The revolutionary RagKor- A different attempt - Page 6

Ha ha uma....love you loads for bringing out that smile on my face whenever I see your comment....

Uma and frankly anybody can write better than what bhalla gets for udaan!!!!! Seriously

Yes raghav confession was early indeed.... but poor he... couldn't help and chakor toh chakor hain!!!

And yes the next part is here too.... but take your time sweet heart.... no worries

Sri dear a hug, a big thank you and love you loads 😍😍

Just mind blowing 😍thn d next Ragkor scene too was amazing😍Ragkor walking hand in hand,d way d Raghav tried to protect Chakor when she shivered nd d way he said I don't want to leave u alone, I want to take u right away to my place to keep u in my room forever..tht was just😍💜so they r going to tell their parents abt d their realationship after d operation GOBAR..it will b interesting to see how will dey react..

Nd last bt not d least Ragkor's secret meeting after Chakor's family function too was a pure bliss😍😍Chakor in a saree,Raghav awestruck seeing her😍Chakor lying on him..Chakor telling Raghav I trust u completely bt I don't trust myself now😍💜such a scintillating scene it was😍😍outstanding update Niki di👏👏👌👌was imagining MeeJay in those scenes nd missing dem so much😍😭eagerly waiting for d next💜💜

Thanks a ton uma.....big words dear .....but I am flying in the seventh heaven!!!😍😍😍

nikki dear, read your latest installment..omg gosh😍, when i think previous ragkor moment was MeeJaylicious and bliss, you come up with another bouncer. Loved it. There are several ways of writing dear, you would make a best screen writer.

Nikki dear too beautiful 😍 😍 😍 😍 .

Brilliant concept...excellent writing 👏 👏👏waahhhhh simply superb 👌

History my favourite subject . my friends often laugh at me about my choice.. I wonder why students don't like such an interesting sub..its takes different places we learn so much from it....u story remembering my school days..😍

Wahhhh finally chakor said I love u 😍 😍 n their cute romance 💏 n first kiss 👏❤️their silence n emotions u described well....blisssssss❤️........wowww chakor in sari 😍 😍 ..story is going sooo soo interesting ...

waiting for next update

Thank you so much dear 🤗

NIkkii

Maidam first hats off for the vivid description, felt like I went to the pre independence era 👏👏 excellent Niki.

True Ragkor is the major but the events surrounding play a vital part and love your detailing...

About RagKor he he kya bey 1919 ya 2019 they are advanced, kya fire rey back hugging, kissing, pinning down... ☺️super fast... thank god you finished with hugging after falling.... ufff 😉

am loving this Rana too, means business....

loving it Nikki,...... waiting for the next update....

he he sumi is following bossy footsteps now 🤣

ha ha...

Sumi dear can have a sweet way of getting back at her boss now😆

jokes apart, touchwood to the boss-assistant combo, its a bliss reading both of your writings dears. And both having a different style of writing is additional bliss.

sorry for bringing in a similie for both your writings again. I couldnt avoid remembering the other when I finish reading one's. so sorry for combining your both writings in my replies.

if one could create ripples within us by writing a sweet romantic scene of them, the way I like it, just like in a serial or movie, the other could just make me shed tears with her emotional writing scenes of them.

when I read nikki's, I am reminded of those sweet sweet moments of sukor, Along with their nokhjhoks,making me smile all through relishing them and whenever i read sumi's, those tear ebbing eyes of them displaying thousands of emotions erupting from their heart I could visualise.

touchwood again dears. pls continue your writings..never stop.

And nikki, that was a teaser comment to your part6..i am yet to post my main picture😁

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

ha ha...

Sumi dear can have a sweet way of getting back at her boss now😆

jokes apart, touchwood to the boss-assistant combo, its a bliss reading both of your writings dears. And both having a different style of writing is additional bliss.

sorry for bringing in a similie for both your writings again. I couldnt avoid remembering the other when I finish reading one's. so sorry for combining your both writings in my replies.

if one could create ripples within us by writing a sweet romantic scene of them, the way I like it, just like in a serial or movie, the other could just make me shed tears with her emotional writing scenes of them.

when I read nikki's, I am reminded of those sweet sweet moments of sukor, Along with their nokhjhoks,making me smile all through relishing them and whenever i read sumi's, those tear ebbing eyes of them displaying thousands of emotions erupting from their heart I could visualise.

touchwood again dears. pls continue your writings..never stop.

And nikki, that was a teaser comment to your part6..i am yet to post my main picture😁

Dearest Uma

I grab here to say the bossy and her assistant go all smiles and bonkers with your comment. We just love it.. Don't we Nikki 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Loads of love to you and all who encourage us to write

Ooops barging into my bossy cabin hehehe 🤣

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Dearest Uma

I grab here to say the bossy and her assistant go all smiles and bonkers with your comment. We just love it.. Don't we Nikki 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Never feel sorry deary...

Loads of love to you and all who encourage us to write

Ooops barging into my bossy cabin hehehe 🤣

Another detailed analysis which always brings a smile on my face.... thanks smita dear.

Part 6:

Wow Nikita dear, superb update👍👍. Loved that finally Chakor confessed, though she was trying to escape of Raghav, but her fear of losing him, forced her emotions to come out, made her confess her love for Raghav. Then their hug, his teasing , her light punch everything was so pleasant, just imagining Meejay in the scene make me more happy😍😍, I liked that you brought the social status issue which was so natural at that period. Their argument regarding this matter ,the way he shut her mouth, the kisses all were so beautifully written👌👌😍😍. I just visualized the entire scene.

The meeting , set up the future programs all were described in such details. Loved the portion while Raghav wanted to drop her home on the pretext of her security😉😉, then their walking hand in hand , didn't want to leave her alone but to take her to his house with full of respect & dignity after telling their parents about their relationship. Everything was so perfectly written. The next secret meeting at night was totally delightful. Chakor dressed in Saree, Raghav was amazed by her beauty , Chakor fell on Raghav, the tight hug was so blissful. Loved this part , let's see what will happen in their lives. Waiting for next update. Thank you.

Originally posted by: Kavi.Gollapudi

Nikki dear too beautiful 😍 😍 😍 😍 .

Brilliant concept...excellent writing 👏 👏👏waahhhhh simply superb 👌

History my favourite subject . my friends often laugh at me about my choice.. I wonder why students don't like such an interesting sub..its takes different places we learn so much from it....u story remembering my school days..😍

Wahhhh finally chakor said I love u 😍 😍 n their cute romance 💏 n first kiss 👏❤️their silence n emotions u described well....blisssssss❤️........wowww chakor in sari 😍 😍 ..story is going sooo soo interesting ...

waiting for next update

Thank you so much dear 🤗

Thanks to you kavi for reading the story and taking time out to comment on it.

and yes i would love history in my school days and i am happy that my son also loves it.

UPDATING THE 7TH PART NOW