SS- Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal part:5 updated on page 11

Hi guys....so here I'm writing a story on our Akshan....hope you all will like it....

Part:1

So my story start from where Aj declare in front of all that they are not sharing husband-wife relationship and will never happen...and he left from there to his restorent....and here bhuaji full insult guddan about her Martial life...she even call her Guddan Gupta...guddan was already hurt with akshat"s behavior and now this bhuaji was getting on her nerve...so she just went from there to her room and close the door....Dadi and Lakshmi come running to comfort her but she denied them saying she want to leave alone for sometime... hearing this both went from there and guddan went to bathroom switch on the shower and cried her heart out...

Guddan (POV):- yeh akshatji khudko Kya samjhte he?? Pyar nahi hai...pyar ho nhi sakta q Bhai?? Hum itne bure hai Kya?? Thik he Mana hum normal couple nahi he par Saab k samne bolnese pHele soch lette na?? Khud to bol Kar chal diye sun na to Hume he pada na?? Par bas ab hum aur kisi se kuch nahi sunege...hum wahi karenge Jo hum karna chahte he...hum guddan Akshat Jindal aajse guddan Gupta wali jindagi jiyenge aur wahi karenge Jo hum karna chahte he....Saab se pahele to Hume is Jindal Bhavan ..nahi nahi pagalkhanese Bahar niklna hai ...

Wiping her tears and changing in bathrob guddan come out of the washroom and started packing her bag with her old clothes like jeans tops shorts dungrees. And bikini also....she packed her bag wear her red short jumpsuit with white shrug...and left the house without informing anyone....after coming out of house she booked a flight ticket for her to Jaipur

Guddan went in airport and switch of her mobile phone...After security checking guddan borfded in flight of to Jaipur....

Hear Dadi was disturb and worried for guddan...it's been hour but guddan didn't come out of the room so she decided to let her b alone for sometime...mean while she call to akshat ...

Dadi:-hello lalla kaha hai tu??

Akshat:- ji ma main restaurant aya hu...kuch kaam he aapko??

Dadi:- ha hai mujhe kaam tujhse bAhot jaruri kaam hai....abhi Jo tum gharme tamasha Kar k chale Gaye uska Kya parinam hua would Socha hai tumne??

Aj:- ma aap Kya bol rahi he mujhe kuch samajh na aa Raha...saaf saaf jahiye...

Dadi:- to soon saying this she narreted whole incident and how bhua insulted guddan...aur lalla 1 ghantese khudko kamre me band Kar k rakha he usne khudko...lalla Jo b ho yeh sari baate tumhe Saab samne nhi kehni chahiye thi....

Saying this she hung up the call and rested on her rocking chair....here akshat was now feeling guilty about leaving guddan alone in the mess which he created unknowingly...he so wanted to be with guddan but instead he left her there to bear the taunts alone...

And thinking all this akshat drove his car to the Jindal bhavan

Plz tell me should I continue... appreciation and criticism both are welcome...

PS:- Meri story ki guddan thodi bold hai..

Agar kisi ko pasand na aye to feel free to tell me....

Hope you all love it....

Thanks for advance...

Index:-

Part1- above...

Part2: page-2

Part 3:- page-4

Part 4:- page-7

Part-5:- page-11

Do continue

Nice start

Would love to read more n also would love see d bolder version of guddan

Update ASAP

Amazing start

Love it

Continue soon

This is just what I needed..! A bold and strong Guddan and a sorry and worrisome Akshat Jindal...! 👍🏼❤️

Bang on buddy ....pls do update sooooooooooon that's what I want

Mjhe v aisi hi guddan pasand hai

Plz plz update soon

amazing dear..

continue soon..

For the 1st time ever I became angry on AJ yesterday after watching that precap

Iss track pe story read karni thi mujhe precap dekhne ke baad

Continue asap

Great start!😉

Continue soon....

Kal ka Epi dekhne ka baad, even i felt like writing a OS on this situation

Nice story

Bold Guddan will be refreshing concept to read

Waiting for update