A2 to A4 a tribute to womanhood/motherhood

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A2 to A4...twosome foursome - indeed awesome


Relationships build on love but not necessarily always on lust... But lust happens and when it happens no body can stop or know how it happens... ...

She gave in herself for him to write the poetry and he wrote in beautifully, carefully...

Maidam.. hmmm... the boys want a sister!!!

Ssshhh chup besharam, budda hai thu !!! dad of two!!!

Budda??? Hum??? Arey Maidam...ham abibi handsometa and young hai ek dum!!! He pulled her close to him literally crushing her bones...crushing her into him... she wanted that too...

And I am forty already.. she said... he cupped her face and said age is a number that define the number of years we live in this world while love is infinite and never fades even if it is a decade... But, he held her face, .. we will handle the boys he said...kissed her... Maidam hume sirf thumhara pyaar chaahiye...thumko hum bahut bahut bahut zyaada pyaar karthey hai aur kuch nahi chahiyeee... Koyi thakleef nahi dhena chahthey hai... They slept holding each other.

But she started to think... Looking at his sleeping face... The pure unadulterated love... she smiled...You and the boys have given me everything...loads of love... Raaghav I have given you back nothing... I brought you for my reason... But you started to live making me as your reason to live... I love you loads Raaghav and I am ready to go through the process of carrying our symbol of love for the happiness of our sons... and for you!!! I saw that spark in your eyes when you spoke about having our child, your life within me...

But one thought was making her worry... She brushed it aside...

She kissed him on his forehead... placed her head on his chest and slept in peace.

There were few poetries written but with utmost care...and in one or two poetries the verses were left to flow free ...

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It was two months now...

The boys were nonstop with their ranting while coming back from the school ...

Sis sis sis we need sis... asking daddy who was just dodging their questions... while they were saying daddy their friend Rohan has a sister and he keeps boasting how she laughs, plays and AA was saying sometimes Ar is so into his adventure and surfing I am feeing bored... while Ar was saying no no I am bored because of you, if a sis is there it will be so nice... Raaghav was trying to calm the boys when a phone call came from Girija... His face changed... he panicked...daddy what happened... Your mummy has fallen down... he just raced the rover to reach the Mansion within minutes... He called Shyaam Laal who said the dr is already attending to her... As Chakor had fainted in her room while talking to Girija.

The trio just doubled up to their room... Ar and Aa were already in tears, asking kaaka who was outside the room... what happened to mummy kaaka, is she hurt, how did she fall? Can we go see her?? While Raaghav was shattered in tears, his heart was in his mouth... bajrangbali, Ramji kya hua maidam ko... Laal was calming the boys and patting the shoulders of Raaghav. Where is mausi, he asked... when the lady Dr walked out in all smiles... Dr. aunty why are you smiling when our mummy has fallen down asked both in unison crying... she said my boys... she has been seeing them since their birth... she looked at Raaghav who was just looking at her... She said Congrats... You are going to have an addition to your family... Go see her inside but come meet me at the clinic. He just froze...Kaaka hugged him, god has blessed you my boy he said. The boys asked aunty / kaaka please tell us properly. She said, boys you are going to get playmate soon, chota sa bhai ya behan.. Kya !!! Sach!!! both kissed her and ran inside the room followed by Raaghav... who controlled all his emotions and walked behind them.

Girija was beside Chakor who was sitting up on the bed... Eyes teared as the boys ran to her hugging on each side... She knew her man was controlling himself... mummy thank you so it's a sis for us... They kissed her ... Girija was telling beta aap dhono mumma ka kayal rakhna hai... She is going to have a small baby... She is going to me mine said both... but we don't know if it's a boy or a girl... nan a na only sis.. Chakor hugged them and looking at Raaghav...who was looking at her with tears and eyes full of love. Whats if it's a bro.. both said hmmm we want a sis but ok if it's a bro too as mumma you have said all children are god's gift. So whatever gift is given we will be happy... We love you mummy and daddy. Girija took the boys saying mumma needs to rest thus leaving them alone. She closed the doors behind and went with the boys.

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He just jittered, came near her, kneeled on the bed beside her... kissed her forehead... So much of emotions... is... it... really!!! He sat beside her... Maidam... He could not speak... hugged her... Are you fine... Will this be pain..ful for you??

She hugged him ... Made him feel her flat tummy... shaking her head... yes .. sach... Raaghav your life, your blood is growing within me... our symbol of love... they both cried happy tears... he held her kissed her tummy and said I have no words to say how happy I am... How blessed I am...I thought I will die an orphan... I never thought I will get a family in my life, you came in my life... the boys turned my life... But you made me to start living start breathing and now how can I thank you for completing my life... he cried like a small baby...but how is this as you...were...

Raaghav she gathered him...you gave me everything... your pure love... and I want to nurture that love within me to give it as a gift to you and the boys... but maidam...you are my gift, my poetry... you... hmmm she kissed him on his lips... I left few of the poetries verses to flow free ... she blushed... He lifted her in his arms, placed her in the balcony diwan resting her on his chest... Looking at the sky... She asked what do you see there... he said our new life...tha..she pursed her lips with his. But Raaghav first our sons... our boys... then our little one... tiredness was taking over her and she slept peacefully on his chest... he carried her very carefully as she was carrying his pearl within... Laying her down on the bed... he kissed her tummy... thank you for coming... Making my life more meaningful...

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He asked her to not to go to the school anymore. The boys were going ballistic AA was asking Girija how to take care of mummy and their little one while Ar was surfing caring a pregnant mummy. Raaghav met the gynae who prescribed him to buy vitamins and also told him that she should be taken care of well as it may be a little difficult for her due to her age... the whole mansion was spinning around Chakor!!

It was completion of the first trimester and they were in the clinic for the Ultrasound scan ... the boys were waiting outside and Raaghav was inside with her holding her hands... Looking at the monitor where he could see little jelly beans (not clear) but could hear the heart beat... the boys were allowed for a brief few minutes and they were so thrilled to hear the heart beat. The gynae shared the most important news to them!! Raaghav was too scared but Chakor held him and said they will go through it. After much cohesion by Chakor, their family gynae shared the happy news that it was not a girl but girls yesss a twin... they were eclectic but she did share that Chakor has to be on constant check up and observation and one of the foetus was a bit weak too... Chakor said that she would go through it but made Raaghav to promise not to tell the boys it was twins but to tell them it was a girl. The boys were so crazy and start naming too. Both were saying it was his and Ar named it Aditi while Aa said its going to be Ananya . Raaghav was all the more loving his maidam madly and ensured there was a nurse during the day time much against Chakor's wish

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Mummy yummy with mood swings

Raaghav was in a meeting with the plantation Board. Girija went to one of the plantation workers wedding and the boys called Raaghav frantically...

Daddy, please come... mummy is crying terribly... she is angry too... We did all our homework but still and she is ... and asking for...even the nurse is unable to handle.

Raaghav dropped everything oh god what now... Off late madam is behaving so different each and every moment is so unpredictable that day she made me run for cocodokla and I had to literally beg the shopwala to make it special ... Arey bajrangbali now I know why you stayed bachelor bey!!! At the same time he was enjoying each and every bit of her tantrums.. Girja and Dr has told about moodswings and he was tackling it but still it made him sweat a lot.. he was telling Raghav Babu... Bapu ka safar...hai bey. Suffer thoda bey!

He reached home and she was crying,,,, she was growing huge too.. she said Raaghav look this nurse is useless I wanted to have panipoori with dates and nuts as filling along chatpata paani with chocolate fundao and mango ras with little of achar but mausi is not there and she is not giving me... I know none bothers about me... no body worries about me... crying... I am unable to walk properly too. Earlier I used to do everything myself. The boys were in the corner not understanding her weird taste and was seeing an altogether new mummy.. bhai. Aa was saying poor mummy I think ananya is troubling while Ar was telling no no aditi might be... they were trying to pacify mumma but no... Raaghav went hugged her and said no dear... please calm down, I shall make what you want. The nurse went home as her hours of duty was over but was fully exhausted. The boys were beside mumma... She calmed with him... he made her lie down and in a jiffy brought what she wanted...but lo her mood turned again..

Hey Raaghav babu will anyone eat paanipoori with nuts...I want poori baaji but she was devouring the weird combo in a jiffy... well she is threesome now... poor girl and poor babu!!! Poori was on the way... even Shyam kaaka was not spared in this but he was happy too!!!

She calmed and slept on the diwan in the balcony when he noticed lifting her gown that her legs were swollen terribly... he teared himself... you are going through so much pain for us...the boys brought hot water in a bag and he massaged her swollen legs and they ensured that the bag was in the right temperature to give fermentation. She slept with Raaghav pressing her one feet and the boys the other which was on his lap...

Why is mummy's leg so swollen asked AA to Ar... may be the baby is weeing too much!!! Poor mummy...

They were together with her and jumped with happiness when they felt the kick of the baby. The further scans revealed that the babies were growing fine. Both were good. But Ar and Aa were not aware of the twins and was fighting over it. Mine no Mine...

The Dr was advising Chakor to get mentally prepared for C Sec to avoid complications but Chakor was adamant to have it normal... Raaghav could not say anything as he knows what ever Maidam says holds final...Though difficult she was doing the few stretches as advised by the gynae.

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Months were running...

It was a late evening and she was standing in front of the mirror looking at her belly... she could not stand properly... she was wearing a very very loose wrap around robe...

Raaghav had just had his shower after a tiring day at the plantation and walked out with his pyjamas. He was about to wear his T.. when he saw Chakor looking at herself, he smiled, threw the T away and walked with his bare torso towards her standing behind.. hugging her... kissing her in her neck.. he tried hugging her tummy... I am growing fat she said...looking at the mirror... he said no, you are growing beautiful... and glowing more and more... making me go cra... he held his words... She rested on his bare chest...I am shapeless and don't know if I will loose these fabs too...He said with all love and lust... maidam every shape of yours I love, you are way too beautiful now. He passed his hands over the belly and said my deary princesses your daddy is bhuddhu but will give all his love to you and your brothers are there to care for you. Just don't trouble my Queen much please for I love her too much... She knew he was lusting.. but as always he holds himself... she turned towards him..hugging him. walked along with him to the bed. She sat on his lap, she said I am too heavy now... he hugged her and said I am strong and can carry more... she kissed him on his forehead and asked do you love me Raaghav?... I don't look good na?...he kept his fingers on her lips ssshh.. No mai...she removed his finger and placed on her lap... then why are you not loving me..placing her right hand around his neck and soothing his torso with her left.. loosening her robe.. .his eyes were surprised!! she placed his face on her chest... closing in ... she provoked him to make love to her for it has been long since her pregnancy was confirmed.. ever since, he was way too careful and was distancing himself from her, but admiring each and every change in her.. he thought to himself... how do you know I am going crazy of you..I wanted to feel every part of you..but was too scared... she understood him... Love me... Raaghav, she soothed his bare back fully .

(Bit bold but I thought it was necessary.. sort of a tribute to womanhood/ motherhood..)

The discovering of the New Her... ( I don't know why but I teared a lot writing this.. I feel every husband should know what his wife goes through during the pregnancy... )

She was on his lap sideways, he was holding her... ... Love me Raghav...she turned slightly towards him pulling his face towards her chest... she loosened her robe ... he was surprised... the robe fell down to her waist...

What he saw in front of him, surprised him... she turned completely pink... this was completely different and new... He saw fully bloomed two pink big lotuses inverted with their thick stems... He knew she was changing but... never seen the change... she sat like a sculpture in front of him... this was the first time in her pregnancy, she was so close to him...she was always in a loose robe.

He was in awe... You are so so beautiful he said...she smiled at him... he could not control himself that he kissed her lips very passionately...

Breaking the kiss looking at them... These are too big too... he slowly cupped one and slightly pressed when she winced in pain, bit of tears, he stopped... jittered, does it hurt you? No no! he cupped her face... I am so sorry!!! I will stop... I...will no... she said ... Its okay... it does pain... caressing his cheek..

But? why it pains?... And what are these blue coloured lines running?!!! What is happening to you?... He teared... She loved him all the more... she said they are big as they are preparing themselves to take care of those your little lives when they come out... the blue lines are the veins which carry the blood which turns into milk to feed those little mouths...we women are prepared by god to take care of the little ones she said...

You go through so much pain, he said...hmm she kissed him...yes to gain something we have to go through pain... but these are happy pain and tears... He kissed each of them very very slowly every inch...he never touched them with his hands again... he was very careful... Thanking her... asking her again and again is it hurting? Is it paining?... Is it due to this pain you don't sleep? He asked!! This and many more she said... but its okay Raaghav, she said as he was becoming more concerned...He was careful not to touch her hard anywhere as he realised she was in pain due to the changes in her body but still want to satiate his love.. he ensured his hands soothed her parts...

His kisses were soothing her... he placed her slowly against the bed headrest after decking the pillows... sitting against her, making her comfortable... As he kissed he saw her tears were reducing... she stopped biting her lips in pain and slowly was closing her eyes as it was soothing... Her pain was replacing with pleasure... he was growing hard and it was extremely difficult but vowed himself to go through the pain if that delay will soothe her pain.. will ease her... he respected her, respected woman, and loved her more and more.. He took time to kiss both the lotuses completely and finally soothed the stems too...She was in bliss...

She smiled...opening her eyes looking at him... he was kissing her belly now which was fully grown.. caressing his head... she said I am like a barrel !! huge!!! He came up to her and wanted to change her mind... yeah a barrel full of wine... old and intoxicating me... Kissing her lips which was swollen now... Her fingers too were swollen... He kissed every part..her hands, every finger very slowly. Slowly made her come forward, went behind her and soothed her back removing her robe completely... giving light pressures on her spine and back...kissing her and soothing her with his hands but not pressing anywhere... he was soothing her... she was subliming in his pressures... this is bliss she said... bending her head back and resting on his shoulders.. while he kissed her nape... she could feel him hardening a lot... she smiled...she held his hands which were holding her in the front resting on her baby bump.

Be relaxed my Queen he said... he slowly made her half lay on the decked up pillows... coming infront of her... When he saw her legs... He shook in cries... Maidam.. What's this.. . She calmed him... the thighs were huge and her legs were swollen terribly... he had seen her feet swollen but not the legs... she said... they are swollen because of fluids which gets accumulated and that pain is the worst and unbearable she said... she smiled in between tears... kissed him to calm him.. He felt so proud of her... He hugged her . very preciously.. Saying you are making me fall for you more and more... Kissing her all over...she closed her eyes.. he slowly massaged her legs, her feet, kissing her toes slowly and went up to her thighs, soothing her.. She opened her eyes looking at him in his eyes... his eyes were too dark... and it was hell difficult for him... she pulled him..caressed his toned torso... parting her lips below, very very softy...shall I.. he asked.. as her comfort was his priority...he would have stopped everything if she had said No... smiling...nodding her head yes... I love you she said... He made her lay down and soothed her beautifully, balancing himself without falling on her...she was in absolute bliss, pleasure taking over her pains... She went into that reverie, subliming in it...soothed herself... He cradled her so softly that the little ones too cradled in this new way of his love making ... Her eyes closed in that bliss... smiling ...soothing... she moaned and went into a slumber...

He kissed her forehead... My sweetheart... Thank you for making me discover the new you!! Helping me to love you more!!! Making me understand what a woman goes through while carrying the life of her man within her... Please sleep for sometime... He felt proud of himself too...

He just placed the robe not to disturb her as she was sleeping like a painting... hair completely messed, lips swollen... eyes closed in reverie... to one side with a beautiful smile...

He got up refreshed himself, lay beside her.. slowly placed his hands across her belly... she moved closer to him while he slept kissing her neck from behind...

After many days... she slept... A peaceful sleep...but

In the middle of the night, the babies were active. she could not sleep... she was finding it hard to stretch too... She was crying with pain in her leg and he woke up... massaging her legs.. Shall I call the dr? No Raaghav going into his chest!! ... Raagahv I find it painful and tired she cried...she had said it after she could not bear it any long...he kissed her with butterfly kisses saying she is brave, bold and will handle it... She hit him hard on his chest... Shut up you idiot... its paining... Wish there was a rocking chair or a big swing. She cried holding on to his shoulders, biting him and burying her nails in him due to the pain... He teared... it cringed his heart...Wish I could take that pain of yours...why should only you go through this... he hugged her...he rocked her holding her on to him and eventually she fell asleep due to tiredness and pain...he just could not see her tears...

When she woke up she was swinging, with breeze on her... she looked around to find she was in a big size wooden jhoola placed in the corner near the balcony and Raaghav was seated in the rocking chair holding a chord pulling the swing... She was surprised... When did he do it? how did he ???? he was fast asleep... she was looking at him with so much of love... He jerked as the swing stopped... Smiling he came to her... did my queen and my princesses sleep well, bending down kissing her forehead and her belly...She nodded yes with a smile garlanding his neck pulling him... I love you Budda!!! Me too Maidam... They both smiled... He made her get down removing one side railing of the cot...placing the footstool. So soon you got this? How? When did you go? ... She was surprised... When my queen orders...everything will be done...automatically... he smirked... That's Raaghav Babu... He called the plantation, brought the rocking chair and also the jhoola which was there fixed in their recreation hall. He ordered a new one to be replaced there.

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The D day came,

She was in terrible pain... An ambulance was always stationed at the mansion and she was rushed to the hospital...

Raaghav was with her in the OP but he just could not see her screeching in pain... The doctor decided to go ahead with C Sec and asked Raaghav to sign the papers. He could not do anything but do according as he could not stake his Queen and his princesses lives. He kissed her and went outside to wait with agony...

She will be mine... No she will be mine... both fought while he was going up and down the OP sweating, fretting !!

The lights went off... The Gynae came out smiling!!!! It was bit tough but she fought it... she is tired but fine... And Raaghav your wife is not easy na!!! Fighter!!! She did her way and she won it... It's a normal delivery... Chamatkaar... But she is very very tired.. so please donot trouble her too much...

You all can go in...

Mummyyy shouted A and A in excitement!!!! We love you... One for each!!!

Yes it was Aditi and Ananya...two beautiful roses...In One Shot!!! They were bundled and given to Raaghav and Girija... who was there. Bitiya she was kissing Chakor on her forehead... The boys were jumping excitedly..

He held them preciously!!! Kissing Chakor on her forehead... With tears, and trembling voice... He said..Thank you, thank you for loving me and coming into my life...and completing my life...

She smiled...hugging the boys who were on her both sides...yes one for each...

My hands are full, twosome na na foursome and awesome...she smiled that million dollar smile...

He held her close to his heart...saying...yesss foursome... Thank you bajrangbali, Raamji for taking care of my lives...

She was too weak... called him close... Told in his ears...I love you Budda... I love you Maidam... She closed her eyes as tiredness was taking over her...holding his hands..

So its Aditi and Ananya no wonder mummy was big and her legs were too swollen because two of them weeing... Shhh

Yes its A2 to A4... Twosome... Foursome... indeed Awesome...

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Hope I could meet your expectations Ayur.

Thank you girls once again as it had been awesome with the sixsome. With this I have completed the cycle of their happiness and wish them stay happy always.

With the final disconnect of Udaan with Chakor's farewell! I can rest my pen in peace!!!

Loads of love to you all who viewed, liked and commented on the stories.



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Mahsa for reading it soo soon
Thanks for your comment on insta

My Sumi dear What a beautiful Awesome Magical Writting dear, loved it When Chakor Standing infront of the mirror and looks to his belly after raghav Comes their dialouges lovely moment kisshead each other, Specialy hospital moment Awwwloved it loved it dear I Can imagine Our MeeJay both Amazing performance in this Scene


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u so much dearrr.its really superb .no words to say...ur really an outstanding writer.each and every bit enjoyed thoroughly...thank once again for considering my wish
Will miss ur new udaan😭😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

what shall I say. when you write on emotions ,it always touches me and here too the journey towards their parenthood, I loved it.

these,lines of chakor
I brought you for my reason... But you started to live making me as your reason to live...

so true and I missed seeing it more. wished we could see a little more of that phase. little more life journey of them. but nope :(

That symbol of their love, his life within her , nuturing that love within her and giving as a gift to them, loved it.

Saanvi too was like this right,symbol if sukor love, sad that she turned anjor in real show and spoilt all.

Then those mode swings😆, poor Raghav babu,that indeed a strange combination😆, I am reminded of Sukor safar from benaras.

Then those loving moments of them during pregnancy, his support and love for her, boys love for her, so happy to see a happy happy moments in their life with happy ending.

that lines on poetry verses being free flown, didn't got it first when it's written.😆 got it reading second time .you naughty..😆


overall a good one. Thanks Sumi dear.

Don't rest your pen in peace😭
pray and hope we get chances to see your writings again and again.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayur123

Thank u so much dearrr.its really superb .no words to say...ur really an outstanding writer.each and every bit enjoyed thoroughly...thank once again for considering my wish

Will miss ur new udaan😭😭



Thanks a lot Ayur for enjoying it...

I should infact thank you as when I wrote this I fell more and more for Raaghav and Chakor... I teared myself a lot during their moments.

In all honesty I think I have written all facets of their life and now only leave the happy family to be together as they will come through any challenges in their life.

(As I tell you I am not a good story writer 😆😆 so did a very few as you all supported me always)

Thanks deary...


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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

what shall I say. when you write on emotions ,it always touches me and here too the journey towards their parenthood, I loved it.

these,lines of chakor
I brought you for my reason... But you started to live making me as your reason to live...

so true and I missed seeing it more. wished we could see a little more of that phase. little more life journey of them. but nope :(

That symbol of their love, his life within her , nuturing that love within her and giving as a gift to them, loved it.

Saanvi too was like this right,symbol if sukor love, sad that she turned anjor in real show and spoilt all.

Then those mode swings😆, poor Raghav babu,that indeed a strange combination😆, I am reminded of Sukor safar from benaras.

Then those loving moments of them during pregnancy, his support and love for her, boys love for her, so happy to see a happy happy moments in their life with happy ending.

that lines on poetry verses being free flown, didn't got it first when it's written.😆 got it reading second time .you naughty..😆


overall a good one. Thanks Sumi dear.

Don't rest your pen in peace😭
pray and hope we get chances to see your writings again and again.




Umaaa deary deary need those warm hugs yaara!!!

I love my story more when you pick those lines which touched mine too (and you know that by now... me sucker of emotions uggh and poor you always tolerating it😃)

Bold red You gotttaaa (face palming and closing) sumi naugty na na naive 😉😆😆

Yes I thought it was needed, i wanted it there but not vulgar so chose to ply around the poetry... and he he you got it bang on ☺️

thanks Uma... loads of love
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks so much sritama for your comment on insta. Very overwhelming
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So so beautiful,cute n soothing..always wanted to see a happy track like dis in d show in fact craved for it..dis kind of cuteness overloaded scenesChakor's mood swings..Raghav handling him so sweetly..his each & every actions,words..so heartwarmingd boys too were so cute..thnChakor understanding Raghav's inner feelings n d reason fr his inhibitions n making him comfortableso beautiful..d way Raghav was handling Chakor's mood swings n fulfilling her demands,reassuring her

Was imagining VJ n Meera in all d scenesall d scenes were a sheer joy to read n imagine

Such an endering last part..a complete treat

Thanks a ton Sumi di for providing d much needed solace to us through ur beautiful writing


Will miss ur stories a lot ur last line was so


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear...a big thank you for writing this...it is indeed FANTAFAB.👏👏
Thank you to ayur too for suggesting it.

Enjoyed the entire journey, imaging MEEJAY doing it... right from her decision to let the verses flow free😉 to the boys taking care to raghav being sooo considerate to her tantrums which we longed to see in the serial to the lovemaking to the grand finale...tooo good dear. The family has become so endearing.

You are making me fall for raghav more and more with your writing.

And no ways are you giving up...waiting to read more.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi dear...a big thank you for writing this...it is indeed FANTAFAB.👏👏

Thank you to ayur too for suggesting it.

Enjoyed the entire journey, imaging MEEJAY doing it... right from her decision to let the verses flow free😉 to the boys taking care to raghav being sooo considerate to her tantrums which we longed to see in the serial to the lovemaking to the grand finale...tooo good dear. The family has become so endearing.

You are making me fall for raghav more and more with your writing.

And no ways are you giving up...waiting to read more.


Nikkiii uff how much Sumi has to write to get that word from you...

he he bold blue... sumi shyieee shyieee...

yes infact I thanked Ayur as i fell in more love with my Budda😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh my god ,..every time I read ur captions and stories bring smile on my face😛.,.
Ur wonderful , love your all stories, I enjoyed each and every part .. I love the speed of your writing ..I love anything by u.. I read again and again and still I don't get bored.❤️

You have strong writing skills...👏👏

We are fans of your stories...pls dont leave us dear ..don't give punishment ..😭😭...I hope n I.wish you will continue your stories ...

Do write more n more stories for our beloved sukor /ragkor, give us such more beautiful stories...

Thanks for writing ❤️❤️🤗

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