ff : pains of love(part..29)(pg 31)

hey guys im startin a new ff which is truly dedicated to davia and nikita and most importantly my sweetypie-mahima di!!!!😃

here the intro of all the characters will be given. a brief idea of the ff too....

but i will contd the ff only if u like it!!!!

so go ahead and hope u enjoy!!!!!

ff : pains of love........

intro:

bani: she is a sweet little girl who lives with her grandmom as her parents had fights always and were not able to hande her. they are now seperated and are married to whom they loved and etc etc.... bani is now 18 livin with her grandmom. she has a crush on jai....😳 dadi:she is the one who handles bani with luv and affection....she was a famous actress at her times...she is very lovin and carryin billo/masi:she is the best friend of dadi and was a actress too....not as famous as dadi but she had her own fame..... jai:billo's son. sab ka laadla.cool....handsum....and handles the business himself as his father is no more....they and bani are friends... only friends to him tarun:best friend of jai!!!! bani and he are friends too and he secretly liks bani...say he has crush on bani..... rano:jai's sis who is 18 too!!! ahe is also very sweet and best friend of bani....!!! she likes sum1 alot.....again crush!!! none other than tarun himself...!!!
• pia:rano's and bani's best yaar!!!! she is just like the one in ks.........meanin the "pehliwali"pia....frank,flirt and funky types!!!!

thats all for the characters!!!

now the brief idea:

bani was just 5 when she started livin wid dadi. as dadi and billo are gud frnds...she often visits billo's(walia's)house....she has a great bond with this walia family!!! every1 thinks her like their beti only!!!

but one day everythinnnnn changed!!!!

from that day she left her house.....and now!!! she's forced to cum back again but still all think her to be guilty.................

why???

akhir hua kya?? ki bani ghar chhod kar wapas aana pada??? akhir hua kya ki usse apna sapno ka mahal chhodna pada??? kya usse woh pyaar milega jise woh deserve karti hai??............karti bhi hai ya nahi????

wot happened??? how???? why................????

and lastly who...........??????????????/

ok!!! asked manyyyy questions...

but now the one which only u can answer................shall i contd???

if yes then plsssssssssssss do comment!!!!

i can contd only if u all support me

luv,

preeti 😊

well soo mystrery yahan bhi shuru hochuki hai.. felt bad for abni who si sep from her sep parents😭

kay hua uske saat kisne kay ki?jaroro us pia b****😡ne kuch kii hogiii

soo rano is fida over tarun ab kay hgoa.. will jb fight? and get marreid?😆

pls cotnineus oooon

that was a great intro

dav

Hey Preeti

well that was a great into of the characters 😉 with soooooooo many questions 😕 hmmm so why did Bani leave her home maybe cuz of Pia or Jai was getting married with someone else and she couldnt see that happening 😕 but shes come back right
you will have to update sooooon

Taj

hey please........do continue ur ff........
sounds interesting 👏

Dear preeti,
Impressed with the intoduction of the characters. Especially i love bani, jai and tarun's intro as they are my all time favourite characters.
Infact iam very much waiting to know answers for all the questions.
please update ur ff soon
iam sure it will b rocking as the start itself is very impressive kasamh se 😛 😛

-brinda.

Hey great Start. continue soon..
So many questions..
So many answers U have to give..
Please continue soon..
Sorry it took me so olong to find u..
and hey.. Thanks 4 dedication..

Nikita...Please continue soon.

part : 1

the part starts with a flash back

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in walia mansion-

dadi:arre bani,pia,rano?! kahaan jaa rahi ho?

bani:hum shoppin ke liye jaa rahe hain..........

dadi:achcha par take care

pia:aap bhi na!!! too possesive!

all smile and they leave

on the way-

pia:umm....hey guys!!! gotto go home

rano:achanak??? kyun?

pia:woh dad's callin!!

bani:ab who's possesive???

all giggle

pia:haan baba u win!!! tu na kitna pyaar karti hai apni dadi ko!!!

bani:ab unhone to.....

rano:achcha achcha dont give a lecture wot all happened

(lookin at pia)-u can go no prob!

they smile

the driver stops the car and pia leaves.

they were on their way when

bani:hey!!! im really hungry!! chal na kuch khate hai?!

rano:umm ok!!(lookin outside) dekh abhi McD aa raha hai. u go and buy it. im here

bani agrees and does as told.

as soon as she leaves and just enters the restaurant..............

"kaboom!!!!" - bomb blast!!!

bani:(shouts) ranoooooooooooooooooooooooo

she runs and runs and..................finds her luvly friend no more!!!!

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at present

bani was on her bed cryin! (she's at pia house rite now.)

soon-

"knock knock"

bani gets up and sees that it was masee

bani:(quickly wipin her tears and in a scared tone)-aap???

masee(angrily)-haan main.............bahut khush mat ho ki im here to meet u. main yahaan aane par majboor thi. (lookin down)kaun chahega ki woh wahaan jaye...uske paas jisne uski beti ki hatya ki...

bani(cryin)-masee.....main bekasoor hoon!!! main rano ko kyun....??

masee:kyunki uske paas daulat hai aur tu..............ek anaath(orphan)!!!

bani was shocked to hear this!!! the lady next to her mom....or just like her chhoti ma (dadi as badi-ma) sayin this!!!

pia cums suddenly

pia:bani kaun....(sees masee) umm aap yahaan???

masee(now enterin inside)-haan woh.............(looks at bani)main majboor thi!!! i must take bani home beta!!

pia(shocked)-umm.....achanak?? i mean....its gud but.....

masee(lookin at the ground)-haan woh....teri dadi sidiyon(stairs) se niche ghir (fell) gayi (bani shocked!) aur....

bani(tensed):aur kya...??

masee:unki yaadaash chali gayi!!! (lookin at pia)beta she wants to meet bani. unhe kuch yaad hi nahi aur....

pia:i understand!!! koi baat nahi....

pia looks at bani who was shocked to death

pia:bani tum....umm....pack karna hai

bani:ya.

she leaves while masee was damnnnnnnnnn angry!!pia:masee i'll have to stay as pa's not well so...

masee:koi baat nahi beta....

soon they leave.

on the way, masee and bani had no chat.

bani looks at masee but no respond

she looks at the wndow and again.................flashback

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all were cryin as their rano was no more. jai cums to know this by pia.

jai was angry

pia:par isme bani ka koi dosh(mistake)nahi....

jai goes without botherin

bani was cryin and cryin when.............

jai cums to her and:how dare u??? tumne meri behen ki hatya....

bani:jai aap...........

jai:sahi keh raha hoon main u...........

he just holds her neck and

bani(tryin to speak):j...jai...j...

masee:jai..............

and all try to leave jai hold on bani. when they succeeded

jai(to bani)-aaj to tum bach gayi...par ab nahi..........get ouT!!!

bani was shocked!!

dadi-jai tu...

jai(shoutin)-thik keh raha hun main!! rano ke saath kaun gaya tha? bani.....wahi bahaar kyun gayi??? dono shoppin ke liye...

bani:par...

jai:u just shut up and....

holds her hand and throws her out!

no one tries to stop him coz now they were convinced that jai was right!!!

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at present-

driver:ma'am!

bani cums in present

bani:hun??

driver:aapka ghar

masee(angrily):yah uska ghar nahi hai samje??(lookin at bani)-woh bani to kabki mar chuki hai!!!

bani was shocked again!!

ab kya hoga?? will that family who pushed her out will welcom her??? will she get what she deserves???

to know stay tuned with"pains of love"

preeti😛

😭

felt bad for abni us jai jerk nee😡

how dare he🤢🤢🤢'

wo bhi bani koo amrna chata hai.. ksine kiay iay rnao ke saat?

psl ontinue soon abhut hii dard abri akahani hai😭

davia

Hey.. really getting good.. wanted to read more
but I guess Ill have to wait till next update..
pleaseeee when is the next update??
Whats up with Dadi loosing memory..
Like.. why would Bani have to come back
if Dadi lost her memory..??
Confused 😕 a bit.. well
update soon...
Nikita..--Great stuff..

Good start
but don't know what to say
why they are blaming Bani for Rano's death...she didn't kill her...then why...poor girl 😭 😭
plz cont. soon