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Part:-2

As akshat enter his house he called to guddan..but there was no answer from her he went to bedroom bang the door but no noise so he quickly open the door of room but there was no guddan ...he quickly search whole house by that time everyone was out in Hall after not finding her anywhere his heart started beating fast he was fearing for her safety ...he quickly dialed her no. But it was switch off..he immidiatly call to revti kaushlya and bhushanji but no one was aware of her.....Dadi Lakshmi vardan Kishore and all are worried for her and continuesly calling her but guddan ka to koi pata he nahi...Aj was so desperately worried for her....

Dadi was so shattered..she went to house temple to pray for her gudiya's safety...there she find a letter it was of guddan's letter she handed the letter to Aj...he started reading...

Guddan's letter...

Dadi hum bilkul thik he humari chinta mat kijiye ..hum bas thoda sukun chahte he isliye kuch Dino k liye yahase ja rahe he...aap apna aur Sab ka khayal rakhiyega..aur lakshmibahu aap Dadi ko waqt par Khana aur davai de dijiyega aur sathme apna b dhayan rakhiyega...aur ha apni art competition ne jarur hissa Lena first prize humare ghar me he Ana chahiye...aur Kishoreji aur vardanji se kahiyega ki jyada stress na le aur apna khayal rakhe.Dadi hum jald he lautenge...q k aap se dur rehna humse na ho payega ...waise plz hume dhundiyega mat hum khudse jald he wapas aa jayege...accha ab hum chalte he Hume late ho Raha hai....aapki pyari gudiya...

Dadi, lakshmibahu and sons wear relieved so they went for there reaspective work Aj went to his room only 3chudails we're left in the hall....

Hear Aj was so so hurt..first she left him without informing then in the letter she doesn't even mention about him...she mentioned about his sons also but not him?? Q akhir q?? Akshat was so confused k use ho Kya Raha he q use bura lag raha... guddan ka uske bare me jikar na karnse use q itni taklif ho rahi hai??...ugghhhh he was so frustrated with his thoughts...so he went to washroom for shower ..he opened the shower was standing under the shower he was only cover with towel...her bare chest was drenched...water droplets wear making him calm ...he was feeling the coolness of water while closing his eyes when he felt two hand wear back hugging him ...he smiled..he turn around to see the beauty there she was guddan in his white shirt all wet was still hugging him but now from front ..her hot breaths on his chest making him crazy she was drawing pattern on his chest with her tiny fingers...he was groning with pleasure...he catch her hand pull her more close lift her chin and capture his beautiful pink lips in a soul searing intense and passionate kiss.... drinking all from her mouth both parted due to lack of oxigen....she smile shyly at him and burried her face in a crook of his neck....with a jerk Aj open his eyes...he was sweating in cold water...he was dreaming about guddan but why?? How is this possible?? Q?? He left the washroom not understanding k wat just happened with him??he come to the bedroom but soon again sadness engulf him not finding guddan near him?? He was so disturb..he was helluciating...but why?? He litterly done mini makeout session with her under the shower in his dream?? Why?? Not getting any answer he just rested on his arm chair to find the answer....

Jaipur.....

After landing in Jaipur at 8 in night guddan check-in to the luxurious rajputana hotel...she was now in her royal sweet feeling like a royal princess seeing the decore of the room...she was so excited...Hume Kya pata tha k akele ana itba mazedar hoga nahi to hum pahele he aa Jaye..... saying this she went to freshen up ...after taking royal bath she ordered her self a dinner...she was indeed hungry...she finishes her food then went to the jharokha(balcony) it was so beautiful outside...the sky was covered with stars and a full moon ..it was magical and guddan was actually lost in the beauty of nature... feeling the cold wind she actually feeling better relaxed relieved and peaceful...she watch the pinkcity drifting in a peaceful sleep...so she also decided to sleep .. feeling her lungs with fresh air she went to sleep in her royal bed...she sleeps a peaceful sleep with little smile adoring her face....

Indore:-

Here in bedroom someone was so frustrated that he litterly messed his whole room ..he murdered one if his favorite pillow to death...whole room was shattered..he was not getting sleep ..why?? are simple yaar uski guddan Jo nahi thi uske pass...he was so fed up with his mind and hear first that beautiful dream and now this...he was getting mad..to feel guddan he open her wardrobe to fatch her duppta but opening her wardrobe his mouth open in perfect o shape..his eyes poped from his chashma ...her all the western dress Wala side was empty...does that mean she took that clothes?? But why??

Akshat's pov:- q ek to mujhe Bina bataye chali gayi uparse apni sari western dresses leke gayi q... wo uski fati Hui jeans..off shoulder tops....backlace crop top aur uski skirts b?? Wo red aur black mini jumpsuit b le gayi....pagal ladki...akele koi jata he itne HOT kapde lekar?? Jana tha kahi to mere sath chalti Meri sath dalti wo apni hot dresses use pata b he k wo in kapdo me kitni Sundar aur Hot lagti hai...are yaha uski ek black and white stipes wali bikini thi na?? Wo kaha gayi?? Kahi wo b to nahi leke gayi sath me?? Yeh guddan karna Kya chahti hai mujhe yaha tadpta jalta chod Kar aur kaha aag lagane gayi hai??? Nahi mujhe use dhundna hoga me use akele aise to nahi chod sakta...akshat beta lag ja kaam par....

Akshat was totally lost in his guddan's world.. he was not understanding k usk sath Kya ho Raha hai... guddan to uski dost hai fir yeh ajeeb see feeling q ho rahi he?? Aur wo spana?? Yeh jealousy is Saab ka Kya Matlab hai ...he was so so confused, disturb and frustrated...was not at all getting any sleep...just Turing and tossing on his bed ....sleep was far away from The Akshat Jindal's eyes today.....

So guys here is part two ..hope you all will like it....plz do like and comment on my story...it motivate me to write aur better....

P:s... Sorry for the typos plz....aur surprise...Mera aj b thoda bold...buddhu hai...plz use b pyar dijiyega Saab....

Lots of love

Edited by Shona1991 - 5 years ago