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Dressed in her best wedding outfit she stood among the guests watching her best friend getting Married. Seriously that girl had givenup her best job, which she was so passionate about to get married that moron!


she couldn't help wonder if the idiot got some black magic done on her Bff. Come on she had known her friend from the day she had uttered her first word! she was the most calculative and reckless girl she had ever known and that was nowhere near the blushing and giggling mess in front of her!


Exhausted with the flower throwing idiocy she made an escape to get herself a drink. she couldn't help the disappointment which seeped through her pores though, all those night outs and hiding about the working environment and stress which they fought to get to the position they were now in was for nothing! now all her Bff thoughts were filled with the bullshit her ( peeping through the crowd at the mandap to conform her bff's marital status) fiance for few mins dumped in her brain.


That guy wanted a slave for himself not a wife, cant they see on the name of "Happily ever after" he got himself a maid, adviser, house guard and she better not go there she thought shuddering at the gross images in her head.


Next morning she was exhausted to do anything so she planned on crashing at her boyfriends workplace, she couldn't curse herself less for that thought. Offcourse all good things come to an end at some point


Gasping for much needed air she pushed herself away from him still lost in the passion and hands exploring each other


"OH God you would be the death for me Jaan" he panted on her lips while threading his long fingers in her hair pulling her head back to get better access of her neck


They met a house party of her relatives, he was reserved and bored amongst the strangers. she approached him kinda made her moves... alright seduced him and that's it from the day next he was her Boyfriend. He was a Part time photographer and a Fulltime investor with a successful start-up he was running with his partners (his two Douchbag Bff's)


He understood her lifestyle and her dreams or that's what she thought until he uttered those words


Marry me! He said cupping her cheek brushing her messy curls behind her ear. she had to clear her ears to make sure she heard him right


I know how you girls feel when your Besty gets married... I got a sister remember? anyway back to the topic... We both love each other and are in this relationship for more than a year, let's take this relationship to another level... let's get married Jaan


Imagine how perfect our life would be... I would wake up to this beautiful face everyday... while I get ready for work you would setup my breakfast you would look after our home and send me love through lunch and then in the evening when I would come back from work you word greet me with that dazzling smile... and then...


Wohhh woh... wohhh stop right there... Hold on Maan! she said getting out of her stunned state.. creating a safe distance between them before her head explodes


What made you think i would agree to "Marry You"? she looked at him as if he had suddenly sprouted horns. she thought she saw a flash on hurt in his eyes before it was gone...


what Do you mean... we will get married eventually right, so why wait? he asked confusion clouding his eyes..


Throwing up her hands shaking her head and began to phase to and fro. she couldn't believe how did she get into this situation. maybe she was over thinking she should handle this situation delicately. Taking a deep breath she sat on the couch beside him and consciously taking his hand in hers


you want me to cook?


clean your house?


he nodded his head as if it was nothing


take care of your needs?

He bloody smirked as if it was a obvious thing, she didn't notice her voice was rising with every word she spoke


Give up my Job i worked my ass off for? and not to forget my independence for your silly notion of Marriage?


Oh sweetheart why are we even discussing this am I not offering you what every girl dreams, a home you can call yours, a successful... loving and financially secure and let's not forget handsome guy for husband? I seriously don't get the issue here


Dot You get it I DONT WANT TO GET MARRIED! she yelled on top of her voice and now it was his turn to shout


WHAT?!

there was a stunned silence for a while... they both were trying to grasp the first ever disagreement they had


How about we move in together? she proposed testing the idea of live-in in her head


we can have all those things you mentioned and still be over selves... she added still unsure


I CANT BELEAVE IT! This is madness... You are ok with living with me alone in a house without marriage... but not as my wife! care enlighten me why.. he added sarcastically the lovey-dovey person from before gone completely.


See like this I can have my own life and not give-up my individuality while becoming someone I'm not, and you would know that I do not have a single bone of a ductile house wife anywhere in my body.


Maybe then you would give on this thought of becoming my husband and we can get back to being lovely couple we always are she completed trying to put some sense into his head


Listening to her ramblings all he wanted to do was bend her over this desk and make mad love to her until she gets back into her senses... controlling his thoughts


I will not have people calling you names behind my back and will not tolerate us living together out of wedlock he said determined


Ok then maybe this is it... I do not have it in me to become a submissive housewife and even if it breaks my heart when I force it not to Love You... I would Do It I QUIT Maan Khurana... she said turning and pulling him to a fierce kiss which shook his core and mended it back...


Oh no... no..no this would not end like this... he thought determined he would chase her to the moon and back but she would be his, he thought pulling out of her embrace and got back to his chair adjusting his hair and cloths while looking into the files in front of him. maintaining his composer and not letting his anger get the better out of him he uttered the final words which shocked her in a real long time


GET OUT!


Oh dear, the Road to love!... its not only Honey and Roses but Pepper and Rocks too...😆

This is just an idea i got randomly chatting nonsense with my friend so let it please be just an OS 😳

do let me know which team are you in😉
team Commitment phobic
Or team MCP😆

oh what a choice🤣

-Spoorthi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I QUIT 🤣

GET OUT 🤣 🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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oh my god, Spoorthi, I am still rofl-ing..🤣

this was the best, more quirky and eccentric than I could have imagined with the I quit words..
the Get out and the last line of pepper and rocks was cherry on the cake..

I was not able to speculate their reactions or the ending until the last line, in other words you left me intrigued till the last line..

not in either team..but I loved their last two expressions of the words, straightforward and blunt, a little emotion attached towards the other but not more than what they want for themselves..
She dumped him..but he did not let her take the full satisfaction, but shocked her with his Get Out..😆

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kya tha!!!!!
Jo bhi ho now I agree with first part about WIFE ...
Between Geet n me both shocked with Get out part
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updated the comment.

the idea was fabulous. 😆

I love to read the shocks, surprises and quirky styles in the stories, and this was exactly that..unusual, unimaginable yet possible in reality..👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hehehe
Nice one
She does not want all the wifey stuff and he thinks all girls want the same dreamy marriage stuff

Maybe they should have talked it out
Well am not on either team
Rather would have a third way of balancing my career and a role of wife but obviously and most importantly with a guy who understands my choices and supports me

Loved the Os
Get out and I quit was the USP

Love
Sahiba
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

oh my god, Spoorthi, I am still rofl-ing.. 🤣

this was the best, more quirky and eccentric than I could have imagined with the I quit words..
the Get out and the last line of pepper and rocks was cherry on the cake..

I was not able to speculate their reactions or the ending until the last line, in other words you left me intrigued till the last line..

not in either team..but I loved their last two expressions of the words, straightforward and blunt, a little emotion attached towards the other but not more than what they want for themselves..
She dumped him..but he did not let her take the full satisfaction, but shocked her with his Get Out..😆

agreed dono dimag se paidal hai😆

hayee im so proud of myself
I've defo grown as a writer then😎

babaji plz itni tarif na karo hum ko sharam aati hai😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Kya tha!!!!!

Jo bhi ho now I agree with first part about WIFE ...
Between Geet n me both shocked with Get out part


wo ka hai na jhatke dene ka theka sirf geet ne nahi le rakha hhai😉

oh wait did i say Geet?
Y do u think it was geet?😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

updated the comment.

the idea was fabulous. 😆

I love to read the shocks, surprises and quirky styles in the stories, and this was exactly that..unusual, unimaginable yet possible in reality..👏

glad u liked it!
Thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Hehehe
Nice one
She does not want all the wifey stuff and he thinks all girls want the same dreamy marriage stuff

Maybe they should have talked it out
Well am not on either team
Rather would have a third way of balancing my career and a role of wife but obviously and most importantly with a guy who understands my choices and supports me

Loved the Os
Get out and I quit was the USP

Love
Sahiba

at some deeper level of understanding I'm on both sides😉

Glad u liked it
thanks for reading!😃

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