) she is just thinking about his unadulterated care and love towards her which of course she couldn't doubt at the same time accept that it's even possible that too from him

But I knew I was the thorn

Khushi acknowledging that despite bringing Arnav's past to all her doubts but deep inside she knew it is her, who is giving her part to the relationship!! It is her who is the thorn to the rose which doesn't appear but pricks when you touches it - she thinks Arnav seeing her only as Rose but failing to look at thorn that she is!!

You withered.

Soon very soon when Arnav realises about her and her being the thorn and not as Rose thought by him - their relationship will break apart and Arnav will feel betrayed and rightly so!!

And I still prick

And Khushi will be left alone - for being the thorn herself!! - Khushi is foreseeing this!! Being left alone!

Sorry for the double post!

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Loved the ‘Tum Theek Ho’ from Arnav babua. Whatever she tells herself, Khushi cannot just ignore the feeling of hurt when she thinks about Arnav’s past. She knows that Arnav currently loves her and swears that he is happy with her. Whether she will be able to have a hamesha with Arnav is yet to be seen. Physically she is attracted to Arnav and is unable to resist his charms.
Did Arnav’s interest in politics stem from his school days when he was a part of student council? He was ofcourse a popular sportsman for his school and this would have added to his charm too. Arnav has been brought up without parents. His father passed away early and Aarti got married to Manohar and she too passed away soon? Arnav seems to have been brought up without parental support. Did Manohar get married to someone after Arti passed away and is Payal the daughter of Manohar and his second wife? That would make Arnav and Payal step siblings.

Khushi has Arnav’s love or that is what Arnav feels. For Khushi to completely accept Arnav, she needs to find her own reason to love him. Arnav is being considerate to Khushi’s needs even when he is busy in his own world. Khushi needs to find her way to love Arnav. Whether and when will this happen remains to be seen. Sometime one realizes what one has lost only after you lose it. Will It need Arhi separation for Arnav and Khushi to realise the real extent of love for one another? Only N knows this.

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

You called me a rose

This is wrt Khushi's perspective. She is the rose and the one to call her that is Arnav.

Protecting me with your thorns

Khushi is mistaken about Arnav and grossly so. She will know this when Arnav ceases to protect her.

But I knew I was the thorn

She says in the update that she is the one who can't love him back.

You withered.

Arnav might walk away from her.

And I still prick

She will be left heartbroken and vulnerable.

N, if this update was not layered, I dont know what is. By far, this has been one of your best penned updates since the time I have started reading your stories and fallen in love with them.

Why? Because you will show us one side of the mirror and leave the rest for us to judge. So while we would be seeing things from one protagonists POV, the other one would pass away as innocent.

I mean, ArHi have divergent notions about each other. Khushi wants separation and Arnav wants to hold onto her. Is it possible that the circumstances will force Arnav to walk away while Khushi would anticipate his return, or a reunion with him?

I smell a operation though. Sadly, what is love without pain. And like you said, Payal can be a deterrent, I feel Aman will be one too.

Coming to Aman, boy, he is a creep. I felt nauseous while reading about Arnav's past and Khushi is well, just his new wife.

As for Manohar, I am withholding my views for the same.

And, I still love Arnav with all my heart

EC

I have no words to describe what i feel about your take. N truly says that you are almost like her in your understanding of her stories. So beautifully you have lent a meaning to the quote given here!!!

I agree that we are always seeing only one aspect which is evident in N's stories and totally ignore the mirror image of the same. It is this that is more important to perceive and the most difficult one.

Like N said she has altered the characteristics of the original characters of the show and tweaked them to give us a totally new story about them.

Aman is reallly creepy but i would like to give him benefit of doubt just because maybe he may have something in his mind when he is talking to Khushi in a callous manner.

It is possible to that he wants to know whether Khushi is worthy enough to discover the diamond under the rock that is Arnav. As of now his character can go both the ways so can Payal too.

Payal is Ladli for Arnav and she too dotes on him for she got loved only by Arnav though she already has an older brother Akash. Maybe Akash is the apple of eye of his mom and hence he had a better life than Payal or Arnav

I too cannot find fault totally with Arnav for being who he is for he has been brought up in the circumstances. We should give him credit that he has recognised Khushi for what she is. Maybe he is really trying to be the old Arnav that he was. It is upto Khushi to now understand the real Arnav behind the mask and fall in love with him.

Will she realise her love for Arnav only after he goes far away from her (emotionally if not physically). Today Arnav is very protective about Khushi taking care of her at every stage though she projects that the same is not necessary.

Waiting for Khushi to realise Arnav's true worth and Arnav to realise what Khushi really needs from him...

Originally posted by: Aishu136

Me

Hi N,

Many Congratulations on thread 2 🥳

This is a sneak peek we got and a definite perspective changer one!

My Thoughts:

AMAN MEHRA:

When I read about Aman Mehra, the word ‘stuck by him’ caught my eyes and I thought Aman is going to be like the trademark – Aman from the show and like Akash in WA but yeah looks like not so positive one (Not concluded yet;)) –

Aman, an ex-best friend turned enemy to Arnav?!

Reasons:

Arnav and Aman had been best friends since school times that Aman had met Arnav’s parents and what about Aman’s parents too.

Aman had motivated Arnav to join PSP whereas Aman was just an able supported (why didn’t he join?) – If Aman says he is just being the best friend standing by Arnav then why is letting Arnav super-headed by an unworthy man like Shyam? What’s Aman take about PSP? Any relation between Aman and Shyam?

Aman does not talk about Arnav to Khushi like usually how a friend talks to his friend’s wife (especially in their first meet) –

I agree there is no formal acknowledgements and praises happen between friends but we refrain from showing that to a third person right ? Like Aman sees Khushi first time, he does not have to talk too-good, so high of Arnav but at the same time why does Aman have to talk about Arnav in a ill-way so much that anyone other than Arnav can tell that AMAN IS TRYING TO MESS WITH HER MIND! (I might be quick to judge this, but I feel strongly he gave a bad impression of himself as Arnav’s friend)

If Aman was truly the best friend and well-wisher to Arnav, would have prevented Arnav from joining Politics or atleast not encouraging him in joining politics. Inturn looks like Aman messes up Arnav’s mind!!

Moreover that remark on Sheetal was totally intentional and Further another statement about woman who supposedly entertained Arnav privately – I wonder which wife would like such things to be discussed or would take it easy and it did what it is suppose to do to Khushi, right?

I might be quick to judge Aman as ‘not a best-friend’ as he claims to be but Aman’s actions make me really suspicious of him not being Arnav’ best friend but also something else!

Arnav being playful about Aman’s remarks also show that Arnav trusts Aman!

In all, I feel Aman plays a major role in Arnav life so far that Aman is around Arnav in whatever he does!

Is Aman the one who advised or ill-advised Arnav about Manohar that he stands by Arnav in all wrong steps and why the work partnership was dissolved?! Is Aman using Arnav by all means financially, professionally and personally?!

KHUSHI:

I have nothing new to say but add on to:

She is completely on the darker side about Arnav and Arnav’s love – Though she had not given much thought about Arnav if not fall for Arnav in their first sight, what made her concede to Arnav’s proposal for marriage, just Manohar??

Khushi thinks and still thinks that Arnav is a casanova and prefer women whom he had past relationships over a virgin like her!! Is she insecured about herself? As she thinks herself to be just beautiful and anything beyond is only in the eyes of Arnav!

If she acknowledges Arnav loving her then what does she fear? Arnav staying in Love with her throughout or thinks he will fall out of love with her!!

Does She feel bad about lieing to Arnav about her happy about marriage? or Is it Khushi’s insecurities talking ??

ARNAV, The man who stole the show:

Though Khushi attracted Arnav in their first meet but when he came to know about Khushi as Shashi’s daughter, Arnav felt instant protectiveness over her to protect her from the cruel world of politics.

He acknowledges Shashi as Manohar’s friend as well Confidante at the same time, he is aware of Shashi trusting and supporting his mother – Looks like someone told Arnav these stories – which provokes questions, When did Aarti Kapoor die? What was Arnav’s age at that time (though I feel he must be very young that his custody was granted to his step-father)? Who told Arnav about the past??

Oh my, I loved Arnav when he shuts Aman mouth when he went over-board knowing well about his wife! But his declaration of ‘Married Man’ and ‘Happily Married Man’ Waah Waahhhh – What a man! What a husband!!

I’m glad that Arnav found Khushi resentment over the marriage and clarified it too. Arnav has no secrets about his present life and has no reasons to share his past life as of yet!!

Real Mystery:

1. The death of Aarti Kapoor or reason behind her death, which according to Arnav is his dearest Step-Father! We need to wait to know Manohar’s POV – Though I feel Manohar was involved (like his action or non-action ) that lead to her death and seen by Arnav or not seen by Arnav !!

2. Looks like Manohar Kapoor and Aarti Kappor got separated over a misunderstanding may be when Shashi trusted and supported Aarti Kapoor over Manohar which makes Arnav hates Manohar!

3. Was Arnav made an unwanted child when his custody was given to Manohar that his step-family (Payal’s mother) resented him and denied his right to Manohar?! – Also I see the connect between Arnav and Payal as ‘feeling Unwanted’, Arnav protects her from his step-family (from her own family) Arnav cares for her like nobody cared for him!!

4. Was Aarti Kapoor not well off in terms of money as Manohar or his wife – Arnav wants to rob off Manohar which shows money was a reason for th einjustice done to Aarti Kapoor and Arnav that he wants Manohar to lose all his money!!

5. I think Payal Mother – Manohar’s wife plays a major role in Arnav’s hatred over Manohar (I’m guessing this from possibilities of Arnav being made unwanted during his stay with Manohar after his mother’s death)

My understandings:

1. Khushi has absolutely no idea about 1) Arnav, 2) his character and 3) what he thinks about her and 4) his love for her – Her husband is her anchor (secret anchor) she is in great surprise when she realizes her mistake in NOT TRYING TO understand him/ his love sooner.

2. Khushi has conceded to the marriage not by force/ compel from Arnav infact she is not even aware of how Arnav had been a secret lover to get her. What made her concede to the marriage – Was it just feeling indebtedness to Manohar or something more??

3. Arnav absolutely hates his step-father to the extent that he goes to all length to embarass his step-father and doesn’t give him the satisfaction of acceptance Manohar craves for – His actions proves his harbour feelings against his step-father.

4. Arnav offers all of his love to Khushi and Khushi doesn’t just want his love or care he showers on her so she wants UNDERSTANDING & ACCEPTANCE from him?

5. Arnav thinks Khushi to be like his mother who is pure, innocent and a total misfit to his world (which become after his mother death) and I wonder does he know anything about Shashi’s death?

MY WILD GUESSES –

1. Khushi’s secret is something to do with her father’s death – is it just the mystery behind his death or something connected to Aarti Kapoor’s death too?!

2. Manohar or someone from his family (his wife/second wife) is in Politics or better say in PSP and that is exactly why Arnav joined PSP – to get recognized as ‘Mano’s step-son’ in Politics – Arnav wants to embarass Manohar in the party?!

3. Khushi entered this relationship foreseeing the separation? If yes, her motive is to find the mystery behind her father’s death and through Arnav or through PSP?!

4. Final – Is someone from PSP involved in both Aarti Kapoor and Shashi’s death – Might be silly to come up with this but couldn’t refrain from sharing it *hides face*

5. Khushi had conceded to marriage without much thoughts about Arnav and now can’t control abiding over his care and love further thinks that his care and love is not actual love but his well-practiced behaviours with his past relations..

This clearly shows she has a picture painted inside her heart and believes the painting to be something without understanding it from the artist’s eyes!!

P.S. I feel I am missing something, isn’t it??

Uff. What a detailed and entertaining comment 👏

Aman- I think, everyone is confused by his mixed signals. He is Arnav's best friend but he didnt really make Khushi feel at home, with his talks about Arnav's past.

Khushi- I have to agree with you that she is clueless about Arnav's feelings and is in the dark. But for how long? Someday she will have to snap out of the bubble and embrace the reality.

Arnav- I see you have started liking him. Join the club buddy 😆

And I am surprised that even you think that Shashi and Aarti would have the same murderer.

All in all, absolutely delighted to read your take

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Unres❤️

Congratulations N for the New Thread

I agree, when you had given us the prologues to select,, I hadnt picked up Withered as the favoured one because i did not know what you were capable of writing. After completion of Wedded and being with WA and WRY, slowly it has sunk into me and probably into others that most innocuous looking prologue can turn into such a wonderful story. Makes me wonder how you manage to weave such exquisite stories. We are all very honoured and thankful for getting the opportunity of reading the story (rather your manuscript) before being published.

May you continue to weave lovely stories for your happiness and for all of us too. May God give you good health and all the success in life. God Bless

We are finally on chapter 2 now. After a lot of guesses and theories, let us read Arnav’s POV as promised by you.

From the chapter it appears that Arnav married Khushi immediately upon her acceptance of the proposal. Was he worried about giving time to Khushi lest she has second thoughts? Looks like Khushi fell headlong into the relationship based on Manohar’s suggestion. To what extent she finds that she has done the right thing remains to be seen.
She did not get time to understand Arnav and decide about her feelings about him prior to marriage. For Khushi each day is like learning something new about her husband. She has come into this marriage with some pre-conceived notions about Arnav gathered from the public image that he had presented. She knows Arnav is a very handsome eligible bachelor, heir to the Kapoors, a budding political leader in the making. All this does not matter to Khushi for she wants to know the Arnav who is hiding behind this façade of glamour and wealth. She wants to know his real character and not what he projects before the world.
Khushi’s musings make sense- If Aman is really Arnav’s good friend, then why did he not dissuade him from joining politics?
Though she has been aware about Arnav’s transgressions in the past, when faced with th woman who was involved with him prior to marriage, it is difficult for her to fathom the way in which Arnav has been toying with women in the past for just physical gratification. Given a choice, She must never have chosen Arnav (whom she knows very little about now) as her possible suitor.

P 😲

No wonder you are N's fave. I read your comment and I was like why the hell didnt I think about this before.

Its all about unmasking. For Khushi to see the man behind Arnav and for Arnav to reach out and love her. 👏

And your take on Aman, man, I am in awe of your observation. Not even once did Arnav feel uncomfortable with what Aman was saying. There has to be a reason, right ?

Very well said P

Originally posted by: Aishu136

Wow EC!!

The way you connected your thoughts with the quote - Brilliant👏

Awesome analysis and love to continue further -



Khushi is living under an assumption and what ever she sees will be as per the assumption!!

"You can wake up a person who is sleeping but could never wake up a person who is pretending to be asleep"

Khushi pretending to be asleep (keeping her thoughts and views to herself) will costs her and what is that - we have to wait and watch!!

I understand Khushi being timid in her initial stage of her marriage, but why is she still being the same way? Is it just lack of faith in her marriage?? That she is so sure that there is no future to them - Is it just Arnav's past or something else?

As for now, Khushi is hiding her feelings from Arnav is totally unfair and she should for once stop assuming things or going by other's views and confront Arnav may be start by asking him why he fell for her..

@bold - That's why you are a star 👏

Agree with you. For now she is secure in Arnav's love cocoon. But when its threatened will she wake up