Confusion- Akshan OS
Hi All. Okay this is another unplanned OS but since DivyankaTD had requested me to write an OS based on one of the spoiler pics, so I penned down this OS.
Ignore my Hindi mistakes as I m really bad at it. Hope you all will like this OS.
So in this OS, Guddan manages to prove her point and Dadi Bua is impressed with her. The reason is Guddan loses purposely to make Durga win so that she doesnt get divorced with Kishore cause of Dadi Bua.
When Akshat confronts Guddan that he saw her losing purposely and Guddan tells him the truth, Dadi Bua overhears everything. And later when Lakshmi was crying over the drunk incident Guddan hugged her and consoled her. This was enough to melt Dadi Bua's heart.
Dadi Bua: Bhabi, Iss Ghar Ke Liye Guddan Se Acha Saas Koyi Ho Hi Nahi Sakta. Iss Ladki Ne Meri Soch Ko Hi Badal Diya. Aab Se Mai Apne Bahuyon Ke Saath Dosti Karunga.
Dadi smiles. Dadi Bua hugs Dadi and Guddan.
Then she looks at the three Bahus and they are still scared of Dadi Bua.
Dadi Bua: Aab Tum Teeno Mere Shakal Kya Dekh Rahe Ho, Aau Gale Lago Meri.
Dadi Bua opens her arms to hug the Bahus and the Bahus look at each other. Guddan nods and Lakshmi runs to hug Dadi Bua. Durga and Saru also followed her to be in Dadi Bua's good books.
Dadi Bua: Durga Bahu mujhe Maaf Kardo Maine Tumse Aisa Bartaab Kiya.
Durga is unhappy with the fact Guddan wins again. Lakshmi is happy while Saru is also happy as she will be spared at least.
Dadi Bua: Lalla Kal Hi Mera America Jane Ke Bebesta Karna.
Guddan: Dadi Bua Aab Aap Aa Hi Gaye Kuch Din Aur Ke Liye Rukh Jaye Na. Humhe Acha Lagega.
Dadi Bua praises Guddan.
Dadi Bua: Kitni Achi Ladki Hai, Maine Itna Pareshan Kiya Uske Bawajoot Bhi Muje Rukhne Ko Keh Rahi Hai.
All smiles. Durga and Saru are unhappy.
Dadi Bua: Thik Hai Guddan Main Tumhare Liye Yahan 2-3 Din Aur Ke Liye Rehne Wali Hoon. Mujhe Uske Baath Wapas Jaana Padega. Vahan Kuch Zaroori Kaam Hai.
Guddan: Thik Hai Dadi Bua!
Dadi: Ab Jab Sab Thik Hogaya Chalo Hum Sab Kha Lete Hai.
As all goes to the dinner table, Guddan feels uneasy. She feels nauseous. Akshat notices this.
Akshat: Are you okay?
Guddan nods.
Akshat: Sure?
Guddan: Hum Thik...
Guddan couldnt complete her sentence as she isn't able to take it and she runs to the washroom to puke.
Akshat: Guddan?!!
Akshat runs to follow Guddan. Everyone looks at them surprised and they also follow Akshan.
In Akshan's room,
Guddan comes out of the washroom wiping her face with the towel.
Guddan: Areh Baapre, yeh kya tha!
Akshat: Guddan, are you okay? Tumhe Ho Kya Gaya Tha? Kahi tumne galati se dry fruits toh nahi kha liya?
Guddan: Nahi Jindal Saab humne dry fruits nahi khaya, aaj pure din se kuch nahi khaya.
Everyone comes there.
Akshat: Guddan maine tumse kahan na aap ne sehat ka dhyaan rakne ko?!!
Guddan: Jindal Saab...
Dadi: Guddan, kya hua tumhe beta? Tum thik toh ho na?!
Guddan holds her head as she feels dizzy.
Guddan: Areh Baapre, mujhe itni chakkar kyun aa rahi hai!
Akshat makes Guddan sit down on the bed. Dadi and Lakshmi rushes and sits besides Guddan, as they are concerned for her.
Lakshmi: Saasu Maa Aap Aaaram Ki Jiye Aap Kuch Dino Se Kuch Zyaada Hi Kaam Kar Rahe Ho.
Dadi Bua is seeing all this and thinking. She looks at Guddan's feet and a smile appears on her face.
Dadi Bua: Bhabi Humhe Aapse Kuch Baat Karna Hai.
Dadi comes with Dadi Bua.
Dadi Bua: Aur Tum Log Yahaan Khare Khare Kya Dekh Rahe Ho?! Guddan Ko Aab Pure Aaram Karne Ke Zaroorat Hai. Guddan Ko Aaram Karne Do. Aur Lalla Guddan Ka Khyaal Rakna. Iss Waqt Usse Tumhare Saqt Zaroorat Hai.
All leaves while Guddan looks at Akshat confused.
Guddan: Itna Bhi Kharab Nahi Hai Meri Tabyet.
Akshat: Just look at yourself. Wait..Your leg is swollen?! How did this happen?
Guddan: Voh Dance Karne Ke Waqt Jab Mai Gir Gayi Thi, Tab Se Aisa Hai.
Akshat: Maine Tumse Kitni Bar Kahan Ke Tumhe Apna Khyaal Khud Rakna Padega Par Tum Mere Sunte Nahi. Chalo Ab Tum Rest Karo Main Tumhare Liye Soup Leke Aata Hoon. It wont be good to sleep without eating anything.
In living room,
Dadi: Yeh Guddan Bhi Na Sabki Khyaal Rakte Hai Apna Khyaal Nahi Rakti.
Dadi Bua: Bhabi Mujhe Samajh Mai Aa Gaya Guddan Ke Tabyet Achanak Itni Kharap Kaise Hogaya?
Dadi: Kaise?! Kahin Guddan Ne Kuch Ulta Seeda Toh Nahi Kha Liya Hoga?!
Dadi Bua: Nahi Bhabi! Guddan Ek Bohoti Achi Khush Khabri Leke Aayi Hai. Dil Khush Hogaya.
Dadi: Main Kuch Samjha Nahi Shanti Didi.
Dadi Bua: Bhabhi Aapko Samajh Main Kaise Nahi Aaya. Guddan Pet Se Hai. Voh Maa Bane Wala Hai.
Dadi: Kya?!! Par Aapko Kaise Paata?(confused)
Dadi Bua: Bhabi Yeh Ulti, Chakar Yeh Saab Jab Ek Aurat Pet Se Hai Tab Hota Hai.
Dadi Bua also tells Dadi how she saw Guddan's feet is swollen which indicates she is pregnant.
Dadi gets really happy!
Dadi: Sach!!!
Dadi prays to Lord Krishna as she is super happy.
Dadi: Guddan Itni Achi Khush Khabri Leke Aayi!!
Lakshmi: Khush Khabri? Kaise Khush Khabri Dadi?
Dadi: Lakshmi Bahu, Guddan Maa Bane Wali Hai.
As Durga and Saru are walking and talking to each other
Saru: Yeh Saasu Maa Satraso Tarike Dhunte Hai Koyi Na Koyi Natak Karne Ke Liye.
Durga: Par Guddan Ki Tabyet Achanak Kharab Kaise Hogayi?
Lakshmi: (happy) Kya Iska Matlaab Saasu Maa Pregnant Hai!!
Durga and Saru gets surprised hearing this!
Dadi Bua: Haan. Teri Saas Maa Bane Wale Hai.
Dadi: Hum Sabko Iss Nou Mahine Ke Liye Guddan Ka Khyaal Rakhna Padega.
Saru: Durga Dii, Saasu Maa pregnant Hai?! Itna Jaldi!! Aise Kaise Ho SaktaHai?
Durga: Mai Zyaada Hairan Nahi Hoon Saru! Aur Vaise Bhi Guddan Aur AJ Aaj Kal Kuch Zyaada Hi Ek Dusre Ke Kareeb Hai . Yeh Toh Hona Hi Tha.
Saru: Ek Problem Khatam Nahi Ek Aur Problem Shuru!
Durga: (in her mind) Yeh Guddan Mere Yahaan Jeena Aur Bhi Mushkil Kar Raha Hai. Aur Ab Toh Guddan Pregnant Bhi Hai. Mujhe Kuch Karna Padega.
Durga gets thinking.
Akshat brings soup and tells Guddan to have it.
Guddan: Jindal Saab Humhe Soup Peene Ka Maan Nahi Kar Raha.
Akshat: Shh!! Chup Chap Soup Pi Lo.
Guddan looks at Akshat annoyed and refuses to have soup. He takes the bowl and feeds Guddan. Guddan have the soup and they share an eyelock looking at each other.
Akshat: Aab Tum So Jao. Vaise Bhi Bohot Der Hogaya Hai.
Akshat pulls the blanket on Guddan as she falls asleep.
Next day,
Akshat comes downstairs and he is surprised to see the decorations. There are balloons all around and also some soft toys confusing Akshat.
Akshat goes to Dadi to ask her.
Akshat: Maa Yeh Saab? Koyi Aane Wale Hai Kya?
Dadi: Bilkul Sahi Samai Par Aye Ho Lalla. Tumhara Aur Guddan Ka Hi Intezaar Hai.
Akshat: Par Maa Yeh...
Akshat looks at baby pictures all around. He is confused.
Akshat: Ho Kya Raha Hai?
Durga: AJ Ab Guddan Itna Baada Khush Khabri Leke Aaye Hai Ghar Mai, Toh Khushiyan Toh Manane Hi Padegi.
Akshat: Mai Kuch Samjha Nahi Durga Bahu.
Lakshmi: AJ Saasu Maa Ne Sabko Khush Kar Diya Kyunki Voh Pregnant Hai Na.
Akshat gets surprised and stunned hearing this.
Akshat: What!!
Saru: AJ Aap Chaukh Kyun Gaye? Aapko Aur Guddan Ko Yeh Sab Karne Se Pehle Soch Na Chaye Na.
Dadi: Tum Toh Chup Hi Raho Saru Bahu.
Saru gets quiet.
Akshat: Yeh Sab Kya Hai! Maa Guddan Ne Khud Aap Ko Bola Kya Ke Voh Pregnant Hai Kya?!
Dadi Bua: Guddan Ne Hum Logo Ko Kuch Nahi Kahan. Mujhe Pata Chal Gaya Ke Guddan Petse Hai. Yeh Ulti, Chakkar Yeh Sab Tab Hi Hota Hai Jab Ek Aaurat Petse Hota Hai.
Akshat: Par...
Dadi: Dekho Lalla Tum Guddan Ko Neeche Leke Aana. Nahi Rehne Do. Guddan Ko Thore Aur Aaram Karne Do. Usse Aaram Ki Sakth Zaroorat Hai.
Akshat: Dekhiye Maa Aapko Kuch Galat...
Angad: Bhai!
Angad comes and hugs Akshat.
Angad: Hum Bohot Khush Hai Bhai. Aap Aur Guddan Bhabi Ke Baby Aane Wale Hai Iss Ghar Mai. Main Bohot Khush Hoon Aapke Liye.
Akshat: Dekhiye Aap Sab...
Akshat's phone rings. He ignores it.
Akshat: Mai Kahan Thi. Haan Voh Guddan Pregnant Na...
Akshat's phone rings again.
Akshat: Haan Kya Hai!
Akshat: What!! I am coming!!
Akshat goes.
Dadi: Yeh Lalla Baap Bane Wale Hai Phir Bhi Kam Ke Bare Mai Sochta Rehta Hai. Usse Guddan Par Bhi Dhyaan Dena Chaye.
Akshat: I will be coming in the evening, tell Mr Chaddha.
Akshat keeps the phone.
Akshat sees everyone happy and discussing about his and Guddan's baby.
Akshat: Everyone is so happy. Pata Nahi Jab Sabko Sachai Pata Chalega Phir Kaise React Karege. I need to speak to Guddan.
Akshat goes to speak to Guddan.
As he comes in the room, he sees Guddan in a beautiful blue saree. He admires her.
Guddan looks at Akshat.
Guddan: Jindal Saab, Hum Kaise Lag Rahe Hai Iss Saree Mai. Nayi Saree Hai. Dadi Bua Ne Gift Kiya.
Akshat: Ache Lag Rahe Ho.
Guddan smiles.
Akshat: (in his mind)have to tell Guddan about this.
Akshat: Guddan Mujhe Tumse Kuch Zaroori Baate Karna Hai.
Guddan: Kahiye Na.
Akshat: Sab Ghar Wale Yeh Samaj Rahe Ke...
Just then Lakshmi comes there,
Lakshmi: Saasu Maa Aap Tayaar Ho Gaye Ho?!
Guddan: Haan Mai Bilkul Tayaar Hoon. Chaliye Lakshmi Bahu.
Lakshmi: Saasu Maa Aaram Se. Iss Haalath Mai Aapko Dheere Chalna Chaye.
Guddan is confused and surprised. Lakshmi helps Guddan to walk.
Guddan: Lakshmi Bahu, Meri Tabyet Itna Bhi Kharab Nahi Hai.
Guddan is confused as Lakshmi helps her climb down the stairs.
Lakshmi: Pata Hai Par Mai Aapki Bahu Hoon Na, Isliye Main Hoon Yahan Aap Ki Madad Karne Ke Liye.
Akshat: Guddan Se Baath Hi Nahi Ho Raha. I have to speak to her at any cost!
Guddan gets surprised seeing the arrangements. She smiles seeing this assuming kids coming from orphanage.
Guddan: Areh vah Kitni Cute Tayaari Kiya Hai Aap Sab Logo Ne.
Lakshmi: Aap Ko Acha Laga!
Guddan: Haan Kyun Nahi Acha Lagega.
Guddan comes downstairs. Dadi and Dadi Bua does Guddan's Nazar Utarna confusing Guddan.
Just then some kinnars come and dance around Guddan. Guddan is super confused. Akshat comes there and he is trying to find a chance to talk with Guddan.
Guddan: (in her mind) Yeh Ho Kya Raha Hai? Mujhe Kuch Samajh Main Naahi Aa Raha?
Dadi: Guddan Betho. Aise Khare Kyun Ho?!
Dadi makes Guddan sit down.
Saru brings juice for Guddan as per Dadi Bua's order.
Saru: Saasu Maa Juice!
Guddan takes the juice
Guddan: (in her mind) Why is everyone talking extra care of me?!
Dadi Bua: Guddan Tumne Iss Ghar Ko Acha Se Khyaal Rakha Hai Uske Liye Shukriya Aur Iss Ghar Ko Khusiyan Dene Ke Liye.
Guddan: Par Dadi Bua Yeh Toh Meri Farz Hai. Isme...In Saab Ki Kya Zaroorat Hai?!
Dadi:Guddan Tumne Itni Baadi Khush Khabri Diye Humhe. Iss Bache Ke Aane Se Sab Kuch Badal Jayega.
Guddan: Bache?!
Durga: Guddan Tumne Vake Mai Sabko Khush Kar Diya. Mubarak Ho.
Guddan: (drinking the juice and speaking) Aap Mujhe Baadhaiyaan Kyun De Rahi Ho?!
Saru: Aap Pregnant Jo Ho Saasu Maa!
Guddan spills the juice and starts coughing. Dadi rubs her back.
Dadi: Tum Thik Toh Ho Na Beta?
Dadi Bua: Saru Bahu Tumko Kahan Na Juice Thik Se Tayaar Karne Ke Liye, Yeh Kaam Bhi Tumse Nahi Ho Pa Raha!!!
Guddan: Kya Kahaan Apne Saru Bahu?!
Saru: Jo Apne Sunaz
Guddan: (muttering to herself) Mai Aur Pregnant?!
Guddan holds her stomach
Guddan: (in her mind) Nahi Nahi Aise Kaise Ho Sakta Hai.
Guddan is confused and stunned. She gulps and she looks at Akshat nervous. Akshat is speechless and she gestures him to do something.
Dadi: Tumhe Paata Nahi Guddan Beta Tumne Hum Sabko Kitna Khush Kiya. Maine Kabhi Socha Nahi Mujhe Yeh Din Bhi Dekne Ko Milega. Mai Khudko Bohot Khush Kismaat Samajhti Hoon. Baas Ab Intezaar Nahi Ho Raha. Guddan Tumko Mai Kaise Shukriyada Karoon.
Everyone is super happy and Guddan looks at everyone. Guddan looks at Akshat gesturing what to do now. Akshat is speechless.
Revati also comes there and hugs Guddan.
Revati: Dii Mai Aaj Bohoti Zyaada Khush Hoon. Main Mausi Bane Wali Hoon. Congratulations Dii!!!
Later,
Guddan finally gets a chance to talk to Akshat.
Guddan: Jindal Saab Yeh Saab Na Thik Nahi Ho Raha...Mai Pregnant Kaisi Ho Sakti Hoon!!
Akshat: I understand. Par Humhe Ghar Walo Ke Yeh Confusion Dur Karna Padega!!
Guddan: Yeh Na Ek Bohoti Baada Confusion Hai!!! Dekhiye Na Kitna Ajeeb Lag Raha Hai Itne Cute Cute Bache Ke Tasveero Ke Beech Humare Tasveer Hai!
Akshat: Kyunki Sabko Lagta Hai we are going to have a baby which is not true!!!Hume Sabko Jaldi Yeh Sachai Batane Padegi.
As Akshan is about to go, Parv comes there with a smile on his face. Guddan looks at Parv annoyed while Akshat holds her hand.
Parv: Areh AJ aur Guddan Itni Jaldi Jaldi Mai Kahaan Jaa Rahe Ho?
Akshat looks at Parv angrily and ignores him.
Akshat: Chalo Guddan.
Parv: Rukiye Toh Sahi. Hone Wale Maa Baap Ko Bhi Congratulate Karna Hai. Vaise Badhaai Ho Sasur Jii Aur Saasu Maa, Nayi Mehman Ke Liye.
Akshat and Guddan are quiet and gives Parv deadly stares.
Parv: Aise Ghur Kyun Rahe Ho? AJ Maine Toh Pehle Hi Kahaan Tha Aapko Voh Suhaag Raat Mai Maine Jo Gift Kiya Tha Aapko Voh Istemal Kar Lijiye Par Aap Toh Mere Baath Mante Hi Nahi Ho. Ab Dekh Liya Nateeja.
Guddan remembers how she saw that thing.
Guddan: (in her mind)Oh Toh Yeh Iss Nalayak Parv Ka Harkat Tha.
Parv: Vaise Mai Bohot Excited Hoon Yeh Dekhne Ke Liye Ke Meri Behen Ka Chota Devar Aane Wala Hai Yah Choti Nanand. Ab Jo Hogaya So Hogaya, Aab Kuch Kiya Bhi Nahi Jaa Sakta.
Guddan: Parv Tum Na Apne Bakwaas Baand Karo, Varna Mai Chorungi Nahi.
Akshat: Guddan...
Parv: Saasu Maa Aap Toh Gussa Hogayi. Relax! Iss Halaath Mai Aapko Zyaada Gussa Nahi Karna Chaye. Aur AJ maana padega Dada Bane Ke Umar Mai Aap Baap Ban Rahe Ho. Yeh Apne Sach Mai Karke Dikhaya!
Guddan: Ho Gaya Tumhara Bakwaas. Niklo Yahan Se!
Just then Dadi comes there and Parv acts sweet.
Parv: Vaise Mai Aap Dono Ke Liye Bohot Khush Hoon. Congratulations once again!
Dadi: Guddan Beta Aau Mere Saath.
Dadi makes Guddan sit down as Dadi Bua and Dadi are discussing about Guddan's pregnancy.
Dadi Bua: Dekhiye Bhabi Aab Aapko Guddan Ka Dhyaan Aur Rakna Padega. Guddan Tum Iss 9 Mahine Koyi Kaam Nahi Karoge. Teen Teen Bahu Hai Na Kaam Sambhalne Ke Liye.
Dadi: Haan.
Guddan: Par Yeh Saab Karne Ke Kya Zaroorat Hai?
Dadi: Kyun Nahi! Guddan Tum Na Sirf Aaram Hi Karna Thik Hai!
Dadi Bua: Iss Ghar Mai Lalla Ka Chota Lalla Aane Wala Hai. Mai Bohot Khush Hoon?!
Dadi: Choti Gudiya Bhi Toh Ho Sakta Hai.
Dadi Bua: Ab Yeh Toh 9 Mahine Baath Pata Chalega.
Guddan: (in her mind) Sab Ko Lagta Hai Mai Pregnant Hoon. Yeh Kaisa Hua. Ab Main Sabko Kaise Samjhao.
Dadi and Dadi Bua are laughing.
Guddan: (in her mind) Jab Sab Ko Pata Chalega Mai Pregnant Nahi Hoon Tab Sabko Kitna Dukh Hoga. Par Mujhe Sachai Batana Padega! Vaise Bhi Sabko Ek Din Pata Chalna Hai.
Guddan gets up.
Lakshmi: Saasu Ma Apa Uth Kyun Gaye?
Guddan: Hum Aap Sab Se Kuch Kehna Chahte Hai? Mai Pregnant Nahi Hoon.
Everyone looks at Guddan surprised.
Guddan: Mujhe Maaf Kar Dijiye. Par Yeh Hi Sach Hai.
Guddan starts crying and runs from there.
Akshat feels bad and goes to console Guddan.
In Akshan's room
Akshat: Guddan Isme Rone Wali Kya Baath Hai. Its just a misunderstanding. At least it got cleared.
Guddan: Par Mujhe Bohot Bura Lag Raha Hai. Sab Itna Khush Thi.
Guddan is sobbing and Akshat hugs Guddan. This surprised Guddan.
Akshat: Dont worry Guddan you have not done it intentionally. It was all a confusion. Lets go downstairs now.
Downstairs,
Dadi hugs Guddan.
Dadi: Koyi Baat Nahi Beta. Isme Tumhari Koyi Galati Nahi Hai.
Dadi Bua: Galati Meri Hai. Mujhe Laga Guddan Maa Bane Wali Hai.
Dadi: Koyi Baath Nahi Beta. Ek Din Yeh Khush Khabri Tum Hum Sabko Zaroor Dogi. Mujhe Pura Yakeen Hai. Mujhe Baas Uss Din Ka Intezaar Hai.
Guddan and Akshat looks at each other embarrassed.
The end.
I will also be posting a TS this or next week which I wrote a month ago, but didnt get time to post. I will also post an OS on Guddan's POV next week which I promised due to my prev OS's sucess. Since I will be out of the country after two weeks for a month, and I wont be much active then I will be posting some of my works this and next week. And sorry for the mistakes I made in this OS, please ignore it hehe.
