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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey saru here

You can find first part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086106/soulmate-ff-p1

Second part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086244/soulmate-ff-p2

Third part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086669/soulmates-ff-p3

Hope u guys njoy this part also

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rakshit.... dristi called his name softly and collapsed in his arms ..

Mrs shergill..mrs shergill... what happened?? Dristi please open your eyes damnit.

Rakshit panicked seeing her thus..He forgot his phone and ran into the hall calling his family..Mahima who was passing by came into the room hearing rakshits shout..

Dristi who just regained her senses and was sitting on bed struggling with her weakness saw her coming..

Mahima had a look at dristi and the room misunderstood the whole situation and without asking her what happened began blaming her..You are the reason my son is suffering today .. He always runs around in concern for you and you doesnt even care. I thought of giving u chance thinking my son will be happy with you but u proved me wrong again. You are unfit to be my sons wife n my dil. Y dont u just go away from here.

Dristi unable to take all these just stared ahead without responding.. Mahima left angrily....

Rakshit came back with doctor after sometime and found dristi asleep on the bed.. He went to wakeup saying nrs shergill pls doctor se apna check up karvao..saying so he touched her and got takenaback..

Doctor checked her and told rakshit that she is suffering from high fever and mental stress.. she must not take stress at all pls take care..

Rakshit dropped doctor to the door and got back to the room only to find d there.. He heard her saying pls get well soon di.

He asked d y ru here.. and since when u have started caring for mrs shegill.. and why r u calling her di??D said no rakshit i meant dear u must have heard it wrong.. yes i dont like her becoz of what she did bt she cared for me when im not well so im rerurning he favor thats it. Otherthan that i dont care whatever happens with her

Raks shouted enough d. Dont u dare say a word against her i know wrong happened with you but this is not the way. She must have her own reaons for doing so.. shikar and mrs shergill both of them did this fiasco bt only mrs shergill is blamed..y..? Pls leave she is not well and if possible forgive her and pls dont make her life miserable ..i request you to please leave..

D began to go and she turned around to look at dri remembered about the promise she made to her di..that she will never disclose that hey both r sisters.. she did this drama to see how is her di.. thanking so she left the room..

Raks sat beside dristi to check her fever ..He applied cold press on her forehead..Its night now but rakshit didnt even gotup from her side..He was thinking about whatevr dri said before she collapsed in his arms.. why is she blaming me..whats going on her mind..

Dristi began to ger flashes of her p killing them and rakshit killing divya started crying mamaaaa in her delirious state.. rakshit who saw this gave her comfort in his arms..

Shhh.. he began rocking her in his arms and said kuch nahi hua dristi..im here only ..tumhare paas.. pls calm down..

He heard her saying mama papa .. wo aurat.. mr shergill.. ache insaan hai..par jo maine dekha ..mere dil aur dimag mein mr shergill.. mein kya karu ..mahima mam...

He felt really bad that what she must have gone through all her life.. He thought his mother will melt down after sometime n accept her but its not happening.. She must be missing her parents.

He began to tenderly caress her face and looking at her face he couldnt control himself and planted a kiss on her forehead saying im there for u mrs shergill..

Just then he got a call from vinay saying that he got a call from the photographer that holi video cd will be delivered shortly to shergill house..

I will get to know what happened on holi finally.. said rakshit to himself.. p who was peeking into his room heard it and got shocked.....

To be continued..pls like and give your valuable feedback..thank you all..Saru...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updt

Loved Rakshit's care towards Dri..

But Mahima did wrong to shout on her without knowing anything 😡

Wow he will now knw wht happened on holi🥰

Cont soon

Thnx for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome updt

Loved Rakshit's care towards Dri..

But Mahima did wrong to shout on her without knowing anything 😡

Wow he will now knw wht happened on holi🥰

Cont soon

Thnx for pm

Rashi🤗thanks dear.. here mahima is not negative she will improve lol..Here something else will happen in holi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Well since i miss commenting on all 4 FF'S here's all my feedback in one shot


First Post : Want to blow seeti ( whistle) no appropriate emoji for it. So here goes my reaction for it

Damn Girl!!! Freaking Hot. I got turned on reading it. 🤩

Post 2 & 3 : Loved the tenderness in the equation & the slow revealing of Dri's origins to Ra like i wanted in the show. 🤧

Post 4 : Loved the shift in genre to thriller guessing next post. 😨


Overall story felt smooth could visualise the scene with your words. You caught my attention with the first post.😶😐🙂


So kudos to you

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Don't know if you figured this out but if you press the no of likes tab button you get the list of names that liked

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Well since i miss commenting on all 4 FF'S here's all my feedback in one shot


First Post : Want to blow seeti ( whistle) no appropriate emoji for it. So here goes my reaction for it

Damn Girl!!! Freaking Hot. I got turned on reading it. 🤩

Post 2 & 3 : Loved the tenderness in the equation & the slow revealing of Dri's origins to Ra like i wanted in the show. 🤧

Post 4 : Loved the shift in genre to thriller guessing next post. 😨


Overall story felt smooth could visualise the scene with your words. You caught my attention with the first post.😶😐🙂


So kudos to you

This made my day dear.. im new to this so im glad u liked it.. this is by far the best comment for me..thanks n hugs
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Don't know if you figured this out but if you press the no of likes tab button you get the list of names that liked

Yes dear i know🤗😘
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Posted: 6 years ago
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P ki toh

Uda dena isko please next update me

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