MG- Pal Pal soch me aana na!!(complete story)/pg 1/ march25

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Its a sequel of "pehle pyaar ka pehla gum!!!"

Geet's side of the story





Prologue:-

After much thinking.. He picked up the phone & dialed the landline number once again. He was so nervouss & uncertain that his fingers were littraly shaking. Suddenly he cut the call..even before it could be connected..just like he has been doing from last half an hour.

He was afraid..what if someone else picked it up?? What he will say then?? He was really nervouss...but at the same time..the longing to hear that sweet voice was too much to bear OR ignore.

It has been so many days that he had heared that voice. Finally making up his mind..he took a deep breath & once again dialed the number & he closed his eyes waiting for someone to pickup..wishing& praying that someone to be the one..whom he wanted.


"Hello..??" ..he snapped open his eyes...recognaising the voice & its owner. His heart started beating so fast hearing that voice af ter almost whole three weeks.. He felt so many emotions filling his heart in that one moment. He felt happy, excited & a calm setteling in his heart replacing the restlessness which he has been feeling from past few days. At the same time..there was nervousness, uncertainty.. What he was going to say now?? What excuse he will give for calling suddenly?? & most important.. The reaction.. How that person on the other side will react??..after knowing that its him on the line..!






Part1


"Geet"...he took her name with hesitation, fearing her reaction. He waited for her to say something..to shout at him, curse him, fight with him, anything..but nothing came his way. There was complete silence on the other side..which increased his nervoussness & fear. Is she still mad at him?? Doesnt she want to talk to him anymore?? Did she really meant it..when she had said that she wont talk to him??


So many questions & doubts came to his mind..scaring his heart in those few seconds of silence! At one point he really thought that she doesnt want to talk to him & probably has cut the call. His restlessness increased with each passing second. Is she still there or not?? This silence & uncertainty was getting unbearable for him now.


Not being able to controll anymore...he despearatly called her name once again.. And to his hearts little relief... this time he got her response..
"MAAN...!!"



She hadnt expected him to call her..never! Infect, after whatever had happened between them...she had doubted that he will even speak to her again ever. So reciving a call from him was really unexpected.

But she was happy. Hearing his voice after so many days, gave her heart, the peace for which it has been carving from so long..so despeartly.

She has been crying silently, all days & nights, hiding in her room and pretending to be happy & smiling in front of others.

And now, after hearing his voice...All those feelings & emotions which she has been trying to supress, all the pain & hurt she has gone through in these few days, just coz of him, everything came out in the form of tears!

But there was a slight smile playing on her lips too, with those tears.

Smile.. Coz he has called her.. finally!

Smile... Coz finally, god has granted her hearts most desired wish..for which it has been parying with its every beat!

Smile...coz of the realisation, that may be she cant get her first love..

But she still has her best friend whos friendship is too pericious for her to loose.

She was happy after so many days. She was lost in her new found happiness, when she heard him call her again.. & she replied this time..

"maan.." ..she wisphered with a teary smile.

He could clearly feel the surprise in her voice.









Part2

He sat there, cluching the reciver close to his heart, with a sweet smile playing on his lips. His heart was finally at peace, knowing that she was not mad at him anymore. He had been really tensed in these last few days..fearing her anger...but she didnt even mentioned anything about that & talked to him like her usual self.


He had wanted to appologies for his rude behavior..he even had practiced it many times..but when it was time to do it..he couldnt..actually he didnt wanted to take risk by reminding her about their so called fight!


They talked for few minutes..
She had wished him "happy diwali" & also asked about him & his family. He had missed her talks so much.

Pal-pal soch me aana naa..
Hulchal dil me machana naa..
Dekho meri neende udana naa..
Dheere-dheere sapno me aana naa..



"She is really sweet.. But usse bhi jyada.. She is naughty!"...he chuckled at his own thought as he remeber how he had witnessed her naughty & carefree side for the first time...


For her..their first encounter was in school.. But she still didnt know that he had seen her even before that!

Flashback:


He & his elder brother were sitting in their balcony, disscusing about his new school which he was to join in a coupal of days. Thats when he saw her for the first time. She was with two other girls. And the reason he has noticed her..was the funny incident that followed.

It seems that they were arguing on something..but nothing serious..it was more like in playful way...thats what it looked as they were laughing in between the argument.


Their laughs & ocassional cursing...got his & his brothers attention..in the other wise silent surroundings. she & one of those girls..were teaming up..against the third girl.



They couldnt hear them clearly..but it looked like that third girl had said something to her which made her really upset..and as a reaction..she pushed that girl slightly..


None have expected what happene next. That girl fell back..flat on the road! ..as she was not prepared for that push & lost her balance..!

"Ohh..." his brother had exclaimed..feeling sorry for that girl.

She and that other girl also had been shocked with the events.. All were silent..

That third girl was staring the two with angery eyes.. After it got confirm that the girl wasnt injured.. She n the other girl started gigling..seeing the angery face of that third girl, which was turning red coz of the anger and more in embarrasment!
"I am going to kill u both..just wait.." that third girl had shouted..warning them..before marching twords them to take her revenge.


She started backing away.. shouting that she was really sorry and it wasnt intentionl. And then started their chasing game..with their laughs echocing in the silent lane... And soon they were out of his sight.


"bechari..pata nahi kya haal hoga ab uska.." ..his brother commemted.
"bechari? That girl fell coz of her pushing.." he taunted.
"she didnt meant to..and it wasnt serious.. Fir usne sorry bhi toh bola na..!" ..his brother argued.
He & his brother looked at each other silently..then both burst out laughing loudly...


"she is really sweet.." his brother said.
"han..but she is naughty too..!" he said smiling.

Flashback ends!

Tujhe...
Meri...
Kasam...





Part3


He had never thought that he would meet her again..
But he was pleasntly surpised when he saw her during the prayers, in the school ground..!

Tujhe..
Meri...
Kasam...


And was even more surprised at the co-incidence, when he got to know that she was in the same class as his, that she was his classmate!


In the classroom..which was full with so many unknown faces..she was the only one whom he knew! Though he hadnt talked to her or knew her in proper sense..still she felt familiar..she was not a stranger to him, like rest of the class!



Pal-pal soch me aana naa..
Hulchal dil me machaana naa..
Dekho meri neende udaana naa..
Dheere dheere sapno me aana naa..



He had told his brother that the girl from that day.. was in his class! His brother had said, "great! fir toh..tumhe class me kabhi bor nahi hoga! There will be many entertaining incidence..in ur class..hai na.." and had winked at him reminding him of the other day..which made them both to laugh again!


"But be careful han..dont ever mess with her..warna..pata haina.." his brother had teased.
"ohh..dont worry.. i know how to balance my self..aur mujhe toh warning ki bhi zarurat nahi..i would be prepared already!" he replied winking back.


He was adjusting in his knew school..even had made few friends.. But never talked to her. He got to know that she was the topper of the class as well as school! To be honest..incially he thought that she was snobish types... He didnt had any valid reason for thinking like that about her... But he just felt like that.. As thats the normal case with class topper's generally..and May be cause he used to notice her oftenly while she never paid attention to him!



But his thinking and opinion about her had changed completely..when he for the first time, had asked her for her notes! Not only had She given him her notes.. but had helped him also with assignments & all.


And then they become friends! He always felt comfertable with her. She was different from others and they clicked instantly. They used to fight on small small things..and he used to love arguing with her. He used to do the exactly opposite of her saying...just to irritated her..to get her angery...coz she looked more cute with that angery face!


She used to get so annoyed from his teasing.. that used to stop talking to him.. And then he used to curse himself for upseting her.. He used to irritate her even more to get her to talk to him.. And eventually, one way or other he used to melt her anger and then they would be back.. like before!



He never realised when they become best friends! When they got so close that he never needed anyone else..just her! They had become a team and used to enjoy alot!


He had many times shared their fun tales with his brother. He used to tell him..that how they did some prank on their other friends & all.

He used to talk about her so much that his brother had asked playfully.. "teri class me bas wahi ek ladki padti hai kya..? "
he had ignored his brothers question..with thinking much or taking in the hidden meaning in it.. and continued telling him about them..about her!




Part4

He had found a special friend in her..with whom he can share anything & everything. The bonding with her was exceptional!


He loved spending time with her..at school, in lunch break..sharing food with her, then at tutions! He would be always with her only! Though he had other friends also..but none was that close to him.


He had spent the best time of his life with her..doing all the masti & having great fun!
She was special to him..thats the reason that he, himself had told her about his irritating "nicknames" which he never liked to tell anyone! She had teased him... But he didnt mind her teasing.. Had it been someone else, he would have shown that person, the consiquences of messing with him.


But like he said earlier..she was the exceptional case! She was the only one, who was allowed to tease him, irritate him, shout at him, scold him..etc.

Tujhe..
Meri..

Kasam..


Tujhe..

Meri..

Kasam..


He knew she was special to him..but never thought why?? He couldnt stay without talking to her. He always felt that he can show his right on her. He never asked nor needed her permission to share her things! He even used to tell her..whom she should talk and whom to ignor.. "as he was her best friend..so he knew what was good for his friend!" ..thats what he used to tell himself! While in the reality..it wasnt the only reason.



All the while, he was thinking..that its just friendship! Everything that they share..his liking towards her..their unique bonding..their fights..their teasing..their spending so much time together..everything..everything was just part of their beautiful & unbreakable friendship.
He had never gave it a thought that it could be something else..something deep..something more than just friendship!



Once, like usual he was telling his brother about his day at school. And as usual, everything started with mentioning of her and even ended with her name only! He never realised it as he was very much ingrossed in telling all the interesting stuff.. But his brother had noticed it!


"kahin..tum dono ka koi..scene toh nahi hai na..hmm?" ..his brother had asked with a teasing smile.


And like usual..maan had laughed hearing that.. "u should thank god..that she is not here, to hear ur talks..warna toh..she would have teached u a very good lesson for even thinking anything like that..let alone saying it..."..he had replied..admist his laughter.


He really had a hard time controlling his laugh..imagining geet's reaction if she would have listented to his brothers talks! He was sure that she would have gotten really mad..as she didnt like these kinds of talks.. She is very sobber girl!



Never had he thought that things could be different.. That there could be more to their friendship.
But then things started changing. He started experiencing some new emotions & feelings...which he had never felt before. And However hard he may tried..he couldnt ignore or supress them. Insted they kept increasing each passing day..against his constant efforts of getting rid of them!



To be continued...

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Part5

He never realised the obivious changes in his behaviour towards her...or the difference in his feelings for her!

Wo hua..
Jo pehle kabhi na hua..
Kahin bhi dil naa lage..
Ye tune aisa kya kiya..



usually they used to patch up instantly after every silly fight.. But once they didnt talked for whole day. To be honest, he was at fault that time..and he wouldnt have mind appologiesing to her.. But then what made him angery at her was.. she had told him.."baat mat karna mujhse.."
And hearing that his stupid ego had stoped him from talking to her. He had thought.."achha toh she doesnt want to talk to me now..thik hai dekhta hun kitni der tak baat nahi karti.."
and thats why, he delibratedly had avoided her for rest of the day.

He had thought that "not talking to her" wouldnt affect him much..he have other friends, he could be with.. But as the day went by and school finished.. He started to get irritated. He was almost yelling and getting angery at small small things at home. His mom had even asked.."kisi se zagda karke aaya hai kya..?" that simple question had annoyed him all the more. He didnt talked to anyone at home and starightly had went to his room..hoping to do some studies..but wasnt able to concentrate on anything at all. That moment only her thoughts were running in his mind. He was getting angery at himself.. "galti teri thi na..toh ek sorry bolne me kya problem thi.."

He kept thinking how he will monify her..as he kew that she must be really angery at him!


Next day he got late for school..he was still thinking how to say sorry to her.. But when he entered the classroom... And saw her..he forgot everything else &automatically..a smile came to his lips without even him realising.. And it got bigger..when she too returned it with her beautiful smile.


*****


He wouldnt have admited it that time..but he had never liked it.. if she would talk to other boys..specially a coupal of boys..whom he disliked as they used to just show off and werent in his good list!


But then started the real change..he couldnt tell..when & how?? But he started geeting these annoying feeling.. Whenever he used to see her with others... Though most of the time she would be with him only.. But then also, he never liked if she gave attention to anyone else..other than him.


*****


It was break time..when he saw a guy rohan, from there class..was talking to geet. And with that.. came back that strange & irritating feeling. He went to her after that guy left..and asked her what was he saying.
She told him that he was asking for some notes and she had agreed to give him after school.


He really didnt know that what got in to him that he said.."arre wo notes to mujhe chahiye the..infect main wahi toh lene aaya tha tujhse.."
"but tere notes toh complete the na.." ..she had asked him.
"nahi..thoda sa baki tha.." ..he had lied to her. Why? He didnt knew!!


"par..maine toh usse han bol diya hai..it wont look good na..agar ab mana karungi toh.." ..she asked him.
"Tell him ke tere notes mere paas the..aur tujhe yad nahi tha..toh wo kisi aur se le le.." ..he had replied causally.. she didnt had any choice..so she did what he had told her!



Part6

He often found himself looking at her, obivious to rest of the world around him, just lost in her! And he would only realise it, when his friends would call/shook him. He was lucky that none suspected or ask him any questions!


But still...it used to make me worried. He was confused with his own behaviour. What was happening to him???


Now a days, he just stare at her, thinking about her 24/7, then those unpleasnt feelings..whenever she would talk to someone else..why?? Why her being with others irritates him so much! At those moment he used to feel so annoyed & angery at her..but then he obiviously couldnt say anything to her. What he would say..?? "geet, stop talking to others..coz i dont like it!"

no.. he obiviously couldnt say that. And more over he didnt have any valid reason to justify his disapproval.


He tried to reason with himself...tried his best to avoid these feeling.. But nothing worked. He really didnt know what to do. He tried his best to supress them..but when his emotions would get out of his control.. he used to end up behaving rudely with her!


*****

Her chehre me ab tu hi tu..
Aati nazar hai..
Ye mast hawa teri khushboo..
Laati idhar hai..



There was a constant fight between his heart & mind. Where mind says that there was no logic behind his weired behaviour..and he shouldnt feel like this.. Where as heart wasnt even ready to listen any of it!
And its result was his outbrust of his confused self..


Though he used to take out his frustation at her, by shouting and saying rude words..
But then almost immediatly, he used to regrate it! He hated himself for behaving like that with her. He used to curse himself and his heart for having those confused/wiered feelings..he just hated those feelings.


He used to steal glances at her..when she wasnt aware. He hated fighting with her..he wanted everything to be the same, like it used to be. He wanted them to be like same as before.. But guess what.. everthing was same..she was same... But It was only him who had changed..!!!


*****


He was already getting frustated with all these things.. And his brother's teasing added to it more...


Once his brother had asked him..
"tujhe woh achhi lagti hai na.. U like her..!"
he didnt thought much about the question and replied..with a genuien smile... "offcource.. I like her! Tabhi toh woh meri best friend hai na..!!!"
he had been honest with his answer..coz he really liked her as a friend..and for him, she was the bestest friend one could ever have. And he was the lucky one to have her friendship.


Then next his brother had told him..
"sure.. U like her...but more than 'just a friend'...accept it..!!!"
it wasnt a question but a statement! He had tried denying it...and told his brother that there was nothing like that..!But his brother wasnt convinced.


*****



He didnt care about anything.. The only thing that used to make him worried was.. That it could effect their friendship! What if she decided to break her friendship with him..and that all will be coz of these stupid feelings.





Part7

He never wanted to hurt her. His fights with her..his snapping at her rudely..used to make him upset. So to avoid all this..he started maitaining distance from her. He thought that that was the best solution!


He used to avoid talking to her..but he couldnt stoped his eyes who would search for her all the time.

They had been so close to eachother that now it was hard for him to ignor her like that. But still he tried.

Though he was successful in avoiding her..but he didnt have any control on those feelings..they were still there..getting deeper each passing. He was still not able to accept the fact that he liked her in a diffrent way.. And thus the inner fight was still on.


*****



His brother & brother's friends were going to the fair. His brother had asked him to join them...but he had refused coz of his tutions...as they were having an important topic that day.
He went to the tutions..but wasnt able to concentrate at all! And the reason was.. Her!!!


She hadnt come to the tution that day! At first he thought that she might have got late..and would be coming any moment. He kept looking at the door every now & then, expecting her.. But she didnt came!
He felt disappointed..he felt restless..he felt desperate..and he felt frustated!


Disappointment..coz he was waiting for her but she didnt came!
Restlessness...he wanted to know that why didnt she came.. as it wasnt usual for her to miss school or classes.
Desperation...he wanted to see her at that moment..just once..he didnt know why he was feeling like that..but he needed to see her.
Frustated...coz he was still in denial of his feelings! He tried to concentrate..but couldnt!



He was in a very bad mood. All the time he kept thinking.. "why didnt she came today?"
"kal school toh aayegi na..?" this particular thought increased his restlessness.
he couldnt even sleep properly that night.


*****


Next day..


He has been worried that if she will come to school or not? But was relived..seeing her already at her seat!
He wanted to asked her where were she yesterday? Why didnt she came to tutions? And most important.. Why didnt she told him if she wasnt going to come..?? But he controlled somehow.



He was sitting with his friend..when he heard a boy telling the other that how yesterday he had went to the fair and had so much fun. He wouldnt have listented to their talks but then he took geets name and mentioning of her name caught his attention. That boy was flaunting saying that geet too was there and they went to the rides together.



He instantly felt jealous! He didnt liked the thought of her being with someone else..it was unbearable. He wanted to be the only person who will be close to her.
And these emotions were so intense that he couldnt stop himself.. and without even thinking once..he went to her and told her that from next time she must tell him if she planned to go anywhere..that they would go together.





Part8

He wanted to be the only person who will be close to her. And these emotions were so intense that he couldnt stop himself and without even thinking once..he went to her and told her that from next time she must tell him if she planned to go anywhere..that they would go together.

Sheeshe me mere..
Hai saaya tera..



That time, he wasnt thinking about his action.. But later, when he realised that what he actually did and how he had reacted.. He was surprised/shocked with his own reaction. He couldnt belive that he actually said that to her!


It was good that she didnt questioned him that how did he knew where were she yesterday and simply agreed to his demand of telling him her plans. But what if she would have reacted otherwise? What would he have possibly done then? How could he have justify his acts to her when he himself wasnt able to understand that what was happening to him!


***


He continued avoiding her..as he needed to find some answers which can clear this fog of confusion. He didnt wanted to face any questions yet..not from her..not from anyone else..as he wasnt prepared for it..so he tried really hard to keep his emotions in check. He couldnt take the risk of letting anybody to get even a slightest of hint about his feeling for her.
His struggle, his fight with his heart & mind was still on..and so was his brother's constant teasing. And somewhere his heart was winning the bettle!

Somewhere..subconcially, in a corner of his heart..he knew..he knew.. that his fight was useless..that he cant avoid these feelings for long. A little part of him was coming in terms with the fact that he do feel something for her but he was scared..scared to accept this even to his ownself!


Though she never questioned him about his behaviour.. He could clearly read the confusion in her eyes. And thats why he used to avert his gaze whenever his eyes met her's. He was afraid that he wont be able to hide his emotions and she may realise his feelings for her.


***


Present:


He smiled remembering how foolishly he used to behave then.
Something came to his mind and he put the reciver back on its place which he has been holding from so long.


He got up searching for his school bag and pulled out one of his notebooks. He opened a particular page which he had booked marked specially & crases it lightly. An instant smile light up on his face and he felt a sudden rush of emotions so intense. He brought the book close to his face and kissed it lovingly.

He admired the beautiful handwriting..crasing it once again. It was her handwriting!


You can call it crazy or stupid..but thats what had kept him going all the while. Whenever he would miss her too much..he would try to feel her in the things which are somewhere related to her. One of them is her writing..which is a part of her persona. It gave him her feel as it belongs to her. Feeling & seeing her writing gave him some satisfaction...as if she herself was with him in real!

Itna naa sataaa..
O sanamm mmm..

Edited by Shonameet - 6 years ago
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He crases her handwriting with longing..trying to get her feel from it! He smiled as all their beautiful memories came back to him. Her smiling face flashed in front of his eyes, making his heartbeat to quicken. Her mesmerising laughter whenever they would play prank on their classmates..her pouting cutely if he taunted her..her calling him by his nicknames just to irritate him & get the upper hand..whenever he used to annoye her! He remember each & every moment clearly!


Her friendship is the most precious thing to him and he would do anything..anything to keep it intact forever. And he did..he did what he could to save it..but may be, his way of doing so wasnt right. With this thought..her hurt & pained eyes flashed in front of his eyes..making him to feel regrate and guilt.


He always had this fear that his new found feelings for her can break their friendship..thats why he decided to hide them!
He could never think of hurting her even his dreams..but in his attempt to hide his emotions..he ended up doing the very same thing again & again. He was so much lost in his own miesry that he never realised..that the friendship which he wanted to save..for which he was adment to deny his own feelings, could get destroyed by all this. That his unpredictable and rude behaviour can cause a damage to their beautiful relationship. And he himself will be to blame for ruining it as well as loosing the most important person of his life!
The way he had behaved with her..snapping at her without reason..treating her so rudely.. if it would have been someone else, they would have called him MAD and would have broke their friendship with him long back.


But he was lucky that it was HER..! She never ever questioned him. She just took everything silently..his unreasonable anger, his rude behaviour, his harsh words..everything. Never did she complained him..and thats why he never realised that how wrong he was actually doing! He just took her silence for granted. He failed to realise the extent of all the pain & hurt which he have caused her..unintentionally!
He still wouldnt have realised it... If it wasnt for that day..the day when she finally lost her control and confronted him for the first time.


***

Past:



He was once again avoiding her. Though he knew his ignorance must be hurting her..but he was still to realise the seriousness of the situation.

He had wanted some important notes. Usually, he used to take notes from her only and thats why her name came to his mind first. But as he was not talking to her..so he asked one of his friend to get those notes from her on his behaf. She gave it and he took it...but soon he regrated.. having brought the third person in between them!



***


He was busy with his books..thats why he didnt realised her presence near him. He was startled hearing her voice, so close to him..

"tujhe notes chahiye the, toh tu khud bhi toh maang sakta tha na? Kissi aur ko kehne ki kya zarurat thi?"
Her sudden questioning had took him offguard. He wasnt prepared for this..nor he knew, how to handle the situation. And in his nervousness, he again choose the wrong way..and wore the mask of rudeness..
"agar tujhe problem hai..toh kyun diye? Mana karna tha na.." he wasnt thinking what he was saying that time. He just didnt wanted to confront her yet..he wasnt ready for it!

He could see it in her eyes that she wasnt happy with his reply..but he couldnt do anything. And when she again asked that why he himself didnt came for notes..he just wanted to end the topic there... as he didnt had any answers for her questions. He thought that he wont be able to explain her anything...so he just returned her notes..

"take it..mujhe nahi chahiye tere notes.."
he thought that it will end there. But he was wrong! His that action..broke the thread of her petience and for the first time..she shouted at him."Whats ur problem maan? Main tujhse thik se baat kar rahi hoon..aur tu mujhe attitude dikha raha hai..?"
Hurt was visible in her eyes & voice..which for the first time made him realise that to what extent he has been hurting her continuesly. She was taking everything silently coz she considered him as her best friend..and in return he has been giving her pain only.


He sat there silently, unable to say anything feeling guilty. How can he not realise that in his own confusion..he was hurting the one who was most important to him! He was lost in his thoughts..when her hurt & angery voice brought him back..Fine..nahi baat karna chahta na tu mujhse..? Thik hai..even i dont want to talk to u anymore..!"
and she left saying that.
He looked up at her retreating back with longing & guilty eyes..he had lost his most treasured friendship today.. The thing which he had been fearing..was coming true!



Aahatien..
Kisi ki jab aati hai..
Mujhe toh lagta hai ye..
Ke jaise tu aai hai..


His impetient and expectant eyes were glued to the door of their classroom...waiting for her deasperatly. But it seems she wanted to test his petience as she was taking so long. No she wasnt late..but it was him..who was bit early today.



Everytime, he would hear someone coming...his heartbeats would increase thinking and expecting it to be her. But then would feel disappointed on finding someone else instead of her.


He wanted to meet her as soon as possible and apologies to her.
Yesterday when she went away from him like that, he realised what big mistake he had commited in his confusion..how he was loosing her in his foolishness. Her words had hit him so hard..making him regrate his actions. He felt chocked with emotions...helpless..he wanted to stop her and tell her that he was sorry, he didnt intended to hurt her. But he couldnt..he was numb..as the only thing which was running in his mind was.. that he had lost her!!!


The strom of emotions was so strong.. But he wasnt able to express himself to anyone. And for the first time..a lone tear escaped his eyes..showing his helplessness. The thought of loosing her & her friendship forever scared him..made him restless. He wanted to save it anyhow..and he decided that he will ask sorry from her! He will go and appologies to her for his every mistake. He didnt know what reason he will give her for his unacceptable behaviour..how he will explain it to her?


He just knew one thing that he cant loose her! He cant let her think that he didnt valued their friendship. He has made up his mind and thats why was early to meet her & right now was waiting for her.


He again heared footsepts and raised his head, hoping that this time its her. And to his relief..it was actually her! He looked at her carving for her one glance..wanting to catch her attention, he didnt move his eyes from her.
A moment later, she looked up and their eyes met..but instead of feeling contented..his heart ached when she averted her gaze at the very moment it met his!



He felt so hurt by her little act of avoiding him.. But he couldnt even complain as his heart instantly taunted him..reminding him of all those times when he used to treat her just the same way. How much it must have hurted her than..he realised it now! And with this realisation, his guilt increased all the more and he couldnt gather up the courage to talk to her. His heart wanted to beg forgiveness from her..but he couldnt go to her in fear of rejection.. He wont be able to bear her ignorance to him..he could never take it..Thats the reason he never wanted to reveal his feelings to her at the first place.


He hated going to school & tutions..knowing she wont even look at him now. But then that was the only way, his heart would be clam..seeing her infront of his eyes for those few hours. It was difficult..but he somehow managed to control himself & his heart.
Their internal exams started but he couldnt concentrate at all. He would only think about her all the time..even in exam hall, he would look at her every now & then..wishing that she would look at him atleast for once. He wanted just one chance to apologies..he used to sit in the room even after compeleting his paper or wait for her outside..hoping to talk her..but at the time of doing so..his heart used to feel nervouss & uncertain..and his fears would not let him to face her!



As the last day of exam was approching..his restlessness grew more..realise that he wont get the chance again until the school reopens after the vacations. He didnt know if she would forgive him or not..but he atleast wanted her to know that he was really sorry for his behaviour. And then it will be her choice..if she wanted to be friends with him or not!


On the last day, he could hardly concentrate on the paper..his mind was busy thinking as to how he will approch her. Anyhow, he submitted his paper & went out to wait for her.
He was waiting for her..when his class teacher saw him and called him in the staff room..and was asking about his papers. He answered him half heartedly...and rushed out hoping that she hasnt left yet.



He waited near the gate for next 20minutes..wondering were was she? And then the last & final bell rang. All remaining students started caming out & left one by one.. But she was not there..coz she has already left..his heart cried painfully!









Teri tasveeron se bhi baatein..
Hone lagi hai..
Kab suraj nikala aur kab chaand..
Khabar bhi nahi hai..


If those two weeks, which he has spent without talking to her, were tough for him then these last 3 days were even worst! Though he had already known the fact that he would miss her in this 11days vaction..still experiencing it was much more difficult. From past 3days, he had done nothing but missing her like anything. He was totally obivious to his surroundings...lost in her compeletly.


But the brighter side of all this was..that these 3days away from her gave him the much needed time with himself. Before, he used to avoid thinking about his feelings for her by distracting himself, but now he wasnt able to ignore them anymore. He felt so lonely without her being around him. Plus..His emotions were at their peak..their intensity forced him to acknowledge them..not letting him to run away anymore!


Besides, earlier he had a reason OR should say, he had a fear which always stoped him from acknowledging & accepting his feelings for her. But now he didnt has that reason, that fear anymore..as he has already faced his biggest fear..fear of loosing her friendship! So now, he wasnt affraid anymore. What else could happen now? And nothing could be worst then what already has happened...he was sure about it! May be thats why..coz of this belief & surity.. For the very first time, he let his heart free of all the restrictions and allowed it to feel & express what it actually desire's. For the first time, he didnt tried to surpress his emotions..instead, he dared to listen to his heart's pleas..which kept chanting & repeating her name only!
For a change..he let his heart take over his mind.. And in result of it.. Here he was, standing just a couple of blocks away from her house.


His heart has been carving for her single glimpes and he couldnt deny its wish anymore...so surrending to his heart finally, he decided to follow what it says.
He stood at the corner of her lane..with a desperate heart & longing eyes. He didnt had much options, nor he could go to her house to meet her..so he thought to just walk by her house and try his luck.


Its crazy..but he hoped that somehow she would come out and he would be graced with her sight. He knew that there was no gurantee that she would be coming out at that exact time..still he could try atleast..right?


He took steps as slow as possible. All the while eyes stuck at her house..heart beating furiously, fingers crossed..only one wish in his heart & a prayer on his lips.. "please babaji...bas ek baar..please.."..he prayed with desperation. As he reached near her house..for a second..his heart urged him to just go and ring the bell & meet her directly. But the wiser part of him..stoped him from doing so.. Coz he knew that, that wont be a good move at all!


When he was crossing her house, his feet were moving ahead but his wasnt looking where he was going..as his gaze was fixed at the door of her house..hoping that she will be coming out any second. But unfortunetly, nothing of that sort happened!



He was extreamly disappointed. His hopes were dying, his heart was getting restless with each step he took away from her house. He kept looking back every now & then..waiting for her one glimpes but it seems that Babaji was not ready to grant his wish, just yet.



Reaching at the other end of the lane, he truned around and looked at the house once again..searching for her one last time..and again he found nothing but disappointment. The whole lane looked dark & empty..just the same way as his life felt at that exact moment...sighing in defeat, he left with a heavy heart.











Hone hi lage..
Shaayad tere hum..


"I Like her..!!!"
He had come back home disappointed, as he didnt got to see her. He was in a miesrable state. He felt so frustated on his helplessness as he wasnt able to do anything to sooth his aching heart.



There was a time, when she used to be so close to him, with him, around him all the time... That time, he wanted to avoid her... And now when she was not near him..he was dying for her single glimps! It was all his own doing..he himself had pushed her away from him. He felt angry on himself, how can he be so foolish... his heart was in so much pain and he didnt knew how to solve this mess. He couldnt trust himself anymore to take any decision..given how he had already complicated the whole thing. He wished if someone could help him. He really wanted to share his problem with someone..as now it was going out of control for him. This restlesness, this uncertainty..everything was getting unbearable for him.


He very badly needed to speak out his heart to someone who could guide him. And with this thought only one person came to his mind... "Bhai" ..yes, he could speak to his brother as he is the only one who would understand his situation and will keep it to himself. Besides, his brother already knew about geet as he used to share everything with him...so it wont be hard to explain the problem to him.


Maan jumped off his bed and rushed to his brother's room. He dashed inside and without thinking he just blurted out the fact which he hadnt even confessed to himself yet. Without doing any more delay.. He voiced out his heart, his feelings finally.."I Like her..!!!"



Though maan hadnt expected his brother to be shocked on hearing his confession, given how he already had a hint and used to tease him all the time... Still he was expecting him to be a little surprised atleast. But No.. His brother was neither shocked nor surprised..not at all! Instead.. His brother gave him a knowing look and teasing smirk...which in return, surprised him for sure!


"Wont u ask..who i am talking about..?"...maan asked feeling a little nervouess for some unknow reason.
"do i really need to..?" ..his brother raised his brows at him grinning widely...which kind of irritated maan..but he chose to ignor it.
"u knew about it already...how??" ..maan asked a little curious.
"Come on, it was so obivious..anyone could have guessed it. Wo toh bas tu hi ek duffer hai..jo itna time laga diya samajh ne me..!"..saying that his brother chuckled seeing his pouting & annoyed face.
Maan picked up a pillow and threw it on his brother's face.. "it isnt funny ok...!! that made him to laugh loudly.. They had a little pillow fight, enjoying their special sibling's time & bond.


After that, they had some serious talks..
"when did u realised by the way..?" ..his brother asked and then maan told him everything..how he used to feel different about her, his confusion, his fears, his denial to his feelings, his ignoring her purposely, their fights and hurting her...then his regrate, his longing, realisation and accepting his feelings finally.



After listening everything..his brother asked the most important question.. "what about her..? Kya wo bhi tujhe pasannd karti hai..?
..to which maan had no answer! He had never thought about it before. He had been so confused himself that he never tried to knew her feeling about him. And now as he thought about it... if there was even a slightest of possiblity that she too feels something for him..then his jerk like rude behaviour with her must have changed her mind &opinion about him!



His brother chided him for acting so stupid & ignoring the most important thing...her opinion/feelings.
Maan felt really sad realising the mistake he had made...but then his brother's words lifts up his hopes again..
"But i think she too likes u..!! Warna wo tujh jaise duffer ko itne bhav thodi na deti..!!"


***


Maan laid on his bed thinking about her asusual. But there was a difference..instead of feeling worried & restless like the privious nights..he was feeling relax & some what excited that night. Talking & sharing his heart with his brother has helped him alot. Now he kind of knew what he have to do now. First step is to apologies and get her friendship back. And then most important task..to know her feelings for him. What she thinks of him? Does she only like him as a best friend?? or she feels something more for him? What if she too likes him..?? ..just the thought of it thrilled him so much. His heart jumped in joy..desperatly wanting it to be true. He just couldnt wait to know..


Haal tera hai kya..
O sanammm..









Last Part

Pal-pal soch me aana naa..
Hulchal dil me machaana naa...


"Call her..! Uska number toh hoga hi tere paas..haina..?" ..his brother asked . Maan shook his head indicating a NO.
"are u serious..? Wo teri BEST FRIEND hai..aur tere paas uska phone no. tak nahi hai..!!!"..his brother looked at him in disbelief.
Maan shurgged his shoulders.. "kabhi zarurat hi nahi padi.."
"I was right..tu sach me bahut bada duffer hai..!" ..his brother said shaking his head at this hopeless case.
"Thanks for the Compliment..! But ab meri tarif karna bannd karo..aur tell me what should i do now..? I cant wait for that long.." maan said making a puppy face.



There were still whole six days left for their diwali vacations to get over and for school to reopne. However, maan wasnt able to wait for that long..he was desprate to talk to her. So here he was asking his brother to help him to find some way to get in touch with her.



"usski friends hogi na..unse maang le.." ..his brother suggested.
Maan rejected the idea straightly.."nahh..i dont want them to gossip about it.."
"Uske ghar jaa ke mil le..best option hai.." ..his brother smiled winking naughtily.


"Han..aur jaa ke uske ghar walon ki maar khaun..haina.."..maan was annoyed at the stupid suggetion. Hearing him, his brother burst out laughing, irritating maan even more.
" pehle hi wo gussa hai..aur fir i dont even know.. how her family thinks about all these things.." ..he sounded really concerened.
"fir toh bas ek hi option hai.." ..his brother sighed heavily.
"Kya..?"..maan asked feeling hopefull.
"Tu na..roz subh-sham uske ghar ke chakkar lagaya kar...shayad wo mil jaaye.." ..his brother said in a teasing tone.
"uska bhi koi fayda nahi.."..maan mumered to himself...without realising that his brother could hear him.
"What..what did u say..?" ..his brother eyed him curiously.
Maan realised what he has said and cursed himself. "kuch bhi toh nahi.."..he avoided looking at him, feeling concious...but his brother caught his lie instantly..
"Dont tell me..tu sach me uske ghar ke chakkar lagata hai..??" ..his brother gave him a shocked & surprised look.


Dekho meri neendein udaana naa..
Dheere-dheere sapno me aana naa...


Though maan wanted to deny at first..but then he changed his mind and confessed that how he was so restless to see her and had went to her house but that didnt worked.


"OMG..u are really madly in love with her..arent u..?" ..his brother was amazed.
"LOVE..??" ..maan asked surprised.
"yes..LOVE..!! U r in love my-dear-litle-idiot-brother.." ..his brother punched him on his arm playfully.


An amused smile came to maan's lips as he thought about this word called "LOVE" ..then shurgging his shoulders he replied honestly.."I dont know..! I mean..i really dont know what love is..! I just know onething...that i really like her alot..truly. I like talking to her..i like being with her..and i want to be with her always.. Aur..agar issi ko pyaar kehte hai toh.. yes, may be, i am in LOVE WITH HER.. " ..he smiled geniuanly as he uttered those words.
His brother too smiled hearing his honest confession and ruffled maan's hair affactionatly..and gave him a hug.



Both were silent for a moment..
Then suddenly his brother ran out of the room, saying that he will be back in a minute.. And indeed he was back soon with a heavy book in his hands. On taking a closer look, maan recognaised to be a "Telephone Directory".
Just for a single second, maan was confused.. but then grinned widely as the realisation srtucked him. "U r just awesome bhai.."..maan hugged his brother.
"Ya..i know that already...!"..his brother replied with attitude.
"seems u have lots of experience in these matters..hmm.." ..maan teased.
"Shut up..number chahiye ya nahi..?" ..his brother smirked as that warning made maan to shut up instantly.
And thats how he had got her landline number.



Though he got the number quite easily..but then actually dialing it & to wait for someone to pick it up, was the most difficult task ever!


He had been extreamly nervouss..he kept dialing it & then cutting it before even it could be connected.
All the time his brother was watching him with amused smile..

at last he spoke taking the reciver from his hand.. "de..main hi baat kar leta hoon.."

maan instantly snatched it back..and pushed him out of the room. Closing the door, he locked it!



And finally, after thinking much, gethering up all his courage..he dailed her number..and waited for her to pick it up...!

Tujhe..
Meri..
Kasam..


Present:-



He smiled as he remebered that how worried he was about her reaction to his unexpected phone call.

But..like always..she has surprised him once again. Instead of being angery on him..She behaved very normally. She didnt mentioned any past happenings..and talked to him very nicely.


He had hurted her so much..still she wasnt angery at him.. That surely has suprised him. Does that really mean that she likes him too..?? Thats why she isnt angery at him even after his wrong behaviour..! Was his brother right in his thinking that she too feels for him..??" He just can hope that his brother is right..that she also has feelings for him..!


Tujhe..
Meri..
Kasam...








THE END..!!!


Edited by Shonameet - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Another sweet story
From friendship to love
How easily both connected ... same school same class now best friend too
Both are very comfortable with each other
His feelings changing and after first shot seems like Geet's too
She dared to call him so she must be feeling something for him
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Another sweet story

From friendship to love
How easily both connected ... same school same class now best friend too
Both are very comfortable with each other
His feelings changing and after first shot seems like Geet's too
She dared to call him so she must be feeling something for him



Thank you
Glad to that you are liking it!


Btw, dear it's not connected to "The blank call"


It's a sequel of "pehle pyaar ka pehla gum.! "


Maan's point of view
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shonameet



Thank you
Glad to that you are liking it!


Btw, dear it's not connected to "The blank call"


It's a sequel of "pehle pyaar ka pehla gum.! "


Maan's point of view

Oh that ... I mixed both 😆😃
But good to know it's part of gum 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Had been waiting for this .. Waiting for next parts
Edited by babelicious - 6 years ago
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spectacular update! well written! Adored the past moments! they are now friends!
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Congrats on your story
Sweet start
They became friends so easily
And it becoming more now

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