Ts- give me another chance- ft Kishore Jindal part-3b updated on page5 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chalo accha hai... Jaise ke saath taisa... 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pehli baar noodles ko thanx bolne ka man kr rha hai

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part:-3a

The Jindal bhavan was fully decorated with white flowers and golden lights ...and at the center there was a couple with lil girl by there side...yes they were Kishore and vaishnavi... wearing white suit and golden lahenga....both were looking beautiful together.... it was there reception today...they have decided to do court marriage so this reception was a gift from entire family to both.... everyone was congratulating them... everyone was happy...akshat was attending gouests...for a change today he was wearing white suit and he was looking like a Greek God...and there she come wearing a shimmery golden saree with backlace blouse... looking like a royal queen ....akshat was totally mesmrised seeing her ...

Guddan:-are wah Jindal Saab aaj to aap bAhot handsome lag rahe he...bade he hritik Roshan type...

Hearing hritik Roshan Aj burnt in jealousy...he was so jealous with hritik...why coz his wife was die hard fan of him and whenever she gets time she ogal at him...and this make Aj so so jealous....

Akshat:- yeh har baar Hrithik ka naam Lena jaruri hai Kya??waise aaj aap b badi Sundar lag rahi he mrs.jindal...kahi bijliya girane ka irada to nahi hai na???

Hearing this guddan turned red but composing her self she said

Guddan:- are Jindal Saab bijliya to gir gayi bas ab kahi barish na ho Jaye....

Saying this she run away making Aj mouth open in perfect O shape ...he was not accepcting such a bold answer from guddan....

It's time for media interaction...Aj greeted everyone and introduce Kishore and vaishnavi with baby pari to everyone... everyone was congratulating them but someone was so he'll shocked with this..

Yes she was Durga.... hearing this news she called Kishore and home and everyone but no one was picking up...she booked the first flight to Indore...

Hear everyone has left..the function be was over...now guddan and akshat were sitting near pool side recalling last 2weeks of hustle and bustle...

Akshat:- Sab thik se ho Gaya...Kishore ki it a khush mene kabhi nahi dekha yeh Sab tumhari wajahse hua he guddan....thank you...

Guddan:- Kya aap b...humne to sirf apna farz nibhaya hai....aur kuch nhi...Kishoreji k jindagi ne aise he khushiya humesha banivrahe.....waise itna b asan nahi tha in dono ko sath Lana wo to shuhar he pari ne humari madad Kari aur yeh Sab ho paya...

Flashback...

Aj showed divorce papers to Kishore...first he was hurt but later he accepted...aj has also open a fashion label in the name of pari... Kishore and vaishnavi both were happy..both wear handling this work together both are happy with each other's company but no one was ready to accept it...so pari turn the cupid for them....she fell while playing...she was badly injured..they took her to hospital... operation was started due to excessive blood loss... after 3 long hours later Dr come out and said she is out of danger... everyone has a sign of relief..they went to meet her ...she slowly open her eyes and first saw Kishore and smile brightly....

Pari:- mummy Kya tum papa se shadi karogi?? Mujhe pata he aap dono ek dusre se dher Sara love you kerte ho pr bolte nhi so plz mere liya yes bol do..

Hearing this both were shy...they nodded and everyone started dancing with joy ....due to there insistetance they decided to do court marriage but later they will keep grand reception....both accepted...and there marriage was done...

Flashback ends

Remembering the events....both Akshan sleep peacefully without any problem....so tommorow was a big day for all of them ....big tanasha hone Wala hai.....

PS:- part 3a ended...now part 3b ne hoga durgaji ka Ghar nikala...so stay tuned guys.....plz like and comment the story..it really motivate me to write more...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Pls update sooooooooooon ....

updated part:-3a on page 3

Plz chk

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

Thank you for loving the story dear...

Updated...part 3a

Plz check

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: randomfancrics

Dayan ke saath acha hua 😈

She deserves it 😈😈😈

Well done Rocky!!

I loved Kishore and Guddan's bonding here

I wonder why he calls Guddan as Guddan Jii now, Guddan Maa was better and more heart touching

Yes ek akela Rocky he tha Jo yeh Kar sakta hai...

So Kar Diya ...

Thank you so much for feedback dear...

Part 3a updated plz chk

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Sobiya153

Awesome

Loved it

Durga deserves it!!!

The biggest task might be uniting kishore n vaishnavi

Plz update soon

Thank you for feedback...

Updated next part plz chk

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Chalo accha hai... Jaise ke saath taisa... 👏

True...

Tit for tat...

Next part updated do chk and comment plz

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Pehli baar noodles ko thanx bolne ka man kr rha hai

continue soon

Hehehe...

So true ..

Next part updated plz chk

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Hehehe...

So true ..

Next part updated plz chk

Done

I m happy for kishore thanks to Akshan bechara dayan ke changool se nikal gya

Ab bs dayan ki beizati dekhna hai

Update soon

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