Ts- give me another chance- ft Kishore Jindal part-3b updated on page5 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Loved the bonding of kishore and guddan

Continue soon and plz also update the nxt part of ur ss

Thank you so much kammy...

Will update 2nd(last) part by evening....

Tab Tak guess karo Kon aa Raha he Akshan ki help Karne...

PS:- yes will update my SS soonest bus aaj yeh story khatam ho Jaye baadme....

Shayad Rocky

Update soon

Guddan and Kishore ka rishta is just ❤️

And a part of me hopes that Durga gets out of Kishore's life 🥳

Originally posted by: riddy254

Shayad Rocky

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Sahi pakde hai....

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Guddan and Kishore ka rishta is just ❤️

And a part of me hopes that Durga gets out of Kishore's life 🥳

Thank you...

Tathastu.....Aisa he hoga vats....

Part:-2

After 2 hours ...

A men with Maggie Noddles hair come too meet Aj and guddan at Aj's restorant...yes he was none other then Rocky...as aj has taken back his complain and freed him from jail to do his work....and Rocky has accepted this condition with no other option

Aaj:- aao Rocky betho...kya loge??

Rocky:- chahta to tumhari jaan Lena tha par ab wo plan mene cancel Kar Diya hai...q k Meri tum dono se koi personal dushmani to hai nahi...ha par ab main kisi aur se badla Lena chahata hu....

Guddan:- Hume pata hai wo kon hai rockyji...Durga bAhu apki pyari behna.....

Rocky:- ha...ha...wahi Meri khudki apni sagi bahen...jise bahen kehne me mujhe sharm ati he ab .. main D se badla Lena chahta hu..sare kand usne kiye aur jindgi humari kharab Kar di..usi k kehne par mene goa me tumare sath badtamizi Kari aur Aj ko torchar b usk kehne pe he Kiya ..angad ki is harkato k piche b D ka shaitani dimag tha fir khud pakdi na Jaye isliye Sara ilzam mujh pe chada Diya...aur ab D ko mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta....

Aj:- humne tumhe yahi kaam k liye bulaya he...tumhe bus Durga bAhuse in papers pe signature lane he..us k baat mautse b battar Zindagi ho jayegi unki....

Rocky:- Aisa Kya hai inn papers main??

Guddan:- tum khud he dekh lo??yeh wo papers he jis k Karan Durga bAhu ka ghamand Tut Kar chaknachur ho jayega..unko unki ego he dubayegi....

Rocky look the papers and smirk evily...

Rocky:- samjho aapka kaam ho jayega....2 din me aapko papers mil jayege...but aap apni deal yaad rakhege Aj right??

Aj:- me akshat jindal hu aur me apne vadese mukrta nahi hu...2 din baad yahi aakar yeh papers mujhe de Kar Jana aur apne rihayi k aur resort k papers lekar Jana....

Guddan:- aur ha jara b chalaki Karne ki sochiyega mat rockyji...warna aapki ek galti aapko he bhari pad sakti hai....

Nodding his head in agreement Rocky left from there...while guddan come to Aj and just hugged him...

Guddan:- Saab sahi to hoga na Jindal Saab??Durga bAhu sign Kar degi na??

Aj:- ha guddan Sab think hoga...Mana ki humara tarika galat he par hum kaam to accha he Kar rahe he na???aur waise b Durga bAhu kaha sant Mahatma he Jo unk sath hum Aisa nahi Kar sakte??

Guddan:- hmmmm..I hope Sab sahi ho....

Goa

Rocky:- surprise surprise.....dekho who is back D??

Durga:- Rocky tum?? Tum jailse Bahar kab aye??aur kaise aye??

Rocky:- tumse Matlab?? Tumhe Kya lAga k tum mujhe aise he fasa k jail me Marta chod k chali jaogi??ek baar mud k b nhi dekha mujhe??but thanks to ur bhola bhala pati me Bahar hu aur yaha Tak k use mene aj k sari property b transfer karvali he tumhare naam yeh keh k mere resort me Aj k naam Kar Raha hu .. D tumne mujhe dhoka Diya par phir b me apni rakhi ka karz Chula Raha hu...ab jaldise yeh paper padh lo aur apne sign Kar do.....

Durga:- are wah Rocky tu to bAhot smart nikla...I'm sorry par us din mujhe apne aapko bachana jaruri tha....aur accha kiya Jo tumne yeh kaam Kar Diya...aur Kishore to hai he bewkoof 10saalo see wahi to karti as rahi hu me?? Tera yeh itna bada resort Kishore ki bewkoofi k Karan to ban paya hai....

Saying this she take the papers from Rocky and without reading it she sign the papers in excitement.....

Durga:- ab batati hu us Aj aur guddan ko....k Durga Jindal Kon hai aur Kya hai???

Saying this she laugh evily while Rocky smirk slyly....

Rocky(POV):-D jab is papers ka raaz khulega tab tumhare pero tale ki jameen khisak jayegi ....

After 2 days ..

Rocky handed the papers to Aj and left from there ...

Now the biggest Task has to be done by both Akshan....

Wat do you think k Kya hoga yeh task??

PS...I know mene kaha tha k yeh last part hoga but ek aur part aur sare khulase ho jayege usme....

Pls update sooooooooooon ....

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

Dayan ke saath acha hua 😈

She deserves it 😈😈😈

Well done Rocky!!

I loved Kishore and Guddan's bonding here

I wonder why he calls Guddan as Guddan Jii now, Guddan Maa was better and more heart touching

Awesome

Loved it

Durga deserves it!!!

The biggest task might be uniting kishore n vaishnavi

Plz update soon