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sarada

@Saru...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi
P ki toh
Uda dena isko please next update me

Lol ur wish my command darling

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Yayy!! Another beautiful OS👏

I really loved it. Rakshit's concern on seeing Drishti faint was very heart-warming. But as she gained her senses, Mahima vent her anger without understanding the situation. Mahima might not be wrong but what she did was very inhuman.

And the confusion of Rakshit being culprit in Drishti's eyes is intriguing. Even in her unconscious state, she is reliving the conflict of her heart. The Holi video is available, but I'm sure Pishachini will somehow either destroy it or tamper with it.

I'm really enjoying the mystery this story holds. Heart

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please continue this soon.

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sarada

@Saru...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
Yayy!! Another beautiful OS👏
I really loved it. Rakshit's concern on seeing Drishti faint was very heart-warming. But as she gained her senses, Mahima vent her anger without understanding the situation. Mahima might not be wrong but what she did was very inhuman.
And the confusion of Rakshit being culprit in Drishti's eyes is intriguing. Even in her unconscious state, she is reliving the conflict of her heart. The Holi video is available, but I'm sure Pishachini will somehow either destroy it or tamper with it.
I'm really enjoying the mystery this story holds.
Thanks a lot for the PM
Please continue this soon.

Aww sam..i was waiting for ur comment dear.. yes mystery to hai lets c what happens.. and yes in unconscious state or inherbated state one will always speak truth or disclose whats in their heart..

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kgoyal

@kgoyal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Not able to read part 4

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sarada

@Saru...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kgoyal
Not able to read part 4

I can read it dear..pls check once again tc

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MeV

@Mevsta101

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether
Awesome updt
Loved Rakshit's care towards Dri..
But Mahima did wrong to shout on her without knowing anything 😡
Wow he will now knw wht happened on holi🥰
Cont soon
Thnx for pm

LOL that’s why it fits well as that is something Mahima would do 🙄😂

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MeV

@Mevsta101

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Okey so good news I can already see the improvement in u writing which is great as u have some really nice ideas

Bad news mahima gets on my nerves in general 😂

LOL

But no seriously, this part of the OS was good, love Rakshits care towards his Mrs

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sarada

@Saru...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Mevsta101
Okey so good news I can already see the improvement in u writing which is great as u have some really nice ideas
Bad news mahima gets on my nerves in general 😂
LOL
But no seriously, this part of the OS was good, love Rakshits care towards his Mrs

Hahaha thanks my love.. im glad u liked it..Mahima gets on evryone nerves so nothing new.. lolNew part will be up soon..thanks