Ariya FF: Niyati ka Khel [Thread 2] - Page 57

Originally posted by: armishra

Superb update

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Eagerly waiting for next part

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Thanks a lot dear

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Omg nice plan by arjun

Finally sikky got trapped

Hope he won't escape this time

Awesome update

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This time Sikander won't be able to escape. Only death awaits him now.

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97

Wow

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Finally an update of my favorite story

Arjun was worried about ahana

But riya help him to come out from his fear

That sikander is very much trapped in arjun plan now

Arjun made a brilliant plan

Now sikander has to face the volcano

Altaf after seeing death so close in form of arjun

Speak everything like parrot

Lol

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Sorry for late comment

Got stuck with studies

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And don't loose interest in this story

Please

It's one of my favorite one

Bye

Thanks a lot dear 🤗

Arjun interrogation kare aur criminal chup rahe, aisa ho sakta hai kya? 😉

Yep, Sikander is trapped and now he's going to be charred by the volcano.

I'm glad you liked it...

And dear, you're not late in commenting. Padhai ka itna stress hai that you forgot you had already commented once on this story. So don't say sorry 😊

Originally posted by: spatika

Read from the Start again...

It's awesome update

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Update coming soon...

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Oh God, itna lamba comment.

I'll try my best to finish this story ASAP. And don't worry, no losing motivation until it ends. 😉

Thanks a lot yaar 🤗

Thank God I'm not the only one who was feeling horrible about having to kill Sikander.

I guess mission of making readers feel for Sikander was accomplished.

I completely agree with all your points. (Pehli baar someone is justifying a villain's character)

Sikander might have chosen the wrong path but his intentions weren't exactly evil. All his wanted was his love to be with him.

And the love he has for Ahana is rare. He never stopped loving her, not when his family was killed, not when his business was destroyed and not when his people were murdered (all done by her brother).

I can say one thing, he's one character I'm going to cry for while writing his death. I don't want to kill him but he has to reap what he sowed.

Ahana and Ryaan will not end up together, not anymore. It's funny how I created these characters so they could be paired but the story took such a drastic turn that now pairing them feels wrong.

I'm really glad you liked it...makes it all worth the efforts. ❤️

Why ahana n rayan won't end up together?they both love each other..I know he did wrong blaming her every time..but if others can forgiveness for their harshness for ariya then why not he?

Just giving my opinion..don't get angry on me

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Why ahana n rayan won't end up together?they both love each other..I know he did wrong blaming her every time..but if others can forgiveness for their harshness for ariya then why not he?

Just giving my opinion..don't get angry on me

Why would I be angry Di? You have every right to say your opinion 😊

Actually, nobody is going to be forgiven. Arjun had clearly said that he can't forgive them for what they did to him and his sister. I have to cater to the readers and most of the readers don't want Ahana and Ryaan to be together. But in case, I'll put a question in the next update asking readers their opinion about this couple to see how it's going to go further.

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

A foolproof plan and it actually worked. And now his obsession is going to be the reason for his demise.

I'm not sure if Arjun can ever be on best terms with the team, but he'll be civil with them and...😉

Thanks for the reply

i agree with people who say ryan and ahana should not be together

respect trust empathy are very imp. in a relationship sirg pyaar kafi nahi hai

i like that dramatically things will not improve between arjun and team

u can never forgive people who hurt u that easily. u can put it behind and stay civil

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Thanks for the reply

i agree with people who say ryan and ahana should not be together

respect trust empathy are very imp. in a relationship sirg pyaar kafi nahi hai

i like that dramatically things will not improve between arjun and team

u can never forgive people who hurt u that easily. u can put it behind and stay civil

I agree with what you said. Trust is important in every relationship.

And yes, when someone hurts you, you don't forgive them instantly or easily. And that's what Arjun is aiming for.

Amazing update

Loved it

Finally Sikandar's chapter is over

But his love for Ahana is so unconditional

Loved how you portrayed his side of feelings too

Waiting for the update of talash

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