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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

emotional os

sad that arjun left all forever

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: etfr
Beautiful yet very emotional OS.
Sameer's feelings and thoughts were very nicely described.
Superbly written
Thanks for PM
Keep writing more.

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. If you want you can read my other works as well.

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
emotional os
sad that arjun left all forever

I agree the plot was emotional, and as a writer I felt this was the most apt ending. Hope you liked it.

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Beautiful One Shot again but it was short to😆

but even if it was short you penned out very well 😊

really The pain of Guilt and losing the person you care

about is worse always but again for Sam Condition no one but

he himself is responsible so he pay what he did wrong

and Arjun way to leave in last was justified as well

lovely OS you had describe Sam Emotion very well

keep it up 😉

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151
Beautiful One Shot again but it was short to 😆
but even if it was short you penned out very well 😊
really The pain of Guilt and losing the person you care
about is worse always but again for Sam Condition no one but
he himself is responsible so he pay what he did wrong
and Arjun way to leave in last was justified as well
lovely OS you had describe Sam Emotion very well
keep it up 😉

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it. And I'll definitely try to write longer pieces. I agree Sam's condition is what he created so he has to suffer.

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1150176

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

What a beautiful OS!! It was so emotional and really a epilogue of Arjun show.You just beautifully penned down Sam's emotions and guilt.Would be happy if Arjun had stayed with them.But what Arjun had been going through it would have been hard.Thanks for writing this beautiful one.