After watching the recent promo..i want to story would shape like this...so here is my take on this current track...
Kalyani was furious and so much angry…hoe hoe can this cheap atharv can do this to her..how..?and her father just for a small piece of property …agreed to him..no she will not marry him…then Atul enters..
Atul: kalyani..atharv is nice guy…and what do you think …who will marry u..malhar..no he cannot ..why don’t u understand…he have to live with sampada for his child…he will never remarry you…just marry atharv and I will do whatever you want from me..
Kalyani looks at him..
Kal: whatever I want…? Are you sure papa…
Atul:………………….i..iam sure…….
Kal: I want two things…..first….sometime with Malhar ji..and you will take care that no one know about it…no one not even Auo Sahib…
Atul: kalyani…this is not possible…I can’t do this..
Kal: then I can’t do this marriage…
Atul (sighed):…okay….and what is your other condition..
Kal: I know aai will never marry kaka…until Auo Sahib will not agree….but you have to declare that you do not have any relation with aai..she is independent…and can take her decisions for her life…and make Auo Sahib ready for her marriage with kaka..
Atul: kalyani you are asking much now….
Kal: these are my two conditions…if you agree then I will marry whoever you choose for me
Atul:…I will see what can I do in this..and left from there..
Kalyani sit on the floor and cries her heart out…
Kal(pov): I know that I can’t get my family back..i will never get Malhar ji and pillu..but by doing this I can secure your life aai…I wish tum ye khud se samjh jati….then I will never agree for it..and try to get m yfamily back…but for you ..i will ..leave Malhar ji..and pillu..
Anupriya was watching all this….
@evening
Atul: kalyani you can meet Malhar..but get back on time…
Kal: thank you..papa..and leave from there…
Malhar reach on the place where kalyani was waiting for him..
Mal: kalyani tumne mujhe yha …
Kalyani was in red saree…looking at him..with love in her eyes..
Kal:…mujhe kch time chahiye tha aapke sath…srif aapke sath..ayiye bathiye naa..
Mal: kya matlab hai tumhara kalyani…
Kal: abhi sab bhul jyiye…aur meri baat suniye…she hold his one hand and put her head on his shoulder..
Malhar was surprised but sit still..
Kal: pta nhi kitna time hai hmare pass….lekin jo b hai use mai ek baar pure dil se Kalyani Malhar Rane banke bitana chati hu aapke sath..apki patni ki tarha..
Mal: kesi baatein kar rhi ho kalyani…meri patni srif tum ho…srif tum..mai nhi manta koii court ke order..agr baat Moksh kin hi hoti to m us Sampada ke sath kbhi nhi rhta…
He cupped her face in his hands..
Mal: tum…kya baat hai kalyani…mujhe saaf saaf batao….tum mujhe draa rhi ho..
Kalyani stands and Malhar was facing her back…and suddenly it starts raining ..
Kal: kitna romantic mosum ho gya hai na Malhar ji…
Mal: tumne Atharv se shhadi karne ke liye haa keh di hai na kalyani…
Kal:…mujhe aapse dur jana hi pdega Malhar ji..
Malhar pulled her to him…
Mal: tum khi ni jar hi ho kalyani…suna tumne …tum kisi atharv ya kisi se s b koii shaddi nhi karogi..
Kal: nhi Malhar ji ..mujhe ye karna pdegaa..
Mal: tum meri ho kalyani..sirf meri…
Kalyani looked into his eyes..both have intense eyelock..but suddenly kalyani broke it…and start moving in other direction..malhar again pulled her and back hugged her..he nuzzled his face in the crook of her neck…
Mal: rh pyogi mere bina…pillu ke bina…apna pyogi kisi aur ko..is tarha…
Kalyani was breathing heavily…with her eyes closed and tears are running down her face…
Mal: bolo kalyani…
Kal: aap bhi to pyar nahi karte mujhse….
Malhar stops and turned her to face him…
Mal: haa nhi karta mai tumse pyar…nahi karta…tmhare alawa kisi aur ko moksh ki aai ni bol sakta..par tumse pyar nhi karta…har waqt tmhe dekhne ke liye tadapta rehta hu..lekin tumse pyar nhi karta…tumhe koii aur dekhe bhi to use jaan se maar dalunga..par mai tumse pyar nhi karta…hmare kamre mai aaj bhi tmhari khusboo dhundta hu..par mai tumse pyar nhi karta…
Kalyani run and hugged him tightly….both are in passionate hug…after sometime..malhar broke the hug and cupped her face..
Mal: kalyani mai tumse bhut…
Kalyani put her hand on his mouth..
Kal: nahi Malhar ji….mujhe aur kamzor mat banaiye…
Mal:kyu kalyani..kyu jana hai tumhe….mai puri kosis krunga sab thik karne ki…trust nhi hai tmhe mujhpar..
Kal: aap pr pura trust hai…isliye to pillu ko apke sath chodkr ja sakti hu mai…lekin ye sab mujhe karna hoga ..aai ke liye..
And she narrates whole thing to him…
Mal: mai kbhi tumhare aur mai ke beech nhi ayunga kalyani…aur agr tum ye hi chati ho…and he turned his face crying…
Kalyani back hugged him….and cried…
She turned Malhar and kissed his whole face…and finally touched his forehead to her…both were crying…and then she run away from there…
Anupriya saw her crying while running…and went to the place where Malhar was sitting on his knees and shouting while crying…
She understood everything…
Kalyani went to atul…
Kal: papa mai atharv se shaddi krne k liye tyyar hu…lekin mai abhi sirf sagai krungi..shaddi aai ki shaadi ke baad…
Atul: thk h..thk h..beta mne baat kr li hai..kl hi hum sagai kr denge teri…
Kalyani nodded and leave from there…
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ????
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