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Ouch... What Was That...😲
Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
oh my god, Spoorthi, I am still rofl-ing..🤣this was the best, more quirky and eccentric than I could have imagined with the I quit words..the Get out and the last line of pepper and rocks was cherry on the cake..I was not able to speculate their reactions or the ending until the last line, in other words you left me intrigued till the last line..not in either team..but I loved their last two expressions of the words, straightforward and blunt, a little emotion attached towards the other but not more than what they want for themselves..She dumped him..but he did not let her take the full satisfaction, but shocked her with his Get Out..😆
I totally agree with Flame
Though a refreshing story of what I have read so far..👍🏼
Its good that you have left it open ended..😛 let them sort their differences overtime🤣
The epic lines I QUIT and GET OUT ...Clash of the egos 😆
Well written Spoorthi 👏
Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
the idea was fabulous. 😆I love to read the shocks, surprises and quirky styles in the stories, and this was exactly that..unusual, unimaginable yet possible in reality..👏
Do share the links if you have these kinda more shots and stories Spoorthi..😉
Cricket
Arjun
Jhanak
Tum Se Tum Tak
